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k.k.razy
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:04 am


Yey winners are up!
PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:23 am


      Here's my Blurb (:
      Quote:
      Maybe you haven't seen me here before, that's because I'm a new member (: I am also quite new to the arenas as I have only been in Gaia for at least 10 months. I have also won a few contests here and there, but I have not yet placed in the arenas. I am judging the original avatars based on three factors: color, balance, and originality. I also like an avatar that has purpose, maybe a short poem or story that supports the entry. I will try my best to judge and thanks for giving me a chance to do this.
      ^__^

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:30 am


      So, how do we post our critiques?
PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:38 am


1.) Gaiaman 2010: 5/7
FINALLY a matching 1st place avi. I could have done without the shot gun and the story but it matches... to an extent. The face could have been done better and is two demonic anklets really necessary? I'm really glad one of the new capes wasn't used though. XD

2.) The Imaginary Friend: 3/7
Cute story, what ever. I'm a fan of Social Bondage, I really enjoy his avatars but this one doesn't belong in the top 10.

3.) The Cat Burglar 0/7
Hmm, I smell foul play. Looks like someone used guild announcements to their advantage.
Some of the comments:
"good one man 5/5 still posting this link in th guild is kinda unfair anyways not really much unfair cuz u said vote what you want to so its not really bad hahahaha"

"heyyyyy.
Aren't you supposed to use the thread for arena links instead of this?

if this wins, BOO will look like s**t. D:"

"Boo sent me."

"This entry will have many guild votes on it so the actual rating of the avi will be thrown off quite a bit."

4.) The succubus with a secret: 2/7
The flow of this is absolutely terrible. The description talks about her curves and hips but her torso looks like a fat kid stuffed into a lumpy box. It hardly matches and it's not seductive at all.

5.) Get it out! Get it out!!: 2/7
Hm, I wonder if she took this idea out of the "They were made for each other" thread. Because I remember seeing it there. WTF with the elf ears. Would this be considered a glitch?

6.) Urban/Elven Archer: 4/7
Probably won because of AT popularity, It's not that great. I say a 4 instead of a 3 because the theme is very well done... and I like the color scheme >> Could have done without blue eyes.

Gunna finish later! Goodnight.

k.k.razy
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k.k.razy
Crew

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:39 am


Bottle will probably put up each winner with our 7 rates and such below each one, she'll probably put the little fruit picture up next to it too.
I'm not for sure though
PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:10 am



      1.) Gaiaman 2010 » 5/7
      Great Avi, nice color combo and good color coordination. I did't like how he used two demonic anklets. Some shades of blue are off and it lacks white at the bottom. The story didn't matched the avi AT ALL. But other than that it looks great! I give it props too because we all know how hard it is to layer a male avi and turned out really well.

      2.) The Imaginary Friend » 2/7
      Nice concept but the Avi could be made better. He could have used the normal Male base. It didn't show any creativity at all.

      3.) The Cat Burglar » 3/7
      Disregarding the "foul play", the avi looks great. It's very original and I like the comedic quality to it. I hoped that he hadn't cheated, if he hadn't then this would be a greater and cleaner victory for him.

      4.) The succubus with a secret » 1/7
      I like the poem but COME ON this is an Avatar Contest. The color combo is terrible and not one item matched another.
      And the description is the complete OPPOSITE of the avi.

      5.) Get it out! Get it out!! » 3/7
      First time I've seen this one. There's nothing great about the entry and there's nothing bad about it either, its just a guy with a spork stuck to his exclaim

      6.) Urban/Elven Archer » 3/7
      Again there's nothing special about this avi. The balance of brown isn't even distributed properly.

      7.) oil puddle » 6/7
      Best one out of the bunch. Unique color scheme, awesome layering, and perfectly matches the ref pic. My only problem is that the hair is sorta out of place & it lacks color on the head.

      8.) Bokeh » 4/7
      The concept is great and unique. Nothing matches but its strangely coherent..... from afar.

      9.) The dark decendant » 1/7
      No style, no color scheme, no creativity. The skin is horrible and looking at it just makes me itch.

      10.) A Sunday Stroll » 2/7
      The color of the hat didn't match the rest of the blues. The theme is a little overused and I've seen better Victorian Entries.



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PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:26 pm


Everyone's are up that have posted them. razz
PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:12 pm


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1st. Gaiaman 2010: 2/7
Eh. Cluttertasic bullshit. I have never considered NHB and GLs worn at the same time to be a good style. I kind of like the color combo going on with the body, but the ******** on the head really bothers me. Also, every single blue he is wearing is a different shade....Ew. *gags*

2nd. The Imaginary Friend: 1/7
Can anyone say hallucinating cancer victim? The avi is so bland. Nice idea (I suppose), executed poorly.

3rd. The Cat Burglar 1/7
I hate humor attempted avatars D< It just doesn't work! That looks so stupid and isn't fashionable in the least.

4th. The succubus with a secret.
1/7
I actually like the face on this avi. But the body is a train wreck. I mean, anorexic whore legs, then a fat torso? Fer srs? Eating disorder much? The color flow is s**t. I mean, nothing matches...I am SO pissed....What a waste of a Pale Marionette. Another prime example of rich people not using their wealth properly.

5th. Get it out! Get it out!! 1/7
Like I said, I hate attempted funny. What do you know? That depicts this entry exactly. Nuff said.

6th. Felix Jude Virgo 1/7
I hate the hat, pants, and gloves. They throw this avi to hell. And besides the ears, it really isn't that "Elfy"

7th. oil puddle 5/7
Best by far of this fail group. I don't like the color of the hair, it is offsetting. I also don't like the shoe bows. They stand out a lot!

