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I'm not really fond of the painting. The background detail is great, but the facial and upper torso anatomy is too detracting and it just doesn't fit in with the delicacy. Instead, you should've just used colour to contrast from the background instead of thickblocky lines, and flat bold colours. There's a lot of problem spaces as well ; the horns do not curve and suddenly change direction, and it doesn't make sense; as well as under the nose where it looks like she has protruding skin instead of an indent.

As for your inked stuff, the poses are far too, unbalanced. It looks like their legs are swaying or unnaturally curved.
Both their faces are extremely similar as well, and I don't think those extra spaces between her legs and such help.
The blue drawing is okay, but looks far too much like you (unless that was what you were going for).

BAR MAID SKETCH...


added some more defining features and craep
Gotta fix her pig nose lol

TITS AND VAGAYGAY WATCH OUT OH NOES...

A demon concept for a painting I'm gonna do for my adv. illustration class.
She doesn't have a name atm. *_*




Er... not sure if it's all safe to have the image shown so there// gonk
The pose is really cool, if you see any anatomical issues I can't see please tell meeeeeee!
I'm thinking about adding some n****e piercings and sewing up her v****a lips. Hmm....

Ok ok I'll leave her lower lips cleanly shaven. xD What about the n****e piercings? Would that be a little too much? gonk

I know I wasn't going to give her stitches but in the end it turned out like that but I like how it looks. x_x
I'll get a better pictures, my camera sucks. D: