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 Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 3:17 pm
I don't really have much time, but it looks good and I think it's approvable. From what I could see there weren't any spell fails (or atleast anything major).
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 6:48 pm
Archlord Ayperos I don't really have much time, but it looks good and I think it's approvable. From what I could see there weren't any spell fails (or atleast anything major). I can help you out on this one if you don't have time?
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 6:56 pm
Werekaiser Archlord Ayperos I don't really have much time, but it looks good and I think it's approvable. From what I could see there weren't any spell fails (or atleast anything major). I can help you out on this one if you don't have time? Already approved
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2013 6:58 pm
Archlord Ayperos Werekaiser Archlord Ayperos I don't really have much time, but it looks good and I think it's approvable. From what I could see there weren't any spell fails (or atleast anything major). I can help you out on this one if you don't have time? Already approved Alright then.
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 6:02 pm
Amekage tryout
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A silhouette leaps from rooftop to rooftop through the twilight. The figure is revealed as AmeKage Makai Yakuzain. He leaps through the air searching for his target's home. He swiftly dashes through the street with such speed he is hard to notice due to his physical training of Martial Arts.Silently he swung down from the wooden beams of the targets manor. Getting in was the easy part but he had planned for this to be a one-way trip anyway. He landed softly on the dirt floor of an empty annex; just as his informant told him it would be. He stepped forward and slid the thin wooden door open, checking for guards before he moved into the wood-floored corridor. Candles flickered on their wall fixtures as he crept along, sticking to the shadows when he could find them.Shadow entered the room at the end of the hallway, thus far encountering no guards. As he came up to the targets door he drew his twin short swords, entering the brightly lit room. Even at this hour he had expected to meet at least some resistance, considering this was the headquarters for the most ruthless and most violent shinobi around.As Makai entered the room seemingly burst into dark flames as he saw his target. The target was with his family and looked at Makai in fear as a snake-like pattern began to form around his arm. The flames were now spreading; casting strange shadows on the walls and on the ground. It was dark and the air was stuffy but the flames didn't seem to actually burn anything. Suddenly a figure emerged from the flames and formed shadows. It looked like the head of a Serpent; it opened its jaws an a burning tongue licked the air. The fire grew stronger and with one push the snake sped at the family pulling them into its non-existent throat and all went silent. There was no fire and no dead bodies. The AmeKage was gone without a trace. Smoke hung in the air and was slowly dissipating when-
"Nikazim whats going on" A guard strolled into the room. " Lord Nikazim....are u here?" he stopped and looked at the wall with absolute terror "T-Thats the Mark of the Snake-eyed Yakuza!" Directly in front of him was a imprint snakes head was visible in the stone wall.The guard got to his knees,pounding the ground in anger,and yelled into the Night "Curse you,You damn Snake."
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The star filled sky began to lose its hold over the sleeping city as the morning colors began to soak in. The color of cream orange, sun kiss yellow and the fading baby blue;truly the most amazing thing in the world. As the colors began to mix they began to protrude the mighty bright orb that rules the world.
Lavender eyes watch nature at its fullest. Seated on top of a factory building is a girl, dressed in a white shirt, a loose necktie, a black jacket, and black pants.
A frown graces the girls lips as she sighs softly. Standing, she pulls her flowing ponytail into a tight bun on top of her head, living her bangs to flow free.She then covers her head with a cap;giving her more of a boy form. Trying to pass as a boy was not quite that simple for her. With her ample chest and her curves, this disguise wasn't exactly fool-proof.
Standing at her full height she leans back on her heels, looking up at the placid sky. A small smile graces her lips.Her smile turns into a smirk as the a gang of thugs closes in on her.
With one smooth flick of the girls wrist the thugs howls in pain as a large snake's begin to sink their fangs into flesh.The pump their venom into the men;making the thugs howl in agony. The snake slowly eat away at its prey, like fire engulfs paper;savoring the moment. The girl's eyes once again fall upon the morning lights.
Her smile was replaced with a frown. The men's painful cries drowned out by her own thoughts.
The mission was simple, placate the area to her fathers needs… but something was left out. One that she knew for a doubt that she did not misconstrued. Could the orders have been comprehended before hand and forgotten? There are too many variables that this is not pretext.Is the Amekage trying to get her distracted, or possibly out of the action?
As the screams of pain faded away as the gang is no more, a smirk played on her lips.
"How obnoxious people are becoming these days.Well I better go look for father. Tch knowing him he's probably forgotten I came along." The girl said.
