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Name:Confessor
Description: The Confessor clan was started by Koizumi's great great great grandmother meaning it had been in the family for generations, but they would keep until they had no other choice, The power of this clan was used to help get confessions out of people,hence the name confessor, how this would work is that the confessor would touch the neck, her pupils would then turn black, then both of the person eyes would turn black at that time, the person is under the confessors spell, while under the spell he can't lie, the amount of time the affect lasts depends on the confessor his or herself, if the confessor skilled it can last for as long as 3 whole days, if not a couple of minutes and hour at most. For the power of this clan to work she/he must have complete eye contact that means that both of his or her eyes must be looking at both of the confessed person's eyes to work. This clan only have genjustus.
Strengths:Genjustu,hand to hand combat(taijustu)
Weaknesses: Because of the fact that the confessor needs to have complete eye contact that leaves the confessor complete open for surprise attacks, and ambush, ninjustu
Ability: able to tell if one is lieing
Bloodline/Clan Jutsus:
Name: tamashī no me
Translation:Eye of the soul
Type: Genjustu
Element(s): None
Effect: as soon as the user gets eye contact his/her eye turns grey he looks into your soul and brings your fear to life,
Other: this is rank D

Name: tamashī no kurōningu
Translation: Soul Clone
Type: Genjustu
Element(s):Water
Effect:The user will manipulate the water around his/her opponent as soon as the opponent see the water, it becomes a clone that knows everything and can do everything the opponent can do
Other: this is rank A

Name: tamashī no sōsa
Translation: Soul manipulation
Type: Genjustu
Element(s):None
Effect: The user touches the opponent and connects his/her shakra to the opponents soul control them for a period of time, if the shakra and the opponent were to ever break the opponent will die only if that person was not trained to withstand attacks that took a long time. When a confessor is controlling the person, the confessor o cannot move, and if the confessor is killed then nothing happens to the person under the effect of the genjutsu.
Other: This is rank A


Name: tamashī no rīdā
Translation: Soul Searching
Type: Genjustu
Element(s):None
Effect: The user touches the opponent and connects his/her shakra to the opponents soul and searches their soul for the truth this takes lots of concentration so is only needed if the person it is going be used on is about to kill him/herself
Other: This is rank C

Name: tamashī no fukkatsu
Translation: Soul resurrection
Type: Genjustu
Element(s):None
Effect:The user draws symbols on a flat surface then calls out the name of the person he or she wants to resurrect, then he or she uses that to find out what is need
Other: This is rank S

alright, while i generally dislike bloodlines based off of other shows and games and whatnot, I like what you've done with this, though it almost seems more like a clan than a bloodline

as for the soul clone, is it exactly the same power as the opponenent, as in a fully powered clone that would be very difficult to destroy? If so that sounds more like an A or even S rank technique

for soul manipulation I'm a little confused about what you mean when you say "if the shakra and the opponent were to ever break the opponent will die" (it's chakra by the way, not shakra) does this mean that if the opponent even attempts to get out of the jutsu they die? If so then it's a no.

well again, what exactly would entail breaking the connection? And all it takes is a touch and you can end someone's life if they try to resist? What constitutes a weak or strong mind, how do you determine such a thing? One thing you should add is that when controlling the person, the caster of the genjutsu cannot move, and if the caster is killed then nothing happens to the person under the effect of the genjutsu. Also this should be at least an A ranked jutsu.

Answer the questions and make the changes and then repost the bloodline and I'll take another look

this is the description of your jutsu:



it says that if you touch them then you connect your chakra to their's and if the connection is broken they die, thus you can basically kill someone by touching them that's what I meant by "And all it takes is a touch and you can end someone's life if they try to resist?"

If the caster breaks the connection then would the victim die? you don't really say if the victim has to sever the connection for them to die, so could you just move or blink, which would sever the connection, and then they die?




I understand what it means in real life, I'm asking how would you decide such a thing in the game? There's no stat that says "strength of the mind" or anything like that, so why wouldn't everyone just say "oh well I have a strong mind so it looks like that's not going to work for you." How would it be determined in the game whether someone has a weak or strong mind

Well my response to both things is a resounding, no. Severing the connection should not have such a negative affect, maybe it could disorient them or something like that, but certainly not make them fall unconscious or die. I mean this technique sounds a lot like the mind swap thing that Ino's clan had, just that it would be a touch rather than an aimed technique, and when someone broke out of that connection nothing happened to them. I mean I don't think i should be easy to break out of, but a single technique should not cause something unconsciousness or death with a simple touch, which this jutsu could allow people to do.

As for the strong mind thing... that's just silly the rank of someone doesn't have anything to do with how strong their mind is. You could have an incredibly strong willed genin (like naruto uzumaki) and an incredibly weak-willed jounin. There rank and skill don't necessarily have anything to do with someones will.

