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 Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:23 pm
Phancie Winged Timberwolf Phancie I dare you to do a poem. Style: Doesn't matter. Rhyme: Free is my personal favorite, but rhyme is cute. Character: Poisonpetal - Warrior - Nightclan. Story: Poisonpetal, bluntly, hates everything and everyone. She's envious of everyone, and could be described as cold. Or bitter. I like that one better. Additional Info: I expect it to be dark, so don't worry about offense being taken. Haha otay...how about Lyric? >:3 Oh my, those eyes! Prettier than mine? I refuse! No, it's not "fine". How dare you let your eyes shine brighter! Oh me, that fur! Softer than this? I think not! Don't call me "miss". How dare you groom your fur to be smoother! Oh dear, those claws! Sharper than these? I disagree! I'll ignore your pleas. How dare you make your claws sharper! You can't mistake me for a fool. I will never be your tool. I've studied you far too long. I know every note in your song! I'll rip you from ear to ear! And then, my dear, we shall know whose claws are sharper! I'll skin you from head to toe! And then, you know, we shall feel whose fur is softer! I'll rip out those peepers! And then, my creepers, we shall see whose eyes shine brighter. Ah, such a dream is far from me, fading into the distance such poisonous thoughts lie low upon exposure, for instance and hide until the morrow. Ah, such satisfying images are not mine to keep, for they would be wrong but as I watch the petals fall, I realize they won't be gone for long my sanity is theirs to borrow. Yet as the days flow by and I am free time will tell, and time will see there will always be poison insdie of me.
❥ Impressive. Appreciated.
Nyaha, good. >:3 Twas great practice for darker poems. Hu. <3
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:15 pm
I want a poem! D:
Style: An ode biggrin
Rhyme:Free lance
Character: Rainface/Queen/Seaclan
[Story: Rain (Rainface) was born to a kittypet and a warrior of Seaclan named Grayclaw. Her mother died during ktting, but her and her brother survived. Having her fathers blood, she didn't enjoy always being packed into the tiny twoleg nest, yet her brother Fire did. At eight moons old, the twoleg house she had lived in burned down in a fire. Rain was able to escape, but Fire and her twolegs burned to the ground with the house. She fell into a slight depression after that, missing her brother dearly. For the next four moons, she lived as a loner, or what others liked to call a rogue. Rain roamed around, fighting for food often and trying to stay warm. She ended up near Seaclan, and saw a tom cat who looked a lot like her, but without her brown spots. This cat was named Grayclaw, who was her father. Grayclaw and her would meet up and one day, she was asked by him to join Seaclan, and she accpted. Grayclaw took Rain to Seaclan camp, to ask Mosstar if Rain could join, and Mosstar said yes, renaming Rain Rainpaw. She became Grayclaw's aprentice. A little while after her ceremony, she met a ginger tabby named Redfur, who quickly fell for her beauty. They both became close friends, and Redfur began to be nicer towards other. And since Grayclaw was never around to train Rainpaw, Redfur somewhat took over for him. One day, while hunting, Redfur admitted his love for her, but Rainpaw really didn't feel the same, but said she felt the same too anyways. She then ran into Darkshadow, who had issues from the past. He had hated Seaclan because they had lied to him about his real parents (Who were both deseased and were Nightclan cats.) Darkshadow knew about Redfur's love for her, and he felt that if he couldn't have her, no one could. He attempted to kill Rainpaw many times, but failed. He was exiled later on and went to Nightclan, right before the battle between Seaclan and Nightclan. Rainpaw was named Rainface, along with Foamwhisper, and Skyehawk, after the battle with Nightclan. Later on, she found out she was pregnant with Redfurs kits, and gave birth to four healthy kits named Sunkit, Foxkit, Bramblekit, and Badgerkit. Redfur and Rainface later on got into a horible fight and Rainface ran off to the outskirts, because Redfur had upset her. Darkshadow came to her, and asked her to be his mate. She accepted, but felt Shatteredfang would have hated this, so she broke his fragile heart, but then figured out that she was pregnant with Darkshadow's kits. She fooled everyone into thinking they were Redfur's but while kitting by the riverside, Nightflame fighured out that they weren't Redfurs. Redfur, after seeing the exact copy of Darkshadow (Which was a stillborn) got angry at Rainface for lying and said never to talk to him again, and that they weren't mates anymore. The other three kits of Darkshadow and Rainface were still alive, and named Stormkit, Drizzlekit, and Rosekit. Rainface had figured out about Darkshadow's death, and is at the moment in a depression and is denying his death.