Turning way from the full colored sky the girl jumps off the roof and lands gracefully on her feet, as if gravity could not way her down. The darkness of the alley engulfed her body as she began to walk in no particular direction at all, letting fate take her for a ride.
Two hours later.
Once again the girl finds herself aimlessly walking the early morning streets. Only this time people have be gone to emerge and begin their daily routines, the girl dose not stand out for it is not uncomment to see a young boy out in the early morning running errand for his parents before the sun reaches its highest peak. With a childish grin the girl is silently cheering that her ruthless ways have not rusted over the time She had been under indulgent commands of those that think themselves her superiors. It had been some time since the girl had ventured from her home in the Amegakure.She was elated that she had been given the chance to stretch her sore legs and bask in the sun by her father.She began searching for him.
When she found him he was sitting at at Sakura tree looking at the bright moon.
His hair is long and flowing;protruding outward from the back of his head. The top half of his hair was a goldish-white while the bottom half of his hair was black. The Amekage's outfit consisted of a blue cloak over a black kimono and zōri, along with a symbol of his clan and his village on the back of his cloak. Black ink-like markings could be seen around his eyes and in his hair.
The AmeKage was sipping calmly at his bowl of sake thinking of something when he spotted that brought a smile on his face.
He saw his daughter Yosuzume approaching him with a smile on her face. When he heard her say that she took out some thugs with his signature jutsu he couldn't believe at first,but when he made prove it in front of him he was amazed all over again.
Without his family,his life would be chaotic and empty . Without his clan he would be nothin.He and Yosuzume began there journey back to Amegakure. Makai began reciting something ancient to Yosuzume.
We glance up at the moon.
Our eyes full of endless thought.
Crimson-red, they penetrate
the light of the night sky.
We sit beneath the tree of The Serpent
A tree of slumbering dreams,
We awake with the breath of the wind,
Phantasmagoric dream.
A soft sigh,
as the weight of these
---silky strands---
fall on rough fabric, pale skin.
We are apparition.
We wield Osore(fear)
An illusion, a beat.
So look for us by moonlight---
though hell should bar the way.
When dance in the land of dreams and illusion.
We.....are......the.....Yakuzain.
(Kinda long,but I really wanted to show what I could do.Hope you enjoyed it)
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2013 8:15 pm
Can you also show your average posting style? You could even copy paste a post of yours from another guild, link would be preferred.
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Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:15 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:26 am
You post good but can you remember to use spaces after (,) and (.) so it makes your post look bad, however your skill is well and you are strong with the force, having people turned off because one small misstake which you were never corrected in. (,) =commas (.) =period Approved but remember that.
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Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2013 8:56 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 4:09 pm
Position:Jounin Name:My boy, Toya Takahashi Rp Sample:  Darkness. The eternal power that once ruled everything. Then came the light. Acting as if it had come before the darkness. Yet what most people tend to forget is that without light there is only darkness, but darkness itself will never disappear. It will always be there. Waiting for that candle to go out.
"Do you want to hear a story?" Asked Toya to a little girl. She nodded with shining innocence.
"The Darkness was once lonely. It was just always there, created out of necessity whether by something or someone not even it knows. So to fill the void of loneliness it created Light and the two were happy together for a very long time. Then one day Light created life. Darkness did not mind because it wasn't lonely anymore. Then the life created by the Light grew to fear the dark. Light could do nothing to stop this. Life feared the unknown and for that Darkness was cast away by it's love. Light. However, the Darkness never left. It would always be there. Hating Light for betraying it." The little girl looked confused at the story, but even more when Toya pierced her skull with a kunai.
