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 Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:34 am
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Full Name: Lizabeth Salander
Nickname: Cero // Zero // "Clawed Espada"
True Age: 275 Years Old
Age Appeared: 22
Birthdate: June 16th
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: English // French
Blood Type: AB -
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Height: 5 ' 7
Weight: 135 lbs
Eye Color: Ocean Blue
Hair Color: Brunette
Mask Remnant: Both Clavicles
Hollow Hole Location: Her Bellybutton
Life View: "Your sacrificing yourself for your cause? Let me release you..."
Personality: Despite Lizabet appearence, she is a battle hardened individual. She feels battle is the one thing that connects everyone and everything, having this thinking passes on to her in the afterlife. Although the other Espada give her a lot of grief for protecting the Menos and GIllian Hollows; she sees them as the first libe of defense against those that would dare invade.
Likes:
- Menos and Gillian Hollows
- Reading human books
- Honoring "His / Her Elegance "
Dislikes
- Wine Wine
- Human smell ( Body Odor )
Aspect of Death: Sacrifice
Fraccion:
Rank: Zéro // Cero // Núll
Side: Hueco Mundo // Los Noches
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- Lizabeth grew up in Southern France to an English mother and a French father, she was more then cared for and nothing seemed to be a boundary for her. She is a smart and fearless girl, but that would all change in a blink of an eye...
at the age of 22, Lizabeth was taken from her home in the middle of the night by french radicles. Fearing for her life; her parents searched for her along with the Police Force. This was an event that would be on going for months. Lizabeth was held in complete darkness without adequate food or water, as she was held her hatred for her captors would grow and grow. In the coming weeks they would learn that Lizabeth...smart and bright as she was would turn darker and darker.
One day, Lizabeth would escape from her captors; killing all but one of them. As ehe left, the last one approached her and viciously stabbed her. Dragging her back into that dark place, she would slowly meet her death. She knew that she had to sacrifice herself to make a stand against them. She closed her eyes and died. She may have left he physical realm but her hate and the feeling of self-sacrifice would stay...lingering around that last attacker. Her spirit manifested into a massive hollow with even more massive claws...she laughed at the irony that she was going to devour the person that metaphorically devoured her spirit.
After devouring is spirit and gaining this sense of power, she grasp the mask and troe it from herself...she dawned an new form and entered the Hueco Mundo. This would be where she would continue to hunt and devour souls of her fellow hollow/gillian. Her body gres in power with each Hollow or Gillian she consumed...until she rose to the power of Vasto Lorde; this is when she would be recruited to the Espada.
her body is still reminiscent of her Adjuchas past, dawning claws on her feet and hands.
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Reiatsu Color: Blue and Silver
Reiryoku Level: Great
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Master
• Air Dash: Expert
• Sonido: Master
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Master
• Muay Thai - Advanced
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Master
• Kendo: Expert
Reiryoku Technique:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Master
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Expert
• Jumping: Expert
Strengths:
• Hand to Hand Combat (( or Hand to Claw ))
• Her Weapon Abilities
Weaknesses:
• Extremely Long Fights
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Fears:
• { what are you scared of }
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Uhrata
Zanpakuto Location: Strapped to her back
Zanpakuto Appearance:Kage Gunsen (( Generals Massive Army ))
Zanpakuto Element: Ajña (Third Eye): Light // Dark
▬▬┤|Resurrección
Resurrección Name: Uhrata - [ True Sacrifice ]
Resurrección Incantation: " Otan Mitä on Arvokas Sinulle " - [ Let me take what is precious to you ]
Resurrección Description: Her mask remnant grows and engulfs most ribs, around her breasts. It travels down her left arm and engulfs it completely; massive wings sprout from her back giving her the ability to fly.
Resurrección Ability:
Début (( 1st Act )): Lizabeth reveals the one said of her Zanpakto which is inscribed with the word 'Debut", upon its reveal a complete darkness envelopes the area. Lizabeths eyes take in all light, making her nearly immune to her own technique.
Deuxième (( 2nd Act )): Used in conjunction nwith the first attack, Lizabeth sends out a burst of light in an attempt to weaken further the sight of the opponent.
Troisième (( Third Act )): LIzabeth fires a Cero that is infused with her Zanpakutos ability to manipulate light and dark. This Cero is negative in color and powerful enough and hot enough to melt the sand of the Hueco Mundo.
Quatrième (( Fourth Act)): Lizabeth taps her Zanpakto on the ground and with her spiritual energy; she summons a legion of Gillian. Their power is doubled and they are completely obedient to this Espada.
Quinte (( Fifth Act )): Lizabeth sends out a barrage of slashes in the form of dark arcs, these arcs are the most deadly...they are able to slice through most matter and destroy even the Hueco Mundo.
Massive Tir Garganta: The traditional Garganta opens and the turbulent Reishi is unleashed unto the plane. Humans would see this as a mass of black clouds but, the Reishi is choking and detrimental is anyone else.
▬▬┤|Segunda Etapa
Segunda Etapa Name: Greiver
Segunda Etapa Incantation: " Let me show you true sacrifice.."
Segunda Etapa Description: -_-
Segunda Etapa Ability:
Blancheur Cero: It is a white Cero with a red outline to it, which Lizabeth states to be similar to His/Her Majesties Cero. This Cero presumably can only be used while he is in her release state. Lizabeths Cero in this state is strong enough to blast a hole bigger then the Los Noches itself.
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▬▬┤|Known Hollow Techniques
▬▬┤|Your List
• Bala
• Cero
• Hierro
• Gonzui
• Pesquisa
• Negación
• Garaganta
▬▬┤|Custom Techniques
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 10:00 am
Diablo en Musica 92 Okay,
- Your first Shikai ability needs to be changed, it is terms way to much. However I like the idea, but the bit is a bit much.
- Your second attack needs to add in the fact of people's Reiryoku level compared to yours. Individuals of say Captain level would not be as affected or barely affected by your weapon at your current level.
Other than that you have a wonderful profile, fix these issues and I will look it over gain.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 5:14 pm
Condemned Memoir Diablo en Musica 92 Okay,
- Your first Shikai ability needs to be changed, it is terms way to much. However I like the idea, but the bit is a bit much.
- Your second attack needs to add in the fact of people's Reiryoku level compared to yours. Individuals of say Captain level would not be as affected or barely affected by your weapon at your current level.