8th. Bokeh 2/7
Ew. I like the idea, but the avi doesn't match the idea....
It looks like a jumble of random crap.

9th. The dark decendant 1/7
Gawd this makes me want to kick a baby and piss knives. I don't even feel like explaining how shitty this is.

10th. A Sunday Stroll
1/7
Ehhhhhh. Gawd. To start off, the face just SCREAMS "Come ******** me". Next of all, a stroll with an oriental umbrella? Chyeah No. None of her browns OR blues match. This is grodie D:

Damn. I feel like a b***h. My '1' key got a lot of attention though c;

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:13 pm


Ratings...
1st:
4/7 It's all right, and the colors are fairly creative, but it's matching is not as good as it could be. There are touches of random colors, the blues are off, and there is an excess of demonic anklets used. That's just not very creative.

2nd:
4/7 I like the scene that is created here, but I feel that more could have been done. The story is nice, but... eh.

3rd:
2/5 The avi isn't actually all that bad, the cat part is pulled off, but it's not winner material - and getting your guild to vote for you is just not cool.

4th:
2/5 It's been said before, I'll say it again - nothing matches! It's been done before, and it didn't look good then. The only good thing is that the disguise is pretty good.

5th:
2/5 It's good for the forums, but not the arenas, and especially not the winner's circle. The hair looks okay, but still.

6th:
4/5 I'll give it a 4 because while it is a bit idiotic, I like the look of the torso and it's creative. Not loving those eyes...

7th:
6/7 I love the skins on this one, and it really captures the style of the idea behind it. My only complaint is that hair, it really seems to disrupt the flow of the avi.

8th:
4/7 At first glance, I really liked this one, but it seems a bit broken up and choppy - there's a gap on the leg and the head is a mess. I do like the eye and the book, they seem a nice touch.

9th:
1/5 This is an uncreative, lame, and misspelled pile of black crap. Sorry, but it really looks... bad. Plus it's very uncreative.

10th:
5/7 I love the face on this one, and it's a great use of the umbrella. The browns don't really match at all, and the torso is a bit of a mess, but I love the creativity of the dress and the head.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 4:54 pm


Thanks for the reviews you guys, I'll update them later tonight.

Bottle


Life Hath Immortality

PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 5:23 pm


Ah... sorry, I've been busy. I'm sooo tired, I'll probably have to do the rates tomorrow. Blurb:

Tere! I'm Life Hath Immortality, but I go by Purple on Gaia. I've only been a member for about a year, but I've always been interested in tekteking and the arenas. I've entered only three times, and I haven't placed yet. I'm really picky. I hate avatars that are just supposed to be funny. The most important things to me in an avatar are that the colors are balanced and it's original. In cosplays, I hate when someone leaves out an item that is really easy to find. And I hate overdone characters. c;
PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:14 pm


1. 4/7 LADY, PICK ONE NOT BOTH. It's either Dark Magician Girl or Black Magician Girl D8< Going on, I think this is like the third one that has won. Match the reference or get another one. The ref has sparkles, and there are no sparkles. There's a definite lack of pink and capes.

2. 3/7 FFFFFFFUUU- A Naruto cosplay scream You're very original. I want to stab her for using fanart as a reference THAT LOOKS NOTHING LIKE COSPLAY. That facial expression doesn't look to Deidara-ish. It's a spoon-fed cosplay.

3. 4/7 I guess it looks like the pic. It's quite simple. From what I can see, the guy has no stubble? I wouldn't have known where this is from without other people's comments.

4. 2/7 Can this even be considered a cosplay? Overdone theme, not very original.

5. 5/7 The right leg is killing me, but I guess there's no way to put on only one shoe. That expression makes him look bored rather than killer.

6. 4/7 Wrong face? Ever since that pokeball item came out, anything trainer related can place now...That description is a run-on sentence

7. 4/7 No. NOOOOO. Gawd, BRS is overdone by vocaloid-tards, so much. Looking at it as a whole, it's pretty accurate, but some things are off. The uncovered eye just looks weird, and she's wearing a white belt. I don't like those boots.

8. 4/7 This lady is a bit tanner. She could've added a brooch. I'm a bit iffy on the dress because it's so dark, but I can't think of anything right now that would look better.

9. 3/7 Of all cosplays, I hate Sailor Moon ones. Accurate, yes. Original, no. Another spoon-fed cosplay. I swear, there's one Sailor Moon winner for every holiday.

10. 5/7 The crotch leaf needs to go. And I quite like the fetet and legs. Not much else to say.

This week was a little boring

Skyscraper Opera


k.k.razy
Crew

Fashionable Elder

PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 9:29 pm


Bottle, you never noticed that I edited your blurb again XDD


7.) oil puddle 6/7
I love these kinds of avatars. Despite the fact that one won a few weeks ago that was just like this, I still like it a lot. The texture makes me want to poke it...

8.) Bokeh 4/7
Cute concept. It's not well balanced though and the items on the head don't blend in well.

9.) The dark decendant 1/7
Really? *facepalm*
Why would a servant of Lucifer be doing good things? Why is he so harry. WHY THE ******** was voting high on this one? I wanna shot them.

10.) A Sunday Stroll 5/7
I love Wizzleteats's avatars and I really like the style she has in her avatars. It doesn't completely match, but I think the theme was done beautifully, she used many layers but it doesn't look cluttered and out of place. I would have liked a different hat.

*Is surprised the cosplay arena isn't full of superheros*
and lol @hallucinating cancer victim
PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:06 pm


I updated 1-5
I'll probably do more later
xD

k.k.razy
Crew

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k.k.razy
Crew

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:35 pm


favs
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102069057
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102068897
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gaia/original-avatar/vote/?entry_id=102070309
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