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 Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:42 pm
x_x Valentines Day x_x NEW RECRUIT JILL VALENTINE FIRST POSTRecruit Jill Valentine
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe I was sitting at a wooden table by myself, my stomach growled as I stared at the tray of strange soup I taken from the women behind the serving counter who seem she has never been married and was grumpy. I stare at the food with a questionable look "What kind of people serve this kind of food... This is outrageous.." I mumbled to myself also avoiding eye contact to the other people eating here. I sigh to myself as I poked at the chunks of what it seemed to be liver and thought to myself Maybe I should just eat it... I need to eat since I might be here for a while.. With that, I took a small bite and then immediately spat it out and put my head on the table with my arm covering my face. "I want to go home..." I mumbled with hope that it will all end soon. Not, bad I don't get why you were so nervous to post. All I can say is try and detach yourself from first person and try and go for Third person.
Ex. Jill was sitting at a wooden table by herself, her stomach growled as she stared at the tray. . . . Colonel D. Winchester
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe Front Door
Dean, cleared his throat as he entered the Cafe. He was in a bad mood from the get go, his plan was to take some frustration out on the new recruits. "Everyone at attention" Dean yelled as he glared down at everyone his green eyes reflecting from the sun. Dean began to look over all the recruits. "You there, Valentine isn't it? Tell me why you want to be apart of S.T.A.R.S?"
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:53 pm
Mistro 91 x_x Valentines Day x_x NEW RECRUIT JILL VALENTINE FIRST POSTRecruit Jill Valentine
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe I was sitting at a wooden table by myself, my stomach growled as I stared at the tray of strange soup I taken from the women behind the serving counter who seem she has never been married and was grumpy. I stare at the food with a questionable look "What kind of people serve this kind of food... This is outrageous.." I mumbled to myself also avoiding eye contact to the other people eating here. I sigh to myself as I poked at the chunks of what it seemed to be liver and thought to myself Maybe I should just eat it... I need to eat since I might be here for a while.. With that, I took a small bite and then immediately spat it out and put my head on the table with my arm covering my face. "I want to go home..." I mumbled with hope that it will all end soon. Not, bad I don't get why you were so nervous to post. All I can say is try and detach yourself from first person and try and go for Third person.
Ex. Jill was sitting at a wooden table by herself, her stomach growled as she stared at the tray. . . . Colonel D. Winchester
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe Front Door
Dean, cleared his throat as he entered the Cafe. He was in a bad mood from the get go, his plan was to take some frustration out on the new recruits. "Everyone at attention" Dean yelled as he glared down at everyone his green eyes reflecting from the sun. Dean began to look over all the recruits. "You there, Valentine isn't it? Tell me why you want to be apart of S.T.A.R.S?"
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe Jill slowly moves her head up and turns it to Dean's direction showing that she is a little tired from the ride here. "Yeah who's asking?.." She replied with an accidental tone of attitude "I want to be a member of S.T.A.R.S because I think justice is the right thing and to feel the the joy of helping the innocent out." She finished while slipping a yawn at the end of her answer.
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:57 pm
x_x Valentines Day x_x Mistro 91 x_x Valentines Day x_x NEW RECRUIT JILL VALENTINE FIRST POSTRecruit Jill Valentine
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe I was sitting at a wooden table by myself, my stomach growled as I stared at the tray of strange soup I taken from the women behind the serving counter who seem she has never been married and was grumpy. I stare at the food with a questionable look "What kind of people serve this kind of food... This is outrageous.." I mumbled to myself also avoiding eye contact to the other people eating here. I sigh to myself as I poked at the chunks of what it seemed to be liver and thought to myself Maybe I should just eat it... I need to eat since I might be here for a while.. With that, I took a small bite and then immediately spat it out and put my head on the table with my arm covering my face. "I want to go home..." I mumbled with hope that it will all end soon. Not, bad I don't get why you were so nervous to post. All I can say is try and detach yourself from first person and try and go for Third person.