Other than that you have a wonderful profile, fix these issues and I will look it over gain.
Tone it down a lot.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 5:55 pm
Now that I think about it your technique levels are a bit low.
Please change the follow:
- Reiryoku Gathering - Master
- Janjutsu - Master
After those small changes I say approved.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 6:16 pm
Ashi Sousakuryoku ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Ashi Sousakuryoku
Nickname: None really sometimes he is called crazy, insane, vindictive.... ect.
True Age: 284
Age Appeared: mid twenties give or take
Birthdate: January 6
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: He isn't sure himself but his dark eyes and pale skin suggest European descent when he was alive.
Blood Type: AB+
Sexuality: Hetero, though he leaves people to question sometimes
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 132 lbs
Eye Color: Grey
Hair Color: black
Life View: Advancement and knowledge is true power. The weak are my guinea pigs and the strong are to be studied.
Personality: Ashi is a psychotic genius, a true savant in tactics and inventions. He can easily go of into a tangent on things that interest him or spout things that can't even form a proper sentence. If you catch this man in conversation it'll get morbid and very creepy very quick. Death, the reiatsu of many creatures and the idea of vizards and espada are very intriguing to him. He studies and toils constantly acting like he has no sanity or true caring for life. To him life is to learn, and he will do ANYTHING possible to get his answers.
Though he may seem unstable in psyche he is in fact very loyal. His tactical skill in mid battle makes him an asset as well. The only reason why someone teetering so diligently between good and evil is allowed in the Gotei 13 are these very traits. Though spontaneous and twisted he has found himself a name for himself in the squad if not for his skill, but his insanity.
Likes:
Learning
blood
inventions
experiments going right
chaos
tobacco
a perfect strategy
Dislikes
awkward situations
sitting still
anything hallow
idle chit chat
failed experiments
failed missions
pretty bright colors (Doesn't mind other people wearing it he hates it on him)
Division: 12
Rank: Unseated
Side: Seireitei
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Ashi Found himself in the after life while he was still a child. Not knowing how he died or where to go so he simply started to wonder. It was no more than two day of the young Ashi wandering the streets did he then collapse. This wasn't a normal thing for someone to do in the soul society unless they had a reiatsu of their own. An old watch maker and tinkerer of items found around the town found the black haired child in rags. Giving the child food the old soul watched in amazement as the meal was scarfed down in moments. Even the old soul with no power of his own can fell a small energy in this boy.
So the old man took Ashi in and raised the child around gadgets and things to be broken down and built back together. Within the week the nameless child was given a name based on his general behavior. Ashi meaning evil and the last name Sousakuryoku means genius. Ashi though clever with machines would be found with small animals and using the tools from the shop to cut them open and see what makes them tick. This disturbed people and they began to think of Ashi as a little devil of sorts. The old man supported the curiosity but warned Ashi to never do such on another person or he will be put away. The child grew in knowledge and began to want to kill hallows to study them. With animals losing their fun it was time to go onto bigger, more complicated things......
Ashi joined the shinigami school when he got older, and looked to be in his older teens. Though he wasn't as strong and fast as most of the students he still excelled in combat. At first he would appear to be losing in sparing matches but as the fight went on Ashi began to turn the tides in an instant. The instructors quickly realized his potential in tactical combat and his grades on written studies and reiatsu analysis. They immediately informed the higher ups of a promising squad twelve candidate. Though he did well for his studies his people skills were horrible and he often scared people from speaking with him.
In Hallow combat training Ashi's tactics were not only effective but gory and very distasteful to a weak stomach. This as well made it hard to like the crooked shinigami in training. Somehow though he graduated and found his way quickly into the squad twelve. He had been doing field work and toiling in a basement for years making new weapons and tactical equipment. One will never see Ashi use actual Kidou but the items he attaches to his body and the poisons he's mastered has allowed him to be quite powerful as of late. He is now working to the captain seat or as close to it as he can get.
Why? He wants the limitless resources and command he can use to further his research. Though he has never done anything against his or any other squad his rumored experiments leave people wondering if he is safe to have around. But like when he was in school somehow the higher ups want him there and on more than one occasion in the past has he reminded others as to why.
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Reiatsu Color: A faded lifeless grey
Reiryoku Level: Weak
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level
• Shunpo: No Skills
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Practitioner Level
• n/a
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level
• Kendo: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level
• Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths:
• Reiatsu Analysis- Ashi can recognize and understand any Reiryoku or Reiatsu skill allowing him the ability to counter or negate further attacks to a certain degree.
•Scientific body- His body has undergone self experimentation and self torture to increase battle skill. He muscles are flexible and limber allowing him to avoid attacks without being super fast. He can also heal faster and is hard to kill even if it looks like he is in fact dead. This is all to support his ability to prolong the battle and learn everything he can about his opponent.
Weaknesses:
• Strong impacts- Though clever and nimble a strong direct hit will be troublesome for Ashi who lacks physical strength compared to other shinigami.
•Blood lust- Sounds like it might be good but it's not. When he gets murderous like this he will slowly torture his enemy giving the one opponent his full attention. This allows others to attack him easier or if the opponent is strong enough to endure they have a higher chance to plant an attack or run.
Fears:
• losing all his data or knowledge
• Being seen as useless by everyone around him
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Inakamono Tenma (Clown Devil)
Zanpakuto Location: Strapped to the right thigh by a holster
Zanpakuto Appearance: normal
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: Inakamono Tenma
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Nodachi
Zanpakuto Element: poison
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: Irei Inakamono (Sick Clown or Clown Illness.... One of the two)
Shikai Incantation: Frolic in death, Inakamono Tenma!
Shikai Description: Shikai
Shikai Ability: Inakamono Tenma allows Ashi to use an advanced and potent toxin that attacks the nervous system. The poison itself is nonfatal but causes pain throughout the body and can leave the opponent unable to move. The more cuts put into the person the stronger the toxin gets.
