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PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:38 pm


Orchid Moon
*raises hand* Sorry for the ooc Hinote but I wanted to comment about the Five Element Seal. >.> Seal's require being a sealing master... Zetsu.. im sure your rpc is not a sealing master...

Agian sry Hinote


I never said that I was going to use the Technique. I'm just trying to get more jutsu, so someone doesn't have to spend a day with a crapload of scrolls to learn all the jutsu they can learn. More jutsu means more fun.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:49 pm


Because nobody seems to like going back through the pages to find out if they were approved or not, I'm putting this back up. NO MORE OOC.

Hinote Tosatsu
That was in fact about ALL CUSTOMS. And I will ask that no more be submitted after this point until further notice. Remember to add any guild wides that have been approved to the guild wide thread. It will help greatly in getting customs reopened faster.

Now, for those that have been waiting.

@Zin: Please PM whoever approved your custom gates to look over that one. I don't know enough about them to make a decision. And your massive sample scares me.

@Mage: Approved. I'd love to see that one opened up separate from your chain style though. hint hint.

@Hikaro: I'm going to put your Aburame jutsu on hold until the new system is in place. All of them might need to be tweaked, and it would be much easier to make the alterations with less jutsu already out there.

@Mistah: Are these armory jutsu for one of the clans based around weapons?

Change the Creation jutsus to all be one, with different ranks. Makes it far easier in the long run. I believe there is also a high level technique out there for controlling floating weapons, so that may need to be altered.

Not so sure on the kunai jutsu. It seems a bit overly powerful if you can fully control them like that.

Animal Transformation: Can you edit the description to more accurately show the limits of the technique? The way you have it shows the side benefit as being the main feature.

Do not post any more new jutsu after this point. Only post if I asked a question on your existing jutsu, and only the one that I asked about.

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iMistah-kun

PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:43 pm


Well the story with the armory jutsu is I was making a sage mode custom and Lance had judge it but he said I didn't have a contract so I couldn't use it but he did tell me that I could put some of the techniques into the custom jutsus. He help me with the techniques and told me what kind of limits they should all have and I followed them accordingly. Then he said to post it in the custom jutsus and I didn't have to do an RP sample. I don't really see the kunai technique as OP. When we have swarms of bugs that drain peoples power, nine demonic beast that pwn just about everything in sight, and huge summoned monsters that can swallow my character, a wave a flying kunai doesn't really seem like too much to ask for. I mean Amaterasu lets people get burned for seven days and nights. This attack wears off after a couple of posts and I have to use extra chakra to make them explode after I just sacrificed a load of chakra for its initial cost. But yeah I'm just saying there are a bunch of techniques which are very powerful as well but if you have any suggestions let me know. I could make it vulnerable against Fuuton techniques since that would make sense in a way. Though I don't think weak Fuuton attacks should do much to my technique since it is a high ranked jutsu.
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Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu: Ikimono Henkan- Animal Transformation
Rank of Jutsu: Listed in chart. ( # )
Description: This skill allows a Chiroku to transform one animal into another animal of a different species by touching it. The animal could try to resist the transformation but if it is severely weakened and more chakra is poured into the jutsu (minus an extra 5 Chakra Points) then the Chiroku could transform the animal. Though if the animal does not struggle then the Chiroku can transform the animal with ease. The Chiroku has to have used the Animal Telepathy jutsu and tasted the blood of a member of the species that it is changing and the species that it will change into. The Chiroku that is using this jutsu has a limit to the number of species it can use and we refer to this number as an animal data bank. Once a species has passed the requirements it is added to the users animal data bank.
-Chuunins can only have 5 species in their animal data bank.
-Jounins can only have 7 species in their animal data bank.
-Sannins can only have 10 species in their animal data bank.

# In addition to this, the Chiroku needs to also follow this chart for transforming animals.
E - Tiny animals. Insects, mice, moles.
D - Small animals. Cats, Dogs, Rabbits.
C - Average animals. Large dogs, monkeys, bear cubs.
B-A - Large animals. Lions, tigers, bears.
S - Massive animals. Elephant, rhino, grizzly.

*Note: an extra S-Rank chakra boost is needed to move them one slot up or down the grid.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:53 pm


Looks good now. Animal Transformation Approved.

As for the others, what I meant by OP on the kunai was the fact that it's a giant swarm of flying blades. You being able to direct them anywhere you want just seems that little bit OP. Not really super bad, just a tad extreme.

A weakness to fuuton would definitely be in order, as well as anything else capable of knocking them out of the sky.

If you've edited them, please repost so I can see them in the review panel.