Ex. Jill was sitting at a wooden table by herself, her stomach growled as she stared at the tray. . . . Colonel D. Winchester
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe Front Door
Dean, cleared his throat as he entered the Cafe. He was in a bad mood from the get go, his plan was to take some frustration out on the new recruits. "Everyone at attention" Dean yelled as he glared down at everyone his green eyes reflecting from the sun. Dean began to look over all the recruits. "You there, Valentine isn't it? Tell me why you want to be apart of S.T.A.R.S?"
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe Jill slowly moves her head up and turns it to Dean's direction showing that she is a little tired from the ride here. "Yeah who's asking?.." She replied with an accidental tone of attitude "I want to be a member of S.T.A.R.S because I think justice is the right thing and to feel the the joy of helping the innocent out." She finished while slipping a yawn at the end of her answer. CONGRATULATIONS!
Great job, well done now just rp like you did there and you won't have a problem you may RP when it is reopened. Nice post btw no errors.
x_x Valentines Day x_x HAS PASSED BOOT CAMP
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 3:21 pm
NEW RECRUIT AQUARIUS FIRST POST
New Recruit: Aquarius
S.T.A.R.S: Boot Camp
Aquarius's House/Boot Camp Bus Stop
*Aquarius gets up and starts to pack his suitcase for Boot Camp*
Lets, see I need to get myself together before the bus arrives to take me to boot camp. I'd better get packing *he grabs his weapons, S.T.A.R.S. Uniform, Ammo, and Cellphone.* Ok I've got everything I need *he heads out his front door and locks it and walks over to the bus stop and waits for the bus to arrive.*
15 Mins Later
Alright! The bus is here S.T.A.R.S. Boot Camp here I come! *He climbs onto the bus and sits down and waits to arrive at S.T.A.R.S. Boot Camp.
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:42 pm
New Recruit Richard Aiken First Post
Location:R.P.D.
Offices
''Surprise!'' Richard felt like the new kid in a classroom full of students. He was stunned and couldn't move an inch.
''H-hi,''he mannaged to choke out.
''Aww, he's shy,''came a women's voice from within the herd of people all focused on him. A blur passed in the corner of his eye and before he knew it he was off his feet and being pat on the back. He gasped at the sudden shift of movement.
''Making friends, Ryman,'' came the women's voice again.
Richard was sat down and patted off. He caught his first glimpse of the person who had lifted him into the air. He was a man that looked like he was in his late twenties or mid-twenties. He had long, straight hair and a little bit of muzzle; wearing a R.P.D. official issued uniform.
''Nice to meet you man,'' Ryman said with a smile.
''My pleasure,'' Richard said with the hint that he was a little shaken. Richard turned to look at the woman who already had her eyes on him with a big smile stretched accross her face.
She was a peite woman with short blond hair and a curious accent. She hugged him as well.
''Hey,I'm Rita. Would you like me to show you to your desk?'' Richard looked around the cramped, unorganized office area and found his desk covered in several knick knacks and trinkets. Obviously my desk. Richard said yes anyway and they started for his desk. ''Me and Kevin like to make sure the newbies' feel welcomed,'' she let out a giggle. Right...,Richard thought. ''By the way, have you met Mavin yet?''she asked.
''Yeah, we met in the lobby.''
"What the hell's going on here!"came an angry man's voice charging though the room. Richard and everyone else turned to see chief Irons staring at the group of people as if he were ready to pounce. ''I have ******** jornalists and reporters digging up my a**, and your celebrating instead of finding me something to tell them."Irons trudged around the room angrily and finally saw Richard. ''Oh, so this is the new fellow?'' Irons walked over to Richard and extended his hand, Richard clutched his firm grip into his. ''Nice to meet you Richard, now get to work,''and with that Irons stomped out of the room before Richard could answer.
''Alrighty,''said Ryman as he grabbed a paper cone hat off of Richard's desk and put it on. ''Guess it's time to get serious.'' Richard couldn't help but laugh at how ridiculous it looked on him.
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:55 pm
IamRichardAiken New Recruit Richard Aiken First Post
Location:R.P.D.
