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 Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2012 2:36 pm
Niajhay U/c  Name of weapon: kurikara Who owns the weapon: Me(niajhay) Where it was found/Who made it: It was found with niajhay when his adopted parents found him. The Range of the weapon: Close-medium Weakness: If a D-rank water jutsu touched this it would douse the fire completely, and it would take D-rank chakra to reactivate it. Description: The sword take the appearance of a long blue normal katana,when un-sheathed the user only needs to activate katon d ranked chakra into the sword for it to set a flame the flames take a blue colour to it and the user
Sorry about this man, you were definitely within your rights to PM me! In any case, this is definitely APPROVED. I won't keep you waiting next time, promise!.
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:00 pm
Name of weapon: Disposable Mini-Numbing Spikes (Numbing Spikes)
Who owns the weapon: Gage Urashimi
Who made it: Gage made this weapon when he had some free time in the Mist Village. It is made out of tips of old broken kunia dipped in an organic numbing ooze. Gage can only carry ten at a time.
The Range of the weapon: Close Range
Weakness: The small spike has to be placed on the opponent by direct contact. A Hand Shake, a hand on the shoulder, or a pat on the back would be examples of how a spike could be used
Description: The Numbing spike is simply a tiny spike that can be attached to a glove. It has a flat square that is sticky on both sides for the spike to stick to the glove. The adhesive is thin and if the spike gets stuck in can easily be removed. The spikes, in order to be effective, will be used by connecting them to the seemingly endless supply of razor wire Gage has that will allow him to throw kunia at his opponent and the projectile will follow the person, completely stumping genin. Chuunin catch on around the seven post mark while Jonin catch on at the five and anyone above catches on after about one or two post.
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:02 pm
-X Duo Yiro X- Name of weapon: Disposable Mini-Numbing Spikes (Numbing Spikes) Who owns the weapon: Gage Urashimi Who made it: Gage made this weapon when he had some free time in the Mist Village. It is made out of tips of old broken kunia dipped in an organic numbing ooze. Gage can only carry ten at a time. The Range of the weapon: Close Range Weakness: The small spike has to be placed on the opponent by direct contact. A Hand Shake, a hand on the shoulder, or a pat on the back would be examples of how a spike could be used Description: The Numbing spike is simply a tiny spike that can be attached to a glove. It has a flat square that is sticky on both sides for the spike to stick to the glove. The adhesive is thin and if the spike gets stuck in can easily be removed. The spikes, in order to be effective, will be used by connecting them to the seemingly endless supply of razor wire Gage has that will allow him to throw kunia at his opponent and the projectile will follow the person, completely stumping genin. Chuunin catch on around the seven post mark while Jonin catch on at the five and anyone above catches on after about one or two post.
Hmmm... Just a few things.
One is,could you separate what the broken piece of metal does?
Two, how long does the wire extend from the user?
Three, I don't really like the ejection system much. Not the ejection portion but the fact that it can follow the person. Even if the projectile manipulation jutsu, it has a limit to how far it can be manipulated. Lower the degree of it being able to move and I think it'll be fine. ^^
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:30 pm
1.) It holds the wire in place 2.) How ever long you want it to be, or in reality depends on how wire you carry. 3.) That would ruin the whole point of the spike. The spike is there to connect the wire which the kunai follows. There is no chakra involved. It's simply a weapon. There is no manipulation involved unless you put chakra into your wires. Edited
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:54 pm
That was a phone post.... Very bad one
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:13 pm
@Duo: If anything, I believe that these small numbing spikes would only affect the area struck. They seem too small to utterly dispatch a genin or anyone really. Quite frankly you're giving the weapon little credit. A poison of sorts (which is what I'm seeing this as since it does require entry into the system) does not decrease in potency simply because you are a better shinobi. Shinobi with medical jutsu as well as assassin profession shinobi would be able to rid themselves of what's happening, but I want you to give it an overall post count for how long it lasts. Also, how is this projectile following people without using chakra? I'm a bit confused with parts of this description, so please go into more detail with this before I officially weigh in with an answer.
