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 Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:29 pm
onix9392 Suicidesoldier#1 Olaroe "holy s**t" Sidney tought. "SIR THIS SOLDIER'S NAME IS SIDNEY J. HYTON. THIS SOLDIER'S HIEGHT IS 5 FOOT EIGHT INCHES, AND THIS SOLDIER'S WEIGHT IS 168 POUNDS SIR!",sidney yelled at the top of his loungs, hoping what his brother said about being loud to try and scare of a DI would work. ((lol, you passed xd See what a little bit of reading and a few changes can do! blaugh )) "Really, I didn't know that they stacked s**t that high. The smell seems to be in order. I guess your a pretty heavy pile of s**t too huh? That's alright recruit, you can get in line with all the other piles of s**t and remain were you were before." The DI smirked at the soldier, and determined that he would be good enough to begin training as a soldier. ((I'm sorry, this made me laugh so hard I fell out of my seat! XD )) ((lol I know right xd )) ((To Rosemary13- blaugh ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:39 pm
Suicidesoldier#1 onix9392 Suicidesoldier#1 Olaroe "holy s**t" Sidney tought. "SIR THIS SOLDIER'S NAME IS SIDNEY J. HYTON. THIS SOLDIER'S HIEGHT IS 5 FOOT EIGHT INCHES, AND THIS SOLDIER'S WEIGHT IS 168 POUNDS SIR!",sidney yelled at the top of his loungs, hoping what his brother said about being loud to try and scare of a DI would work. ((lol, you passed xd See what a little bit of reading and a few changes can do! blaugh )) "Really, I didn't know that they stacked s**t that high. The smell seems to be in order. I guess your a pretty heavy pile of s**t too huh? That's alright recruit, you can get in line with all the other piles of s**t and remain were you were before." The DI smirked at the soldier, and determined that he would be good enough to begin training as a soldier. ((I'm sorry, this made me laugh so hard I fell out of my seat! XD )) ((lol I know right xd )) ((To Rosemary13- blaugh )) i was hoping u use that full metal jacket quote
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:40 pm
Olaroe Suicidesoldier#1 onix9392 Suicidesoldier#1 Olaroe "holy s**t" Sidney tought. "SIR THIS SOLDIER'S NAME IS SIDNEY J. HYTON. THIS SOLDIER'S HIEGHT IS 5 FOOT EIGHT INCHES, AND THIS SOLDIER'S WEIGHT IS 168 POUNDS SIR!",sidney yelled at the top of his loungs, hoping what his brother said about being loud to try and scare of a DI would work. ((lol, you passed xd See what a little bit of reading and a few changes can do! blaugh )) "Really, I didn't know that they stacked s**t that high. The smell seems to be in order. I guess your a pretty heavy pile of s**t too huh? That's alright recruit, you can get in line with all the other piles of s**t and remain were you were before." The DI smirked at the soldier, and determined that he would be good enough to begin training as a soldier. ((I'm sorry, this made me laugh so hard I fell out of my seat! XD )) ((lol I know right xd )) ((To Rosemary13- blaugh )) i was hoping u use that full metal jacket quote lol I know right?
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:05 pm
Charlie Guzman
Military Photographer
bus
arrivalCharlie Abby Guzman sighed as her dear mother hugged her tightly. "Oh sweetie please do write" She whispered in Charlie's ear. Charlie placed her bags down and hugged her mother. "I will mama" She said as a small tear rolled down her cheek. Soon enough her father came back in his own personal uniform and smiled proudly. Charlie started to cry all over again. Happy she is leaving and her papa being so proud of her. "Come here my Charlie" Papa said sweetly as he hugged her tightly. Charlie hugged her papa tightly. "I'm so proud of you Charlie" He said and kissed her cheek. Soon enough the bus came as the doors opened letting other daring soldiers inside the bus. Men came out grabbing bags and placing them inside the storage area. Charlie watched a bit before her mother hugged her again. "Mama I have to go now" Charlie said in tears. Her mother nodded and let her go as she wiped her tears away. Charlie watched as one of the men grabbed her bags as Charlie walked inside the bus. Charlie looked around as everyone was settling down. It felt strange yet weird in the bus. Charlie sat down in the back as she touched her locket. Inside was a picture of her mother and father. The bus took off slow at first as she watched her parents wave. Charlie kept her eyes on her parents until they dissappeared. She wiped her tears away and sniffled a bit before pulling her hood over her head and leaning on the window. Charlie felt her father's camera around her neck as she driffted off to sleep.
