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The Stories Never Told

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 2:45 pm


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Name of weapon: Kazemyuujiku (literaly meaning wind music)
Who owns the weapon: Tanzu Zamni
Where it was found/Who made it: Tanzu just happened to find it, just laying on the ground in an old, tattered case for it. It was being held by the hand of a corpse, buried deep within the sand dunes.
The Range of the weapon: Long
Weakness: It is NOT a close combat weapon. If put in a situation like that, it'll just be a music baton, nothing else.
Description: Like the name suggests, it is a music baton, enhanced with wind chakra to control the air around the user. Minimum chakra is required, and the wind isn't jutsu needed, either. Again, like the name says, it controls music. Strangely, though, as genjutsu. Songu Dammaku is a built in genjutsu that plays ALL the songs in the world ever made inside one's head. Those within 50 meters of it feel the full and total volume of the attack. However, it can also actually PLAY the songs in the wind. Thus not being able to kai out of. This is a jutsu, however, and costs a normal amount of chakra.
Rp Sample: Tanzu muttered in his sleep, turning over in the soft, cotton bed. Even though he was a jinchuriki, the officials sure did know how to satisfy the huge ox. His mouth twitched, and he slowly opened his red eyes, mismatching his bleach white hair. He raised up suddenly, sleep crusted into his eyes. 'Today...is not gonna be cool,' he thought, getting up to dress in his yellow and black outfit. His headband had a strange teeth marking, along with his usual sand symbol as well. He sighed, ruffling his hair. "Time to get started..." he muttered, heading out the door.
"Here comes the loser!!" someone shouted, throwing a rock in Tanzu's direction. He ducked, continuing to walk. Another rock, another dodge. "Are you done?" he asked, saddisim in his voice. "Its rather annoying when you can't hit me, yet you still try." The group of boys charged, sticks in hand.
"God...you don't listen, do you?" he asked, pulling out his baton. "4/4 time...play." With that, he started conducting, waving the baton wildly in the air. But, also, all the songs in the world played in their heads, ringing over and over, blunting their thoughts and making them clutch their ears. Then, the wind picked up, slamming them into the nearest building, creating a crater in the wall. Yet Tanzu kept walking, humming a tune from the endless list of songs that was available to himself constantly. He reached the academy, and walked inside, marvelling at the architecture.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 3:53 pm


Name of weapon:Rai
Who owns the weapon:Ruuji
Where it was found/Who made it: an old sage in Sangakure made this and another weapon and in trusted it him so keep him safe.
The Range of the weapon: average katana length approx. 60–73 cm Rai's length 80cm average weight 2- 3 lbs Rai's weight 5lbs
Weakness:Because of it's weight it can't be swung freely for more than 5min exact after that time limit the user must relax his arms
Description:This is a katana like none other it has a slightly larger range than most katana's Ruuji's signature technique windcutter. It requires Ruuji to draw and re-sheath her sword at lightening speed and since it doesn't consume any chakra she can use it continuously without tiring
Rp Sample: Ruuji runs through the forest quickly using windcutter against many trees until he reaches the mother tree of the forest. "There it is the mother tree...... well even though you lived through many decades it is time to come down" Ruuji gets in his stance, after a few seconds of preparations he dashes up the tree. After reaching the top he jumps high above the tree pulls the sword over his head and strikes down the tree like a thunder bolt crashing down on earth, the mighty tree falls and Ruuji keeps walking "just a another days work"

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:21 pm


@The Stories Never Told: I'm waiting for the mod directly in charge of this board to review yours.

@iAsakura: "a bit farther" isn't a measurement. "Lacks Flexibity"- all swords should stay straight. Tell me how heavy it is, why it somehow shoots air forward and give me a better RP sample.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 6:23 pm


i edited my post

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 7:59 pm


@Stories: Being the Hachibi host, there are a few restrictions I'm gonna have to place on this. First off, since it is a genjutsu, even if it's using the wind as a medium, it HAS to be able to let people kai out of it. Only clan specific genjutsu exist that can't be kai'd out of. Secondly, the wind control will have to be given a jutsu cost and an AoE(Area of Effect) for each rank (Ex. 20ft. around the user genin rank, 40ft. chuunin, etc. etc.) as well as describing its limitations. I need to know what this weapon can do with the wind at its highest level of usage and how strong the attack/defense is. Otherwise, that's why Fuuton exists. Fix these things up and give me an RP sample that better shows what it can do.

@iAsakura: I need more specifics. How strong is the attack 'windcutter'? How fast is it (Cause a doujutsu would be able to see it, as well as a higher ranking shinobi. Basically I need to know what rank compared to yours is incapable of seeing it.)? And please give me an RP sample involving other characters so that I can see its effectiveness in battle.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 9:06 pm


Well, the first part was a normal genjutsu, so itcould be kaied...but the next part wasn't, it was just using the wind as a jutsu. Ah, well. I'll fix em.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 11:29 pm


@Stories: I wasn't referring to the RP sample, but the description. It says that when it uses the wind to play the music it cannot be Kai'd out of.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:16 am


Nor did I. It's a jutsu, that part. I guess I shoulda labeled it that way...

