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A faint smile Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 7:16 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Exquisite Entropy: Alright, now that you've edited your sample, you're APPROVED!
Harkymahlove: Sorry Hark, you need to put a lot more information in the what you know section.
Kuro-Uchi: Alright, the info is alright, but you really didn't use any of the techniques specified in the bloodline. Add some in, and I'll check it again once you edit it, mmkay?
Kay: Well, since I KNOW you actually did work on it, partially with me, partially with Deil, I know you know stuff xP The RP sample is good as well, so you're APPROVED!
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 7:55 pm
Approved. Just be aware that those augmentations have severe effects and that Chakra Speed makes you fast, but not always so fast you can't be seen. Its an effective doubling of your normal passive speed.
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 8:00 pm
Cobra_X Approved. Just be aware that those augmentations have severe effects and that Chakra Speed makes you fast, but not always so fast you can't be seen. Its an effective doubling of your normal passive speed. Right, I was writing the sample as if my character were of relatively high rank, thank you much, Now to write up that Profile!!! scream
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 8:13 pm
RPC Name: Raynn Katsuragi Bloodline/Clan Requested: Kaguya - Corpse Bone PathwaysWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I want to defend my friend and village! no seriously tho, I have a good knowledge of the clan and figured i'd make my main rpc my strongest, also, Kaguya is just cool What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan:HistoryThe Kaguya clan's origins date back to the Hidden Mist village. Much like the Hyouton clan they were shunned and even hunted for their kekkei genkai. the kaguya were regarded as barbarians and savages, always fighting just to fight, it was their entertainment. Tho not widely known, only a very select few actually had the Corpse Bone Pathways Kekkei Genkai, the members that didn't would fake it simply for the attention from the Mist Village. Those that did have the Kekkei Genkai were treated like animals, they were locked away in dungeons, they only got out to train for days on end and then were simply thrown back into their cells. The clan's own love of fighting brought their downfall. One night the clan members launched a full out attack on the Mist Village hoping to show off their power and ferocity. The Mist Village being vastly superior when it came to strategy wipped out all but a handful of Kaguya Clan members. They then fled the mist, some becoming mercenaries or simply dying of starvation because they didn't know how to do anything but fight. AbilitiesThe Kaguya clan are known for their ability to manipulate their bone's density and shape, as well as the ability to create whole new bones. The clan members use chakra as a medium for manipulating their bones. the chakra you use the more bone you can create or make dense.The Kaguya can create bone weaponry as strong as or stronger than steel. Any wounds created from the removal of weapons are healed almost instantaneously. The primary use of the kekkei Genkai is to use the bone weaponry along with 5 dances. Each one utilizes different forms of bone weaponry allowing at least one dance to be useful at any given time. Please supply a Brief RP Sample:Raynn slides one foot back with his arms crossing his chest. He crouches and scans the crowd waiting for one of them to make a move. Raynn cocks his wrists back extending two bone spikes and begins the Yanagi no Mai - Dance of the Willows, they all rush him at one. Raynn pivots on his right foot and strikes the first in the throat with his right hand. He stabs him through the temple as he shoves him away with his other hand. He swings his left hand back and parries an oncoming blade. He hops into the air as another swipes at his feet. He suddenly grows a dozen bone spikes and uses the Karamatsu no Mai - Dance of the Larch to lacerate the attackers. He lands in a crouch prepared for the next batch. four came at him all at once. two from the front, one from his four o'clock and one from his 8 o'clock. He times it and jumps kicking the two in front with the spikes on the bottom of his feet in the chest. He twists his feet yanking the spikes out and ripping apart the two mens' chests. He points and shoots bone bullets using the from his index fingers Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets striking the two men in the throat. He spins in the air and lands on his feet and one hand. He hears the man's approach just in time to spin around and parry his blade. The man kicks off of Raynn's chest and leaps into the air. He formed the hand seal so quickly Raynn barely escaped the ensuing fireball. Raynn throws of his chard and ragged shirt. He brings in all the bone spikes and takes a moment to take a breath. He studies the newest opponent. He seemed, different than the others, Stronger, wiser. Raynn launches a bone spike through the ground and across the field to under the man using the Sawarabi no Mai - Dance of the Young Ferns technique. He fires two bone bullets with the Teshi Sendan - Ten Finger Drilling Bullets. the man reacts and leaps into the air. Raynn smiles and adjusts his bone network directly under the man. He noticed the smiles but could do nothing about it. Raynn sent a bone spike up and at the man. He tried to dodge but simply had no way. he impaled directly on the thin spike. Which broke off inside the man. Raynn fell to his knees and wiped the sweat of his brow. that last technique had taken way too much out of him. He rolls over onto his back figuring he deserved a rest. Eventually his reinforcements arrived and helped him back to their village.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 8:31 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Kuro-Uchi: Thanks for editing in the techniques though at the moment we will still have to say denied. Keep in mind to watch out for your grammar. Also having your rpc vocally announce the techniques is another way to start a technique and its description and vise versa. For example your rpc could call out Karamatsu no Mai and then you'll put in the description of the tech and how it was used by your rpc. Just a suggestion. Also watch your capitalization please. You missed it several times in your sample. It'll also be wise to talk about how taking out and growing bones suddenly affect your rpc like does he feel a burn or something? Cause realistically, you can't act like you feel nothing when you're constantly regrowing and shooting out bones.