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iMistah-kun

PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:21 pm


Name of Jutsu:
Armory Tech- Kunai Wave
Rank of Jutsu:
A Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo can create and manipulate a wave of a hundred kunai. He can control them with his chakra and they follow the direction his hands go. He can make them travel in waves, split them up, and even make some explode. Only ten may explode at one time and it costs one chakra point to make it explode. The speed of the wave is moderate. It travels just as fast as a chuunin ranked ninja. This jutsu has a weakness against Fuuton techniques and things with enough force to knock them out of the sky. The duration of this attack is 4 posts.

Name of Jutsu:
Armory Tech- Great Kunai Wave
Rank of Jutsu:
S Rank
Jutsu's Element
N/A
Description
Ukiyo can create and manipulate a wave of a thousand kunai. He can control them with his chakra and they follow the direction his hands go. He can make them travel in waves, split them up, and even make some explode. Only thirty may explode at one time and it costs one chakra point to make it explode. The speed of the wave is accelerated. It travels just as fast as a jounin ranked ninja. This jutsu has a weakness against powerful Fuuton techniques and things with enough force to knock them out of the sky. The duration of this attack is 6 posts.

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Added the wind and knock out of sky bit but umm...yeah I don't know what you want me to do with the being able to control it. It kinda is what makes the technique strong. If I don't explode the kunai then all I can do with the kunai is control where they go.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:28 pm


Alright, I think I'm going to go ahead and allow the A ranked one. The S-Rank seems just that little bit overly much. It's just the same attack, multiplied.

So, please add an RP sample to the A rank, just so I know what I'm really looking at. And because it sounds like something that could be pretty cool. And we'll go from there.

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iMistah-kun

PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:52 pm


Ukiyo exhaled as he spat out a low curse as he forcibly pull out one of his opponents kunai from his knee. The Raikage was right when she said not to underestimate the true power of this men wearing black cloaks with red clouds. This guy had an unbelievable amount of power and those damned completely white eyes of his. His taijutsu skills posed a huge problem for Ukiyo so he couldn't get close and he couldn't get far because he was somehow able to track him. That spinning move he did, deflected most of his projectile attacks. He needed to take him down and he needed to do it now. The man in the cloak was already weakened, he just had to put the nail in the coffin. Ukiyo quickly performed some handsigns as he kept his eyes on his opponent.

"Armory Tech- Kunai Wave!"


Ukiyo allowed chakra to flow out of his body as the chakra solidified into a hundred sharp and beautifully metallic kunai. Ukiyo held his hands in front of him as he prepared to eliminate his opponent who seemed to have a shocked and terrified countenance. "Lets see you out spin this!" Ukiyo move his hands flowing around like he was moving a wave like energy him. He pressed his hands up higher into the sky as the kunai flew up into the sky nearly blocking out the sun from his opponents vision as they rain down upon him. He began to spin, deflecting many of the kunai but not all. Three had pierced him in his arms, two in his stomach, another in his collar bone and four in his legs. The kunai seemed to injury the already beat down man. When the man in the black cloak looked back up Ukiyo was walking away with a slight limp having being very drained from using this technique. "You have been defeated..."

"Saikoro (Die)"


The kunai exploded, ripping the man's body apart and Ukiyo passed out from exhaustion.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:00 pm


Aw, I was hoping for something a little different. Anyways, it looks good. I'm going to say it's Approved.

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iMistah-kun

PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:53 pm


Yeah i didn't truly have much to work with, I hate RP'ing by myself xDD

So does that mean the rest of the jutsu are accepted as well?
PostPosted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 9:01 pm


Nu. You didn't repost the others. =.=

And I'm not really sure what to say on the creation jutsu anyways. Can you go to Lance or someone for them? Sorry.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:27 am


Your Rank: Academy Students

Name of Jutsu: Puppet Distraction

Rank of Jutsu: Chunin

Range of Jutsu: Visibility

Jutsu's Element: Universal

Description: After completing a short chain of handsigns, the Genjutsu begins and the opponent is surrounded by an orange hue and find themselves standing on a plateau. The puppet that was summoned by the jutsu-user earlier rises above the plateau and appears to be 100ft tall. A wide smile stretches across the puppet's face. The puppet begins to distract the opponent by swinging bladed arms at them (illusion).
All of this is used to distract the opponent in a Genjutsu while the puppet in reality gets closer to attack.


Rp Sample: Chikao (user) has been very unsuccessful in his normal attempts to get close enough with his puppet to attack. He casts the Genjutsu and uses it to distract the opponent. He pulls the chakra strings and his puppet lurches foward with blades aglory, by the time his opponent breaks the jutsu, it's too late.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:49 am


Denied. Read the bold red text at the top of the page.