Additional Info:Uhm.. It's snowing..
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 6:11 pm
Memories in the Mist I want a poem! D:Style: OdeRhyme: Free LanceCharacter: Hauntedheart, medicine cat of NightClanStory: Hauntedheart had always wanted to be a medicien cat ever since she first smelled the sweet scent of herbs. She used to be a happy, gentle she-cat when she was younger but that all changed as she got older. Her mentor was harsh, stern and Hauntedheart soon grew to hate her. She felt alone in NightClan, not wanting to be close to anyone, not even her brothers Wolfpaw and Raypaw. She was a good medicine cat but she had lost her heart and was cold and ill-tempered even at her young age. She put of walls to hide behind so no one could get close to her. She met Foxclaw when she was still an apprentice and he was a newly made warrior. He was from StormClan and Hauntedpaw tried to push him away but he wouldn't leave her alone. She felt her walls crumble to him and the medicine cat apprentice let the handsome tom in. They became very close quickly and met at the border as often as they could. At first, it was only friendly meetings but it soon turned into something more. Hauntedpaw grew strong feelings for Foxclaw but refused to admit it. She was a medicine cat! Then, the night she received her full name, the two finally admitted their feelings for each other and became mates. Hauntedheart finally felt happy again. Soon, the she became pregnant and kept it hidden from everyone. She gave birth to two kits, a still-born white tom that she named Whitekit and a ginger tabby she-cat that she named Fadingkit. She buried Whitekit and gave Fadingkit to Foxclaw, so the she-cat would be raised in StormClan. She knew it was right, but Huantedheart still felt much pain as she watched her daughter leave her forever. The next night, Hauntedheart went to her mate to find her mentor attacking him. She was helpless to do anything and had to watch as her mate and mentor tumbled off a cliff and into the river. Hauntedheart raced to the shore and went to Foxclaw, leaving her mentor to die on the bank. She was with him as he drew his last breaths, telling her how much he loved her, and spent the night with him. Heartbroken, Hauntedheart returned to NightClan and lied to the clan, telling them that a fox had killed her mentor. They believed her and Hauntedherat returned to her old, ill-tempered self.