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 9:53 pm
Luo1304 @Duo: If anything, I believe that these small numbing spikes would only affect the area struck. They seem too small to utterly dispatch a genin or anyone really. Quite frankly you're giving the weapon little credit. A poison of sorts (which is what I'm seeing this as since it does require entry into the system) does not decrease in potency simply because you are a better shinobi. Shinobi with medical jutsu as well as assassin profession shinobi would be able to rid themselves of what's happening, but I want you to give it an overall post count for how long it lasts. Also, how is this projectile following people without using chakra? I'm a bit confused with parts of this description, so please go into more detail with this before I officially weigh in with an answer. Oh that's why everyone is confused. The spike itself has no real use but to hold the wire in place without the oponent knowing. I called it numbing becuase I'm lost for a better word. The spike does nothing, has no real potential, its just numbed so the opponent can't feel it when its injected. The kunai have holes on the end of them, by stringing the wire through it, it'll follow the path of the wire to the opponent. That's why I gave it a detection system. Does this help? It's the same type of weapon used by the Varia Storm in Hitmam Reborn.
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 11:26 pm
-X Duo Yiro X- Name of weapon: Disposable Mini-Numbing Spikes (Numbing Spikes) Who owns the weapon: Gage Urashimi Who made it: Gage made this weapon when he had some free time in the Mist Village. It is made out of tips of old broken kunia dipped in an organic numbing ooze. Gage can only carry ten at a time. The Range of the weapon: Close Range Weakness: The small spike has to be placed on the opponent by direct contact. A Hand Shake, a hand on the shoulder, or a pat on the back would be examples of how a spike could be used Description: The Numbing spike is simply a tiny spike that can be attached to a glove. It has a flat square that is sticky on both sides for the spike to stick to the glove. It has no use on its own. In other words, it's completely useless unless you use it in conjuction with something connected to it. The only real use it has is the fact that it can be injected into an opponent without them knowing. Genin usually begin to feel the pain at 20 post, Chuunin 10, Jonin 6, Sanin+ 2. However if the spike is used in Conjunction with a weapon of somesort, the realization count is halved. I removed the part about the wires and kunai, simply because it has nothing to do with the weapon.
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Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:06 pm
@Duo: To make this clear you should edit "Genin usually begin to feel the pain" to, "The numbing effect lasts for......" Not only that, but 20 posts is a little ridiculous. Let's go Genin 10, Chuunin 8, Jounin 5, Sannin+ 3.
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Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:36 pm
Luo1304 @Duo: To make this clear you should edit "Genin usually begin to feel the pain" to, "The numbing effect lasts for......" Not only that, but 20 posts is a little ridiculous. Let's go Genin 10, Chuunin 8, Jounin 5, Sannin+ 3. The numbers where high because I never planned to use of without wires and what not. So ill change it to that then, but can I leave it at the same amount for when it is connected to something?
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2012 9:37 pm
-X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 @Duo: To make this clear you should edit "Genin usually begin to feel the pain" to, "The numbing effect lasts for......" Not only that, but 20 posts is a little ridiculous. Let's go Genin 10, Chuunin 8, Jounin 5, Sannin+ 3. The numbers where high because I never planned to use of without wires and what not. So ill change it to that then, but can I leave it at the same amount for when it is connected to something? Definitely not. I don't see how putting these things on anything would increase their potency. Are you talking about something that would cause more than one to puncture an area of the body at once?
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 6:58 am
Luo1304 -X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 @Duo: To make this clear you should edit "Genin usually begin to feel the pain" to, "The numbing effect lasts for......" Not only that, but 20 posts is a little ridiculous. Let's go Genin 10, Chuunin 8, Jounin 5, Sannin+ 3. The numbers where high because I never planned to use of without wires and what not. So ill change it to that then, but can I leave it at the same amount for when it is connected to something? Definitely not. I don't see how putting these things on anything would increase their potency. Are you talking about something that would cause more than one to puncture an area of the body at once? nothing can increase the potency. The 20 posts was when nothing was connected to it. I dropped it to 10 post because the wires will rub raw the area that they are connected to. Connecting something decreases the potency.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 1:35 pm
-X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 -X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 @Duo: To make this clear you should edit "Genin usually begin to feel the pain" to, "The numbing effect lasts for......" Not only that, but 20 posts is a little ridiculous. Let's go Genin 10, Chuunin 8, Jounin 5, Sannin+ 3. The numbers where high because I never planned to use of without wires and what not. So ill change it to that then, but can I leave it at the same amount for when it is connected to something? Definitely not. I don't see how putting these things on anything would increase their potency. Are you talking about something that would cause more than one to puncture an area of the body at once? nothing can increase the potency. The 20 posts was when nothing was connected to it. I dropped it to 10 post because the wires will rub raw the area that they are connected to. Connecting something decreases the potency. What I am saying, is that in either situation, their is no way this weapon is going to disable someone's limb for 20 posts at a time period. There isn't a genin fight to this date in this guild that has lasted twenty posts from either side. I'm going to stand by what I said previously and further make it clear that multiple spikes will not increase the duration of the effect on an affected area. Adding them to wire or something to make an attempt at debilitating multiple limbs in one shot is fine with me, however the post counts I've given to them are final.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 1:25 am