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:48 am


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Name of weapon: Dragon's Teeth
Who owns the weapon: Nikorasu Sutone (Nik)
Where it was found/Who made it: Nik's Father
The Range of the weapon: Close range (3 feet maximum)
Weakness: ice element (easily frozen)
Description: The handle has a dragon-shaped head on it. The sword is meant for the flame spread technique. When you use that technique the sword is at its most effective state. The flame would be greater than other swords if you used the flame spread technique on them. It would make major burns and gashes to the target if they were hit by the sword. In the sword's normal state it would cut through flesh like butter.

Rp Sample: Nik walked into his personal dojo. He walked to the sword stand in the corner. He removed his katana from his sword case. He replaced it with the sword his father made for him when he was five. The sword had the words "Dragon's Teeth" carved into the blade. You could almost see through the sword. Nik set up his practice dummies in the dojo. He was going to test how sharp the sword was. Nik slashed through the first dummy. It was cut in half. Then Nik used the flame spread technique on the sword. The flame got bigger by the second. Nik cut another dummy behind him. It was set on fire then fell in half. Sand fell out the dummy. Each of the test dummies had five pounds of sand in them. "I like this blade." The flame didn't burn out until Nik was done using it. He put the sword in his sword case and took it with him to thee training grounds.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:24 pm


@Stories: I see. Fix it so I can tell that one is a genjutsu, and the other just a jutsu. I also still need you to give the wind control a chakra cost as well as AoE for each rank, or just a total AoE.

@Nicolasmatt: DENIED. I need to know to what extent the flame spread technique makes it stronger. How much stronger than other swords using the flame spread technique would it be? Also, cutting through flesh like butter is kinda what swords are intended to do. It isn't really an addition to the sword's ability. I would also want a better RP sample involving other characters so I can see how you'd use this sword in combat.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:48 pm


User ImageName of weapon: Mugenjin (Unlimited Blade)
Who owns the weapon: Haseo Shimizu
Where it was found/Who made it: This blade was created by Arai Shakku, the most famed swordsmith of his time. Haseo paid his family fortune in order to attain this sword.
The Range of the weapon: 1 meter
Weakness: Because of its serrated edge, the sword does not cut as deep as regular swords. Not only that, if it is doused in water, the oils get washed away and making the sword useless.
Description: The Mugenjin is a self sharpened serrated blade which was flaked away in a regular pattern as it was used, and it had become soaked in the flesh and body flat of the victims it had killed over the years. As a result, the Mugenjin gives the user the ability to execute fire-oriented techniques using the oils as fuel.

-Ichi no Hiken: Homura Dama (壱の秘剣 焔霊 "First Secret Sword: Burning Soul"): Using friction to ignite the human fats that have soaked into his sword over time, this serves to distract the opponent from the user's swings. The result is being simultaneously burned and slashed, more than compensating for the weakness of the serrated sword not being able to cut as deep as a normal one.

-Ni no Hiken: Guren Kaina (弐の秘剣 紅蓮腕, lit. "Second Secret Sword: Crimson Lotus Arm"): The user fills his gauntlets with gunpowder, and ignites them with the sparks caused by the Mugenjin. Thus it results in an explosion. Guren Kaina yields a lot of force and is usually performed while his opponent is at close range, preferably in his grip. It can backfire, however.

-Shu no Hiken: Kaguzuchi (終の秘剣 火産霊神, lit. "Final Secret Sword: Fire-Producing Spirit God"): The Kaguzuchi is the ultimate technique in the Mugenjin's arsenal. The user activates it by scraping his blade from the base to the tip on the end of the scabbard, creating a miniature fire cyclone around the blade. When making contact with his Kaguzuchi, the flames rise upward and form a giant pillar or wall of flames, sending the opponent upward while severely burning him at the same time. The user then emerges from the flames as it dissipates. The opponent is seen falling behind him.

Rp Sample: As Haseo faces off his opponent, he slides the tip of the blade against the ground, igniting the fats and oils from the serrated edge as a small flame erupted from its tip. The opponent whom was in mid charge stepped back as he saw the flames, hesitating momentarily. Using this oppurtinity, Haseo lunged forward, grabbing at the collar of his shirt and placing the tip of the sword above the glove which gripped the shinobi. With a demonic smile, Haseo slid the sword sideways, cutting into the glove and creating yet another spark. The gunpowder in his glove exploded in front of him as the shinobi exploded backwards unto the ground. Though Haseo's hand was merely blown off, it suffered minimal damage since he had coated his hand with chakra, now suffering only minor burns. It still hurt like hell though.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:57 pm


someone's been watching a lot of ruroni kenshin I do believe wink I say APPROVED!, though I will of course leave it up to the discretion of Luo if he say's differently