Many moons have passed and Hauntedheart has slowly found a friend in Cinderwing. He is the only one she trusts and told him about her past. He is now the only one in the clan that knows. She still keeps others away but isn't as grumpy as she once was, but no one wants to get her angry. When Leopardstorm and Shatteredfang died, Hauntedheart became an adoptive mother to their kits, mainly Shatteredfang's. Shatteredfang's kits believe she is their real mother and Hauntedheart feels guilty about lying to them but worries they won't feel the same way about her if they knew the truth. She loves them dearly and wants what is best for them. She is a strong cat that will willing jump into battle for her clan, despite being a medicine cat.Personality: A very strong, sharp-tongued she-cat. She is strong in both mind and body and can be very harsh. She isn't afraid to fight, with words or with claws. She isn't normally happy and isn't gentle either. No one wants to get on her bad side because it isn't a pretty place. On the outside, she appears rough, harsh, and grumpy but on the inside, if she will show you it, she is much softer. Although, she prefers not to get close to any cat. She has a very strong motherly instinct when it comes to kits and she would give her life for them. She cares for her clan and loves being a medicine cat but isn't afraid to jump into battle to protect her clanmates.Additional Info: Nothing really Sorrowful air, my despair is nothing compared to some. Tales and legends longer than mine intertwine with deeper woe. Does such mean I cannot weep for what has come to pass? Ah, it matters not. I am a thorny rose containing the most bittersweet nectar. The sorrow will seep into the nectar, while the rocky surface remains unchanged, undetectable, untouchable. Unknown. Raised by hatred, or hidden love? Perhaps a thorny rose like me. However, such nectar was refused of me, and bitter nectar is not how one nurtures a happy bee. Did I ever have a chance? Walls surround me, made of steel. They seal away external potential trouble. Not a crack to be found-rightfully so! Safety is found in solitude, but so is loneliness. Unheard, unseen, unkempt. Untamed. Foxes are cunning, everyone knows. They are stubborn as well-much like me. Such similatirty is striking-it compells me. How much farther can I fall...?We are all the same...why must true love be bound? It is forbidden to fall for such...for...for what, again? ...I want to fall! I forget why I shouldn't. It feels so nice-that softness against my skin. And then, I find when he catches me, paradise lives for those short moments. It was worth it. Unbelievable, unforgettable, undetainable. Irreversable. White fades into the dark, but that which fades remains. The last one, my heart. Yet she is taken from me-does she know me? Raised by someone else. How cruel. Is this my punishment? How cliche. The thorns grow sharper now, and the walls smoother. No more cracks to be found. Not anymore. The fox has gone (his death the harsh rose caused), and the cruel rose has wilted. Irrefutable, irrational, irreconcilable. Irreplacable. Cracks are funny things. They start out so small, but grow so big. One crack can destroy a wall. Wings of cinder brush by it, and even they put miniscule cracks in the wall. Is the wall made of glass, then? It must be. It is. Once so strong, but so easily see-through? The thorns will protect me-! Yet even the cindery wings can brace themselves through those. Yes, they are strong. Irrelevant, irresponsible, irrevocable. Nonexistant. But the storms kill the Leopard, and shatters the fangs. Their children are now mine. How can this be? I am a cursed rose, a haunted heart! Am I not fit to raise them? I find my nectar is more often sweeter than not. Even I did not know. So, the children are wiser than a wise rose? Terrifying! Will they reveal the truth? Nonchalant, nonadaptive, nonvolatile. Nonrenewable. Such little faith I had in myself is presented before me by these little ones, and I find my thorns growing dull. The moons pass slowly and I bask in their luminescent beams. A black rose I once was, yet now I have faded to white. So I am changeable? Glass walls cannot filter out change. All that besides, I have been given a second chance. Change, or remain the same? It is my choice. And what shall I choose? I want to fight for my loved ones, live for those who died, help those who have fallen. Omnipresent, omnibenevolent, omnium. Neonatal. ((There ya go! 8D Neonatal means newborn, newly born. New life. >;3 ))
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 7:35 pm
