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D-4mation

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PostPosted: Sun May 09, 2010 8:07 am


no problem dear, hope my anatomy isn`t odd D:
PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2010 9:01 am


guess My lazyness makes this thread a little ... not good looking .
will try to fix everythinfg XD

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PostPosted: Thu May 13, 2010 2:12 pm


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PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 5:27 am


You draw very large buttocks on your men, Smiley xD I'm 6'4 and my a** is nowhere near that large. Though maybe it's because I have really narrow hips.. Still, Jesse doesn't have a butt like that either, but your style is more Romanesque with the large muscular gladiator asses and stuff XD.

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PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 5:45 am


I know dju!!!! I know D:, and I need a "butt studio" - more practice, is just like O_O
guys doesn`t have "big a**" I should know that XD - but I keep drawing baloons XDD

P: but that means more practice or - lt`s say to strat practicing wi!!! in 4 hours I will strat >w<.

oh! narrows hips *~*, must work that as well P:
and gladiatooooooors *¬*.
PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 1:25 am


I would post a picture of Jesse's a** for reference but he probably wouldn't like that very much rofl He has a square, muscular butt lol Kind of like this. I think it's more like.. with a guy's butt, they don't have the v-shaped cleft between the cheeks at the top, that's sort of common on a woman's butt because there's more fat? *ducks* XD But yeah, some key differences like that.

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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 8:40 pm


lol you should,
naa! xp

true true, no v shape P:, I should just turned around and just see my brother - he is 1,84m and thin, so have basically a normal butt, guess he wouldn`t "show" his butt if I asked him ...maybe a little "weird" view first and "ah'! O___o?!... ok" but naa! is true normal butt, and it variates depending on teh hip - none- structre as well D:

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PostPosted: Mon May 17, 2010 10:16 pm


*cough* I don't know D-4mation, I've dated men who had a thin build, fairly normal sized hips, but big 'ole butts. xD

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:45 pm


there must be rose...

THERE ARE indeed

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:25 pm


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okis ... looks like the thread - fist post isn`t "atractivo" P:
will try to fix it O3O!

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 2:43 pm


Hullo again.
I come to you for anatomy help once more.
/bows
I've been trying to fix the neck and shoulders area, but I just can't figure out why it looks so strange.
Red line my sketch if possible?
If you need to change the posture or body shape, go right ahead.
Sketch here
PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:56 pm


It doesn't look too strange to me. I think possibly his shoulders are a bit too narrow for his chest... Gimme a sec and I'll red-line it. I warn you though, male anatomy is not my strong point.


EDIT: Here ye go.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:35 pm


Caustic sugar: Just under an hour is pretty good time for painting of that quality. That being said you asked for some critique with your red line, so I provided a red line of my own and some advice from my perspective. I think a lot of where your problem is concentrated is in body proportions.

His torso is about the right width and length, it seems to me like the shoulders are just a bit too narrow (making them look more feminine then masculine,) And the legs need to be just a touch longer/ thicker. Even a very slim boy/man has a bit of blocky thickness to him, which is an area where I always have trouble when drawing men. I personally like to add a bit of thickness to the upper thighs, and the calves as well, since guys tend to have more highly developed muscle mass in those areas then ladies do, or at the very least its more prominent. I'm definitely no expert on male anatomy though, so any advice I give you is purely from my own observation and personal preferences.

I've gathered a lot of good tutorials and references over the years though. Deviantart is an awesome source for male models of all shapes and sizes.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:52 am


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I dont have my tablet right novv so I cannot redline this, but I can tell you that his left leg should be pointed more tovvards the vievver from that angle (like his foot too xD) based on the hip angle ^^











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[ x ] ;; hi guys i have terrible anatomy it looks kinda/alot off ; x ;
so i was wondering whether someone could red-line the image on the left ; w ;
any suggestions or critiques would be very good ♥
mnhhhhh it took just under an hour to get to what im upto
out of curiousity is that fast or slow?
uhhh i used sai and a mouse





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PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:54 am


Loki Seiji
i'm having issues with the viewers left side leg, it just looks wonky to me. any other suggestions will also be appreciated.User Image


one thing to remember is that humans have a glob of muscle just under their knees on the underside of their legs. It starts sort of biggish and then shapes dovvnvvards, becomming evenned out near the bottom-middleish of the leg. In the red line I give, vvhich I did all crappy like in ms paint vvith my mouse (lul), I demonstrated that >.> And the little - marks on the lines are joint locations, or parts vvhere th body moves differently.
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