Current techniques-
Oujou kemuri (Death Smoke)- a black smog can surround Ashi allowing his poison to be inhaled by charging opponents. The smoke doesn't travel far but can be used for smoke screens or to cause the same poison effects as a cut from his shikai can do.
nemuri (sleep)- A black sludge ejects from the blade of Inakamono Tenma. It can blind the person for two posts if it get in their eyes. It will cause pain if it gets soaked into your skin as well. The draw back is this is also a close rang attack with mid range projectile. If the attack hits directly on the face it is 100% chance of knockout or incapacitation. Thus the name sleep or Nemuri.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name:
Bankai Incantation:
Bankai Description:
Bankai Ability:
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 8:41 pm
Okay,
- All brackets and the information in them should be removed
- Please have a define element, Poison or Shadow please not a mixture
- Your attacks have a mixture a abilities, please have one define element with abilities or attacks surround/ involving that element.
- Please have no less than 2 fears please
Please fix these problems/ issues I have noted above...
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2012 9:02 pm
Ah I see I did get carried away and made it difficult. Alright all is fixed and ready to go. Had trouble making up fears for a psycho, let me know what ya think.
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 5:35 am
FINISHED!!  ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Kuchiki Iroha
Nickname: Iri-chan
True Age: 444
Age Appeared: 27
Birthdate: Aug 4
Gender: F
Ethnicity: Japanese
Blood Type: A+
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 60kg
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Life View: "Personal is not the same as important"
Personality: Iroha is a strange mix of extrovert and introvert, depending on what her mood is. In this way she is the perfect mirror of he cats she absolutely adores above all else.
When in her more introspective moods, she is aloof, and snobbish, keeping her distance from any and everyone.
When in her 'fangirl' mood, however, she is completely capable of acting the 'Senbonzakura' and not only making a complete dunce of herself, but also have an inane amount of fun in doing so.
Despite her apparent disinterest in anyone and everyone other than herself, she is strongly aware of 'rights', and dislikes anyone taking advantage of their power or position.
Likes:
× cats
× bows
× frills
× kawaii things
Dislikes
× squirrels
× mud
× rain
× rain and mud
× boring people
Division: 06
Rank: Captain
Side: Simply just doesn't care...This isn't the point, in her opinion...
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Iroha was taken in to the Kuchiki family at a young age, when her predecessor, took her in. She was accepted into the family at such a young age, she doesn't even remember when this happened. She was adopted as the child of the head of the family and is the current heir to this Noble House.
All this in mind, Iroha is, naturally, snobbish, aristocratic, and not above putting herself above everyone else.
Iroha was, however, known even as a child to be dangerous when bored. She often played rather nasty tricks on the family servants (even if her mother made her appologise afterwards...), and even on her own parents, just to get more attention than she already did.
It would be nice to say that Iroha eventually grew up and out of these childish pranks, but we'd be leaving reality, and at a tangent. Iroha still adores playing pranks, even, or especially, on her fellow captains, and is fully capable of spending days on end to plot and plan one of these extravangant jokes.
As horribly childish as she is sometimes, Iroha has also become quite the stateswoman, and is proficient in acting the high aristocrate when the mood takes her. Her veneer is generally that of a cool, clam, and composed captain of the thirteen squad guards....the inner workings of her brain, however, are something else entirely....
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Reiatsu Color: Gold
Reiryoku Level: Great
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Advanced
• Air Dash: Expert
• Shunpo: Master
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Expert
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Master
• Kendo: Expert
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Expert
• Kido Spells: Master
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Advanced
• Jumping: Advanced
Strengths:
• Quick-thinking
• Creativity
Weaknesses:
• Stubborness
• Hot temper
Fears:
• Squirrels
• Mud
• Rain
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Neko no Tsume
Zanpakuto Location: At the belt on my hips
Zanpakuto Appearance: Cat's Claw
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.:
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana
Zanpakuto Element: Fire
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: Unari
Shikai Incantation: Unari Tsume! (Growl claw!)
Shikai Description:
In shikai, Iroha's Neko no Tsume vanishes into thin air, or appears to do so. It can be seen, if one looks closely (not too closely...) as an golden outline in the air, only just visible if one sees it from a certain angle in a certain light.
Iroha generally seems to be holding the grip of a non-existant katana at this stage.
The blade, in reality, becomes nothing more than Iroha's own will to kill. The more she becomes intent on killing her opponent, the better outlined the katana blade is. The blade never appears fully, but the outline becomes clearer. As it does, the force of the blade becomes stronger.
Shikai Ability:
1. Unari hi:
Here the blade of Iroha's katana becomes a red-hot cutting edge that will set fire to anything it touches.
2. Hikida
In this technique, Iroha can lengthen the outline of her zanpaktou, lengthening its span. The cost is that it looses from its width, so she can only do this to a range of 4 metres.
3. Youshiki
Here Iroha is able to manipulate the form of the outlined katana to practically any shape she so wishes. This could be that of a tentacled serpent, or a net, or lance. These may be stationary forms, or they may move.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name: Sabaku
Bankai Incantation: Sabure no Sabaku! (Sands of the Desert!)
Bankai Description:
In this release, Iroha's zanpaktou blade 'sheds' its 'invisibility' and becomes visible again. The 'shed invisibility' however drops from the blade like a golden sheath to the ground where it disintegrates into a heap of sand.
This sand then begins to moves and swirl around Iroha.
Bankai Ability:
1. Ikoi
With this ability the sands called into existence by Iroha's banaki release 'become alive', froming a 'sand army' of soldiers similar to the clay army. These sand-begotten soldiers number 44, and are armed with lances. These sand-men are immune to electrical, heat, and water attacks. They do, however, disintegrate when shot at with a kido at or above level 20. When this happen, Iroha is unable to revive that soldier, unless she locks her bankai, then releases it again.
2. -NN-
Here Iroha's sands take on the form of a giant dragon, which moves in complete accordance to her will. This creature is capable of shooting fire from it's mouth and taking to the air. It brandishes huge talons on all four of its feet, and a tail as lone as its own body, which is about 10 meters long.
3. Sandstorm
In this attack, Iroha can generate a sandstorm with winds up to a speed of 100 klicks an hour and lasting up to a full hour. Anyone familiar with what a sandstorm can do, knows this is not child's play...
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▬▬┤|Hado Spells
• { start with none unless told otherwise }
▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells
• { start with none unless told otherwise }
▬▬┤|Other Spells
• { Captains Only, If not a captain please remove. This section is for kido only they can learn which is listed in the, Learning Kido topic. }
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:12 am
Okay,
- Please removed brackets and information in them, them.
- You can start with kido or you can learn them, it is your choice...