ll oceanic_shimmer ll I want a poem! D: Style: An ode biggrin Rhyme:Free lance Character: Rainface/Queen/Seaclan [ Story: Rain (Rainface) was born to a kittypet and a warrior of Seaclan named Grayclaw. Her mother died during ktting, but her and her brother survived. Having her fathers blood, she didn't enjoy always being packed into the tiny twoleg nest, yet her brother Fire did. At eight moons old, the twoleg house she had lived in burned down in a fire. Rain was able to escape, but Fire and her twolegs burned to the ground with the house. She fell into a slight depression after that, missing her brother dearly. For the next four moons, she lived as a loner, or what others liked to call a rogue. Rain roamed around, fighting for food often and trying to stay warm. She ended up near Seaclan, and saw a tom cat who looked a lot like her, but without her brown spots. This cat was named Grayclaw, who was her father. Grayclaw and her would meet up and one day, she was asked by him to join Seaclan, and she accpted. Grayclaw took Rain to Seaclan camp, to ask Mosstar if Rain could join, and Mosstar said yes, renaming Rain Rainpaw. She became Grayclaw's aprentice. A little while after her ceremony, she met a ginger tabby named Redfur, who quickly fell for her beauty. They both became close friends, and Redfur began to be nicer towards other. And since Grayclaw was never around to train Rainpaw, Redfur somewhat took over for him. One day, while hunting, Redfur admitted his love for her, but Rainpaw really didn't feel the same, but said she felt the same too anyways. She then ran into Darkshadow, who had issues from the past. He had hated Seaclan because they had lied to him about his real parents (Who were both deseased and were Nightclan cats.) Darkshadow knew about Redfur's love for her, and he felt that if he couldn't have her, no one could. He attempted to kill Rainpaw many times, but failed. He was exiled later on and went to Nightclan, right before the battle between Seaclan and Nightclan. Rainpaw was named Rainface, along with Foamwhisper, and Skyehawk, after the battle with Nightclan. Later on, she found out she was pregnant with Redfurs kits, and gave birth to four healthy kits named Sunkit, Foxkit, Bramblekit, and Badgerkit. Redfur and Rainface later on got into a horible fight and Rainface ran off to the outskirts, because Redfur had upset her. Darkshadow came to her, and asked her to be his mate. She accepted, but felt Shatteredfang would have hated this, so she broke his fragile heart, but then figured out that she was pregnant with Darkshadow's kits. She fooled everyone into thinking they were Redfur's but while kitting by the riverside, Nightflame fighured out that they weren't Redfurs. Redfur, after seeing the exact copy of Darkshadow (Which was a stillborn) got angry at Rainface for lying and said never to talk to him again, and that they weren't mates anymore. The other three kits of Darkshadow and Rainface were still alive, and named Stormkit, Drizzlekit, and Rosekit. Rainface had figured out about Darkshadow's death, and is at the moment in a depression and is denying his death. Additional Info:Uhm.. It's snowing.. None can tell the story of Rain best without first beginning at the end. No end can be found, not while she still lives. You must settle for decent. Best has not yet begun to test the lines. So listen! Rain, the Queen, is seen to have the wild! A disease not meant to be dealt with lightly. Her mother's story has risen to best; her death was all but necessary. It began the Rain's! Beginnings and ends are closely tied, you see. So pay attention! Fire killed by fire. Irony, no? The names run close, but have different purposes. But Rain found the gray in the claws of the past! What a happy ending... ...but not so fast! It is only the beginning! Aha, it is but a jest, a jest. Do not become disinterested-it darkens from this point onwards. No more diddle daddle with ends and beginnings. So stay close! Seas are open and welcoming to a young heart's ambition, and it fuels the rain, after all. Mossy stars and red fur are certainly to blame. Yet so friendly, they seem. Love given and not returned is a sad thing to witness. Fake love is hollow, but only once revealed. So Rain must give out a hollow heart to one whose fur burns with red. Like fire? So it changes! Shadows darken the edges at times. Can one ignore such hostile a shadow? Rain attempts, but fails. Hating love is hard to ignore, after all, even from one who has always hated those who loved. So the shadow festers with jealousy for the reddened fur. So the shadow taints its fur with red--red blood, that is. Red blood from Rain? So love shatters! The Face of Rain is revealed at the shadow's leave, and the little ones come. Healthy and new, but of red fur. How now, can Rain ignore the hollow love? It grows more hollow, a piece missing. Reddened fur is very close to fire-tempermental and harsh, at times. So Rain flees-only for now. The Sea is swallowing her, and she gasps for air, to find shadows waiting at the edges, now clear. So sins commit! Tainted fur now tainted blood. The fangs shatter in silence, but the claws dig deep. The fur of fiery red has gone-left the Face of Rain to weep silently. Hollow love proves to be a trap that springs oh-so readily. Hating love proves to be a poison. What love is there left, now, when true (yet still hating) love is dead? So hope is lost. Ends and beginnings, all the same life has been a miserable game of love and hate and tainted fate of Rain. Beginnings and ends, all are dear to one whose beginning's end is near storms that brew perhaps life anew for Rain. ((Huh. I ended that one in a rhyme. Experiments, experiments. xD Hope you like it! ))
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 7:35 pm
(( I'm going to price these soon! >3 So get them while they're free!