Luo1304 -X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 -X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 @Duo: To make this clear you should edit "Genin usually begin to feel the pain" to, "The numbing effect lasts for......" Not only that, but 20 posts is a little ridiculous. Let's go Genin 10, Chuunin 8, Jounin 5, Sannin+ 3. The numbers where high because I never planned to use of without wires and what not. So ill change it to that then, but can I leave it at the same amount for when it is connected to something? Definitely not. I don't see how putting these things on anything would increase their potency. Are you talking about something that would cause more than one to puncture an area of the body at once? nothing can increase the potency. The 20 posts was when nothing was connected to it. I dropped it to 10 post because the wires will rub raw the area that they are connected to. Connecting something decreases the potency. What I am saying, is that in either situation, their is no way this weapon is going to disable someone's limb for 20 posts at a time period. There isn't a genin fight to this date in this guild that has lasted twenty posts from either side. I'm going to stand by what I said previously and further make it clear that multiple spikes will not increase the duration of the effect on an affected area. Adding them to wire or something to make an attempt at debilitating multiple limbs in one shot is fine with me, however the post counts I've given to them are final. I'm fine with the post count. I would like to point out that the spike is completely inert. The only good thing about it is it's ability to be injected without detection. It does not disable limbs, which was the reason for the insanely large post count. Besides that the post count wasn't based of a genin v genin, it was something I put a ton of thought into. Nevertheless, my final question, now that everything seems clear. Do I need to decrease the amount of post required before the opponent realizes the spike is there, when its connected to wire. Also, I would like to point out that I will actually upgrade this weapon as I rise through the ranks. I'll add that to it after I sort through this final issue. Sorry for it being so unclear, I guess I'm not being descriptive enough.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 2:00 am
-X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 -X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 -X Duo Yiro X- Luo1304 @Duo: To make this clear you should edit "Genin usually begin to feel the pain" to, "The numbing effect lasts for......" Not only that, but 20 posts is a little ridiculous. Let's go Genin 10, Chuunin 8, Jounin 5, Sannin+ 3. The numbers where high because I never planned to use of without wires and what not. So ill change it to that then, but can I leave it at the same amount for when it is connected to something? Definitely not. I don't see how putting these things on anything would increase their potency. Are you talking about something that would cause more than one to puncture an area of the body at once? nothing can increase the potency. The 20 posts was when nothing was connected to it. I dropped it to 10 post because the wires will rub raw the area that they are connected to. Connecting something decreases the potency. What I am saying, is that in either situation, their is no way this weapon is going to disable someone's limb for 20 posts at a time period. There isn't a genin fight to this date in this guild that has lasted twenty posts from either side. I'm going to stand by what I said previously and further make it clear that multiple spikes will not increase the duration of the effect on an affected area. Adding them to wire or something to make an attempt at debilitating multiple limbs in one shot is fine with me, however the post counts I've given to them are final. I'm fine with the post count. I would like to point out that the spike is completely inert. The only good thing about it is it's ability to be injected without detection. It does not disable limbs, which was the reason for the insanely large post count. Besides that the post count wasn't based of a genin v genin, it was something I put a ton of thought into. Nevertheless, my final question, now that everything seems clear. Do I need to decrease the amount of post required before the opponent realizes the spike is there, when its connected to wire. Also, I would like to point out that I will actually upgrade this weapon as I rise through the ranks. I'll add that to it after I sort through this final issue. Sorry for it being so unclear, I guess I'm not being descriptive enough. PM me your thought process on the post count, as well as exactly how this works on wire. Because quite frankly, I don't see the difference in recognizing a spike or any number of spikes differing (other than of course the sheer multitude of how many you're using) being altered based on whether or not they are connected to wire. They way this has been described has been quite convoluted, especially for an idea that in essence seems pretty simple. So, PM me with a better description of this so I can truly sort this out without seeming to look at it at a glance and give you a judgement without fully understanding your concept; it seems rather unfair to do so. Once you give me a full description of this (please watch spelling and grammar errors so I can go through it quickly), we can sort this out and have you simply re-apply for it with a better handle on what this is intended to do exactly and incorporate the concept of hwo they are supposed to go undetected. Fair? -Side note, check my office in Kiri.
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