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PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 2:12 pm


Username: Fenrir Graveheart

RPC name: Fenrir Gravheart

Skill name: Chilling Howl

Rank: B

If it uses ammo how much: N/A

Limits: Must be lycan

Skill description: User unleashes a loud and ferocious howl in which they send their energy through the soundwaves. Once these soundwaves hit an opponent the icy energy of their water element slows down their muscles and energy flow, effectively cutting their speed rating in half for five posts.

Sample: A blurred figure rushed past Fenrir, punching him in the face as it passed. Fenrir shook off the pain and glanced up to follow the blur, but as soon as he looked the blur rushed past and hit him again. "Grrrr, ENOUGH!" Fenrir barked and suddenly let loose a terrifying and spine-chilling howl that seemed to stop the blur in its tracks, revealing itself to be a trickster. Fenrir's eyes sharpened as he identified his prey and rushed towards it. The trickster immediately tried to dash away but felt his movements become slow and sluggish. He was still moving but had somehow lost his speed for some reason. Before he could gather what had happened to him Fenrir appeared before the trickster and slashed his throat with quick slash of his knife.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:18 pm


Fenrir Graveheart




@hiro: Denied. This skill is really only useful at A and S rank, and while I know that you only made this skill because you plan on using your succubus to fly up as high as it can and blast everything in its way I surprisingly don't really care about it. What I do want to know though is how far does this skill reach and how wide is it? And does this skill reach underground?





Lets say the the light may only reach 20 feet and it cannot go under ground.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:24 pm


@hiro: sounds good. edit that in and I'll Accept it.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 5:12 pm


Username: Shruikan Tenshi

RPC name: Shruikan Kuroryu

Skill name: Burning Rage

Rank: B

If it uses ammo how much:

Limits: Fire Element

Skill description: Unleashing all of their rage, and giving life to the emotion by the element of fire giving life to this name. For five posts the user is coated in fire, the heat surging through their muscles increasing the overall strength and speed by twice the original amount. Any physical contact with the user while in this state will result in the target being engulfed in fire, burning them until they can put out the flames. Once the five posts expire, the user's blood cools off, becoming 'cold blooded'. During this state, for three posts, the user's strength and speed drops in half the original stats, making them sluggish and weak. (meaning after five posts, the stats go back to normal then cut in half for three)

Sample:
Shruikan leaped back, going to the air as the gaint's fist smashed into the ground where he once stood. So much anger pulsed through Shruikan, he felt like he was getting nowhere with this thing. It was about same strength level as he was, but the gaint was faster. It was irritating a stupid creature was getting to him like this. "This....will not...be...TOLERATED!" He roared, veins poping in his forehead as his body started getting really hot. His body exploded with flames, his muscles buldging and becoming pumped like he had an adrenaline rush. He dived in at point blank range, much faster then he was before. The gaint threw a fist, not really thinking about how he was on fire and thought it was hurting him. However, the two fists collided and the gaint yelled in pain as his arm shattered, Shruikan's strength overwhelming him. However, the worst has yet to come, as suddenly his arm burst into flames, which slowly consumed the gaint as he screamed and ran in circles with his arms in the air yelling fire repeatedly like a caveman who just discovered the element. Shruikan dive bombed him from above, driving his knees into the Gaint's shoulders, smashing the gaint into the ground as well as shattering most bones in his body, as well as being engulfed in flames.



((IDK!!!! gonk I think its been because of the naruto guilds made me constantly redo customs for not being enough details, so.....yeah.....plus I got use to making low ranking skills that can grow stronger over time. I'm trying to break it!!!!!!!!

As for the amount of customs, imagination never stops. And you took a relative skill of mine and made it to your own!!!!!!! But anyways, is this any better? And also, as far as dragon claws. What exactly is wrong with it???))

Edit: Also, this was something of an description that I was gonna make a talent out of, but chose the scales instead of rage lol

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 5:35 pm


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Username: Hiro_Uzaki

RPC name: Jasper Cintere

Skill name: Holy Light: Ascend!

Rank: Depends on Rank of user.
E=Basic Light
D=Blinding light, minor burning on Creatures of the night
C=Humans will begin to feel excessive heat on their skin and will begin to sweat.
B=Almost like being in a room that is 135 degrees Fahrenheit.
A=Burns right through flesh on contact.
S=Incinerates any thing in its way.

If it uses ammo how much:

Limits: Paladin

Skill description: [two post to do. Chant on the first and then the skill can be used.] A tricky technique to use while alone. For an assured use, the user will have to be accompanied. The accomplice will hold off the enemy while the user stands completely still, Chanting. If the user is touched, he must start over. The technique takes 1/2 of the users OVERALL energy no matter what rank. [Meaning if the user has 1800 energy but used 950 of it, the technique may not be used.] But the tricky part is that the users friend may get caught within the light. The user will Rise into the air and will use their energy to make light shoot out of their armor. It shoots at a 90 degree angle with the user as the starting dot. Anything behind him will not be affected. Range: 20 Feet. Cannot hit things under ground.

Sample: Jasper and Conner ran, but it was no use. They were being chased by several Lycans and Vampires. Finally they caught up to a dead end, and jasper looked at Conner and nodded. He began to Chant in an ancient language. Conner rushed forward and took out his two revolvers, he shot a vampire in the arm but it just healed and kept walking. As Jasper chanted, Conner continued to shoot at the them but he knew that it was futile. At that moment, Jasper rose to the air. "Holy Light: Ascend!" His arms were spread as a small light began to grow. All of the sudden, a huge light burst from Jasper and the Vampires who were caught in it were caught on fire. Jasper fell to the ground, panting.
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:01 pm


Username: Fenrir Graveheart

RPC name: Fenrir Graveheart

Skill name: Bushy Strike

Rank: D

If it uses ammo how much: N/A

Limits: Lycan

Skill description: A transformed lycan uses their tail to make an unpredictable strike at an opponent's face which will stun and blind them before the user pulls a 180 degree turn to instantly strike them. This attack only works if the user is being attacked from behind, and opponent must be in close range for the tail to reach.