However, Odes are closed. QAQ Too much words lol! <33 ))
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 7:44 pm
Winged Timberwolf ll oceanic_shimmer ll I want a poem! D: Style: An ode biggrin Rhyme:Free lance Character: Rainface/Queen/Seaclan [ Story: Rain (Rainface) was born to a kittypet and a warrior of Seaclan named Grayclaw. Her mother died during ktting, but her and her brother survived. Having her fathers blood, she didn't enjoy always being packed into the tiny twoleg nest, yet her brother Fire did. At eight moons old, the twoleg house she had lived in burned down in a fire. Rain was able to escape, but Fire and her twolegs burned to the ground with the house. She fell into a slight depression after that, missing her brother dearly. For the next four moons, she lived as a loner, or what others liked to call a rogue. Rain roamed around, fighting for food often and trying to stay warm. She ended up near Seaclan, and saw a tom cat who looked a lot like her, but without her brown spots. This cat was named Grayclaw, who was her father. Grayclaw and her would meet up and one day, she was asked by him to join Seaclan, and she accpted. Grayclaw took Rain to Seaclan camp, to ask Mosstar if Rain could join, and Mosstar said yes, renaming Rain Rainpaw. She became Grayclaw's aprentice. A little while after her ceremony, she met a ginger tabby named Redfur, who quickly fell for her beauty. They both became close friends, and Redfur began to be nicer towards other. And since Grayclaw was never around to train Rainpaw, Redfur somewhat took over for him. One day, while hunting, Redfur admitted his love for her, but Rainpaw really didn't feel the same, but said she felt the same too anyways. She then ran into Darkshadow, who had issues from the past. He had hated Seaclan because they had lied to him about his real parents (Who were both deseased and were Nightclan cats.) Darkshadow knew about Redfur's love for her, and he felt that if he couldn't have her, no one could. He attempted to kill Rainpaw many times, but failed. He was exiled later on and went to Nightclan, right before the battle between Seaclan and Nightclan. Rainpaw was named Rainface, along with Foamwhisper, and Skyehawk, after the battle with Nightclan. Later on, she found out she was pregnant with Redfurs kits, and gave birth to four healthy kits named Sunkit, Foxkit, Bramblekit, and Badgerkit. Redfur and Rainface later on got into a horible fight and Rainface ran off to the outskirts, because Redfur had upset her. Darkshadow came to her, and asked her to be his mate. She accepted, but felt Shatteredfang would have hated this, so she broke his fragile heart, but then figured out that she was pregnant with Darkshadow's kits. She fooled everyone into thinking they were Redfur's but while kitting by the riverside, Nightflame fighured out that they weren't Redfurs. Redfur, after seeing the exact copy of Darkshadow (Which was a stillborn) got angry at Rainface for lying and said never to talk to him again, and that they weren't mates anymore. The other three kits of Darkshadow and Rainface were still alive, and named Stormkit, Drizzlekit, and Rosekit. Rainface had figured out about Darkshadow's death, and is at the moment in a depression and is denying his death. Additional Info:Uhm.. It's snowing.. None can tell the story of Rain best without first beginning at the end. No end can be found, not while she still lives. You must settle for decent. Best has not yet begun to test the lines. So listen! Rain, the Queen, is seen to have the wild! A disease not meant to be dealt with lightly. Her mother's story has risen to best; her death was all but necessary. It began the Rain's! Beginnings and ends are closely tied, you see. So pay attention! Fire killed by fire. Irony, no? The names run close, but have different purposes. But Rain found the gray in the claws of the past! What a happy ending... ...but not so fast! It is only the beginning! Aha, it is but a jest, a jest. Do not become disinterested-it darkens from this point onwards. No more diddle daddle with ends and beginnings. So stay close! Seas are open and welcoming to a young heart's ambition, and it fuels the rain, after all. Mossy stars and red fur are certainly to blame. Yet so friendly, they seem. Love given and not