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The Alchemist and the Homunculus have been at war for thousand and thousands of year; now its your turn to join the fight. 

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Kieili

PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 5:32 pm


Jacquelyn Rose


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[Stand in Picture...property of Sugargrl14 on dA - real picture coming soon]

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Name: Jacquelyn Telliandryth Rose

Nickname: Jacky, JJ, Jacquelyn, Telli

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Birthdate: December 17th

Age: 18

Blood type: AB-

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Occupation: She shadows at a science facility, sometimes doing off jobs when they're needed.

Mode of Transportation: She walks when she can, otherwise takes public transportation.

Hobbies: Jacquelyn likes to read and learn, write, listen to a variety of music, travel, etc. She's always been a know-it-all, smarter than the teacher type. She is fascinated by fire, often burning herself by being unable to resist the urge to touch it.

Motto: "To do what you know you shouldn't only shows your lack of intelligence."

Appearance: Jacquelyn is an incredibly pale girl; one would think she'd never seen the sun. Her dirty blonde hair is usually styled simply, and she often wears her lips red, with a very faint color of orange around her eyes to help her intense blue-gray eyes stand out their fullest. The rose - her favorite flower - always makes an appearance with her. Whether it's a pattern on her clothes, a pin in her hair, or a real rose in her fingers, it's there. Being a fan of the finer things in life, many times beads and jewels are a garnish to her outfits, along with the most expensive scents; many times Sandalwood, and sometimes Patchouli.

Personality: Jacquelyn is a pretty quiet girl, usually keeping to herself and her books. None know it, but she has a deep love for herself and her beauty. Her vanity is the worst quality of hers. Still, she longs for a good friends to have deep and detailed discussions with; someone who shares her passion for knowledge of the unknown, and - of course - history. History, interesting as it is all by itself, can give insight to the future, and the future technologies. She's got quite the temper, and small things easily set her off. Flirtation and romance is foreign to her, so in the rare occasion it happens she becomes quite uncomfortable in the situation. Entirely opposite from her expected character, Jacquelyn has an obsession of sorts of the old Victorian style. If it were up to her, everybody would dress and act as they had in the old times...but with the modern world around them.


Background: Jacquelyn was born in a coast-side town in New Jersey; her adolescent life filled with trips to the boardwalk for shopping and carnival games. As she grew older, those trips were enjoyable not for the fun of playing, but the fun of learning. Her brain whirred as she tried to figure out the mechanics of the Ferris Wheel; and what ingredients in a funnel cake reacted to make it so spongy. Often times she was called a nerd by those of her age, though her father was proud of her ingeniousness. Her mother, on the other hand, figured she should keep her curiosity contained and be more ladylike. She was often dressed in dresses, her hair piled in curls and a decorative umbrella to complete the old fashioned look. Such dress helped to form the love for the old she has now, though to many it seems to clash with the love for science she has.

At the blossoming age of 16, Jacquelyn tearfully wished her parents farewell as she went off to a science facility in a large city far from home to begin her career. Hoping that she could end up working as a scientist in the facility a short time after being there, she found two years later she was still following other around and doing odd janitorial jobs.



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Who you Fight for: The Alchemist

Rank: Warrior in Training

Team: None so far

Rival(s): Rival? Never!

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Kakugane Serial Number: XVI

Name of Primary Kakugane: Divine Rose

Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: The Divine Rose, when in use by Jacquelyn, brings the number 1.618 [Wonder why the serial number is 16?], the divine proportion (Phi), to life. It changes Jacquelyn into the most beautifully and perfectly proportioned human being, making her appear as a Goddess to others; perhaps even using it's magic to make them believe such. Dumbstruck by her amazing beauty, they fall under her influence, unable to resist her every request. Not controlled by her, but by their insatiable lust for her.

Image of your Buso Renkin:
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[Silver with a rose engraved on the back]

Other Equipment: Her books and knowledge =]

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Theme song: "Strangers Like Me" -Phil Collins
PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 5:49 pm


Nicely done, very nicely done. Oh, your picture links seem to be broken, and I like how the ability of your Buso Renkin fits with your character's personality, but before I approve, I just want to make sure I have the right understanding of her power.

You say that with her Divine Rose activated, she appears perfect to all. Does that those who look upon her fall subject to some sort of persuasiveness, like mind control? If so, that's pretty cool, but if not, then explain the effect some more.

NeoPaladinOfLight
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Kieili

PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 5:58 pm


Very good, sir. I edited the bit about her power - I hope it more clear now.

As for the image link, it doesn't appear broken to me O.o
PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 6:01 pm


Ah, then it must just be me. Okay. Well, I say this is good to go. Make your profile thread.

NeoPaladinOfLight
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Arimwen Fireax of Myrk
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 9:55 am


James Keoster


(I still need to find a good picture. Have now found one I liked, yet.)

