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 Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 11:29 pm
Username: -o-Havik-o-
RPC Name:Death "The Monkey Man" Spank
RPC Rank: Jounin
Talent Description: Vice of the Devil Meat!: Due to Death "The Monkey Man" Spank's unending, and unwavering love for Bacon (yes, with a capital B!) when he consumes the delicious meat he gains a +1 to his strength, speed, and clogged arteries. This buff will last for 5 posts per piece of Bacon, and 15 posts for a meal involving Bacon.
Talent Sacrifice: The problem with this is when he goes more than ten posts with out eating any Bacon (again with the capital B!) he suffers withdraws, taking a -1 from all his speed, and strength. He also becomes cranky, and more irritable when he does not get his fix in time.
Bacon will cost 30g raw, 40g cooked, 50g in a meal from restaurants, or market places.
If Bacon is eaten once withdraws have stared then he does not gain his bonus, however, if he eats a large amount of the Bacon (ten pieces, or two meals.) once from a withdrawn state, for 3 posts he will be over joyed with the taste, he will be fueled with +2 strength, and speed, after that three posts for seven he will return to his normal +1
How it happened: Through out his life Death "The Monkey Man" Spank had many meals that involved Bacon... Okay, they all did, after having it once he could not help but have it with any meal he ever had. They joy from the Bacon always fueled him, making him feel more alive, and more powerful than he was before. Learning this he about himself he went even further, and many times kept Bacon on his person for those bad situations that ninjas tend to get themselves in.
The meat of all meats even tended to get Death "The Monkey Man" Spank into fights, mostly with animal activists, vegetarians, or vegans, because when they saw him eating his BLT, Bacon cheeseburger, Bacon jerky, fried Bacon, teryiaky Bacon, Bacon dipped in various things like honey mustard, BBQ sauce, chocolate, ranch, that sauce that one restaurant serves with chicken strips, steak sauce, or ice cream (Just some of his favorites dips.) Bacon wrapped hot dogs, Bacon wrapped asparagus, fully loaded potato with extra Bacon and sour cream, or any of his other Bacon based meals they would try to convert him to there ways, and the thought of no more Bacon enraged him cause him to slash out violently and scream "I WILL NEVER STOP EATING BACON!" (All caps that time!). This some times got him in trouble with his Kage, or restaurant owners, but for some reason those none meat eating bastards always piss him off.
I was not sure how it would be taken, glad this is the response though.
Edited a few things around, I added once more small perk, since there were two more draw back, or small draw backs.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:15 am
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz Username:
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
RPC Name:
Laxus Makarov
RPC Rank:
Genin
Talent Description:
Electromagnet - Laxus is overly powered with Raiton chakra, thus his electromagnetic field is far more powerful than nearly any other user who doesn't specialize in wielding the Satetsu. This gives Laxus a +1 rank to Satetsu jutsu, and expands his effective area by twice the distance. He also gains the ability to charge the Satetsu with a C rank amount of chakra, making any contact confer a D rank amount for 3 posts after the ability is used.
1 - Laxus gains a +1 in rank to Satetsu
2 - Laxus can spend a C rank amount of chakra to charge his satetsu with enough lightning chakra to deal D rank shocks for 3 posts, so jumping into a cloud of Satetsu will damage an opponent, instead of just scratching them.
Talent Sacrifice:
Laxus is unable to wield simple ninja tools, much less larger weapons such as a sword. This means that Laxus is unable to use anything made of metal as a weapon, excluding Satetsu Jutsu, not weapons created from Satetsu. This means that Laxus is completely unable to utilize Kenjutsu.
Laxus attracts any metal object aside from headbands ( Just to avoid him accidentally stealing people's headbands. ) that is around him not created by a specific Satetsu Jutsu. So any metal object in the air, or even planted in the ground and not in a building is attracted to him. If the object is overly large and rooted to the ground, Laxus will himself be drawn directly to it. The area of attraction and the strength of attraction is equal to Laxus's Satetsu strength. The range increases by 25 feet for every rank.