Offices ''Surprise!'' Richard felt like the new kid in a classroom full of students. He was stunned and couldn't move an inch. ''H-hi,''he mannaged to choke out. ''Aww, he's shy,''came a women's voice from within the herd of people all focused on him. A blur passed in the corner of his eye and before he knew it he was off his feet and being pat on the back. He gasped at the sudden shift of movement. ''Making friends, Ryman,'' came the women's voice again. Richard was sat down and patted off. He caught his first glimpse of the person who had lifted him into the air. He was a man that looked like he was in his late twenties or mid-twenties. He had long, straight hair and a little bit of muzzle; wearing a R.P.D. official issued uniform. ''Nice to meet you man,'' Ryman said with a smile. ''My pleasure,'' Richard said with the hint that he was a little shaken. Richard turned to look at the woman who already had her eyes on him with a big smile stretched accross her face. She was a peite woman with short blond hair and a curious accent. She hugged him as well. ''Hey,I'm Rita. Would you like me to show you to your desk?'' Richard looked around the cramped, unorganized office area and found his desk covered in several knick knacks and trinkets. Obviously my desk. Richard said yes anyway and they started for his desk. ''Me and Kevin like to make sure the newbies' feel welcomed,'' she let out a giggle. Right...,Richard thought. ''By the way, have you met Mavin yet?''she asked. ''Yeah, we met in the lobby.'' "What the hell's going on here!"came an angry man's voice charging though the room. Richard and everyone else turned to see chief Irons staring at the group of people as if he were ready to pounce. ''I have ******** jornalists and reporters digging up my a**, and your celebrating instead of finding me something to tell them."Irons trudged around the room angrily and finally saw Richard. ''Oh, so this is the new fellow?'' Irons walked over to Richard and extended his hand, Richard clutched his firm grip into his. ''Nice to meet you Richard, now get to work,''and with that Irons stomped out of the room before Richard could answer. ''Alrighty,''said Ryman as he grabbed a paper cone hat off of Richard's desk and put it on. ''Guess it's time to get serious.'' Richard couldn't help but laugh at how rediculous it looked on him. You've got good handle on your grammer. The only problem I see is that you cannot RP as so many people. Keep it down to just what you're character's doing. Other than that, it's fine. Captain A. Wesker
R.P.D. Building
Main HallAnother day that seemed like the ones before awaited Albert Wesker. He had just returned to the RPD building after being sent out to handle a gang dispute that looked like the early stages of a full blown gang war. The situation had been placed under control quite easily however thanks to I clear strategy devised by him. Now he was back at HQ where he simply wanted to spend the day behind his desk, then leave in peace, however peace was not what he found. What is this?... Wesker asked himself as he saw more activity than usual. Then it quickly hit him. There was suppose to be a new rookie arriving today to join the force, or so he had heard from someone. Wesker took a look to see who this rookie was. It didn't take long for him to see there was nothing rather special looking about him. Good luck to however gets assigned with him...
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 10:03 pm
Blazing Phoenix23 NEW RECRUIT AQUARIUS FIRST POST New Recruit: Aquarius
S.T.A.R.S: Boot Camp
Aquarius's House/Boot Camp Bus Stop*Aquarius gets up and starts to pack his suitcase for Boot Camp* Lets, see I need to get myself together before the bus arrives to take me to boot camp. I'd better get packing *he grabs his weapons, S.T.A.R.S. Uniform, Ammo, and Cellphone.* Ok I've got everything I need *he heads out his front door and locks it and walks over to the bus stop and waits for the bus to arrive.* 15 Mins LaterAlright! The bus is here S.T.A.R.S. Boot Camp here I come! *He climbs onto the bus and sits down and waits to arrive at S.T.A.R.S. Boot Camp. You've got good grammer. The '**' are a huge no-no however. When your character does something, use sentences and when you speak, use "" plus, it helps to make your dialogue another color or bolder. Captain A. Wesker
S.T.A.R.S. Boot Camp
Sun-blasted bus stopThe sun was shining bright as a lone figure stood at the camp's bus stop. Albert Wesker adjusted his shades as he looked over the list of the new recruits that would be arriving soon to submit to his own little slice of Hell which others called 'Boot Camp'. Wesker had great pride the fact that he made most people quit, and he planned to keep that streak going strong. He grinned at the though as he saw the bus getting closer. "Here they come..."
