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 Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:44 am
REGISTRATION Username: Crystal Flayme RL Name: Michael Roleplay Name:Ron RL Age: 14 Branch: Marine Sex: M Bio: Ron was anything but ordinary as a child. At the age of five he was introduced to war. watching televised things about The Vietnamese war. at age 10 he was reading books about war. by 15 he had finished "The Art of War". the next three years were spent training. when he wasn't studying, he was lifting. Ron knew what he wanted to be. A super soldier. Anything important to consider: I sometimes have a shortage on internet so I may be in and out ocasionally. Roleplay Experience/Expertise: 5 years Literate. Roleplay Sample: Ron woke up. His face was both sticky with mud and his own blood. He reached down for his weapon. His semi-auto colt 45. It was not there. He scurried around on the jungle floor searching, He couldn't find it. Just then he heard it. One shot to the back of the head and Ron was killed at the hands of his enemy and his own gun.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:24 am
REGISTRATION Username: kain-navy commander Roleplay Name: Marcus (aka: Ghost) RL Age: 18 Branch: Marines Sex: male Anything important to consider: not much but i may be away at times for a long time, i tend to be really busy at times Roleplay Experience/Expertise: i am a strictly roleplay type of person, i am in many different roleplay guilds, for instance i am in a vampire orgaization and many other types of roleplay guilds Roleplay Sample: 12 men in each helicopter, 14 helicopters, 14 combat drops, each unit was assigned to capture a key strategic point behind enemy lines, our commander told us this was going to be one our easiest missions, frankly thats bullshit, becasue ever since marcus join the 141 battalion every mission was brutal, every mission seemed like we were being sent into the meat grinder, from stealth operations where you are outnumbered and out gunned, to search and destroy and search and rescue. but to be honest those missions will seem like basic training compared to the one marcus was about to understake. we are going up against thousands of troops, including tanks, multiple gun implacements, and mine fields. our task is to breach into a gulag and rescue a high value prisoner who is surposed to have high value intel on a top secret development that out enemy is developing. "OK EVERYONE HOOK UP AND GET READY FOR THE DROP" that was our unit captin, Ron Angel aka night stalker. "well i guess the time has come" marcus thought as he hooked up and waited for the green light to jump "i'll see you in hell"
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:57 am
REGISTRATION Username:Lance Asguad RL Name: -classified- Roleplay Name:Lance Nightingale RL Age:17 Branch:army Sex: male (Yes plz.){saw that coming) Bio: Lance had always aspired to be a solder but a friend encouraged him to aim for the rangers so he joined the Army , has no wife no kids a mom but no dad and a girl friend, he is quick to anger but level minded Anything important to consider: Roleplay Experience/Expertise:semi-lit and a mod in an rp Roleplay Sample: Lance rounded a corner as bullets wised past him and kept running till he reached a dead end. Than he heard the shouts of his enemies and ducked behind a dumpster. "He cant be to far ... search the ally" The leader of the group said in a calm tone Lance took a deep breath turned on his radio and whispered into it" Im corned across the street from checkpoint bravo in an ally,5 foot mobiles have me cornered , only one clip of ammo remaining" after he said that he shut of his radio and readied for the battle
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 6:42 pm
REGISTRATION Username:ferrock Roleplay Name biggrin rake "Sickle" FreedmanRL Age: 20 Branch: Marines Sex: male Bio: Drake is one of the best in the business of killing. as a child he lost his family and never had another. Looked to the armed forces as a guide to get him up on his feet. lost most of his team in combat and grew a stone cold personality. if you work with him his word will keep you alive.Anything important to consider:not really. Roleplay Experience/Expertise: I am in nine RP guilds. Roleplay Sample: It's zero hour as Drake Looks over the landscape with a thermal scoped sniper rifle. him and his team were only 1500 meters from the enemy encampment. two of drakes men were opening a water drain for them to enter the enemy base. when it was opened Drake put his sniper away and pulled out his machine pistils and put silencers on them. "time to kill." he whispered to his team as they entered the water drain to do their job.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:38 pm
WHAT NOT TO DO.