Laxus also suffers a -.5 rank to his Doton techniques because of his overwhelming raiton capabilities.
1 - Laxus can't learn Kenjutsu styles
2 - Laxus is attracted to metal/ metal is attracted to Laxus. which it is is dependent on the size of the object.
3 - Laxus suffers a -.5 rank for his Doton techniques because of his Lightning capabilities.
How it happened:
Laxus has always been coursing with raiton chakra, and so once his bloodline awakened within him, he discovered that by not paying attention to the limits most users have, he can utilize his extreme amounts of raiton chakra to expand his power over his iron sand.
The reason I asked about the chakra bit Tim, is because you didn't specify that it was Raiton chakra. However, now knowing for sure what you meant, remove that part. As Hikaro has been saying, it is an automatic second attack should you actually connect. Besides that however, it is not a talent based ability. If you want that, just make a personal jutsu that lets you charge your sand. When I said to scale the attraction by range, that is not what I meant. A magnetic field does not magically appear at full strength when you reach it's boundaries. (Well, it might, but I didn't exactly master science...) What I meant was, it might be a light pull, hardly noticable at say, fifteen feet. At ten feet it might increase to a pull as if someone of E ranked strength was pulling on your items. At five feet, D rank. And at two feet, C. Within six inches might jump to A rank. With that said, that's what I was looking for. Twenty five feet of pure magnetism is too much even to start with, much less at genin and adding another every rank. That's 150 feet at S rank. A bit much, no? Also, your "How it happened". I was under the impression when you mentioned this in the chat, that the cause would be your abnormally strong magnetic field, not a lax attitude towards raiton. The explanation makes little sense. Now, in reference to the argument with Hikaro. You may not utilize this talent for tech destruction. Not on the scale referenced. Your magnetic field may disrupt any communications technology within your field's range, but you can't destroy it. And please remember, you are not to argue with me.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:20 am
iAkura-kun iAkura-kun Username: iAkura-kun
RPC Name: Axel Strom
RPC Rank: Genin
Talent Description: Axel is capable of learning Sword Techiniques at the greatly increased rate of -1posts. For every rank he increases, this raises by one. D - -2 C - -3 B - - A - -4 S - -5
Besides that, he gains .5 rank in damage and there is no limit to the number of styles he can learn.
Talent Sacrifice: Axel is unable to use three jutsu elements [ 2 elements and Universal, leaving the ninja with just one element; wall/water walking is still learnable ] Added to this he also cannot learn any medical or genjutsu. Though he can develop jutsu by himself so long as they are not elementally alinged.
How it happened: Axel was born without the ability to channel most, if not any, form of chakra save for his raiton chakra. Due to this he took his one element and employed it in the best way he could; swordsmanship.
[ Lowered the post count and lowered the power increase ] No matter how I look at this, it's a slightly edited copy of the example talent, which is a pretty much automatic denial. Please write your own talent. It's not a bad concept, but it's still a copy, and a lax one at that, considering you added the elemental ability back in, which the loss of it was what allowed it in the example.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:27 am
Funky Inferni
Spoke to another mod about this and they said I should try it. If this doesn't work....idk what my plan is. I will figure something out, though.
Username: Funky Inferni
RPC Name: Roatsu Keido
RPC Rank: Academy Student
Talent Description: Roatsu isn't much of a shinobi at all and prefers the use of machines over anything else. He constantly researches and creates new machines all the time. So, instead of traditional fighting styles, Roatsu can create an unlimited amount of custom technology. This technology, however, would require construction. Each custom will have its own parameters for creation.
Talent Sacrifice: Roatsu does not have chakra. He cannot learn taijutsu, weapons techniques, ninjutsu, or anything else that normal shinobi can learn. The extent to what Roatsu can do is use types of weapons and technology that he creates. He also cannot have a Shinobi Profession.