- It appears to me that your Zanpakuto shikai and bankai have elements that contradict each other . One being sand ( branch of earth ) and the other fire. In a way I can see how you can relate the two, however your too expanded within two different elements which is a bit too much. Please have attacks that fully relate to your element.
- Your Shikai, the second attack needs to explain how it is extended and how it extended. Your third attack I don't see how it relates to your element, I feel it his no connection with your element of fire.
- It is not just what was stated above, but it is your Bankai in general I feel has not connection to your element. Also the attacks such as the second and third are a bit much. The second attack being that if your going to have sand the overall attack should involve that of sand, no offense. The third attack issue is it needs to have a defined post time and cool down time for such a skill. However you element is fire, I don't see how fire = sand because you would need an external source to heat that sand to a point where it would cause burns.
I'm not trying to sound mean, harsh, or rude, but I really can't see the connection to anything in your Zanpakuto from Shikai -to- Bankai.
I have to Deny your profile...
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:30 am
Okay,
Thank you for correcting that. however there is one issue I do want to address or ask.
- Can you expand your attacks? That being the poison how far does it extended, and how long does it smoke/ smog last until it disappears. Sorry I forgot to ask that before ( >m < )
After that change you are approved...
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 12:26 pm
ah, true but I was planning on explaining that in detail on approval anyway.
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 1:55 pm
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Full Name: Lee Kyung
Nickname: Lee, Kyung, Kyung chan, Kyungah, Sprout
True Age: 58
Age Appeared: 15
Birthdate: November 8th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Korean American
Blood Type: A
Sexuality: Bi
Height: 5'5
Weight: 120lb
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Black
Life View: "You are who you choose to be"
Personality:
Kyung is a very shy, timid and quiet fellow, he rarely talks out loud or around people, he has a hard time being around other people for a long time especially when it comes to people he doesn't know at all, but when it comes to the people he knows .... well he is still quiet and shy but he will talk more than usual and a little bit more open. Jin has the tendency to be respectful to those who are older than him even if their a lower rank than he is, like say if a lower rank but lived longer than him would bump into him Jin would immediately bow his head and apologies to him knowing that he is a lower rank but despite that hes being respectful just because hes older than him, its because he sees all of them as role models. Whenever hes around more than 2 people he doesn't know he starts to stammer his words, can't talk straight and even blush. Surprisingly when he trains he keeps a bit of serious mood but it usually breaks fast when ever he messes up, or hurts someone he wasn't supposed to then ends up apologizing quickly, but in a fight its different when he knows he has to beat them he doesn't apologies or even give any ounce of mercy. Kyung is also a very gullible and curious person when someone leads him into a trap he will follow into it easily unless someone stops him, and curious as in he will try almost anything just to see how its like.
Likes:
- Ramen
- Music (Certain kinds)
- Training
- cute things especially kittens and puppies
- all Shinigami all ages
- Sweet things
- going to the human world
- cheerful people
- Warm/hot temperatures
- Puppies
Dislikes
- Hollows
- being forced into fights
- people who use his respect for older people to their advantage
- falling in traps
- when he messes up
- losing
- depressed people
- very cold temperatures
- people kick cute objects
- when people talk down on younger or lower ranked members
Division: 1
Rank: Seated Member 12th
Side: Shinigami
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Kyung and born and raised in the living world with his mother and father and he was the only child of the family, his father wasn't around much and his mother was busy working herself so he was alone to fend for himself in the world. His Father was usually over seas stationed in war zones since he was a Military commander and his mother was working with two jobs, Since Kyung was small and shy at the time he was picked on a lot at school because of it, one day when he was 10 his father put in a Martial Art not because he wanted to get revenge but to give him that certain degree of discipline and also the drive to do better and gain confident in himself. Kyung agreed and rose in the ranks fast and became a 3rd degree black belt but even though he was a high belt he couldn't get himself to fight back against the bullies. When Kyung reached the age of 16 he began seeing spirits and ghosts around him, at first Kyung was scared because it was a first for him but he grew into it slowly as he began to get close to them hear their stories and listening to them.
Life was going well cause his Father was on leave for a month and lived with his mom and him and life was going well till one tragic day. Both of his parents were caught in a car crash and both died before they made it to the hospital this made a big impact on him, not only his parents were gone he was all alone int he world. Kyung then remembered he could see spirits and ghosts and he was wondering if he could find them but that day he could not see them so he went home crying, at the day of the funeral he was there and still could not see them this was a very depressing moment of his life. A few days later at night he went to the spot where his parents died to put a memorial for his parents but as he did he would feel something touch his shoulder and he would look behind him and see that his parents were there. Kyung instantly tried to hug them but he would fade through them as he sat there in front of his parents he was given a final lecture from them to live and not forget them but not to weigh himself down because of them. Then all of a sudden there was a loud thud and Kyung would look to his side and see a weird looking monster at first he wondered why it was there but when ti made a loud scream he knew what it wanted his parents. Kyung tried to run with his parents but the monster was too fast and caught up all seemed lost and looked like he was going to lose his parents but then a person came in with a sword in his hands and would cut the monster up with ease. Then the man would turn to see Kyung there and his parents behind him then then explained that he could send his parents to heaven he would like that but at the same time he didn't want them to go. His parents gave him the last good bye saying to be successful and they would always be in his heart and would always be there for him and look over him and that they would see him again with that Kyung would nod and watch the man send them to heaven. With that Kyung would then faint then he would wake up and see that he was in his bed he wished it was all a dream but he would look around the house to see that his parents were done but he still remembered what they said to him.
Kyung continued his school life normally but it got worse from there he thought that since his parents died the bulling would stop but it increased the same bully didn't stop he kept doing it more and more since he thought that his parents were gone and he had little to no friends there was no one to come help or save him. Then one day he was led into an abandoned ware house where he was beaten to death by the bully and his friends, this was the day he died but at the same time that he died the police came from a person who was watching they chased the bullies. Kyung would then wake up as he would look down to see his empty body laying on the ground and saw that he was still int he living world not knowing why he was still here and why he couldn't see his family. As Kyung would wander int he living world he was one day stopped by a monster again only this one looked familiar. He looked exactly like the bully who killed him apparently when the cops came him and his friends ran but the bully ran off a cliff and died on the same tragic day. The bully blamed Kyung for killing him when it was really his stupidity that got him where he was and also he had turned into a monster he didn't know how but he liked it he could now go around killing who ever he wanted to. Right when he was about to kill Kyung the same Shinigami came to his aid saying "hey I remember you you ready to go?" He looked so nice and cheerful and his smile gave comfort to him then Kyung would watch a battle un fold before him the man would fight the monster with ease almost as if he was playing around with him and int he end the monster died and the man would come up to him and stop as he would give him a sort of 'what the heck' look.