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 8:53 am
The Darc Knight IamRichardAiken New Recruit Richard Aiken First Post
Location:R.P.D.
Offices ''Surprise!'' Richard felt like the new kid in a classroom full of students. He was stunned and couldn't move an inch. ''H-hi,''he mannaged to choke out. ''Aww, he's shy,''came a women's voice from within the herd of people all focused on him. A blur passed in the corner of his eye and before he knew it he was off his feet and being pat on the back. He gasped at the sudden shift of movement. ''Making friends, Ryman,'' came the women's voice again. Richard was sat down and patted off. He caught his first glimpse of the person who had lifted him into the air. He was a man that looked like he was in his late twenties or mid-twenties. He had long, straight hair and a little bit of muzzle; wearing a R.P.D. official issued uniform. ''Nice to meet you man,'' Ryman said with a smile. ''My pleasure,'' Richard said with the hint that he was a little shaken. Richard turned to look at the woman who already had her eyes on him with a big smile stretched accross her face. She was a peite woman with short blond hair and a curious accent. She hugged him as well. ''Hey,I'm Rita. Would you like me to show you to your desk?'' Richard looked around the cramped, unorganized office area and found his desk covered in several knick knacks and trinkets. Obviously my desk. Richard said yes anyway and they started for his desk. ''Me and Kevin like to make sure the newbies' feel welcomed,'' she let out a giggle. Right...,Richard thought. ''By the way, have you met Mavin yet?''she asked. ''Yeah, we met in the lobby.'' "What the hell's going on here!"came an angry man's voice charging though the room. Richard and everyone else turned to see chief Irons staring at the group of people as if he were ready to pounce. ''I have ******** jornalists and reporters digging up my a**, and your celebrating instead of finding me something to tell them."Irons trudged around the room angrily and finally saw Richard. ''Oh, so this is the new fellow?'' Irons walked over to Richard and extended his hand, Richard clutched his firm grip into his. ''Nice to meet you Richard, now get to work,''and with that Irons stomped out of the room before Richard could answer. ''Alrighty,''said Ryman as he grabbed a paper cone hat off of Richard's desk and put it on. ''Guess it's time to get serious.'' Richard couldn't help but laugh at how rediculous it looked on him. You've got good handle on your grammer. The only problem I see is that you cannot RP as so many people. Keep it down to just what you're character's doing. Other than that, it's fine. Captain A. Wesker
R.P.D. Building
Main HallAnother day that seemed like the ones before awaited Albert Wesker. He had just returned to the RPD building after being sent out to handle a gang dispute that looked like the early stages of a full blown gang war. The situation had been placed under control quite easily however thanks to I clear strategy devised by him. Now he was back at HQ where he simply wanted to spend the day behind his desk, then leave in peace, however peace was not what he found. What is this?... Wesker asked himself as he saw more activity than usual. Then it quickly hit him. There was suppose to be a new rookie arriving today to join the force, or so he had heard from someone. Wesker took a look to see who this rookie was. It didn't take long for him to see there was nothing rather special looking about him. Good luck to however gets assigned with him...
Location: R.P.D.
Offices It had been only three days since he had joined the police force, and he was already knee deep in paper work.Richard sat at his desk staring at the stack of paper work not really sure where to start. Jean and Andy had told Richard that all new officers were done this way and that it would blow over. Richard suspected differently, but didn't argue. With a sigh Richard began doing what he would be doing all day.
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 9:39 am
IamRichardAiken The Darc Knight IamRichardAiken New Recruit Richard Aiken First Post
Location:R.P.D.