How it happened: Roatsu was born without chakra whatsoever, but still could live without it. Being an extremely smart fellow, he took interest in science. Through years and years of dedication, he was able to construct technology and invent things that nobody had done before. He can effectively create anything that he can envision in his head and use it to its fullest extent. All he has to do is build it.
Funnily enough, this one is also a profession we have backlogged in development... Add that you must follow the normal post counts for learning a jutsu when "Learning" a new technology, and a base post count for building them after that. Technology, oddly enough, is ranked, so you could base the count on rank or complexity. Your choice. Like I said, this talent is the same basic concept as a profession we have planned, so for your weakness, unless you truly want to lose all those things, you can reduce it and only sacrifice your profession. As is, that's a fairly big loss. If you don't want to reduce the weakness, go ahead and add in another related ability or two. Perhaps the ability to recreate technology you've seen in use.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:38 am
-o-Havik-o- Username: -o-Havik-o-
RPC Name:Death "The Monkey Man" Spank
RPC Rank: Jounin
Talent Description: Vice of the Devil Meat!: Due to Death "The Monkey Man" Spank's unending, and unwavering love for Bacon (yes, with a capital B!) when he consumes the delicious meat he gains a +1 to his strength, speed, and clogged arteries. This buff will last for 5 posts per piece of Bacon, and 15 posts for a meal involving Bacon.
Talent Sacrifice: The problem with this is when he goes more than ten posts with out eating any Bacon (again with the capital B!) he suffers withdraws, taking a -1 from all his speed, and strength. He also becomes cranky, and more irritable when he does not get his fix in time.
Bacon will cost 30g raw, 40g cooked, 50g in a meal from restaurants, or market places.
If Bacon is eaten once withdraws have stared then he does not gain his bonus, however, if he eats a large amount of the Bacon (ten pieces, or two meals.) once from a withdrawn state, for 3 posts he will be over joyed with the taste, he will be fueled with +2 strength, and speed, after that three posts for seven he will return to his normal +1
How it happened: Through out his life Death "The Monkey Man" Spank had many meals that involved Bacon... Okay, they all did, after having it once he could not help but have it with any meal he ever had. They joy from the Bacon always fueled him, making him feel more alive, and more powerful than he was before. Learning this he about himself he went even further, and many times kept Bacon on his person for those bad situations that ninjas tend to get themselves in.
The meat of all meats even tended to get Death "The Monkey Man" Spank into fights, mostly with animal activists, vegetarians, or vegans, because when they saw him eating his BLT, Bacon cheeseburger, Bacon jerky, fried Bacon, teryiaky Bacon, Bacon dipped in various things like honey mustard, BBQ sauce, chocolate, ranch, that sauce that one restaurant serves with chicken strips, steak sauce, or ice cream (Just some of his favorites dips.) Bacon wrapped hot dogs, Bacon wrapped asparagus, fully loaded potato with extra Bacon and sour cream, or any of his other Bacon based meals they would try to convert him to there ways, and the thought of no more Bacon enraged him cause him to slash out violently and scream "I WILL NEVER STOP EATING BACON!" (All caps that time!). This some times got him in trouble with his Kage, or restaurant owners, but for some reason those none meat eating bastards always piss him off.I was not sure how it would be taken, glad this is the response though.
Edited a few things around, I added once more small perk, since there were two more draw back, or small draw backs. If the meal has a higher bonus, please raise the price to match it somewhat. If each piece increases the boost, there should be a limit to how much he can devour in a given period of time. (Impossible, I know!) Or a max to how long the boost can stack to. I'd say max it out at the fifteen posts.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:42 am
[Update: Added a few fields to the application form. These will help me in determining your RPC's eligibility for your desired talent. Talents should be built off of these base fields, unless of course they are sacrificing them.]