Charlie awoken as the bus stopped in the camp. She wipped her eyes and yawned as everyone got up and stretched as well. Charlie got up and grabbed her carry on bag filled with her personal belongings. She sighed feeling like she is starting fresh. Charlie walked off the bus as it became instently hot. She took off her sweater revealing her green tank top. Charlie was required to wear her military uniform. She tied her sweater around her waist as Charlie grabbed her bags from the storage area. Charlie then decided to sit on her bags while everyone was getting together. She looked around for awhile. Charlie saw.. well a boot camp. Military students training and sargents yelling, giving commands. Charlie yawned and decided, by the looks of it, that this was going to be brutal.
She then saw a tall professional looking man walk to the bus. "Line up soldiers!" He commanded as everyone stopped what they were doing and lined up. Charlie lined up. She stood straight and did not move. The man walked along the line inspecting the men until he came up to Charlie surprised. He looked at her chest making sure he was looking at a girl. The man grabbed her dog tag. It stated:
Charlie Abby Guzman
o pos
Military Photographer
1005552
The man smirked and looked at the beautiful girl one more time before walking off. Charlie took one peek at the line stretching her head out. Everyone was men. She was the only girl. "Great" Charlie thought as she went back to her original position. "I'm the only girl in my unit.. hope your happy papa because I'm going to be the best of the best" Charlie thought. She smirked at the thought. Today was going to be a good day.((I can write more. If you want. I'll edit whatever you need me to. This is just a quickie post >.< ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:08 pm
goofy-and-polar-bears Charlie Guzman
Military Photographer
bus
arrivalCharlie Abby Guzman sighed as her dear mother hugged her tightly. "Oh sweetie please do write" She whispered in Charlie's ear. Charlie placed her bags down and hugged her mother. "I will mama" She said as a small tear rolled down her cheek. Soon enough her father came back in his own personal uniform and smiled proudly. Charlie started to cry all over again. Happy she is leaving and her papa being so proud of her. "Come here my Charlie" Papa said sweetly as he hugged her tightly. Charlie hugged her papa tightly. "I'm so proud of you Charlie" He said and kissed her cheek. Soon enough the bus came as the doors opened letting other daring soldiers inside the bus. Men came out grabbing bags and placing them inside the storage area. Charlie watched a bit before her mother hugged her again. "Mama I have to go now" Charlie said in tears. Her mother nodded and let her go as she wiped her tears away. Charlie watched as one of the men grabbed her bags as Charlie walked inside the bus. Charlie looked around as everyone was settling down. It felt strange yet weird in the bus. Charlie sat down in the back as she touched her locket. Inside was a picture of her mother and father. The bus took off slow at first as she watched her parents wave. Charlie kept her eyes on her parents until they dissappeared. She wiped her tears away and sniffled a bit before pulling her hood over her head and leaning on the window. Charlie felt her father's camera around her neck as she driffted off to sleep.
Charlie awoken as the bus stopped in the camp. She wipped her eyes and yawned as everyone got up and stretched as well. Charlie got up and grabbed her carry on bag filled with her personal belongings. She sighed feeling like she is starting fresh. Charlie walked off the bus as it became instently hot. She took off her sweater revealing her green tank top. Charlie was required to wear her military uniform. She tied her sweater around her waist as Charlie grabbed her bags from the storage area. Charlie then decided to sit on her bags while everyone was getting together. She looked around for awhile. Charlie saw.. well a boot camp. Military students training and sargents yelling, giving commands. Charlie yawned and decided, by the looks of it, that this was going to be brutal.