Offices ''Surprise!'' Richard felt like the new kid in a classroom full of students. He was stunned and couldn't move an inch. ''H-hi,''he mannaged to choke out. ''Aww, he's shy,''came a women's voice from within the herd of people all focused on him. A blur passed in the corner of his eye and before he knew it he was off his feet and being pat on the back. He gasped at the sudden shift of movement. ''Making friends, Ryman,'' came the women's voice again. Richard was sat down and patted off. He caught his first glimpse of the person who had lifted him into the air. He was a man that looked like he was in his late twenties or mid-twenties. He had long, straight hair and a little bit of muzzle; wearing a R.P.D. official issued uniform. ''Nice to meet you man,'' Ryman said with a smile. ''My pleasure,'' Richard said with the hint that he was a little shaken. Richard turned to look at the woman who already had her eyes on him with a big smile stretched accross her face. She was a peite woman with short blond hair and a curious accent. She hugged him as well. ''Hey,I'm Rita. Would you like me to show you to your desk?'' Richard looked around the cramped, unorganized office area and found his desk covered in several knick knacks and trinkets. Obviously my desk. Richard said yes anyway and they started for his desk. ''Me and Kevin like to make sure the newbies' feel welcomed,'' she let out a giggle. Right...,Richard thought. ''By the way, have you met Mavin yet?''she asked. ''Yeah, we met in the lobby.'' "What the hell's going on here!"came an angry man's voice charging though the room. Richard and everyone else turned to see chief Irons staring at the group of people as if he were ready to pounce. ''I have ******** jornalists and reporters digging up my a**, and your celebrating instead of finding me something to tell them."Irons trudged around the room angrily and finally saw Richard. ''Oh, so this is the new fellow?'' Irons walked over to Richard and extended his hand, Richard clutched his firm grip into his. ''Nice to meet you Richard, now get to work,''and with that Irons stomped out of the room before Richard could answer. ''Alrighty,''said Ryman as he grabbed a paper cone hat off of Richard's desk and put it on. ''Guess it's time to get serious.'' Richard couldn't help but laugh at how rediculous it looked on him. You've got good handle on your grammer. The only problem I see is that you cannot RP as so many people. Keep it down to just what you're character's doing. Other than that, it's fine. Captain A. Wesker
R.P.D. Building
Main HallAnother day that seemed like the ones before awaited Albert Wesker. He had just returned to the RPD building after being sent out to handle a gang dispute that looked like the early stages of a full blown gang war. The situation had been placed under control quite easily however thanks to I clear strategy devised by him. Now he was back at HQ where he simply wanted to spend the day behind his desk, then leave in peace, however peace was not what he found. What is this?... Wesker asked himself as he saw more activity than usual. Then it quickly hit him. There was suppose to be a new rookie arriving today to join the force, or so he had heard from someone. Wesker took a look to see who this rookie was. It didn't take long for him to see there was nothing rather special looking about him. Good luck to however gets assigned with him...
Location: R.P.D.
Offices It had been only three days since he had joined the police force, and he was already knee deep in paper work.Richard sat at his desk staring at the stack of paper work not really sure where to start. Jean and Andy had told Richard that all new officers were done this way and that it would blow over. Richard suspected differently, but didn't argue. With a sigh Richard began doing what he would be doing all day. Seems good. It's always a good idea to have at least your character have one inner thought, and make sure your post are not shorter than this. IamRichardAiken HAS PASSED BOOT CAMP
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 6:19 pm
Smith home 1330 hours Classified location
Walther after had past on his home on a trance for 2 years, finaly came back and chossed to regain practice on guns and all he used to do but he knew what is 1st on the list "Join to the S.T.A.R.S. company... GOOD! NOW I CAN GO BACK TO MY ROOTS WITH THE POWER OF HAVE GUNS WITH ME LIKE ON THE MARINE FORCE" Walther said after cheecking that his bags and all he plan to carry were set on their places "Well once again I have to leave my home town" He said after remember that it was allmost his 1st time in a LONG time that he did this but now he changed, his arms, leggs and torso are bigger and filled with a red tribal tattoo of his bike man time and a new hair style but yet Walther was the same person that everyone heard of leading the revelion on a prision on Columbia 15 years ago. "Well I never stoped once and now this isnt the time to start to do that" he said while he started the engine of his car and depart to the airport, but as he leaved he looked everything like it was the last time he was going to be there.