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:06 pm
RPC Name:Miho Mitsuka
Bloodline/Clan Requested: [x]Satetsu
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I will hide the metal under her cloths, then make it burst out attacking and revealing her skin, making it very distracting to any one attracted to females.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Control of metals, kunai, the metal sand, ninja wire etc. etc
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
A deep sigh left Miho as she looked at the Kazekages tower "Lame." she said annoyed as she walked toward the door, and it's two guards. As she approached her thick thighs and tight cloths made the men gawk at her becoming distracted by her looks. Getting closer to the men she wiped sweat from her forehead before bending over slightly revealing her averaged sized breast as she said in a soft, tired voice while taking deep breaths moving her chest deeply "Do either of you know were a Suki lives? I am a friend of hers and... got lost. Please help me." A swift wind struck the area just as one of the guards started to speak. As soon as they were distracted by her hair blowing and the sweat on her chest two senbon flew swiftly from the middle of her shirt the moving to quickly for the two to react accordingly and they pierced into there neck slicing through there voice box stopping any type of scream or warning call.
Quickly she weaved a set of hand seals and the two body's sunk into the sand as the last bit of life left there lips. "Stupid asses." She said walking into the building to be greeted by her next victim. The secretary at the desk barley got out her hello before the metallic pen on her desk flew from the left of her into her ear causing her now lifeless body to fall with a thud onto her desk as Miho ascended the stairs as fast as she could. Another sand ninja stepped into the hallway at the wrong time only to get stuck with a paper bomb as she ran past him, the explosion left dust and dirt on her body but she manage to escape the blunt force of the blast. Hitting another set of stairs she ran up the fast dropping small cloth bags filled with iron sand, hearing many foot steps coming towards he she fell onto the steps and started acting panicked and screamed in a high pitch "HEEEELP!"
Two more sand shinonbi meet her on the stairs and frantically asked her what happen, and what they could do. "Down Stairs, there are mist ninja with exploding paper! They tried to kill me!" The two guards instructed her to try and find a way out of the building and started to head down the stairs, as soon as there backs were turned she weaved a set of hand seals suddenly the packets of iron dust exploded in a barrage of small pelts that struck painfully into the sand ninja catching them off guard and allowing Miho to take advantage and attack her now stunned enemy from the rear. Leaping between the two with a kunai drawn two quick slices to vital area's and down went two more ninja. "These guys are just boring." She said in a unenthusiastic tone.
