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 Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 5:22 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 6:07 am
It really does take some effort to pick flaws in your work saga.
But I think I found one!
The away-facing side of the vest is as light as the side pointing to the light direction. This kinda defies the lighting, making the piece look flat and 2 dimensional. Some further shading would help separate the edit into manageable pieces. At the moment I kinda see it as confusing.
Don't get me wrong tho, It's a fantastic edit with plenty of action and artistic skill.
So please don't kill me for criticising ^^;
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Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 7:44 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:15 am
Vorty> Thanks for the crit. (why would I hurt you?) xd
What's the away-facing side of the vest? eek
Did you mean the collar on the left because it was in a dark green before I brightened it up. Though I think I see what you mean by "serparating them".
Perhaps I'll postie a new version here.
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 4:12 am
*opens jar of emoticons and dips them in a glass of milk*
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 7:44 am
*dips a ninja one in a glass of chocolate milk*
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 5:39 am
Oreoticons!
"first you : twisted : it, then you : big : it, then you : gonk : it!"
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 8:28 pm
Haha! That's a good one! xd
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 2:16 am
*tosses a revive tonic* cool
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 11:24 am
*drinks the tonic*
Man.. I'm really too worn out. College is getting me very tired lately.
*goes for a nap*
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 11:28 am
*snipes vorty in the neck with a redbull/stacker3 concoction*
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 11:37 am
gonk
But but...
It's Siesta time... ;-;
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 12:10 pm
eek
surprised
.. that was sposed to caffeine him up.....
*scratching his head, he looks at his gun & inspects the tranq dart* confused
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:01 pm
YAY! I'm posting in one of my hero's threads! You're the one who inspired me to try and change positions. ^^ Also, thanks for giving compliments in my store.
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Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:05 pm
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