He would then ask "H...how do you have such a high level of power?" Kyung would look up at him strangely as he looked scared out of his mind and sad so the man would smile as he said to him "You ready? I'll explain everything there." Then he was given the same treatment his parents had gotten and his body felt light as if all his problems and emotions just swept away, he would close his eyes and feel him sink down tot he ground as he opened his eyes he would see his parents in front of him and he immediately embarrassed them with tears in his eyes and also he had made connection with them like he was actually touching them. Then he was confronted by the man who saved his parents and himself's lives and thanked him for it, then she said that he had a high Reiryoku power and wanted him to go to the Academy and be like him a Shinigami at first Kyung didn't want to since he wouldn't be able to see his parents but he was wrong he could see them anytime since they were all here with him. So Kyung agreed and followed him to the academy and learn everything there was to learn about being a Shinigami and he was also recommended by him to joint he first Division at that time he didn't know much about. When he graduated and became a seated Member thats when his real story truly began in this division.
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Reiatsu Color: Dark Red
Reiryoku Level: Capable
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level
• Shunpo: No Skills
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Practitioner Level
• Tae Kwon Do: Practitioner Level
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level
• Kendo: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level
• Kido Spells: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level
• Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths:
• Strength
• Fire
Weaknesses:
• Extremely cold areas
• Elements that can cancel out Fire.
Fears:
• Rats, Big Rats
• Losing and bringing dishonor to the division
• Being Left behind/alone
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Pyro Ghost
Zanpakuto Location: Back
Zanpakuto Appearance: The Weapon
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: Pyro Ghost
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Nodachi
Zanpakuto Element: Fire
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name:
Scorching Pyro Ghost
Shikai Incantation:
Burn....Scorching Pyro Ghost
Shikai Description:
Kyung gets engulfed by fire covering his entire body but not hurting him at all then he raises his Nodachi into the air above him and the fire then the fire would engulf the sword. After that Kyung would bring the sword down to his right side and would make the sword hit the ground hard making a loud slam (showing how heavy is it) then the fire would disperse making a Fire ring around Kyung and his. New Sword The sword would then start emitting extreme heat but Kyung is unaffected by it but anyone around him would feel intense heat coming to them. Kyung's shikai weapon is very very heavy and can be only used by him he seems to pick it up with ease but to others its remotely impossible for them to even nudge it, also the sword itself is burning hot so if a normal person grabs the handle he or she would burn themselves.
- Slice:
Kyung then brings his blade into the air using one hand and would start spinning it over his head making a fire circle above his head then he would releases a blade of flames and condense spiritual energy that flies towards it target. This attack has enough heat and power to scorch clothing and unprotected skin of those of weaker spiritual energy than the user
- Wave:
Kyung would then bring his sword down towards the ground while in front of him and would hold the handle with both hands and would bring it down into the ground, right when he does this the fire ring around him would disperse in all around him making a fire wave that covers all 360 of him.
- Flame Tornado:
Kyung spins his blade above his head as he release flames and condense spiritual energy. As he does this a twister of fire surrounds him protecting him from blunt force attacks and some kido related attacks if the targets has equal or weaker spiritual energy than kyung
- Fireball :
Kyung will gather fflames and condense spiritual energy at the tip or top of his blade. He would than focus this into a round orb and with a swing of his blade he will release this fireball sending it at his target. Upon contact with a surface the fireball will explode.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name: N/A
Bankai Incantation: N/A
Bankai Description: N/A
Bankai Ability: N/A
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▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells
▬▬┤|Hado Spells
• Shō (衝, Clash)
• Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning)
• Tsuzuri Raiden (綴雷電, Bound Lightning)
• Fushibi (伏火, Lain Fire)
• Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon)
• Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash)
• Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Firefall)
• Haien (廃炎, Nullific Flames)
▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells
• Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope)
• Seki (斥, Repulsion)
• Sai (塞, Block)
• Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Flight)
• Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Thrust Tri-Flash)
• Tsuriboshi (吊星, Hanging Star)
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 1:56 pm
[Diablo said I could have two characters, so I have permission.] ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name(s):
Red Hair: Roda Yangu
White Hair: Nagi Tetsugi
Nickname(s):
Roda: Jock, Red Barbour, The Power
Nagi: Armor,The Annoying One, Hummingbird, The Skill
Both: R.B. "Reaper Brothers"
True Age(s):
Roda: 183
Nagi: 185
Age(s) Appeared:
Roda: 17
Nagi: 16 or 17
Birthdate(s):
Roda: October 5th
Nagi: July 21st
Gender(s):
Both: Male
Ethnicity:
Roda: Italian/Scotish (From Italy)
Nagi: Spanish/Italian (From Spain)
Blood Type:
Roda: Blood Type A
Nagi: Blood Type B
Sexuality:
Both: Homosexual (Yes, they are both gay)
Height(s):
Roda: 6' 3''
Nagi: 5' 10''
Weight(s):
Roda: 156lbs
Nagi: 126lbs
Eye Color(s):
Roda: Bright blueish green
Nagi: Soft blue
Hair Color(s):
Roda: Red, like, RED red
Nagi: White, not silver, white
Life View(s):
Roda: "I have power, it's always there. Everyone has a curse they can't run away from. So don't."
Nagi: "To have a mind is one thing; to fear it is another."