*one week later*
"AH!!!! it fells better when you are close of your new partners!" Walther said after his was driving on his car to the HQ after set everything on his home "Well that email was really contundent of everything on the new STARS company".somehow he saw someone he knew who it was. Walther spoted a old comarade of the army lost long ago but now she was there and she looked good after been tortured and shooted on the field long ago, but them he saw her death at the hands of 2 gangsters. Walther jumped out his car with his Colt shooting the g's and killing one while he started to check on his partner but it was to late, she died right there.
*20 minutes later*
Walther after had get out the R.P.D. he returned on his travel to the STARS offices and after a long wait he was there standing on the entrance wodering how is everyone since he was a rockie and once he entered he saw lot of people and more but he walked to the drill instructor he saw a tall man named Albert Wesker as the drill instructor like he was told on the main desk, Walther put his game face and said "Walther Smith ready for duty sir. I hope this will be like I have in mind"
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 4:38 pm
Hunter Quesada Smith home 1330 hours Classified location Walther after had past on his home on a trance for 2 years, finaly came back and chossed to regain practice on guns and all he used to do but he knew what is 1st on the list "Join to the S.T.A.R.S. company... GOOD! NOW I CAN GO BACK TO MY ROOTS WITH THE POWER OF HAVE GUNS WITH ME LIKE ON THE MARINE FORCE" Walther said after cheecking that his bags and all he plan to carry were set on their places "Well once again I have to leave my home town" He said after remember that it was allmost his 1st time in a LONG time that he did this but now he changed, his arms, leggs and torso are bigger and filled with a red tribal tattoo of his bike man time and a new hair style but yet Walther was the same person that everyone heard of leading the revelion on a prision on Columbia 15 years ago. "Well I never stoped once and now this isnt the time to start to do that" he said while he started the engine of his car and depart to the airport, but as he leaved he looked everything like it was the last time he was going to be there.
*one week later*
"AH!!!! it fells better when you are close of your new partners!" Walther said after his was driving on his car to the HQ after set everything on his home "Well that email was really contundent of everything on the new STARS company".somehow he saw someone he knew who it was. Walther spoted a old comarade of the army lost long ago but now she was there and she looked good after been tortured and shooted on the field long ago, but them he saw her death at the hands of 2 gangsters. Walther jumped out his car with his Colt shooting the g's and killing one while he started to check on his partner but it was to late, she died right there.
*20 minutes later*
Walther after had get out the R.P.D. he returned on his travel to the STARS offices and after a long wait he was there standing on the entrance wodering how is everyone since he was a rockie and once he entered he saw lot of people and more but he walked to the drill instructor he saw a tall man named Albert Wesker as the drill instructor like he was told on the main desk, Walther put his game face and said "Walther Smith ready for duty sir. I hope this will be like I have in mind"You need to work on your spelling. You have a few mistakes like "revelion", "leggs", and "prision" You did well placing what your character says in "..." And a little reminder, you forgot to say your location like Mistor wanted it. I'll show you in my post. Captain Wesker, Albert
S.T.A.R.S. Office
Main deskAt the end of the rectangular and messy looking room sat a single desk separated from all others. Unlike the rest, this desk was well kept, clean, and was positioned so it looked at all the others from a position of authority. It reflected the man sitting there. He had dark sunglasses covering his eyes and a clean blue uniform shirt that had the STARS logo. After Walther Smith walked in and presented himself, Captain Wesker slowly turned to see him. "You would be the new rookie...Smith." Wesker extended his hand and grabbed a file at the dge of his desk and opened it to see all the information the RPD had on Walther Smith. He looked at some of the important items then closed it and looked at the young man again. "So, why do you want to be in STARS?"