Hiding the kunai she made her way to a room that was supposed to be directly underneath the Kazekage's chambers, once there she reached under the back of her shirt and pulled out several storage seals and laid in a circle around her, placed one hand on the floor and created a simple seal with the other. Suddenly more Iron sand started to poor from each seal until there was a thick pile of it all around her. Standing she began to weave a set of seals, slapping the last seal tightly she said as wind kicked up through room and the Iron sand twirls around her violently "Steel dragon barrage!" The iron sand swirled coming together just above her head as the dragons maw was formed and shot through the sealing into what was the Kazekage's chambers. The dragon crashed thought the building as Miho rushed into the room with a lightning charged kunai only to find the Kazekages chambers wrecked, and empty "What the fu..." the door swung open and in a flash Miho tossed her charged kunai toward the door and it flew though yet another Sand Shinobie. Moving over to the desk she started looking thought the scattered papers to find a summon of the Kazegage to Konaha on the same day she decided to stage her attack. "This... is bullshit." The steel dragon jutsu tore apart the Kazekage's tower as she leaps out of the window to make her escape from the sand village all the while thinking of what she would do to her informant for telling her he was sure the Kazekage would be in his office today.
OoA: COMPLETED! I hope you enjoy the sample.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 9:35 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
Harky: Much better Hark. Both your info section and rp sample show that you know how to handle the sharigan properly. APPROVED!
Havik: Sorry but we're gonna need to see a bit more in that info section. Also, your rp sample lacked techniques and most of the time you just mentioned controlling objects. We need to see more aspects of the Satetsu bloodline incorporated in your application before we can pass you. Best of luck next time.
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 1:40 am
LordTares RPC Name: Rios Bloodline/Clan Requested: Nara ClanWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I'm trying something I haven't done in a long time since I started roleplaying in my first Naruto guild. Usually I go for more direct conflicts characters whom on a split second open a can of whoopass. But I'm gonna try for actually planning ahead with my actions and see if that actually works out for me. What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: Nara clan use tactics and strategy to defeat their foes and defeat even opponents of more power and rank than they are. They use their intelligence and their ability to manipulate shadows to fight. Although they are mostly considered being geniuses, most people from this family are prone to being lazy and hard to motivate just like me, but once the situation calls for it, they are very determined and loyal and very capable of combat. Ironically, they tend to be attracted to stern, overbearing women. But hey, don't we all love those kind of women. They are also part of the three clan trio - the Ino-Shika-Cho along with the Yamanaka Clan and the Akimichi Clan. Please supply a Brief RP Sample: *sigh,* ok here it goes, again. "This is it! Brace yourselves!" Enemy mortar rounds and explosive tags rained down and poured across the battle field, explosions rippled and tore through dirt, sky, and men alike. Dirt from the blasts rained down on Rios in his trench as the mortars screamed over head. The taste of smoke and blood filled his nostrils in his quick short breaths as his heart raced loud in his ears. A well placed mortar landed in the trench next to Rios's and he dove down into the muddy floor as not to get hit by shrapnel. He felt it starting to rain but it quickly stopped. He guess god decided not to open the clouds in the sky, if it did rain then his comrades wouldn't have to worry about fire. "They are begining their attack!" Some one yelled. "Well NO SHlT" Rios called back from his fox hole, he slowly got up and finding that it indeed did rain, but it wasn't from the clouds. The wetness came from the buddies in the the trench next to him who got hit by that mortar, he imagined that there was nothing left of them, just an explosion of blood and guts that now filled part of his trench too. Rios heard multiple yells come up across the field as the Rock shinobi poured out of their trenches throwing projectiles and bombs alike. Boulders flew through the air and the entire earth shook as the Rock shinobi made their initial attack after picking each other off in the trenches for weeks on end. The ground rumbled and it was hard to stand for Rios when a body literally crawled and pulled itself out of the ground in Rios's trench. Another small eruption of dirt as a arm punch out of the ground trying to grab the leg of the unsuspecting defender. Instantly Rios threw a knee to the face of the man who grabbed his leg, by that time the man was half way out of the ground and the knee to his face certainly would jar him for a few seconds. His friend certainly took offense to Rios kneeing his buddy's face so the angered man threw a fast flying shuriken, drew a kunai, and charge at Rios. The projectile was too fast for Rios to dodge, but he shook off the pain when it imbedded itself in his forearm. From ten feet Rios was surprised that he could flash his hand seals fast enough as he too rushed the man charging him. It happened too quick for the Rock Shinobi to realize his shadow was warped. Rios ran to the left of the man, and by some mere magic the man followed suit, As Rios jumped into the air and slashed down ward looking like a mad man because he looked like he was attacking nothing. While in reality, Kage Mane technique worked. The charging