Anyone posting new jutsu after this point, before the thread is reopened, will be denied.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:50 am


Thank you for your patience, the thread is open again.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 10:16 am


And to start things off, a few of my own!

Your Rank: Genin

Name of Jutsu: Sand Crafting
Rank of Jutsu: E
Jutsu's Element: Sand - Ichibi Only
Description: Basically the opposite of the inorganic sand conversion technique, the sand crafting technique allows the user to mold their sand into a desired shape, and solidify it. This can be used to form anything from a pot, to a leather strap. If it is used as the latter of course, it will still have the same consistency as sand, it just appears to be a strap, and can be used as one. Water or a solid impact will destroy anything made with this technique.

Rp Sample: Pending Necessity.

Name of Jutsu: Placebo Technique
Rank of Jutsu: E
Jutsu's Element: Universal (Guild Wide)
Description: A technique developed for use by medics on the battlefield, for the rather cruel use of tricking a person’s mind into thinking they had been healed. This technique is applied to whatever area the medic desires, and the effect varies according to the desire of the medic. While applying the technique, they will explain to the patient just what they are doing, and how they will feel afterwards, much like hypnotism. If the medic claims they are dulling the pain, the patient will feel as if their pain was dulled. If the medic claims to be injecting them with an acidic poison, the patient will feel as if they have been poisoned. This jutsu has no effect other than tricking the mind into feeling what you want it to feel, and thus is not recommended for use on actual threatening wounds, as it will do nothing. The jutsu has no effect if the patient knows what is being used, so the medic usually says the name of a different jutsu when using it.

Rp Sample: Pending Necessity.

Name of Jutsu: Advance Kawarimi
Rank of Jutsu: B
Jutsu's Element: Universal (Guild Wide)
Description: Much like the normal kawarimi technique, this moves your body out of sight of the enemy, and replaces it with something else. Unlike the normal technique, the replacement is created in the moment of the swap. The user creates a clone of their choice while they vanish, and the clone continues to fight as if nothing had happened, while the user is free to set up a surprise attack. ( Normal Bunshin can be used for free, while any other will cost the normal price on top of the cost of this technique. )

Rp Sample: Pending Necessity

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iAkura-kun

Prophet

PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:18 am


(( These are all guild wide ))

Your Rank: Gennin
Name of Jutsu: Doton: Shinmantoru Kurasuto sadou, Earth style: thin mantle crust movement ( Need swift earth )
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: 10 feet
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Description: The user places his hand on the floor and releases small " waves " of chakra that allow the user to move a thin crust of the earth at the users will.


Name of Jutsu: Earth Style: Dual Ram head ( Needs ram head )
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu:
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Description: The user slams his/her hand on the ground and two ram heads apear infront of the user, both rams are 10 ft tall and 7 ft wide.



Name of Jutsu: Earth Style: Stone twister
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: 7 feet from the flying stones
Jutsu's Element: Earth
Description: The user places chakra into his/her palms and places it on the floor, after this nearby rocks begin to fly and spin around the user, this acts as a both a shield and a offensive forse. While inside of the jutsu the user can move, but he/she is slowed down by one rank, the jutsu can also be throw at the oponent but it can be evaded easily.


Rp sample:

" Give me some cover Kay." Akura whipered as Kay nodded, " Sandstorm cover combo!" He said as he made a sand clone and a wind gale which turned the clone into a sandstorm. Akura took in a deep breath before he made a few seals " Earth style: Dual Ram head!" He cried as two giant ram heads appeared infront of the wall of konoha, " Awsome Akura, you are gonna bring down the wall whit one combo!" He said as he Akura nodded to his words " Thin mantle crust movement!" He said as he slammed his hand on the ground which made the two ten foot tall rams move and crash into the wall leaving a giant twenty foot long hole in the wall, army of suna ninja rushed into the hidden leaf. Akura and Kay headed directly to the Kage tower, Once there the two ninja ran up the stairs taking out any ninja in there way, the two " brothers" entered the tower and glared at the hokage, Kay stepped up and made some seals " Wind Style: Crashing Gale" He whispered as his wind natured chakra flashed around his hand, he then threw the three foot long ball at the Kage knocking him out of his tower. Akura jumped down as he made seals " Earth style: Stone twister ." He said as he placed his hand on the floor once he landed near by rocks flew around Akura, he then moved his hands forward and the twister flew at the hokage knocking him out.
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