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:08 pm
The Darc Knight Hunter Quesada Smith home 1330 hours Classified location Walther after had past on his home on a trance for 2 years, finaly came back and chossed to regain practice on guns and all he used to do but he knew what is 1st on the list "Join to the S.T.A.R.S. company... GOOD! NOW I CAN GO BACK TO MY ROOTS WITH THE POWER OF HAVE GUNS WITH ME LIKE ON THE MARINE FORCE" Walther said after cheecking that his bags and all he plan to carry were set on their places "Well once again I have to leave my home town" He said after remember that it was allmost his 1st time in a LONG time that he did this but now he changed, his arms, leggs and torso are bigger and filled with a red tribal tattoo of his bike man time and a new hair style but yet Walther was the same person that everyone heard of leading the revelion on a prision on Columbia 15 years ago. "Well I never stoped once and now this isnt the time to start to do that" he said while he started the engine of his car and depart to the airport, but as he leaved he looked everything like it was the last time he was going to be there.
*one week later*
"AH!!!! it fells better when you are close of your new partners!" Walther said after his was driving on his car to the HQ after set everything on his home "Well that email was really contundent of everything on the new STARS company".somehow he saw someone he knew who it was. Walther spoted a old comarade of the army lost long ago but now she was there and she looked good after been tortured and shooted on the field long ago, but them he saw her death at the hands of 2 gangsters. Walther jumped out his car with his Colt shooting the g's and killing one while he started to check on his partner but it was to late, she died right there.
*20 minutes later*
Walther after had get out the R.P.D. he returned on his travel to the STARS offices and after a long wait he was there standing on the entrance wodering how is everyone since he was a rockie and once he entered he saw lot of people and more but he walked to the drill instructor he saw a tall man named Albert Wesker as the drill instructor like he was told on the main desk, Walther put his game face and said "Walther Smith ready for duty sir. I hope this will be like I have in mind"You need to work on your spelling. You have a few mistakes like "revelion", "leggs", and "prision" You did well placing what your character says in "..." And a little reminder, you forgot to say your location like Mistor wanted it. I'll show you in my post. Captain Wesker, Albert
S.T.A.R.S. Office
Main deskAt the end of the rectangular and messy looking room sat a single desk separated from all others. Unlike the rest, this desk was well kept, clean, and was positioned so it looked at all the others from a position of authority. It reflected the man sitting there. He had dark sunglasses covering his eyes and a clean blue uniform shirt that had the STARS logo. After Walther Smith walked in and presented himself, Captain Wesker slowly turned to see him. "You would be the new rookie...Smith." Wesker extended his hand and grabbed a file at the dge of his desk and opened it to see all the information the RPD had on Walther Smith. He looked at some of the important items then closed it and looked at the young man again. "So, why do you want to be in STARS?"
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:24 pm
Hunter Quesada The Darc Knight Hunter Quesada Smith home 1330 hours Classified location Walther after had past on his home on a trance for 2 years, finaly came back and chossed to regain practice on guns and all he used to do but he knew what is 1st on the list "Join to the S.T.A.R.S. company... GOOD! NOW I CAN GO BACK TO MY ROOTS WITH THE POWER OF HAVE GUNS WITH ME LIKE ON THE MARINE FORCE" Walther said after cheecking that his bags and all he plan to carry were set on their places "Well once again I have to leave my home town" He said after remember that it was allmost his 1st time in a LONG time that he did this but now he changed, his arms, leggs and torso are bigger and filled with a red tribal tattoo of his bike man time and a new hair style but yet Walther was the same person that everyone heard of leading the revelion on a prision on Columbia 15 years ago. "Well I never stoped once and now this isnt the time to start to do that" he said while he started the engine of his car and depart to the airport, but as he leaved he looked everything like it was the last time he was going to be there.