Personalities:
Roda:
The way to describe Roda is the younger brother that will always protect his older brother. He can't let his brother go. Even if they are half brothers, they have always had a strong bond to each other, even across country boarders. He has so much spirit within his heart, so much determination, mental strength, and patience. When he was young, while his mother was talking on the phone with business people, Roda would put on his favorite jacket given to him by his father, put on some workout pants, and escape from the house, running. He would run everyday, to see how it felt, to run across the world. To be free from his uncaring mother. He would run all the way down town, run across bridges multiple times, run to Kung fu practice, run home, but while he ran home, he would practice his punches. He grew stronger with each day, and each day, as he came home, his mother would either be still speaking on the phone or had fallen asleep at her desk. Roda would stare at this scene for a long time each day, wishing, she would just turned around, smile and say his name...just to say his name. Not in an angry tone, not in an irritated way if he didn't finish a chore, just...kindly, lovingly, look into his eyes and smile. But he couldn't make her happy. Father couldn't make her happy unless he did what she asked, but that is why he left back to his first son. But he sent letters, planning a master plan, to get Roda in his custody. That is what he wanted. Here. he was very unhappy. He had been unhappy for most of his life and couldn't really find what happiness truly meant. So, he tried out parties. He grew older, more playful at night time. His body had grown beautiful, and he had a wild side of him. His eyes would look more suspicious, his body moved with the rhythm, with women wanting to be all over him, cover every inch and rub up against him as the music took over his body, but this wild side refused women. If it refused his mother's love, it refused other women. They wouldn't love him. They just wouldn't even try. He would keep moving, and as a minor, he couldn't drink any alcohol, however, the man at the bar was a very handsome man. So he would sit there, staring at the busy man until he came over to Roda. he was a bit nervous about his beauty at first, but then he began to relax when the kid began to keep coming every day, visiting and offering to walk him home. He was able to a couple of times, and each time, Roda would talk about his mother and how he had no one to love, being very straight forward with flirting with him, and once he was home, Roda would kiss his cheek, making him all flustered and run into his house with blush streaking across his cheeks. It made him happy to see this. To see such a guy actually be so open and understanding with him. He would go home and refuse to look at his mother, and just go straight upstairs, and this time, it was his mother that would turn around and look back at him. It made him feel powerful. This made him feel like he was getting revenge, and it felt good. However...this did last for him. Somehow, the gods above disliked Roda very much. One day, as he was coming to the bar, he noticed someone in the alley way and his heart stopped when the streetlamp flickered on.
That day changed Roda back to his original self, but much more form to it. He ran more, he exercised, he would have silent tears at night, he would repeat everything. He had no one, his mind was just cold to everyone, and he didn't want to be close to anyone. The fighter that used to be so strong, was now so weak and vulnerable. He thought about his own death many times, and almost tried it, but he knew his body was too strong now to die from jumping off a bridge, unless he landed flat on his stomach, which instincts wouldn't allow him. But...a day came when things worked on his side. His father's car was in the drive way one day. Roda's eyes widened and he ran inside with excitement, and just as he opened the door, a young boy, with white, flared hair was suddenly engraved into his mind and heart. He knew this person. The boy stared straight at him, and...smiled. Roda dropped all his things, his eyes tearing up. the boy gasped and began to freak out, running over with a box of tissues, but Roda just jumped into his embrace, his muscly body like a brick on the white haired boy, but the boy didn't care, he just slightly struggled to hug him back, smiling, holding him close to him. he was taken in with his father, and he was finally able to get a new life, with his brother.
He was stronger, more patient, kind, but also wild and sexual. He liked things to be challenging, and yet, he also wanted to be loved back. He had a cold heart to those who ignored him, but if not he was normal, strong and more mature than his older brother. He didn't speak as often as his loud mouth brother, but made up for it in his loyal actions. He was truth worthy, and loyal to his friends...and people he must protect. You never see him off guard or defenseless, he is always on his toes, like a steal wall. he will never fall unless you break him down, unless you really want to try that hard to see just what crazy beast is inside.
Nagi:
Well, well, well, Nagi, the most annoying, intelligent genius of the two brothers. His mind was his weapon. He could watch something for about ten minutes, like someone playing the piano, and know what to do to make the piano sound just as beautiful and understand the placement of the fingers and repeat exactly what the previous person had been playing, and maybe add a few notes here and there out of place, but he was a super genius. he was born with the mind of a God!!!!!, so says his father exaggeratedly of course. But he was that one kid where he could take your credit card, look at it for a minute, and then give it back and have it memorized better than you do yourself. He was hotheaded and impatient with people that couldn't think faster than him. He was treated with a slightly spoiled attitude in the way of he had money and could ask for a lot of things, but he still had disipline and obedience to his parents, who his father was a very wealthy, yet kind man that his first wife died at the birth of Nagi and he went to another women for comfort and some compassion, but she tricked him into having a baby with him, and there lied the birth of his younger Half brother. He had heard stories from visits his father made when he visited his Half brother named Noda, after a red haired fox he once had. His father told him that the fox's fur was such a gorgeous color of red that it made people anxious to be around to claim his fur, but his Father kept him as a pet, and loved him and treated him well until he passed away. He buried him, fur and all, and believed that Noda's fur and personality was passed onto his Half brother, who, from pictures, was a beautifully, well build child with gorgeous red hair and a cool, fox look in his eyes. Nagi was very interested in this boy and thought about him most of the time, like what it would be like to play with his brother, and what would they play, and maybe they could make forts together, play with action figures, Oh such a life was to be expected to look forward to, it was an older brother's dream to not be alone in such a large house, with his father busy and only nannies around him, he didn't really have anyone to relate to. So as a child, he usually stayed in his room, playing with his toys, and when he went to school, he didn't have many friends because most of them knew he was rich and avoided him because they thought he would be mean, but he just wanted a friend. In middle school, all of that changed when he started to travel down the "Bad-boy" look because he didn't who his real self was very well, and elementary treated him as such, but the opposite affect happened: girls started to follow him, talking to him, and guys thought he was cool for acting all tough, when really, he had no physical strength at all. It was all talk and no bite. He wasn't the fighting type, even when his father put him into Kung fu. He didn't really like using those attacks on people at all. This cost him one day. His attitude toward a kid one day was just cocky and pissed, and that day at lunch, he was beat up by the kid that was insulted. he didn't fight back. he just took it. And when he returned home, his father was very mad and was going to request a transfer, but Nagi refused. He had to face this. ne knew inside of him that his true self was coming out, and he would find himself at that school, very soon. So, the next day his father had to go on a "business meeting", that left Nagi to fend for himself that day. The girls avoided him, the guys tried to cheer him on, but really, he felt in his gut this isn't what he wanted. He just wanted some time to think about it logically, but there was no time when a group of kids following the child that was insulted came up to him. multiple against one, odds were he was going to get seriously beat up. However, just then, a teacher came out into the halls and began to yell at the children skipping class. They all ran off. Nagi stayed put, and felt the need to tell the teacher he has had trouble with those kids before, and that he refused to fight them even when he knew self defense. The teach smiled at Nagi and told him if he had an ability, it was okay to use it if it meant protecting himself. If it meant outwitting death, then by god he was allowed to use self defense. This sparked something inside him. Outwitting. That was something he has always enjoyed. Outwitting teachers, his father, his nannies, anyone. If his mind could be used in such a way that could say his life from bullies, then by god, he was going to wipe the floor.