REGISTRATION Username:Cool_guy887
RL Name:Ken
Roleplay Name:Ken
RL Age: 20
Branch:Army
Sex: Male
Anything important to consider:Was in swat force and was a spy.
Roleplay Experience/Expertise:Learning to.Roleplay Sample:One stormy night.Ken was walking in the alley.As he was walking somebody shot him.But they miss.He then took out his pistol and shot them.''your under arrest''he said.After that he got a text from the military.''So they want me''he said.While he was reading the text.He called his swat force.''Hello I am in a military now''.He then took out his bomb and threw it at the alley.He notice there was some other bad guys.''See ya suckers''.He said while the bomb explode.
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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 10:32 pm
WHAT NOT TO DO. cool_guy887 REGISTRATION Username:Cool_guy887
RL Name:Ken
Roleplay Name:Ken
RL Age: 20
Branch:Army
Sex: Male
Anything important to consider:Was in swat force and was a spy.
Roleplay Experience/Expertise:Learning to.Roleplay Sample:One stormy night.Ken was walking in the alley.As he was walking somebody shot him.But they miss.He then took out his pistol and shot them.''your under arrest''he said.After that he got a text from the military.''So they want me''he said.While he was reading the text.He called his swat force.''Hello I am in a military now''.He then took out his bomb and threw it at the alley.He notice there was some other bad guys.''See ya suckers''.He said while the bomb explode.
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:15 am
REGISTRATION Username: Assassin9280 RL Name: Joe Roleplay Name: Nutiket Fields RL Age: 15 Branch: army Sex: Male Anything important to consider: No, nothing Roleplay Experience/Expertise: Enough experience to RP here Roleplay Sample: Bullets are hissing past his ears as he knew just then he has been compermised. His Trusty M18 in its holdster and his light fifty on his back. He quickley sprinted tward the closest extraction point. he called in "i need extraction NOW" there was nothing but static over the radio. He climbed a tree and unslung his light fifty upon noticing his target, it was in a armer plated hummer. he got his rangeing shot. 3 clicks up 2 clicks right. he aimed infront of the car and fired. thr cabin exploded in a shower of red. he looked down the scope again. the target is dead. be ran to the next safe area got some well earned rest.
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 5:14 pm
REGISTRATION Username: Commnader Crowbar RL Name: Grant Luxem Roleplay Name: Grant Luxem RL Age: 14 Branch: Navy Sex: Male Bio: Grant came from a family of soldiers, and was raised by ex-Army. His father was an Air Defense Artilleryman, his grandfather fought in Germany, also Army. He's actually had ancestors in every branch of the U.S. military, and wanted to go Navy because he wanted to be "living in a mobile middle of nowhere," far away from his family. ((this is my real life dream career.)) Anything important to consider: Planning to become a Naval Officer in RL Roleplay Experience/Expertise: Enough to be able to post here. Roleplay Sample: See Basic Training thread
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:19 pm
REGISTRATION
Username: Neveahada
RL Name: Sonja Gassmann
Roleplay Name: Rain Hunter
RL Age: 20
Branch: Army
Sex: Female
Bio: (Optional)
Anything important to consider: I try to be on quit frequently, and if I won't be on some days I will tell you a head of time. I have been on gaia for over seven years now, this of course is not the same account I had when I first started. I got hacked a few times, but I have been on here for a while now, I love gaia, and I love to role play mostly anything.
Roleplay Experience/Expertise: I have role played in many role plays in Barton Town, they are a mixture of army, marines, etc.