She then saw a tall professional looking man walk to the bus. "Line up soldiers!" He commanded as everyone stopped what they were doing and lined up. Charlie lined up. She stood straight and did not move. The man walked along the line inspecting the men until he came up to Charlie surprised. He looked at her chest making sure he was looking at a girl. The man grabbed her dog tag. It stated:
Charlie Abby Guzman
o pos
Military Photographer
1005552
The man smirked and looked at the beautiful girl one more time before walking off. Charlie took one peek at the line stretching her head out. Everyone was men. She was the only girl. "Great" Charlie thought as she went back to her original position. "I'm the only girl in my unit.. hope your happy papa because I'm going to be the best of the best" Charlie thought. She smirked at the thought. Today was going to be a good day.((I can write more. If you want. I'll edit whatever you need me to. This is just a quickie post >.< )) ((I um... well... wow. I think I love you now. redface heart Damn. What position do you want to be xd Oh by the way you passed. And were accepted. (Into the hall of fame!) ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:11 pm
Thank you sir!! I can write more if it's too short! I mean I don't want to mess up. Anyways I want to be a Military Photographer. Hmmm if that's alright with you?
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:21 pm
((Um sure, you can be a military photographer! What branch in particular would you like to photograph, if any. whee ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:27 pm
{{awwww! hes in love!.... >> << I didn't post this}}
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:30 pm
uhhhh branch? hmmmm uhhhh I don't know. Put me in any. But It can't be too important or too un-inportant. Is there a list of branches? If not I'll ask my daddy for branches (he's in the navy)
P.S: I just re read the feedback of my post and I love you too ^.^
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:40 pm
goofy-and-polar-bears uhhhh branch? hmmmm uhhhh I don't know. Put me in any. But It can't be too important or too un-inportant. Is there a list of branches? If not I'll ask my daddy for branches (he's in the navy)
P.S: I just re read the feedback of my post and I love you too ^.^ (( blaugh I'll put you in army, becuase it's the most basic! You can sign up and whatnot, and your primary weapon can be a camera! 4laugh ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 3:53 pm
Sign me up for the army in the military section. Becaise obviously there are branches for the military. hmmmm for the weaopn Photographers usually carry guns. and when things get real intense they have to leave. or escape.
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 5:13 pm
( on the military photographer, thats could be an alternate job for folks in the branches, along with the medical field duties.
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 8:24 pm
Kevin Pointdexter
Branch- Marine
Bus
Arrival
~Unranked Private Pointdexter sat in the very far back, looking at the outside. He held his dog tag tightly, knowing that he would be put through training, and expected it to be a challenge of Blood, Sweat, and Tears. His light brown eyes glowed a bit, standing out from the midnight sky and hard thunderstorm. It was pretty silent though and a little cold. If he had to get over himself, it was definitely the time to do it. He wanted to make a good first impression, but then again be himself. He couldn't complaint about anything, this being an actual requirement and a standard he must do. If he was to become a Marine, he would have to do excellent in his training and studies. He acted relaxed and layed back, but knew this would be an experience like no other. It sounded like he didn't even breath, being prepared for what awaited him, and his objective just ahead.~
~Before he left his home, everyone he knew had came, knowing that he was going into the Military. His Dad being retired and living his life, taught him many things about Armed and Unarmed Combat. But he would say It wasn't what matter, saying things like Knowledge and Ability was essential. Mr. Pointdexter didn't like hearing explict or thuggish things, nor even seeing them in his slight. Pointdexter himself was caught with the wrong people and the wrong time, and was punished to the hardest intent. But that was all in the past, Pointdexer was an actual genius and Specialists. Even when he was young, Pointdexter was always in Advanced Courses and After School Classes. Most people with stress like this wouldn't make it, because of being a Thug Angel of some sort, but Pointdexter was always the one of reason. At the time of this Drifting Party, Pointdexter watched a few Videos with friends and Family, surrounded by his Mom, Dad, and 4 Buds. This was just before he left, quickly finishing up his plate.~