returned is a sad thing to witness. Fake love is hollow, but only once revealed. So Rain must give out a hollow heart to one whose fur burns with red. Like fire? So it changes! Shadows darken the edges at times. Can one ignore such hostile a shadow? Rain attempts, but fails. Hating love is hard to ignore, after all, even from one who has always hated those who loved. So the shadow festers with jealousy for the reddened fur. So the shadow taints its fur with red--red blood, that is. Red blood from Rain? So love shatters! The Face of Rain is revealed at the shadow's leave, and the little ones come. Healthy and new, but of red fur. How now, can Rain ignore the hollow love? It grows more hollow, a piece missing. Reddened fur is very close to fire-tempermental and harsh, at times. So Rain flees-only for now. The Sea is swallowing her, and she gasps for air, to find shadows waiting at the edges, now clear. So sins commit! Tainted fur now tainted blood. The fangs shatter in silence, but the claws dig deep. The fur of fiery red has gone-left the Face of Rain to weep silently. Hollow love proves to be a trap that springs oh-so readily. Hating love proves to be a poison. What love is there left, now, when true (yet still hating) love is dead? So hope is lost. Ends and beginnings, all the same life has been a miserable game of love and hate and tainted fate of Rain. Beginnings and ends, all are dear to one whose beginning's end is near storms that brew perhaps life anew for Rain. ((Huh. I ended that one in a rhyme. Experiments, experiments. xD Hope you like it! )) Oh yay I got the last ode :3 Anyways I loved it. Surely made me feel better after shoving a driveway for 20 minutes or so >.> 13-18 inches.. Are you serious?!
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Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 8:25 pm
ll oceanic_shimmer ll Winged Timberwolf ll oceanic_shimmer ll I want a poem! D: Style: An ode biggrin Rhyme:Free lance Character: Rainface/Queen/Seaclan [ Story: Rain (Rainface) was born to a kittypet and a warrior of Seaclan named Grayclaw. Her mother died during ktting, but her and her brother survived. Having her fathers blood, she didn't enjoy always being packed into the tiny twoleg nest, yet her brother Fire did. At eight moons old, the twoleg house she had lived in burned down in a fire. Rain was able to escape, but Fire and her twolegs burned to the ground with the house. She fell into a slight depression after that, missing her brother dearly. For the next four moons, she lived as a loner, or what others liked to call a rogue. Rain roamed around, fighting for food often and trying to stay warm. She ended up near Seaclan, and saw a tom cat who looked a lot like her, but without her brown spots. This cat was named Grayclaw, who was her father. Grayclaw and her would meet up and one day, she was asked by him to join Seaclan, and she accpted. Grayclaw took Rain to Seaclan camp, to ask Mosstar if Rain could join, and Mosstar said yes, renaming Rain Rainpaw. She became Grayclaw's aprentice. A little while after her ceremony, she met a ginger tabby named Redfur, who quickly fell for her beauty. They both became close friends, and Redfur began to be nicer towards other. And since Grayclaw was never around to train Rainpaw, Redfur somewhat took over for him. One day, while hunting, Redfur admitted his love for her, but Rainpaw really didn't feel the same, but said she felt the same too anyways. She then ran into Darkshadow, who had issues from the past. He had hated Seaclan because they had lied to him about his real parents (Who were both deseased and were Nightclan cats.) Darkshadow knew about Redfur's love for her, and he felt that if he couldn't have her, no one could. He attempted to kill Rainpaw many times, but failed. He was exiled later on and went to Nightclan, right before the battle between Seaclan and Nightclan. Rainpaw was named Rainface, along with Foamwhisper, and Skyehawk, after the battle with Nightclan. Later on, she found out she was pregnant with Redfurs kits, and gave birth to four healthy kits named Sunkit, Foxkit, Bramblekit, and Badgerkit. Redfur and Rainface later on got into a horible fight and Rainface ran off to the outskirts, because Redfur had upset her. Darkshadow came to her, and asked