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:41 am
Hinote Tosatsu Funky Inferni
Spoke to another mod about this and they said I should try it. If this doesn't work....idk what my plan is. I will figure something out, though.
Username: Funky Inferni
RPC Name: Roatsu Keido
RPC Rank: Academy Student
Talent Description: Roatsu isn't much of a shinobi at all and prefers the use of machines over anything else. He constantly researches and creates new machines all the time. So, instead of traditional fighting styles, Roatsu can create an unlimited amount of custom technology. This technology, however, would require construction. Each custom will have its own parameters for creation.
Talent Sacrifice: Roatsu does not have chakra. He cannot learn taijutsu, weapons techniques, ninjutsu, or anything else that normal shinobi can learn. The extent to what Roatsu can do is use types of weapons and technology that he creates. He also cannot have a Shinobi Profession.
How it happened: Roatsu was born without chakra whatsoever, but still could live without it. Being an extremely smart fellow, he took interest in science. Through years and years of dedication, he was able to construct technology and invent things that nobody had done before. He can effectively create anything that he can envision in his head and use it to its fullest extent. All he has to do is build it.
Funnily enough, this one is also a profession we have backlogged in development... Add that you must follow the normal post counts for learning a jutsu when "Learning" a new technology, and a base post count for building them after that. Technology, oddly enough, is ranked, so you could base the count on rank or complexity. Your choice. Like I said, this talent is the same basic concept as a profession we have planned, so for your weakness, unless you truly want to lose all those things, you can reduce it and only sacrifice your profession. As is, that's a fairly big loss. If you don't want to reduce the weakness, go ahead and add in another related ability or two. Perhaps the ability to recreate technology you've seen in use.
I'll go with your idea for the additional abilities. I like that recreating thing, but could I also add that he can determine any weaknesses after studying them in battle for...let's say 3 posts?
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:50 am
Here is an edited version with your suggestion and my own for the additional abilities.
Username: Funky Inferni
RPC Name: Roatsu Keido
RPC Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A
Profession: N/A
Ninja Types: Offensive and Tactical
Talent Description: Roatsu isn't much of a shinobi at all and prefers the use of machines over anything else. He constantly researches and creates new machines all the time. So, instead of traditional fighting styles, Roatsu can create an unlimited amount of custom technology. This technology, however, would require construction. Along with his abilities to create, he is able to recreate any technology that he is seen from simply seeing how it is used. Also, three posts after seeing how a technology is used, then he can also determine any weaknesses it may have.
Talent Sacrifice: Roatsu does not have chakra. He cannot learn taijutsu, weapons techniques, ninjutsu, or anything else that normal shinobi can learn. The extent to what Roatsu can do is use types of weapons and technology that he creates. He also cannot have a Shinobi Profession.
How it happened: Roatsu was born without chakra whatsoever, but still could live without it. Being an extremely smart fellow, he took interest in science. Through years and years of dedication, he was able to construct technology and invent things that nobody had done before. He can effectively create anything that he can envision in his head and use it to its fullest extent. All he has to do is build it.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 8:57 am
Hinote Tosatsu -o-Havik-o- Username: -o-Havik-o-
RPC Name:Death "The Monkey Man" Spank
RPC Rank: Jounin
Talent Description: Vice of the Devil Meat!: Due to Death "The Monkey Man" Spank's unending, and unwavering love for Bacon (yes, with a capital B!) when he consumes the delicious meat he gains a +1 to his strength, speed, and clogged arteries. This buff will last for 5 posts per piece of Bacon, and 15 posts for a meal involving Bacon.
Talent Sacrifice: The problem with this is when he goes more than ten posts with out eating any Bacon (again with the capital B!) he suffers withdraws, taking a -1 from all his speed, and strength. He also becomes cranky, and more irritable when he does not get his fix in time.
Bacon will cost 30g raw, 40g cooked, 50g in a meal from restaurants, or market places.
