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It's still denied, all you did was stop saying that the energy was Holy energy, not that it was something else. And I don't mean burned - I mean, if your Shadowknight RPC had this energy, HIS HAND WOULD NO LONGER BE THERE. Also, your Weaknesses do NOT match this ability at all.

RPC Name:Steven Deschain
Rank:Trainee
Bloodline & Class:Cursed SOul/Gunslinger
Talent Description:It allows him to shoot, reload, shoot again with a revolver in the same post.
Talent Weakness:
-Can't learn any melee/hand to hand style
-Can't use any type of pistol(excluding revolver of course)
How did the character get this talent?:Over the years as being a Cursed Soul, he mastered the art of reloading
Sample:

Oh...s**t forgot about the sample


In front of Steven there was a mob of about forty-eight people. Almost all of the people in the small town of Shi. Each of them had some sort of crude weapon. No one was heavily armed. In the middle of them there was a cross with his lover tied to it. She was naked and her blood was all down her chest, they had cut her throat.

The first of the mod ran at Steven and he killed him. This caused a mass uproar and everyone started to attack. He shot, and killed eleven people before the first "click" of an empty gun came. With icredible speed, Steven dumped out the empty shells, and reloaded. There was the smell of burning skin as neat circular shaped burns were made in his skin. They would replace the callous they just burnt off. He then started to kill some more. He emptied the revolvers again.

Steven started to reload, but was hit in the right arm with a piece of stove-wood that had a nail sticking out of it. Once he loaded his guns for the last time, he killed the last of the people. He had been walking backwards without realizing it. He followed the trail of death to where the cross was. He then shot his lover down and started to pile the bodies up. It was about midnight when he was done. Steven then set fire the the bodies and went inside his lover's house. He ate some food and then went to sleep. He would move on tomorrow.


How's that?

((48 bullets used))

RPC Name: Haruki Zetsu
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Kiranu Berserker
Talent Description: Basically, Haruki will be able to use berserker, paladin, and a couple of weapon skills. Nothing fancy, just these three. A small upside is that sense evil is always active with zero cost.
Talent Weakness: Haruki is untrained in arts of light but can feel darkness at an increased force and is damaged by darkness a rank more from his amazingly sensitive body. Not only that, but the sword and shield slow him down and lower his strength since he isn't using just his hands any more. Haruki's strength goes from ten to eight while his speed goes from ten to seven from the heavy armor. After forsaking the sole ways of the berserker, all attacks from this are decreased by one rank, abilities that affect Haruki are not changed. Also, skills already at E will not change either. Paladin abilities cost twice as much energy wise. Haruki will only be able to learn two hand-to-hand styles and one weapon style.
How did the character get this talent?: After feeling darkness on his body, Haruki gained an innate sense to it and wanted to become a paladin. Taking up a sword a shield was near impossible for the boy, though he was able to do so eventually. It hindered his ability to fight on increased terms against anyone else, but he learned to battle undead and the like. Only from intense training could Haruki, a berserker, become a knight of light. That's how he got his talent, or hinderance depending on how you look at it.
Sample: Haruki sat in complete and utter silence, meditating for the coming battle, his armor would not protect his hands, face, or anywhere unarmored for the sole purpose of using skills. Activating his iron form, Haruki stood before the coming army of undead. He was an impossible combination, a berserker and a paladin together did not mix, but he needed to borrow their power. The thing was, he wore the armor only to fit the part, but it slowed him down and made punching harder. "I could sense your coming evil!" Haruki shouted, drawing sword and shield. "Taste my blade and return to the hell which spawned you!" Charging in alone, the ground began to burn as Haruki led a solo against the forces of evil. Jumping over them with his still agile frame, he stood on top of their heads, praying for the power to smite these filthy beings. Soon after, it began to rain, burning and large portion of the army, but leaving Haruki breatheless, he was starting to feel the ill effects of having to use so much energy. Suddenly a dark blast hit him, marring his armor, he was glad it didn't hit him. Rasing his shiled to defend against physical blows, Haruki vowed he woldn't die until this army was wiped out. He was right.

If this isn't approved, I swear I'll add the weakness that my Kiranu is allergic to cats stare

Aww...dammit!

Freakin' berserkers bein' useless...for Rp purposes I suppose I will forget about this *facepalm*

Hmm, knights are kinda lackluster, no?

Eh, I'll try it, I just thought a viable story and weakness would work stare
Freakin' logic...always ruinin' my fun...

Because...

ken: Accepted