rock shinobi mirrored the actions Rios just committed, as he jumped through the air and slashed downwards. Except the difference between the two was Rios line the Rock shinobi up to slash the face and neck of his friend that Rios previously kneed. The Rock shinobi shrieked in anger as he realized what happened. Still the man was unable to move as he was still trapped in the Kane Mane technique. The two shinobi instantly turned to face each other in the cramped and bloody trench as the battle fiercely raged around them. Both individuals punched the air with their right arm and opened their fists. It cause the Rock shinobi to disarm himself of the kunai he was holding. Then both people reached to their backs, Rios grabbing the hilt of his katana, the Rock shinobi reaching out for nothing. Again both people charged forward, running past each other and slowly stopping to a halt. Though one was missing a head, and Rios knew it wasn't him. Both Rock shinobi were defeated and yet another problem remained as the battle raged around his damp little fox hole. "Time to change the tides of War!" Roared out of the trench as Rios flashed another set a hand signs. "Kage Nui!" he shouted as he used the very holes the two Rock shinobi used, to lengthen his shadow techniques and to hide them from the view of his unsuspecting prey. Out of the holes in the bottom of the Rock ninja trenches, shadow like spikes erupted from the holes almost like predestined land mines, exploding underneath the feet of the Rock-nin and punching dark holes through multiple bodies. All this happening meters away from Rios's own trench. His actions effectively dropped 6 enemy personnel all together. He took down an enemy support trench that launched mortars and projectiles at his comrades and in doing so he turned the tide every so slightly in his teams favor. As he slumped down in the dirt of his foxhole at the end of the day, he knew it wasn't over. So long as there are two people left in this world, some one will always want somebody else dead. Justu used: Kage Mane Rank: Genin Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m) Type: Supplementary Kage Mane no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. It's original purpose was as a skill to help delay any pursuers. After forming the needed hand seals, the clan member is able to manipulate their shadow along any surface. By using other nearby shadows they can further extend the reach of their shadow, however they are limited to the surface area of the original cast shadow. Once the clan members shadow reaches the target shadow, it will attach itself. While attached the target will be frozen, only able to replicate in mirror form the actions of the clan member. If the clan member is low on chakra, the Kage Mane will falter and the shadow will return to its normal form. Ninpu: Kage Nui Rank: Special Jounin Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m) Type: Attack, Supplementary Ninpou: Kage Nui is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Nara clan. To perform the technique Shikamaru will first form the needed handseal to extend his shadow. Shikamaru will then change the handseal to cause the shadow to emerge from the ground in tendrils. The tendrils can extend and whip about and are strong enough to pierce nearby targets.
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Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:44 am
@ Lily:Blarg, I was hoping those jutsu would be enough crying , the others are a tad hard to try and use on a speed/agility nin, but I shall add on a escape to the existing app in purple, and redo the info section.
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Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:55 pm
RPC Name: Raynn Shouran Bloodline/Clan Requested: Ome no HookuWhy do you want this Bloodline/Clan: It would make for a great leader RPC and it would give me an advantage on stealth missions at night or when tailing a target... I also like the masks What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: I remember back in VR the only thing it did was let you zoom-in, now it gives you night-vision, nearly perfect memory, cartography skills to the max, increased weapon strength when using one of the Dojutsu, an ability to drastically change the physical world, just plain out make you smarter, I get to wear a cool mask, and I can be an emotionless badass without Deil hounding me xd Please supply a Brief RP Sample:Raynn splits the flaps of the tent and steps into the command room. Two men are arguing while others listen and occasionally comment on the argument. One of the men arguing, a old and plump yet muscular man notices Raynn and smiles, "Ahh Raynn, still wearing that mask?" The man releases a strong and hardy chuckle, "Come we were just... discussing the battle plans." Raynn makes his way to the table and looks at the map. He Summons his Cartography Tools and corrects an error on the map, "Discussing or Disputing?" Raynn says with his usual neutral tone. The man shrugs, "Whats the difference?" Raynn waves his hand over the map and detailed holograms pop-up showing the location of the enemy camp as well as their own, about half of the holograms in the enemy camp were just blobs while everyone in their own camp was clear and detailed, "A dispute is fillied with emotion and passion, a discussion is civilized and conducted only between two level headed men... or women." The old man sighs, "Still being so literal?" Raynn traces his finger across the map and stops on where a clearing near the enemy camp meets a large river, "This is where we will launch our attack." A man sitting across from where Raynn is standing speaks up, "But we don't have any boats, and it will take days to have them sent." Raynn begins drawing a bridge where he had previously pointed. A few of the shinobi looked around confused about what he was doing. One sensor ninja notices the immense amount of chakra Raynn was pouring into the map, "Can he really use the Secret Art: Dramatic Change?" The sensor exclaimed. Raynn leaned back satisfied with his work, "I have finished my alterations, at 0100 we will commence are assault on their camp. Raynn packs his Cartography tools and dispels them, "Any questions?" When nobody moves he turns and exits to his quarters to rest and prepare for the assault. Raynn leaves his quarters at 2450 and joins the other shinobi. He begins the briefing, "We are the small strike team that will head the assault. We are to take-out any guards and patrols and prepare a path for the main force." One woman approached Raynn while they were traveling to their destination, "Sir?" Raynn looks at the woman, "speak." She hesitates at the harshness of his response, "Is it true you created this bridge just by drawing on a map?" Raynn nods, "Yes, what of it?" The woman disgruntled by the cold disposition Raynn was showing simply shook her head, "Nothing, forget it" The group of 3 reach the bridge, a beautiful darkred mahogany in pristine condition. Raynn rubs his hand on the railing as he walks across it listening for any creaking of the floorboards. The group reached the first guard tower and Raynn used his Telescope and Night vision abilities to survey the tower. There were three guards all sitting around a table playing cards. Raynn signals his two archers to fire at a certain angle and a certain power. He draws three senbon and throws them and waits a second before telling his archers to fire. The senbon hit one guard a second before the arrows hit their targets. Raynn disappointed by his miscalculation leads the group up to the walls of the enemy base. He signals that the path is clear and awaits the main forces arrival. Once the army arrives Raynn climbs to the top of the watch tower and commands the battle from his perch ocasionally throwing a couple senbon.
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Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:47 am
RPC Name:Takasugi Ikari
Bloodline/Clan Requested: Uchiha Clan
Why do you want this Bloodline/Clan: I've always wanted to try an Uchiha, but they were also full in my other guild. Also, I plan to have the fact that he discovers that he is an Uchiha affect his character development depending on when and how it is activated.
What do you know about the Bloodline/Clan: It allows the user to read through ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu. It always the copying of techniques of your element, as well taijutsu and genjutsu techniques. The Uchiha main element has to be fire. Also, the Sharingan can only be activated in a life or death situation. When activated, it begins with one tomoe in one eye, and two in the other for a total of three. Another tomoe is added for each life and death situation for up to a total of six tomoe before one can obtain a Mangekyou, each of which have their own special abilities, at the cost of going blind after 5 uses. This can be negated via implanting another Mangekyou to obtain an Eternal, thus cancelling out the blindness at the cost of more chakra per use.
Please supply a Brief RP Sample:
This was it, after years of planning and hard work....his plan was finally coming into fruition. The revolution he had always hoped for was beginning now...and he was at the head of it. With the Anbu fully under his thumb, he had begun the revolution ordering the quick assassination of the Sannin before he and his most trusted members of the Anbu confronted the Kage. Walking up the stairs to the Kage's office...Takasugi remembered when he had found the resolve to go through with such an audacious plan. "I don't need to worry....I'm of the strongest clan in history..." Takasugi thought as a grin graced his face. The day he learned he was an Uchiha, everything changed...no longer was he a worthless shinobi who couldn't do anything worthwhile. With the blood flowing though his veins, he figured he would have the needed power to bring about the revolution his father had wished for so badly. Today, he would make his and his father's dream come true. As they walked into the Kage's office, he noticed a few jounin surrounding the Kage, no doubt the pocket of resistance that was still loyal to the Kage. The Kage turned, completely aware of Takasugi's betrayal, a solemn expression on his feature ," So...you've actually gone through with this...you naive little brat!" The jounins sprang forward to attack Takasugi, but with a snap of his fingers, his Anbu sprang out of hiding and sent them all falling though the Kage's windows, leaving Takasugi and the Kage to themselves
"You'll achieve nothing though this hopeless rebellion, you'll be squashed!" The Kage stood up from his chair, his hand resting on the hilt his katana. Takasugi chuckled slightly as he too set his hand on his hilt," A strong will reinforces a set fate....but if a will is strong enough...then it can pierce fate and create it's own destiny..that is what I am doing today...::" The two stared each other down...before finally a flash! Both drew their katana's with a grace and flow unable to be seen. Though Takasugi was only a Jounin in rank, he was able to read his former Kage's movement's thanks to the ability of his Sharingan, which he had activated mere moments ago. Both swords clashed as the metallic sound of steel on steel rang out in the office. Reading his opponent's next move with his Sharingan, Takasugi knew his former master planned to press home the attack. Not wanting to give up an advantage, Takasugi quickly jumped back and formed a set of handsigns,". Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu!" Takasugi expelled a large fireball from his mouth straight at the Kage. Being so close, the Kage reacted by jumping out his back window, just what Takasugi had wanted.
Takasugi quickly formed another set of handsigns," Bunshin Bakuha" A clone formed next to Takasugi, with a smile he sent the clone after the Kage out the window, after a few moments he followed behind it. As soon as the Kage touched down on the ground below him, Takasugi's clone landed. Not thinking anything of it, the Kage rushed the clone. With a sadistic grin, Takasugi snapped his fingers and the clone exploded in the Kages face, leaving him unable to defend himself. As Takasugi, landed the Kage managed to stand up, scorched from the explosion and mangled, the explosion had blown his right arm off and he was bleeding profusely. "Don't think I'm done yet..." he managed to stammer as he walked forward. Takasugi laughed as he walked towards the Kage,"You fool...you haven't even seen my eyes yet..." The Kage, not thinking anything of the remark, looked up to Takasugi face, something was different..instead of the normal tomoe there was a pattern...The Kage quickly realized his folly, "No way! A Mangekyou! How!!" He tried to look away, but it was too late, he was already caught in Takasugi's Genjutsu. He was tied to a cross as thousands of Takasugi's appeared before him, all with katana's in hand. "Enjoy the 72 hours of pain..." The lead muttered as he stabbed the Kage in the chest, leading to an intense amount of pain. This painful ritual continued to for 72 hours as each Takasugi stabbed the Kage in the chest, the poor man unable to receive the blessing of death. In real time however, only a few moments had passed in which the Kage stood rooted to the ground, mind nearly destroyed, more then enough time for the real Takasugi to actually stab the Kage in the chest, he planted his katana squarely between his rib cage as he stabbed his heart, he made sure to wait afew moment before doing so to know that the Kage had enjoyed all 72 hours of pain. As the corpse now fell to the ground, Takasugi deactivated his Sharingan, his vision much more blurry then it used to be...a small price to pay for the liberation of his village...and his country...
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:23 pm
[Lilly] [Vice Captain]
"Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
@Havik: Not sure if you've updated your app yet so if you did just let either me or Lilly know through quote or pm. Thanks.
@LT: Looks good. Approved.
@kuro: Alright, I'm just gonna go an assume that instead of the Kaguya bloodline you're gonna go for this one instead. From the looks of it, everything seems to be in order so Approved.
@Sayonara: Looks good, Approved. Keep in mind though the chakra drain system implemented in TUP. Ours work a bit differently then POTS so yeah, just keep it in mind.
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain]
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:38 pm
iJwlz-kun [Lilly] [Vice Captain] "Lilly and Jade, gearing up for the application war..."
@Havik: Not sure if you've updated your app yet so if you did just let either me or Lilly know through quote or pm. Thanks.
@LT: Looks good. Approved.
@kuro: Alright, I'm just gonna go an assume that instead of the Kaguya bloodline you're gonna go for this one instead. From the looks of it, everything seems to be in order so Approved.
@Sayonara: Looks good, Approved. Keep in mind though the chakra drain system implemented in TUP. Ours work a bit differently then POTS so yeah, just keep it in mind.
"...It's a never ending battle out there."
[Jade] [Vice Captain] YAY! One shot! 
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Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 11:25 pm
FIRST TIME APPROVAL!! YES!!! 
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