her to be his mate. She accepted, but felt Shatteredfang would have hated this, so she broke his fragile heart, but then figured out that she was pregnant with Darkshadow's kits. She fooled everyone into thinking they were Redfur's but while kitting by the riverside, Nightflame fighured out that they weren't Redfurs. Redfur, after seeing the exact copy of Darkshadow (Which was a stillborn) got angry at Rainface for lying and said never to talk to him again, and that they weren't mates anymore. The other three kits of Darkshadow and Rainface were still alive, and named Stormkit, Drizzlekit, and Rosekit. Rainface had figured out about Darkshadow's death, and is at the moment in a depression and is denying his death. Additional Info:Uhm.. It's snowing.. None can tell the story of Rain best without first beginning at the end. No end can be found, not while she still lives. You must settle for decent. Best has not yet begun to test the lines. So listen! Rain, the Queen, is seen to have the wild! A disease not meant to be dealt with lightly. Her mother's story has risen to best; her death was all but necessary. It began the Rain's! Beginnings and ends are closely tied, you see. So pay attention! Fire killed by fire. Irony, no? The names run close, but have different purposes. But Rain found the gray in the claws of the past! What a happy ending... ...but not so fast! It is only the beginning! Aha, it is but a jest, a jest. Do not become disinterested-it darkens from this point onwards. No more diddle daddle with ends and beginnings. So stay close! Seas are open and welcoming to a young heart's ambition, and it fuels the rain, after all. Mossy stars and red fur are certainly to blame. Yet so friendly, they seem. Love given and not returned is a sad thing to witness. Fake love is hollow, but only once revealed. So Rain must give out a hollow heart to one whose fur burns with red. Like fire? So it changes! Shadows darken the edges at times. Can one ignore such hostile a shadow? Rain attempts, but fails. Hating love is hard to ignore, after all, even from one who has always hated those who loved. So the shadow festers with jealousy for the reddened fur. So the shadow taints its fur with red--red blood, that is. Red blood from Rain? So love shatters! The Face of Rain is revealed at the shadow's leave, and the little ones come. Healthy and new, but of red fur. How now, can Rain ignore the hollow love? It grows more hollow, a piece missing. Reddened fur is very close to fire-tempermental and harsh, at times. So Rain flees-only for now. The Sea is swallowing her, and she gasps for air, to find shadows waiting at the edges, now clear. So sins commit! Tainted fur now tainted blood. The fangs shatter in silence, but the claws dig deep. The fur of fiery red has gone-left the Face of Rain to weep silently. Hollow love proves to be a trap that springs oh-so readily. Hating love proves to be a poison. What love is there left, now, when true (yet still hating) love is dead? So hope is lost. Ends and beginnings, all the same life has been a miserable game of love and hate and tainted fate of Rain. Beginnings and ends, all are dear to one whose beginning's end is near storms that brew perhaps life anew for Rain. ((Huh. I ended that one in a rhyme. Experiments, experiments. xD Hope you like it! )) Oh yay I got the last ode :3 Anyways I loved it. Surely made me feel better after shoving a driveway for 20 minutes or so >.> 13-18 inches.. Are you serious?! xD Hehe! <3 I'm glad, then. :3
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 9:45 am
I can't find the one you made for Lilykit!!!! gonk crying
EDIT: Oh, wait, nm. Found it. heart sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:26 pm
Still open? And still free? lol  I want a poem! D:Style: LyricRhyme: Whatever will fitCharacter: Dustypaw/heart, Apprentice/warrior, StormClanStory: When Dustypaw was a kit, she accidentally killed her sister in a play fight, underestimating her strength. Now she hides her skills, because she is afraid she will kill someone again on accident. She is shy and doesn't like to talk to others. They take this as rude, but she doesn't mean to be rude. She just doesn't want to get attached to someone and then hurt them.Additional Info: Um, nope... Oh, wait! I do have something else to say...! Your poems are awesome! And hi! (I am feeling random... lol)