~Getting back to the present, he started to think of his future. If he was successful, he would at least achieve being a high ranking Officer. If not, he would probably be remaining his rank, and would soon face demerits. He looked on the positive, remaining himself and keeping his cool posture. He was ready to represent his Dad, and also make his mom proud. It was like he was an Android, designed and program to be here. Despite of how he thought of himself, he faced back towards the front. He knew the bus was slowly down, as the Drill Sergeant came calling them into Attention.It seemed everyone else was nervous, except him with his strong and well balanced position of attention. Once the Drill Sergeant came to him, he stared him deeply into the eyes, trying to break him down.~
{~Captain of Squad 13[G.E.]~}(~Captain of Squad 2[SGXIII]~)
-Naraku Yuherai[IXI B L A C K IXI/iBlack-SoulX]-
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 8:30 pm
IXI B L A C K IXI Kevin Pointdexter
Branch- Marine
Bus
Arrival~Unranked Private Pointdexter sat in the very far back, looking at the outside. He held his dog tag tightly, knowing that he would be put through training, and expected it to be a challenge of Blood, Sweat, and Tears. His light brown eyes glowed a bit, standing out from the midnight sky and hard thunderstorm. It was pretty silent though and a little cold. If he had to get over himself, it was definitely the time to do it. He wanted to make a good first impression, but then again be himself. He couldn't complaint about anything, this being an actual requirement and a standard he must do. If he was to become a Marine, he would have to do excellent in his training and studies. He acted relaxed and layed back, but knew this would be an experience like no other. It sounded like he didn't even breath, being prepared for what awaited him, and his objective just ahead.~
~Before he left his home, everyone he knew had came, knowing that he was going into the Military. His Dad being retired and living his life, taught him many things about Armed and Unarmed Combat. But he would say It wasn't what matter, saying things like Knowledge and Ability was essential. Mr. Pointdexter didn't like hearing explict or thuggish things, nor even seeing them in his slight. Pointdexter himself was caught with the wrong people and the wrong time, and was punished to the hardest intent. But that was all in the past, Pointdexer was an actual genius and Specialists. Even when he was young, Pointdexter was always in Advanced Courses and After School Classes. Most people with stress like this wouldn't make it, because of being a Thug Angel of some sort, but Pointdexter was always the one of reason. At the time of this Drifting Party, Pointdexter watched a few Videos with friends and Family, surrounded by his Mom, Dad, and 4 Buds. This was just before he left, quickly finishing up his plate.~
~Getting back to the present, he started to think of his future. If he was successful, he would at least achieve being a high ranking Officer. If not, he would probably be remaining his rank, and would soon face demerits. He looked on the positive, remaining himself and keeping his cool posture. He was ready to represent his Dad, and also make his mom proud. It was like he was an Android, designed and program to be here. Despite of how he thought of himself, he faced back towards the front. He knew the bus was slowly down, as the Drill Sergeant came calling them into Attention.It seemed everyone else was nervous, except him with his strong and well balanced position of attention. Once the Drill Sergeant came to him, he stared him deeply into the eyes, trying to break him down.~ {~Captain of Squad 13[G.E.]~}(~Captain of Squad 2[SGXIII]~)
-Naraku Yuherai[IXI B L A C K IXI/iBlack-SoulX]- ((Absolutely amazing on all points. You roleplayed alot according to your confines, you did a lot of internal thinking and processing, and you presented great sentence structure and grammar, as well as spelling. You also accurately explicated several details and portrayed your character with astounding efficiency. I am stunned, this was amazing, I don't know how to respond. Your accepted. Definitely! blaugh ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 8:39 pm
Evelyn Larouche
Marine Corps- Alpha Squad
Bus
Arrival
The bus was old. Very old. It's engine seemed to spend more time coughing thick smoke clouds into the air than anything else, and the bus itself swayed from side to side like an old train car. The AC was broken and most of the windows stuck shut, and it was a hot and humid day outside, so the air in the bus was naturally rather unpleasant. Bones sat in the back of the bus, leaning against it's side as she lost herself in thought about the near future. She drew upon everything she remembered of her father's storied about the Corps, seeking to uncover some hint as to what lay in store for her in the upcoming hours, days, and months.
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