If Bacon is eaten once withdraws have stared then he does not gain his bonus, however, if he eats a large amount of the Bacon (ten pieces, or two meals.) once from a withdrawn state, for 3 posts he will be over joyed with the taste, he will be fueled with +2 strength, and speed, after that three posts for seven he will return to his normal +1
How it happened: Through out his life Death "The Monkey Man" Spank had many meals that involved Bacon... Okay, they all did, after having it once he could not help but have it with any meal he ever had. They joy from the Bacon always fueled him, making him feel more alive, and more powerful than he was before. Learning this he about himself he went even further, and many times kept Bacon on his person for those bad situations that ninjas tend to get themselves in.
The meat of all meats even tended to get Death "The Monkey Man" Spank into fights, mostly with animal activists, vegetarians, or vegans, because when they saw him eating his BLT, Bacon cheeseburger, Bacon jerky, fried Bacon, teryiaky Bacon, Bacon dipped in various things like honey mustard, BBQ sauce, chocolate, ranch, that sauce that one restaurant serves with chicken strips, steak sauce, or ice cream (Just some of his favorites dips.) Bacon wrapped hot dogs, Bacon wrapped asparagus, fully loaded potato with extra Bacon and sour cream, or any of his other Bacon based meals they would try to convert him to there ways, and the thought of no more Bacon enraged him cause him to slash out violently and scream "I WILL NEVER STOP EATING BACON!" (All caps that time!). This some times got him in trouble with his Kage, or restaurant owners, but for some reason those none meat eating bastards always piss him off.I was not sure how it would be taken, glad this is the response though.
Edited a few things around, I added once more small perk, since there were two more draw back, or small draw backs. If the meal has a higher bonus, please raise the price to match it somewhat. If each piece increases the boost, there should be a limit to how much he can devour in a given period of time. (Impossible, I know!) Or a max to how long the boost can stack to. I'd say max it out at the fifteen posts. How is 90g for a meal, (Same as three raw pieces of bacon.) and a cap of fifteen sounds far to me.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:32 am
Username: xNew York Slavex
RPC Name: Kohana Remy
RPC Rank: Genin
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: Under Approval
Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist
Ninja Types:
• Chakra Control
• Tactical Ninja
Talent Description: Consumed by the Flames
Talent Sacrifice: Sacrifices Taijutsu and Weapon Styles completely to concentrate on her Elemental Ninjutsu and Genjutsu.
How it happened:
• Kohana was constantly picked on by her older brothers whom specialized in Taijutsu but were incapable of using Elemental Jutsu. She started to be tutored by her aunt to "weave" handsigns and became more adept to using Ninjutsu out of spite.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:38 am
Although this isn't my thread I'm a mod so I'll put an imput. You need to define what ' concentrate on here elemental Nin and Genjutsu ' means. ' Consumed by the Flames ' offers no description to what the talent actually does.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:45 am
iAkura-kun Although this isn't my thread I'm a mod so I'll put an imput. You need to define what ' concentrate on here elemental Nin and Genjutsu ' means. ' Consumed by the Flames ' offers no description to what the talent actually does. Actually that was supposed to metaphorical cause she is learning Elemental Ninjutsu out of spite of her brothers and her element is Katon/Fire.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:47 am
xNew York Slavex iAkura-kun Although this isn't my thread I'm a mod so I'll put an imput. You need to define what ' concentrate on here elemental Nin and Genjutsu ' means. ' Consumed by the Flames ' offers no description to what the talent actually does. Actually that was supposed to metaphorical cause she is learning Elemental Ninjutsu out of spite of her brothers and her element is Katon/Fire. Okay but what does the talent do for her? Does it make her elements stronger? make her learn those jutsu faster? The way it looks you're doing one of two things: 1) Sacrifising Taijutsu and kenjutsu to gain nothing at all. 2) Sacrifising Tai and Ken to gain some unspoken ability.