The discovery of his intelligent, true side made kids dislike him. He was cocky, annoying, and intelligent. However, he just wanted a friend. When his father got back from the business trip, he invited Nagi to come with him for dinner. They often did this, but in such a far away place it made Nagi suspicious...until he saw a house that look familiar in an old picture. He rushed out of the car, ran up to the door and a women with long, brownish red hair opened up the door. She looked mean, but if this was the place that he thought it was, then it held a certain someone. he looked all over the house as the two adults spoke, and not one boy was in this house, he had walked down stairs and at the very moment he did, the door opened up...and there stood...a boy, with the same lonely eyes as he had. His smile lit up to bright balls of blue, and he was suddenly tackled by his brother. They hugged and hugged and embraced and hugged more. He found his brother. It was a moment that made both of their lives. Nagi had a brother, took him back home, and they, that day, slept in the same bed, hugging each other, as if they were deemed to be together. When he was enrolled into school the next year, bullying increased around Nagi, and a specific situation was a kid went up to Nagi told him he didn't like the tone in his voice, and Nagi prepared for the worst, but just as the boy was throwing the first punch, Roda caught it from out of no where, his clear silts glared the boy down, and with no mercy, Roda twisted his arm and put him in a hold, telling him to beg for forgiveness.
Roda, the protector and the wielder of strength. Nagi, the outwitter and the wielder of intelligence. These two are not only powerful and a strong duo: They are also the cause of a bunch of troubles from folks in the mortal, and in the spirit.
Likes:
Roda:
-His Half Brother Nagi
-Fighting
-Different flavored of ice cream
-Men
-Chips
-Sweet things
-Being tall
-Being Lazy
-Being pushed around by his brother (Likes it when he gets feisty)
-His hair
Nagi:
-His Half Brother Roda (Even when he is lazy)
-Order
-Healthy food
-Men
-Doing chores
-Filing papers
-Having time to himself
-Trying to be the best
-Being sexy~
-Listening to music
-Fighting
Dislikes
Roda:
-Seeing his brother hurt
-Anyone touching his brother
-The opponent (ANYONE!)
-Spicy things
-Women (For many reasons)
-Anything misunderstanding
-Being active all the time
Nagi:
-Anyone Hurting his brother
-Anyone thinking they are better than him
-Not being organized
-Sweets
-Messes
-An Enemy
-His brother being lazy
-Loud music
-Women (What isn't there not to hate?)
-Looking uncool in front of someone important or handsome
-Onions
Division:
Both: Squad 1
Rank:
Both: Joint-Vice captain
Side:
Both: Soul Society
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Well, to put it into a short paragraph, These two boys are half brothers, who both have different mothers. One lives in Spain and another in Italy. The mother of the eldest son, who's named Nagi, died upon his birth. The father was deeply depressed about the death of his wife, but did not bent it upon his son, for he was a gift he couldn't ask for. Their father is rich and owns his own company, but because of his hurt composer over three years, he sought comfort from his good friend, but she tricked him into having a baby with her so that he would stay with her so that she could have the money when he dies. He was much smarter than this women, and convinced her that she was abusing her son and neglecting him of love and comfort, so he took full custody of the other son, who's name is Roda. The two bothers have been living lonely lives since before that day, and now together the bond between them was so strong and so powerful, that it even followed them after death, where the two of them became linked to each other by a Spirit. They trained together and then slowly but surely became joint Vice-captains of the First division, where the leader saw their talent as law enforcers, and a powerful duo.
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Reiatsu Color(s):
Roda: Soft red
Nagi: Soft Blueish white
Reiryoku Level(s):
Both: High
Both: Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Advanced
• Air Dash: Novice
• Shunpo: Advanced
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Advanced
• Kung Fu: Expert
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Expert
• Kendo: Advance
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Kido Spells: Advanced
• Reiryoku Gathering: Advanced
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Novice
• Jumping: Novice
Strengths:
Roda:
• Strength
• Endurance
Nagi:
• Intelligence
• Speed
Weaknesses:
Roda:
• His Brother
• His Passion to fight (Makes him weak because it turns his mind into craving blood)
Nagi:
• His Brother
• Endurance is low
Fears:
Roda:
• One day killing his own brother.
• The power shared between him and his brother
Nagi:
• Losing his brother to power
• Being embarrassed
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakuto
Both: Zanpakuto Name:
Sehdra, The Beast Cornuto (The Horned Beast)
(Say-d-rr-ah)
Zanpakuto Location:
Roda: A long sheath hanging loosely behind his back
Nagi: Duel sheaths on either side of his waist
Zanpakuto Appearance:
Roda:
[X]
Nagi:
[X]
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.:
[X]
Zanpakuto Sword Type:
Roda: Nodachi
Nagi: Twin Kodachi
[Sealed appearance]
Zanpakuto Element:
Sound
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Both: Shikai Name:
Demone Cornuto (Horned Demon)
Shikai Incantation:
"Out of the dark, E nella luce, Sehdra"
Shikai Description:
Roda:
[X]
Nagi:
[X]
As both Brothers activate the first stage of Shikai, both blades begin to spark with red and black sparks, surrounding the blades entirely. This holds for a couple of seconds until it breaks off from the sword, And Roda's sword becomes much larger than it's original form, and the cloth wrapped around it flutters off, revealing it's true color. However, the air is silent, and there is but one, loud sound, emitting from Roda's sword. A hum. A Deep, resonating hum that makes the blade look like it is moving on it's own in a slight wobble of the blade. And then another sound pierces the air, with a high frequency. The two daggers had grown longer in size and have split apart, but not much bigger than before. Emitting from the daggers was a hum, no, a chime that was very high in pitch, audible to those who paid attention to his daggers instead of his brother's low hum of his giant sword.