*one week later*
"AH!!!! it fells better when you are close of your new partners!" Walther said after his was driving on his car to the HQ after set everything on his home "Well that email was really contundent of everything on the new STARS company".somehow he saw someone he knew who it was. Walther spoted a old comarade of the army lost long ago but now she was there and she looked good after been tortured and shooted on the field long ago, but them he saw her death at the hands of 2 gangsters. Walther jumped out his car with his Colt shooting the g's and killing one while he started to check on his partner but it was to late, she died right there.
*20 minutes later*
Walther after had get out the R.P.D. he returned on his travel to the STARS offices and after a long wait he was there standing on the entrance wodering how is everyone since he was a rockie and once he entered he saw lot of people and more but he walked to the drill instructor he saw a tall man named Albert Wesker as the drill instructor like he was told on the main desk, Walther put his game face and said "Walther Smith ready for duty sir. I hope this will be like I have in mind"You need to work on your spelling. You have a few mistakes like "revelion", "leggs", and "prision" You did well placing what your character says in "..." And a little reminder, you forgot to say your location like Mistor wanted it. I'll show you in my post. Captain Wesker, Albert
S.T.A.R.S. Office
Main deskAt the end of the rectangular and messy looking room sat a single desk separated from all others. Unlike the rest, this desk was well kept, clean, and was positioned so it looked at all the others from a position of authority. It reflected the man sitting there. He had dark sunglasses covering his eyes and a clean blue uniform shirt that had the STARS logo. After Walther Smith walked in and presented himself, Captain Wesker slowly turned to see him. "You would be the new rookie...Smith." Wesker extended his hand and grabbed a file at the dge of his desk and opened it to see all the information the RPD had on Walther Smith. He looked at some of the important items then closed it and looked at the young man again. "So, why do you want to be in STARS?" Wesker sat back down at his desk and went back to work on his documents. "Go report to Enrico Marini as well. He is second in command of STARS and will also want to know you have arrived." Marini was always more friendly than Wesker and the men and women of STARS preferred to talk with him when not on a mission. He probably wanted to meet the rookie and help him settle in. HUNTER QUESADA HAS PASSED BOOT CAMPMuch better. One last thing however: when your character speaks make it a differant color so it stands out.
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Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 12:18 pm
NEW RECRUIT, Brice York, FIRST POST New Recruit: Brice York
S.T.A.R.S.: Boot Camp
Location: Training Course.The ground was wet, damp, and unpleasant as Brice stood in the cool morning air, in his training shorts and shirt. "Darn it...Always has to be cold." Spoke Brice before he stood to attention as the captain directed the crew. There were six others that stood with Brice as the course was just starting, all of which would have to complete it to even become a hopeful for a seat with the S.T.A.R.S. Division of the R.P.D. As always Brice was never a fan of the rope climb, especially when he had to cross over a wall which stood in the way. Blisters still lined his hand when he took on the course just the other day, for the daily training, but this time, there was a deadline. A specific time he'd have to complete the course in order to not be forced to take on application for the department again; this was in fact his second time trying. The damp grass splashed cold dew on Brice's legs, sending chills up his body, he wasn't a fan of cold weather, and not of cold liquids either, he much preferred to take his sodas room temperature. 5 minutes 30 seconds was his time now. He had less than 3 minutes to complete the course in order to succeed this time around. Brice groaned and moaned as he gripped the final obstacles, the rope climb. After this it would just be a mad dash to the finish line. His blisters popped, exposing more of the fluids that laid dormant in the puffed skin, running down his hands and wrists as he continued to grip the rope. "Darn it Darn it Darn it!" You could hear him yell with each hand over hand movement he would take. 2 minutes 25 seconds left before time was out. " Not this Time!" Brice screamed to himself inside his head. Finally, Brice was over the wall, he wasn't gonna take his time to climb down it, He jumped from the tops of it, hitting the ground with a hard thump, as his knees bent in to absorb the shock. "This is it!" He let out of his breath as he rushed to the finish line. 2 minutes was all that was left on the clock, but it no longer mattered to him. Brice had made it to the finish line with time to spare. "Got'cha!" He said as he let out a sigh, laughing softly as he took in his breath, hunched over.
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