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 12:00 pm
Hinote Tosatsu The reason I asked about the chakra bit Tim, is because you didn't specify that it was Raiton chakra. However, now knowing for sure what you meant, remove that part. As Hikaro has been saying, it is an automatic second attack should you actually connect. Besides that however, it is not a talent based ability. If you want that, just make a personal jutsu that lets you charge your sand. When I said to scale the attraction by range, that is not what I meant. A magnetic field does not magically appear at full strength when you reach it's boundaries. (Well, it might, but I didn't exactly master science...) What I meant was, it might be a light pull, hardly noticable at say, fifteen feet. At ten feet it might increase to a pull as if someone of E ranked strength was pulling on your items. At five feet, D rank. And at two feet, C. Within six inches might jump to A rank. With that said, that's what I was looking for. Twenty five feet of pure magnetism is too much even to start with, much less at genin and adding another every rank. That's 150 feet at S rank. A bit much, no? Also, your "How it happened". I was under the impression when you mentioned this in the chat, that the cause would be your abnormally strong magnetic field, not a lax attitude towards raiton. The explanation makes little sense. Now, in reference to the argument with Hikaro. You may not utilize this talent for tech destruction. Not on the scale referenced. Your magnetic field may disrupt any communications technology within your field's range, but you can't destroy it. And please remember, you are not to argue with me. Okay, I'll just turn it into a custom jutsu later. Okay, I thought that Electromagnets functioned differently, where as regular magnets have varying degrees of attraction/repulsion based on the distance, I thought Electro magnets just had a range, and once your within the range it suck/fires you away. Not really, I mean if I'm supposedly able to manipulate sand that far away to begin with, then naturally my sand should reach that far. No, electromagents function primarily on the imput of electricity. The more electricity, the more power the magnet has. That's why his doton techniques suffer, because there is always a tiny bit of Raiton chakra in every jutsu he uses. By destroy, I mean roughly what will happen if you place a magnet next to a mother board, it fries it. It doesn't necessarily break it into pieces, if it is huge, then Laxus would just find himself attached to it. But if it is within range, Laxus could easily break it down so that it would have to be given maintenance. I don't argue that often, do I?
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:05 pm
Funky Inferni
Here is an edited version with your suggestion and my own for the additional abilities.
Username: Funky Inferni
RPC Name: Roatsu Keido
RPC Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline/Clan/Demon: N/A
Profession: N/A
Ninja Types: Offensive and Tactical
Talent Description: Roatsu isn't much of a shinobi at all and prefers the use of machines over anything else. He constantly researches and creates new machines all the time. So, instead of traditional fighting styles, Roatsu can create an unlimited amount of custom technology. This technology, however, would require construction. Along with his abilities to create, he is able to recreate any technology that he is seen from simply seeing how it is used. Also, three posts after seeing how a technology is used, then he can also determine any weaknesses it may have.
Talent Sacrifice: Roatsu does not have chakra. He cannot learn taijutsu, weapons techniques, ninjutsu, or anything else that normal shinobi can learn. The extent to what Roatsu can do is use types of weapons and technology that he creates. He also cannot have a Shinobi Profession.
How it happened: Roatsu was born without chakra whatsoever, but still could live without it. Being an extremely smart fellow, he took interest in science. Through years and years of dedication, he was able to construct technology and invent things that nobody had done before. He can effectively create anything that he can envision in his head and use it to its fullest extent. All he has to do is build it.
You didn't add the post counts I asked for... An added note for technology recreation, it should have an increased "Learning" count since you don't have anything teaching you how to make it. If you want the ability to learn a tech's weakness, the posts should be required to be focused entirely on studying the tech. Furthermore, the post count should be increased for each rank, since an S ranked tech will generally be much more complex than an E rank, and thus have it's weaknesses more well hidden. And since it matters to some people, you should also include that just because you might know the weakness does not mean you can exploit it. Please segment the important points of the talent out like Cobra did, just so they are easier to spot.
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