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Name: James Vanwa Keoster

Nickname: Jimmy

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Birthdate: January 30

Age: 18

Blood type: A+

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Occupation: Collage Student, Kendo Sensei

Mode of Transportation: Bike

Hobbies: Reads, practices weapon work, and acts lazy

Motto: “Time to roll the dice”

Appearance: Long brown hair that goes down to his shoulders and covers his green eyes. Light fore-arm length scare on his right arm that goes the length of his fore-arm. He wears a white short sleeve shirt with a long sleeve dress shirt open over top of it along with a pair of jeans. He has no piercings, but does have a tattoo of a sword with a moon behind it and a star on one side of it on his left arm. He stands only about five four and had a piece of rope wrapped up into a make s**t belt for his practice sword. His kagome is always in his pocket.

Personality: James is your basic lazy person on the outer levels. He acts like he cares about nothing seems to be just gliding by in this world he was thrown into. This is just how he shows himself when he is training his students though he is strong wills, confident. He appears like no warrior could stand against him. He shows what people think he is and keeps his true feelings to himself. He always feels that he is not truly a part of the world, but makes everyone believe he is. Sometimes acting like an egoist is the only way to keep from breaking about.


Background: Born in Germany he learned English as well German from a young age. He did not know at the time, but his father was dappling with alchemy. Course, how could he know being at boarding school from the moment he was old enough to go to school. He was a B student all throughout his years in school. Bs in all classes, but Math where he barely seemed to make an effort and still aced the test. Two years ago well on winter holiday he learned that his dad had been working with the Alchemist, but dappling in the immortality as all alchemists at one time or another do. His father was killed, his mother crying, he himself was in shock at the fact his father had been killed with alchemy. He learned why and completely agreed. He took his dad’s Kagome and went after the alchemist warrior that had killed his father asking a bunch of questions about what he did and how he did it. He did not know the life he was getting himself into. He began his training then and somehow got transferred out to Japan where he began learning kendo. He has been in Tokyo for a year, speaks Japanese half way decent from the year of learning it first hand, but his kendo skills were top notch from the get go. So, he took up a part time job as a kendo sensei. He attends collage at the same time as a way to keep his identity hidden from enemies.


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Who you Fight for: The Alchemist

Rank: Warrior in Training

Team: [The which you have been assigned to you]

Rival(s):

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Kakugane Serial Number: 95
Name of Primary Kakugane: Malice Maker


Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: Appears to increase the speed of the users reaction time. It breaks the effects of confusion abilities on the user.

When Malice Maker hits its target and draws blood is it able to begin its secondary ability. The confusion effects all equally it causes them to go into a state where bright lights seems to flicker and weight seems to be increased giving Malice Marker’s name to be true to form. This state of confusion is stopped only once death is brought to the person or Malice Marker loses contact with its user (If he drops Malice Marker it breaks the connection.). James does not know how to use the secondary ability of Malice Maker, yet.

Image of your Buso Renkin: Malice Maker is a single hand double headed battle ax. With the words in Rune, “Malice is wonderful.” On one head and on the other, “Confusion is bliss.”


Other Equipment: Rope, practice sword, beef jerky, a bag of different type of dice, and a bottle of tea.

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Theme song: Through the Glass
PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:31 am


I like it. Looks good. Make your thread.

NeoPaladinOfLight
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:41 am


Sweet. Need to make some Malice!
PostPosted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 6:45 pm


Ok I updated my profile.

Tanis Mizu

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NeoPaladinOfLight
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 6:55 pm


Finally. Make your thread, pick a number from this list, and start role playing.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 10, 2009 8:32 pm


ok.

Tanis Mizu

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:58 am


Cedric Darkbright
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Name: Cedric Darkbright

Nickname: The Dark Spirit

Gender: Male

Race: Bear Homunculus

Birthdate: January 31

Age: 19

Blood type: A-

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Occupation: Librarian

Mode of Transportation: Motorcycle

Hobbies: Reading, writing, organizing books, other librariany thing.

Motto: "Anything in my way...is dead."

Appearance: See Picture. Cedric usually wear white cloaks and clothes for his wardrobe. his silver hair is spiked and he stands at 6 foot and one half inch.

Personality: Very quiet, not open to others, not outgoing, prefers to be isolated. A direct disciple of Morpheus, God of Dreams giving him the ability to make people fall asleep, or enter people's dreams.


Background: Cedric was born somewhere on a remote island off the coast of western Japan with his younger sister. Years later, she mysteriously became ill, hoping to find a cure, Cedric set out for Ginsei City and met a man named Tenma Kenzo. Trained in the art of Homunculus, Cedric was ready to fight the Alchemists. He believes that one humanoid Homunculus, (you know who he's talking about,) had killed his sister (Later named Adyson) while away, believed to be Tokushi Sarin. Kenzo then told him he could teach him how to revive his sister and get his revenge on the one who caused the murder.