Roleplay Sample:
Rain's head was pounding as she waited for her command, she was laying down in the dirt, her eyes forward, the battlefield was loud and you could hear screams of men dying and screams of men and womans battle cries across both sides. The war had been going on for weeks now, Rain kept her post and always tried to obey her commanders demands. But of course, when she got her gut feelings she knew she had to do what she had to do, even if she got in s**t for it later. She had her machine gun ready, it was always ready and loaded next to her, you never knew what to expect, so you always had to expect the unexpected when it came to war. Rain looked over to her as she saw some of the men getting ready to go. She nodded at them, telling the closest guy next to her she was ready. He looked terrified but nodded, he had just been assigned here, and she could tell he was new, she knew this would be tough on him, but he could pull it through; she hoped anyways. Rain looked to her left and saw the Captain, he yelled at his order to charge, and that was it. Everyone had got up and started to run forward, the only thing you could hear was battle cries and guns being shot back and forth. It was a real war zone, you couldn't lie about that. Rain kept shooting as she ran forward, she knew she had to get to the other side. There were men that were captured, and it was up to her now, she knew it was her job and she liked having her own missions. Rain got passed the enemy lines, she was very sneaky at this, she reloaded her gun, and took a knee as she looked around, she radioed in to the Commander, telling him she was safe and on the other side. He radioed back to her, saying 'good work, and copy that.' Rain started to go on the move again, she had only a few minutes to get the three men back, before the rest of the group retreated back to safety. Rain ran forward but went on the ground as she saw a man look her way, she laid there hardly breathing hoping to God, that he didn't see her. She laid there for a few seconds, until she felt the coat was clear. She looked up slowly, and saw that no one was looking. She breathed a sigh of relief as she slowly went forward, the enemies camp was swarming with people, but they were all heading to the war zone, a smirk spread across Rain's face as she ran across the plain. She hid behind a tank when she heard someone coming, she sat there until she heard the foot steps walk away. Rain looked in a few of the tents, but the men weren't there, she looked around until she heard three men talking quietly, she opened the tent and there sat the three of them. They had shocked and relieved looks on their faces, shocked that a woman came to save them of all people and relieved that they were being rescued. Rain just nodded at them as she shhed, them to be quiet. She untied them and found there weapons as she returned them to the guys. Now it was time for the hard part, getting them out of here. The only way possible was the way they came, but now there was a great deal of the enemy returning from their injuries and what not. Rain swore quietly, she had to figure out something, and remembered how she saw a couple of vehicles parked outside the tent, she brought the guys out and they all jumped in, thank god that they didn't take the keys out. She turned the vehicle on as she went forward, she knew this was the only way out. A group of the enemy came running forward, she had her machine gun loaded as she started to shoot at them, she killed three of them, as the three guys who had been taken started to help her. They got passed them, now it was time to get passed the enemy lines. As they passed threw, there was a up roar of angry men coming right at them. Rain stepped on the gas as the guys held on for dear life. The Commander was shocked to see Rain back already, but happy. Rain kept on shooting at the enemy, as bullets were now flying everywhere. It was crazy that they got passed them. Rain jumped out of the vehicle as she kept on shooting, knowing this was the only way that they would be saved. The rest of the guys followed her as the war kept on going on and on. It would be some time later that they retreated... Rain had fell asleep and only to be awoken by the Commander. She sat up and looked at him, her eyes narrowed, she was very tired, but she got up and looked at him again apologetically.
"Yes Captain?" She stated, as she looked over at the man, he seemed very tired himself, but she never saw him complain.
"I wanted to just say thank you for what you did out there today, I have never seen such a thing like it before." He stated seriously.
Rain just nodded, "You're welcome." She didn't think of it as a big deal, she was just doing what she was told to do, and that was all.
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 9:51 pm
I see no problem with the character itself, but the RP sample has some faults:
1-Having it all in one big paragraph makes it very difficult to read. Try putting a paragraph break at every seven or so lines, please?
2-Puppeteering is controlling other characters than yours. In the case of the Captain, that's what you did. Whilst it's necessary in a novel or fanfic, it is bad news in a role-play. Please read the thread titled "Anti Munch Project", then re-type your sample accordingly.
-Drill Instructor Sam Dunn
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:21 pm
VHM-Taz
I see no problem with the character itself, but the RP sample has some faults:
1-Having it all in one big paragraph makes it very difficult to read. Try putting a paragraph break at every seven or so lines, please?