Shikai Ability:
Roda:
Earth Breaker:
This attack is only done by Roda, and with no help of his brother. The low hum of his sword begins to grow louder and louder to the opponent, and as he is getting suspicious, the sword is quickly flung into the air, then he takes an odd Kung Fu stance just as it comes hurtling down. When it falls closely to the ground, Roda presses his hands against the blade, shifting the blades position within the air, moving it around his head, body, and singularly in the air until his opponent gets tired and tries to throw out an attack. However, that is when Roda throws the sword with great strength into the ground, and suddenly a large burst of sound explodes from the sword, causing the ground beneath to crack and break apart underneath the opponents feet. But when the opponent is confused, Roda has appeared behind them and tries to push the opponent into the deep whole created. This is a difficult move to avoid, but high ranking officers have the ability to and the deep whole is deep enough to make a person struggle to get back up.
Wings of Sehdra:
This attack is an interesting attack and how Roda went about it in training. This one is more about his body than the sword, but you cannot forget the sword. This one it seems like he is in regular combat with the opponent, however, his body movements seem to get sharper, and much quicker in a split second, and suddenly, you start to see two of him that he is going so fast. It's an illusion. You get pummeled and pummeled by these two figures but when out of no where, Roda's sword is places in front of his body and his body doubles. It's the vibrations from the ultra low sound emitting from the zanpakuto that cause the doubles. It's not Roda's body the hum is being used on, it's the opponents eyes, causing his vision to see double. It is difficult to break away from this attack, but not impossible for high ranked officers.
Nagi:
Ultrasound:
Ultrasound is an unique attack that damages the opponents insides while the real damages is being caused on the outside. A screaming high pitch rings through the opponent's ears, and makes all other sounds in the air impervious to hear. You don't see Nagi anywhere on the battle field, but the opponent is trying to hear desperately, only able to rely on his sense of smell, taste, and eyes. Suddenly, your hit from the left, then the right, then from above and get batted all over the field, and see that your eyes are also being distorted by the high frequency, making you frustration, and just when you snap away from the distortion, Nagi as put you on the ground, both daggers ringing in your ear, causing you torture to your bodies's insides, and you cry out for help, but you can't even hear yourself. This move is a torture, submission move that can be avoided if you either know a guy with a good pair of ear plugs, or are able to snap out of the distortion of your eyes in time, which is able to be done possibly by high ranked officers.
Horns Of Sehdra:
Now the bad puppies come out. The Horns of Sehdra are not to be messed with. They are what the Zanpakuto's spirit's power lies mostly in. This is a blunt force attack that is used to make the opponent come to submission, and can get very bloody. Nagi's daggers rest lightly in his hands, and the high pitch begins to sound off, however, it fluxes now, however, as the sound fluxes, the opponent begins to seem dizzy, then loopy, then off balance in a trance like state, unable to keep his balance and feeling giddy and strange. After a few moments, they fall to the ground, but outside of the trance, the swords are so high they are interfering with the opponent's brain wave patterns, causing them to turn into a tranced being within themselves, while on the outside, the enemy in being stabbed, and bones and broken, until the opponent simply falls over due to loss of blood or his legs are broken. The trance state can be avoid until the point of being slightly delirious by high ranked officers, and even then their movements are slowed down, and until they figure out a way to escape the short range that the ultrasound creates
Both:
Pitch Wheel:
Pitch wheel is done by both Roda and Nagi working together, using the cloth that has been wrapped upon their zanpakutos to create a spinning wheel around them. Roda begins to spin his large sword, and the hum grows louder by the second, and on the other side of the opponent, Nagi's swords are spun together and the high pitch sound begins to also grow louder. The mixture of the sound begins to grow louder, and louder, until the opponent is covering his ears as the extremely loud sound that fills the air. His body begins to break and his body bleeding out from his mouth of ears, and just when the opponent wishes to give in, the two throw their sword directly at the opponent, slicing him in half. This move can be avoided by high ranked officers, and can dodge the swords if they pay attention to them, but the sound is very unlikely to avoid and will hurt a higher ranked officer's body ever so slightly.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Both: Bankai Name:
Le Voci dei Morti (Voices of the Dead)
Bankai Incantation:
"Sehdra, La Bestia Cornuta, il Guardiano di Morte, la Convochiamo, come Voce dei MORTI! "
Bankai Description:
Two sounds, one deep and one high, suddenly begin to form together. The blades make a loud hum as they begin to morph together, and suddenly, the brothers hold an incredibly large sword that has a decorated hilt with two tuning knives on each side facing towards the main blunt of the sword, and the blunt of the sword happens to be a large, think sword with a gap straight down the middle emitting a mixture of high and low pitches, causing the air around then to feel silent and ominous.
Bankai Ability:
The Body of Sehdra: [To be trained in]
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▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells
▬▬┤|Hado Spells
Roda:
•1. Shō
•4. Byakurai
•11. Tsuzuri Raiden
•12. Fushibi
•31. Shakkahō
•32. Ōkasen
•33. Sōkatsui
•54. Haien
•58. Tenran
•63. Raikōhō
•73. Sōren Sōkatsui
•88. Hiryūgekizokushintenraihō
▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells
Nagi:
• 1. Sai
•4. Hainawa
•8. Seki
•9. Geki
•10. Hōrin
•21. Sekienton
•26. Kyokkō
•30. Shitotsu Sansen
•37. Tsuriboshi
•39. Enkōsen
•58. Kakushitsuijaku
•61. Rikujōkōrō
•62. Hyapporankan
•63. Sajō Sabaku
•73. Tozanshō
•75. Gochūtekkan
•77. Tenteikūra
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:07 pm
Okay,
- Your rank was already pre-approved therefore you are good.
- Your Bio is a bit shaky, however you are able to keep it stable and sense. So I won't eat you so much. Therefore, other than a few grammar and spelling errors everything looks good to me.
I Approve
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:25 pm
Okay,
- Your rank was re-approved, therefore you are fine.
- You bio is a bit short...however seeing the amount of information everywhere else...I'm not going to complain...you are a monster when it comes to details
- Some grammar errors you should fix here and there
- And make sure you have Nodachi and Twin Kodachi as your sealed weapons.
After those changes you are approved...
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