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Who you Fight for: Homunculus

Rank: Epsilon

Team: N/A

Rival(s): Ryoka Minuet, Tokushi Sarin

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Image of your True Humunculus Form:
http://i445.photobucket.com/albums/qq179/NishPrincess/pbsnag2.jpg
A giant White Kermode also called 'The Spirit Bear' enabling Cedric to enter others dreams and screw up the victims minds.


Other Equipment: Communication crystal, Magnetic Gloves, a Typewriter, and Messenger bag containing incantations of slumber spells.

Current Whereabouts: Aomori, Japan. Scouting Mission, and Intelligence gathering.
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Theme song: Pages by 3 Doors Down
PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:00 am


Still say you should have used this one, baby brother! <3



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Anko Masaki

PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:07 pm


Karei Futari

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Name: Karei Futari

Nickname: Birdy, Fuu,

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Birthdate: July 29

Age: 18

Blood type: O+

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Occupation: Student

Mode of Transportation: Walking, the bus and friends

Hobbies: Shopping, Traveling, dancing, and parties

Motto: "Haha, come on and dance with me."

Appearance: Karei has long black hair and stands at
5'7" 1/2 inches. She is usually seen in skirts with stockings and if not is either leggings and short shorts or sweatpants. She has two piercings on both of her ears. Also with two necklaces. She has one arms warmer which she wears on her right arm and a glove which she wears on her left. She also has a spiked wristband and arm bang that she also wears. She also has a choker and a locket with a chain that she keeps wrapped around her arm.

Personality: Her personality some may consider strange. Most of the time she is silent and shy. But in other cases she can be loud and sometimes obnoxious but hardly no one ever sees that side of her because she always seems to keep that side of her hided no matter how she may feel inside.


Background: Karei had a pretty average childhood. She had alot of friends growing up, but never really chased after people to be her friend. She had two childhood friends who she considered to be like her sisters. Those two girls are the only two who she manged to keep in touch with from her childhood everyone else seemed to vanished. She grew up with a Puerto Rican mother and an Japanese father so she was able to speak a little bit of both languages. She lived in Puerto Rico with both of her parents until she was 9. At nine her mother and father bought a house in Japan and told her that she was going to move there after she graduated middle school.

After she graduated the her father and mother told her about a few dangers in Japan and gave her the number of on of there close friends. It was a long flight to Japan and on the plane she made a friend, a young flight attendant who toke her out and showed her around the city that she was going to live in. He seemed to mention a lot about large monsters that attacked the city of Ginsei a few years back. She couldn't help, but be interested in the monsters and after finding a job in a High end clothing store and starting in Ginsei high began to look up the monsters. This soon ended up getting her into the Alchemist ranks.


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Who you Fight for: The Alchemist

Rank: Warrior in Training

Team: [N/A]

Rival(s):

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Kakugane Serial Number: XI

Name of Primary Kakugane: Buso Renkin: Sun Of Japan

Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: Her blade lets of an extremely high ray of light that temporarily blinds her enemy. The light can't blind her though. The blindness last for 15 to 30 seconds if shot quickly. If the light is given a medium amount of time to charged it could blind an enemy from any where from 30 to 60 seconds, but while she charges she is completely defenseless. She never tried to completely charge the beam so if she does the effects are unknown. She can also control who her light effects, allowing her to blind enemies and make a quick get away or attack whatever she wants to do. If focused long enough the light can also be used as a beam of energy, kind of like a laser beam, but because of the stress of firing it after she passed out.

Image of your Buso Renkin:

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Other Equipment:

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Theme song: PAPERMOON by Tommy Heavenly6
PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:36 pm


@Anko: Another character with a katana with the special ability of light? That's cool. (I should know, since my character's just like it.) I don't know. Well, the profile's nicely done. You have a few grammatical errors, but all an' all, it's good. I'm not really sure I want to approve this, though, simply because of the Buso Renkin ability. I mean, it's not a bad ability, but the fact that there's a character with that exact same thing makes me wanna say no.

Tell you what, if you can revise that ability by adding a bit more detail to it, but also variating it a bit, like adding some creativity to it (what can the light do, does it have any effect on people other than, or in addition to blindness, etc.), then you can keep it. Expand upon it.

If not, then just change it altogether.

@Seizurifying: You're profile's decent. I'd of liked it if you actually added a description to the appearance. (It's one thing to look at a picture, it's another to create an image in your head.) But other than that, it's decent. So you're approved. Make your thread, and get to role playing.

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Anko Masaki

PostPosted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:18 pm


I just edited it.
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