2-Puppeteering is controlling other characters than yours. In the case of the Captain, that's what you did. Whilst it's necessary in a novel or fanfic, it is bad news in a role-play. Please read the thread titled "Anti Munch Project", then re-type your sample accordingly.
-Drill Instructor Sam Dunn((Please don't post in here and, it's okay to have that in this thread. Passing Bootcamp is where it's at. xp ))
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:44 pm
REGISTRATION Username: Doc Fuzz54 RL Name: Nick Adams Roleplay Name: Cid Richards AKA: Comic RL Age: 22 Branch: Marines Sex: Male Bio: Cid grew in a military family, and he hated it, so he never wanted to join the military until he was 22. He was fired from his job, and the military seemed like a good idea, so he enrolled. Also he got the nickname Comic by being a comic book geek when he was kid. Anything important to consider: I'm usually on often, but if I'm absent for more than three days, I may be gone for a little while. Roleplay Experience/Expertise: I have lots of experience in other guilds, most of which I rose up in the ranks of. Roleplay Sample: Cid was trudging through the jungle swamp, with his M16 held over his head, following three over men, and one followed him. As they exited the swamp, the leader of the group Lt. Duke made sure everyone was ready to infiltrate the base. Everyone was ready. So they moved forward, all ready for action. The base they where going to infiltrate was supposed to be a small base with maybe ten or twelve hostile in it. The mission was to retrieve intel stored in the base. It all seem easy enough. But when they arrived at the base the outside of was empty. So they moved forward careful into the building, this time Cid was in the back of their formation. The team surveyed the building and found nothing. They obviously knew that the squad was coming, so they left. But as the squad was exiting the building, a man the team missed came running out of a closet and shot Cid twice in the stomach. And But Cid unload almost half clip into the man as he fell to the ground. Cid was a goner without immediate medical attention, and the medic on the squad was dead.
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:26 pm
username : kaname tsen
RL : michael
Roleplaying Name : andso
RL Age : 15
Branch :Airforce
Sex : male
Bio : come from the gaian swat force and leran lot there and im a sgt there and im a leader of the FBI HQ im like the airforce im like plane want to fly one so im going be pilot in this army .
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 6:03 am
REGISTRATION
Username: Zeraal
RL Name: N/A
Roleplay Name: En'K'Haral
RL Age: 20
Branch: Army
Sex: Male
Bio: N/A
Anything important to consider: I am usually on for two hours and at night. Oh and I am still adjusting to the ridgid system here so I apologies for any breaks in protocol...such as doing basic traing before registaring sweatdrop
Roleplay Experience/Expertise: Eh mostly fantasy Roleplays involving high fantasy action but I have done some Modern warfare stuff...not alot mind you but some.
Roleplay Sample:
En'K'Haral had been enjoying his last momentss of free thought and action. When the DI had yelled at him he snapped to attention and marched forward, the action was sloppy and he knew he would quickly regret it. He shouted his response but looked straight through the DI as if he wasn't there.
"Sir! This soldier's name is En'K'Haral. This soldier is five feet elevan inchs in height. This soldier is one hundred-sixty-one pounds!
Sir! I am not gay sir!"
s**t!
Was his first thought as he caught the mistake only after he had said it. En'K'Haral stood there sweating and wondering what he had just earned himself.
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:01 am
REGISTRATION Username: ladydeathnote73 RL Name: Jenn Murphy Roleplay Name: Jenn Murphy RL Age: 36 Branch: Air Force Sex: Female Bio: single lady with a cat traveling to someplace new and wanting to make a name for herself and create a new life for herself. Anything important to consider: would like to rp a relationship but its not that big a deal. Roleplay Experience/Expertise: I have role played several different scenarios and scenes that you can think of. I have tried to role play a battle but something always happens when i join a battle. Roleplay Sample: see other postings I have posted through out the guild.
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