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 10:59 pm


lmao, ever since I created the Hiten mitsurugi style, I've been working on Gatotsu, Shino Ippo, the Mugenjin and Aoshi's style lol. And if you look at one of the rock styles, there's a picture of Sanouske on it with the Fuwami punch as the ultimate tech
PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:14 pm



Name of weapon: Amaterasu
Who owns the weapon: Zin Naga
Where it was found/Who made it: It was given to Zin during the training with the mysterious man. He gave this blade to Zin in replacement for the rusty chinese straight sword that the young boy broke during training.
The Range of the weapon: Close range.
Weakness: It takes alot of chakra to use this weapon's powers in addition to using Battojutsu. But it only truly takes chakra away when he activates it's blinding technique and 'vanishing' blade.
Description: Amaterasu means "shining heaven, or shining over heaven". The blade was made with a particular metal that reflect light overly well. It makes the blade look practically white when hit against the light.When chakra is pushed into it,this blade with magnify the reflection ability and with a small tilt of the blade and blind the open for a brief second. Pushing a constant stream of chakra into the blade will awaken the true power of Amaterasu. This blade will make a flash in the area,blinding the opponent only if they are looking directly at Zin. This will give Zin 5 seconds to attack his opponent.
Cost of Usage

The blade only truely takes your chakra when you initate the blinding technique. The regular flashes and reflection of light does not count as it's a natural thing.
*But to do the basic blinding technique,it will take a D ranked chakra to initate.
*But to use Amaterasu to it's fullest, the user will have to use a A ranked chakra to fill the area with blinding light.

Rp Sample:
Zin sighed as it was the day after recieving his rank of Genin and had a fight with he persumed was his first rival. But unforunately during the fight,using his Shikuchi gave the last straw to his weapon as his blade and the hilt seperated from each other. The boy loved that weapon;it was given to him by the hokage as a sword that was found from his father's hideout. He felt a prescene behind him but Zin was a little too sad to look away from his blade and if it was an enemy Nagi would've warned him as he always slumbered hidden in the mist of Zin's makeshift house within the training grounds. But as he took scent of the person which was was painted heavily with the scanky smell of a 'playhouse.' Zin shook his head,"Pervy-sama......Having so many girls around is bad for you."He said softly as the old man chuckled and moved over to sit next to Zin,already knowing what was wrong with the usually cheerful Naga child."Ah Zin.....Don't worry about me.......I was just....celebrating your abilities today. You did wonderful!"The man said as he patted Zin tenderly on the shoulder. Zin smiled a little but sighed at scene of his broken blade,"But now my sword is gone.....That was one the main components of my Taijutsu."Zin said solemly before blinking as the old man chuckled at this. He wondered why he would laugh when Zin truly was hurt about his broken sword and tilted his head a little as he the old man reached back and brought a golden case infront of him."This.....is your new blad boy."He said as he let Zin take the sword in his tiny little hands and pull it over onto his lap."M-Mine?"Zin asked as he looked at the old man as the boy ran his hands over the golden casing before flipping the latches of the case and prying it open. His slitted eyes opened as he saw the blade in a creamy pearl colored sheath. with a gold band snapped along the middle. The boy's eyes trailed up to the hilt which also was cream colored with a black-holed gripping upon the blade which would show the pearl handle. As Zin very delicately lifted the blade,he opened the sword and winced as he was blinded.".....Sun Ce.....w...what is this?"Zin asked astonished as his house didn't have much light except for the natural light the day or night gave him.Sun Ce,which was the old man,chuckled and picked up the blade,"This my boy....it Amaterasu. It magnifies any light received tenfold because of the metal it was created with. Now let me tell you this,when you induce some chakra into it with flash your opponent up to a maximum of 5 seconds."He smirked to Zin,"And with your speed I believe you can take your opponent out by then. But here's the catch."Sun Ce said as he took the sheath and sword,placing it carefully in the sword stand his old blade use to inhabit."What is is Sun-sama?"Zin asked as he looked tenderly to the old man as he slowly got up,"Well.....You can only flash your opponent in the mist of you unsheathing your sword,or the sword is already unsteathed and is pointed directly at your opponent with them looking directly at you. You also....cannot use 'True Shukuchi' and the flash the opponent. However,you can use it for the lower levels of Shukuchi and flash your opponent. So....what do you think boy?"Sun Ce asked as he looked to Zin who was admiring his blade."I think.....Konoha will have another strong Taijutsu and Battojutsu artist very soon."Zin said softly as the blade and sheath glowed delicately in the light of the moon,illuminating Zin's make shift house with tender pearl light.


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:30 am


@Zane: Well the first technique kinda counteracts its original weakness, leaving it with....well no weakness. Give it a weakness to suiton and I'll approve it.
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