This jutsu should just work the way that Ino's mind swap thing works, at least as far as mechanics of the jutsu go, otherwise I'm just going to have to say no to the jutsu altogether.

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Name: Dragon-Slayer
Description: Centuries ago, when the summonings of today did not abide by contracts and simply ran free, a lone hermit was the pupil to a dragon. The hermit learned the dragon's way of combat, of mind, and of soul, starting the chain of Dragon-Slayer blood-children. To this day, few of her blood are on this world, but all still hold the power that hermit gained and passed on. They come from all sides of life, and have no real 'appearance' to be labeled to. They have no family name tied to this genkai.
Strengths:
~ Body is Adapted To Heat
Katon Jutsu +1 Rank
Katon Attacks Against Dragon-Slayer -1 Rank
May Consume Heat To Gain Back Strength (Must Not Be Dragon-Slayer Fire. Fire Consumed Restores Half Power: B Jutsu When Consumed Gives Back D Amount Of Chakra)
~ Incredible Strength And Endurance (+2 Rank To Each)
~ Enhanced Smell

Weaknesses:
~ Constant Use Of Dragon-Slayer Attacks Depletes Chakra Rapidly (Jutsu Takes Up Much Chakra On upper Tier)
~ Have Transportation Issues (Different From Shinobi To Shinobi. Trasportation = Bad Side-Effects)
~ Must Have Katon As Your Primary Element

Bloodline/Clan Jutsus:
* Fire Dragon's Roar (Karyū no Hōkō)
Rank: D
The shinobi breathes fire at his opponents which transforms in a large fireball.

* Fire Dragon's Claw (Karyuu no Kakitsume):
Rank: D
The shinobi ignites his feet on fire to increase the power of his kicks.
(Feet Go 'Woosh!', Become Consumed By Fire. Feet Hit Something, Make It Go 'Boom!'.

* Fire Dragon's Iron Fist (Karyū no Tekken):
Rank: C
The shinobi engulfs his fist in flames to strike his opponent, causing increased damage.

* Fire Dragon's Wing Attack (Karyū no Yokugeki):
Rank: C
The shinobi takes hold of his opponent and ignites his hands on fire as support to throw them.

* Fire Dragon's Sword Edge (Karyū no Kenkaku):
Rank: B
The shinobi ignites his entire body on fire to charge at his opponent to launch them high into the air.
(Guy Launches Enemy In Air. Shinobi's Body Becomes Consumed By Fire. Shinobi Jumps Into Air And Nails Enemy By Going 'Smash!')

* Fire Dragon's Gleaming Flame (Karyū no Kōen):
Rank: B
Igniting both of his hands on fire, the shinobi simultaneously strikes his opponent.
(Shinobi Lights Both Hands On Fire, Then Smashes Both Into Enemy Within Reach.)

* Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow (Karyū no Enchū):
Rank: C-A
Lighting the tip of his elbow on fire, the Shinobi can boost the speed of his punch tremendously.
(Elbow Shoots Fire Out Like Rocket. Makes Punch Go 'Woosh!' Really Fast Depending On Chakra Amount)

* Fire Dragon's Crushing Fang (Karyū no Saiga):
Rank: C
With his hand ignited he gouges his hand into his enemy and quickly swipes away.
(Not Auto-Hit. Opponent Within Range Gets Mauled By Flame Claws If They Cannot Dodge. Claws Go 'Slash!')

* Flame Lotus: Fire Dragon's Fist (Guren:Karyuu no Ken):
Rank: A
Lighting his hands on fire, the shinobi will rapidly punch his opponent with his fists. Each punch causes a fiery explosion.
(This Like Taijutsu Attack. If Made Unavoidable, Then All Hit. Same Principle As Fire Dragon's Crushing Fang Attack)

* Fire Dragon's Red Lotus Flame Exploding Blade (Karyuu no Guren Bakuenjin):
Rank: S
After a series of attacks, the shinobi finishes with a torrent of blade-shaped flames that strike the enemy in a spiral formation. Every time the enemy is hit with a blade, it explodes. Described as the ultimate Dragon Slayer technique, this attack is so powerful it has been shown to smash through dragon scales, which is known to have tremendous endurance capabilities.
(Fire Takes Shape Of Flame Blades, Like Rasengan Takes Shape Of Sphere.)

* Dragon Force
Rank: S
A stupendously powerful state of Dragon Slayer where the shinobi's strength and speed increase a hundredfold (Exaggeration) and dragon scales form on his face. This state can be held for a while, but only at the risk of the after effects. Five of the shinobi's posts after using this form will have the body start to break down. First, muscles begin to tear, then dizziness, then internal damage, such as lungs and the heart. Using this form for eight posts will cause heart failure, and unless a medical nin can refib. the shinobi, he will die.