"Toya Takashi." Said an aging officer of the law. The man was bald and with a tan complexion most probably due to the sun and not hereditary. He had a robust appearance and very large hands. It was 12:57 Pm and he just about had enough of the day. "25 years old and a pretty dirty record. Wanted in the Fire Country for possession of stolen scrolls. Sacred, Forbidden and all of that ninja crap that I don't care about." The officer's rookie partner chuckled lightly. Toya was sitting right in front of them. A medium sized table separating him from them. They also detained him with steel hand cuffs that were way to tight and cold. "Now tell me, what brings you all the way out here in the Tea Country?" He asked with an impressive amount of indifference. Luckily for him Toya was a very social kind of guy. "Well. I heard that the women over here are B-A-utiful. So I thought I might chop some of their heads off and sell it to some weirdos at the Black Market." The look of anger in the rookie that had laughed earlier was very obvious, but the senior who asked the first question remained calm. "Is that right? Tell me. Do you know how much money is on your head right now?" He asked putting Toya's file on the table. A mug shot of him slipped out of the file. Toya's tounge was sticking out playfully. It had been taken during his time in the Land of Earth"Oh boy how much! I hope it's better than last month......Only 500,000? What do they think I am?!" The officer sighed. He wouldn't delight Toya with a response now. "Tell me kid. Why are you so calm? You slaughtered half of an entire clan. I could kill you right here and I would be a hero." Toya raised his left eyebrow at the officer. "Well why don't you? I wouldn't blame you. C'mon do it!" Toya was starting to get into the officers head. "What is your problem? Do you have mental issues? Are you a psychopath or something?" Toya's happy smile and mood quickly went away when the word 'psychopath' came up. "Please.....don't call me that....You see I prefer to think of myself as......Gifted." The two officers sighed at the same time. Then Toya spoke once again, "Can I ask what time it is?" The rookie answered and was immediately given a scowl from his senior. Sensing tension in the room Toya was kind of enough to change the subject. "In this world there three kinds of people. There are the optimistic that see the cup as half full then the pessimistic that see it as half empty. Then you got the just plain paranoid that think someone is taking a sip of their water when they are not looking hehe." The rookie officer gave his senior a nervous look then asked. "What are you." An immediate grin formed across Toya's lips. "I'm the one that tips the cup OVER!" Suddenly, everything went dark. Then an explosion.
As Toya made his way through the massive hole in the Police Station's wall, he was greeted by three men wearing masks. They all had clownish expressions. It was in fact night time, but the moon's sunlight could not reach the darkness inside the interrogation room where Toya was in. It was a horrifying pitch black. Breaking off the handcuffs with ease, Toya looked at the men who blew up the wall. "Did you guys get the money?" Toya asked indifferently now. They all nodded. As they did so, they were immediately surrounded by officers. "Pfftt hahaha. You Tea Country folks really need to get some ninja around here."
The 4 men all walked away through the wilderness, Toya kept remembering what he did to the small, secluded village that had a very wealthy Daimyo living inside. After Toya wiped out all of the officers who only had taijutsu skills. He destroyed the village in a single blow with his Darkness Style: Black Hole Jutsu. You see, the Takahashi clan was able to control darkness. Unlike the Nara Clan that could only control shadows. "By the way, I want my cane." One of the men stopped walking and pulled out a scroll that contained Toya's cane inside. "Thanks. Oh and how do you like those masks?" The three all looked at each other confused at the question. Then another explosion occured. This time, it was bloodier. The three masked men had been carrying the money, 6 heavy bags. Picking up only one bag Toya carried on. "Look at me. Now i'm also wanted for killing a Daimyo. Sweeeeeeeet." The Takigakure headband with multiple scratch marks going through it shook silently hanging from the wooden cane. "Boo I'm the Boogie Man, the terrible horrible Boogie Man. I come the middle of the night and frighten bad little girls like you..." Toya sang softly.
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 4:21 pm
Lol, Tier 9000 isn't good xD Since the highest is three, tier 9000 would be somebody that has never typed or spelt anything in their lives. I guess you could compare that to a caveman? Anyways approved, I like it. P.s. Tell your cat I said Męøw!
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 4:22 pm
Archlord Ayperos Lol, Tier 9000 isn't good xD Since the highest is three, tier 9000 would be somebody that has never typed or spelt anything in their lives. I guess you could compare that to a caveman? Anyways approved, I like it. P.s. Tell your cat I said Męøw! No one ever gets my DBZ jokes.....T^T He says 'meow' back......
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 4:46 pm
malavaes Archlord Ayperos Lol, Tier 9000 isn't good xD Since the highest is three, tier 9000 would be somebody that has never typed or spelt anything in their lives. I guess you could compare that to a caveman? Anyways approved, I like it. P.s. Tell your cat I said Męøw! No one ever gets my DBZ jokes.....T^T He says 'meow' back...... I understood it, but did you know that was actually a translation/scripting error? His power level was actually only 8000 at the time. xD
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 5:17 pm
Archlord Ayperos malavaes Archlord Ayperos Lol, Tier 9000 isn't good xD Since the highest is three, tier 9000 would be somebody that has never typed or spelt anything in their lives. I guess you could compare that to a caveman? Anyways approved, I like it. P.s. Tell your cat I said Męøw! No one ever gets my DBZ jokes.....T^T He says 'meow' back...... I understood it, but did you know that was actually a translation/scripting error? His power level was actually only 8000 at the time. xD Bu.....but.....That just changed my whole view on life.......
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2013 5:47 pm
malavaes Is the head of the Sound Village position still open? If so, may I audition for it?
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