Sample: An opponent charged Fenrir from behind, hoping to stab him with the dagger he held. Just as he was about to stab him though, a black bushy tail popped up in his face. Before the man could even try to push the wolf tail aside, it left his face as Fenrir turned and punched his claw straight through the man's chest.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:26 pm


Fenrir Graveheart

@keishi: Your custom.....is very confusing. Who is this supposed to heal, exactly? I get that it can heal or hurt people, but can it only heal unholy beings and only hurt holy beings? Or is it a choice to the user? What are the ranks of healing that you mentioned the user needed to be to use the different degrees of this skill? And what rank is this skill anyways? Is it supposed to vary or were you just lazy and didn't know?


As for healing, It heals unholy things only, and will cause pain for holy people, and the extra siren and watku races. It hurts the user to heal another, for the user gains the damage, and can transfer it to another person.(to heal themselves, all the damage goes to their palm, and they can transfer from there) As for rank, I left it out, unsure what it should be ranked as, leaving the approval person for the best judgment for the rank it should be.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:37 pm


Fenrir Graveheart
Username: Fenrir Graveheart

RPC name: Fenrir Gravheart

Skill name: Chilling Howl

Rank: B

If it uses ammo how much: N/A

Limits: Must be lycan and have water element.

Skill description: User unleashes a loud and ferocious howl in which they send their energy through the soundwaves. Once these soundwaves hit an opponent the icy energy of their water element slows down their muscles and energy flow, effectively cutting their speed rating in half for five posts.

Sample: A blurred figure rushed past Fenrir, punching him in the face as it passed. Fenrir shook off the pain and glanced up to follow the blur, but as soon as he looked the blur rushed past and hit him again. "Grrrr, ENOUGH!" Fenrir barked and suddenly let loose a terrifying and spine-chilling howl that seemed to stop the blur in its tracks, revealing itself to be a trickster. Fenrir's eyes sharpened as he identified his prey and rushed towards it. The trickster immediately tried to dash away but felt his movements become slow and sluggish. He was still moving but had somehow lost his speed for some reason. Before he could gather what had happened to him Fenrir appeared before the trickster and slashed his throat with quick slash of his knife.


Denied Fenbeard. You don't need this -_-
Plus, that would make Tricksters garbage versus you.
That, and I detest it when people try to hook a SINGLE element to a skill. And what does water have to do with the price of tea in china?

Hiro: Denied son. Burns flesh on contact? Bejeezus dude. Light attacks don't do jack diddily squat to Humans. It's one of the bonuses.

Side note: Bejeezus is a word according to Safari. Wtf? lol. I'm gonna make a character named Bejeezus now...

Shru: Denied Boy. OP much? Holy s**t I think so. 5 posts of beast mode, and only 3 of b***h mode? Wtf?! And there's not even a repurcussion after that. Just the 3 posts. Giants, Draconians, all have major drawbacks from going beast mode. Are you an exception? No.

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Fist of the Bro Star

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:48 pm


Then what kind of skill can I have that would let me slow people down that would be fair?

Also what about my other skill?
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:56 pm


Well for starters, one that doesn't involve a single bloody element. I hate that.

And for 2, some form of gaze based off of fenrir's determination to kill everything maybe?

Bushy strike? Be real about this. It's not much of a strike. More like a brush across the face. I doubt it would blind someone. Maybe make them sneeze a little. Mess with allergies. And how would your hind quarters get to the persons face? Last time I checked, a standing dogs tail barely could reach my crotch. And I'm 5'10.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 5:00 pm


Well I can only use one bloody element urban. Only archanists can use more than one. So wtf?

Gaze based off of Fenrir's determination to kill? Like eye contact?

Werewolves are bigger than standing dogs urban. And the stunning part comes from the energy used to make the strike.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 5:03 pm


Fenrir Graveheart
Well I can only use one bloody element urban. Only archanists can use more than one. So wtf?

Gaze based off of Fenrir's determination to kill? Like eye contact?

Werewolves are bigger than standing dogs urban. And the stunning part comes from the energy used to make the strike.


Incorrect. Paranormal can use 2 elements xD


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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:16 pm


Fenrir Graveheart
Well I can only use one bloody element urban. Only archanists can use more than one. So wtf?

Gaze based off of Fenrir's determination to kill? Like eye contact?

Werewolves are bigger than standing dogs urban. And the stunning part comes from the energy used to make the strike.


I just dislike it when you guys make skills that are combo'd for A race and element.

But yea. I mean, even looking at a person should cause them to shudder. Kinda like when your being watched, and you know it.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:31 pm


So what if I just say any lycan can use the roar? I'd usually be alright with the glare thing but the howl seems like something that instills more fear than a glare and it goes with the lycan thing. Plus, in the Iliad Achilles killed 12 men with just his roar....for real. And if you need further proof ask yourself this question. Do you get scared when the lion in the room glares at you, or do you get scared when it roars at you?

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 03, 2010 6:48 pm


NEITHER! I roar back! I show him anything he can do, I can do better. Then we'd fight and see who was really King.

But I'm also insane. So yea... >_>
Fer' sure. I'm serious.

Ask Kage, a Lion might frighten her more then me.
But yea, why are you trying to nerf speed anyway?
Just fer' tricksters?

But kill the required water element.
But I don't wanna see every damned Lycan using this on every single person just to make a fight easy. Otherwise, Nerfest 2010 will start.
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