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:40 pm
LadyLeeLuna Still open? And still free? lol I want a poem! D:Style: LyricRhyme: Whatever will fitCharacter: Dustypaw/heart, Apprentice/warrior, StormClanStory: When Dustypaw was a kit, she accidentally killed her sister in a play fight, underestimating her strength. Now she hides her skills, because she is afraid she will kill someone again on accident. She is shy and doesn't like to talk to others. They take this as rude, but she doesn't mean to be rude. She just doesn't want to get attached to someone and then hurt them.Additional Info: Um, nope... Oh, wait! I do have something else to say...! Your poems are awesome! And hi! (I am feeling random... lol)Do not dare to sit there beside me, friend I am not one to get close to. Do not dare to laugh at me, friend I am not one to have fun. Do not dare to challenge me, friend I am not one to fight bravely. A shadow of death hangs over me a deadly stain resides in me a life is lost because of me and I find no time for rest! I will not live to be what I could have been, enemy because I stopped another from doing the same. I will not die in battle, enemy because that is how I killed. I will not be strong or wise, enemy because I deserve nothing more. I will repent for my sin with destruction within for that is all I have left. So cast the bones, So set in stone.
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:47 pm
Winged Timberwolf Do not dare to sit there beside me, friend I am not one to get close to. Do not dare to laugh at me, friend I am not one to have fun. Do not dare to challenge me, friend I am not one to fight bravely. A shadow of death hangs over me a deadly stain resides in me a life is lost because of me and I find no time for rest! I will not live to be what I could have been, enemy because I stopped another from doing the same. I will not die in battle, enemy because that is how I killed. I will not be strong or wise, enemy because I deserve nothing more. I will repent for my sin with destruction within for that is all I have left. So cast the bones, So set in stone.
Excellent as always, Timber! Thanks much!!
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 5:51 pm
you're very welcome! biggrin And thank you for requestin <3
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 7:53 pm
I want a poem! D:
Style: Lyric, please
Rhyme: Eye, or Free Lance
Character: Falconwind, warrior, NightClan
Story: Falconwind's mother was a NightClan warrior who fell in love with a BreezeClan warrior. He was born from a forbidden affair and was taken by Silvertail (personally unsure if she or Thunderclaw is his real mother) at birth. She fled to the moors where, to her dismay, the kit and her were found by a BreezeClan patrol. They were escorted back to Nightclan camp where his father, Hawkslash, decided to stay in NightClan with Silvertail and Falconkit. Hawkslash vanished shortly after. Whisperblade and Thunderclaw vanished at about the same time. Falconwind was apprenticed and met Silentpaw (Silentleopard) just before the battle with the slayers. He is now a warrior, battling with himself to confess his love to Silentleopard. Falconwind is short tempered and has a sharp tongue, but that's because he's distrusting and doesn't want to get close anyone. Though, he's learning to open up and let others in. His sweet gentle side has only been shown to Silentleopard, but that's not surprising.
Additional Info: Not really, just Falconwind has a lot of flaws, he's no where near to perfect. Also, Falconwind knows nothing about Thunderclaw and Whisperblade.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 8:21 pm
A time and place let's make a date to fly beneath the stars. A sacred stone ethereal bone makes seeking bloom in scars. You don't hide me or guide me I can walk well on my own. You don't see me or hear me until the Wind has blown. A tainted trail on a silver tail of loves and fears and greeds. Origin unknown I've found my own a home in Silence heeds. When Falcon wings and all the pretty things glimmer and gleam in the sun You'll find me waking but never forsaking on the path I walk upon.
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