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iMistah-kun

PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:47 pm


Hinote Tosatsu
Well, turning a giraffe into a dinosaur was an example as to why you should have a limit by species you have come into contact with. Add the chart and an explanation of it to your description and I'll look it over.

I still like the idea of a scan jutsu to learn more about animals/obtain their DNA though.

Edit: If the jutsu is limited to only transforming by close size, I can approve it at a lower level, and you can add the S-Rank boost to "Upgrade" them separately.

Something along the lines of making different levels of the jutsu.

E - Tiny animals. Insects, mice, moles.
D - Small animals. Cats, Dogs, Rabbits.
C - Average animals. Large dogs, monkeys, bear cubs.
B-A - Large animals. Lions, tigers, bears.
S - Massive animals. Elephant, rhino, grizzly.

And then an extra S-Rank chakra boost could move them one slot up or down the grid.


Alright so.......do I need to do another RP Sample? Since you pretty much know how this is all gonna work. And the change would be permanent right? I mean it would be useless if it went away after a while. So with that chart and then with all the previous restrictions do I finally get it approved xd
PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:49 pm


Well what if someone dose not fear death? or has a higher killing intent then you?

Orchid Moon


Hinote Tosatsu
Vice Captain

Eloquent Lunatic

PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:51 pm


@Kumurai: Re-post it.

@Mistah: Probably, we'll see once it's remade!

@Orchid/Xion: Enough OOC! And just like in the show, it would be breakable with pain, higher killing intent, emoness.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:52 pm


Oh for the love of......

What he said

SinnerXion


Orchid Moon

PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:55 pm


Sorry Hinote but it just sounds like a op technique...seeing as how none of its weaknesses were stated making it unbreakable giving the user a chance to kill that person with out the person responding..

@sinner: i wasnt talking about using the technique... just their basic killing intent.. take Shi for example... normally just walking around its high compared to the people around here... ect ect..
PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:02 pm


Your Rank: Sannin
Name of Jutsu: Ikimono Henkan- Animal Transformation
Rank of Jutsu: Listed in chart. ( # )
Description: This skill allows a Chiroku to transform one animal into another animal of a different species by touching it. This skill could make a small fly into a ferocious lion. The animal could try to resist the transformation but if it is severely weakened and more chakra is poured into the jutsu (minus an extra 5 Chakra Points) then the Chiroku could transform the animal. Though if the animal does not struggle then the Chiroku can transform the animal with ease. The Chiroku has to have used the Animal Telepathy jutsu and tasted the blood of a member of the species that it is changing and the species that it will change into. The Chiroku that is using this jutsu has a limit to the number of species it can use and we refer to this number as an animal data bank. Once a species has passed the requirements it is added to the users animal data bank.
-Chuunins can only have 5 species in their animal data bank.
-Jounins can only have 7 species in their animal data bank.
-Sannins can only have 10 species in their animal data bank.

# In addition to this, the Chiroku needs to also follow this chart for transforming animals.
E - Tiny animals. Insects, mice, moles.
D - Small animals. Cats, Dogs, Rabbits.
C - Average animals. Large dogs, monkeys, bear cubs.
B-A - Large animals. Lions, tigers, bears.
S - Massive animals. Elephant, rhino, grizzly.

*Note: an extra S-Rank chakra boost is needed to move them one slot up or down the grid.

Rp Sample

Quote:
Ukiyo had taken the small bird that he named Cheep-cheep and let him rest on his shoulder as he traveled. He was walking a long way on his journey to the Stone Village. Five days had passed since he began walking and throughout the whole walk he felt as if he was being watched. He stopped in the center of the long dirt road as he began to speak. "Really, this has gone on for far too long. If you are going to be doing something to me, why not attack now?" Six genin level bandits appeared as they looked at Ukiyo. "So I guess this will be a two on six battle. Are you ready Cheep-cheep? They mocked him, antagonized him and said that he and his bird wasn't much of a threat. Ukiyo let Cheep-cheep fly in place for a moment as he raised his hand over the bird and it glowed a bright white color and transformed into an elephant. "Now...are me and my friend still not much of a threat?" Ukiyo smiled as the bandits began to run away.

iMistah-kun


Hinote Tosatsu
Vice Captain

Eloquent Lunatic

PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:03 pm


Alright, if you think it's problematic to the point it could be abused, please show it to another crew member. I can see what you're saying, but I'm not quite sure how to enforce a ranking system on it depending on how psychopathic the person is. We don't have a ranking system for that that I know of.

Add to the description: Cannot be used in battle. Can be broken with pain.

Though the pain would preferably be from an outside source. Even Orochimaru was surprised when Sasuke broke his enough to hurt himself. And that's the difference of a sannin and a high genin.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:04 pm


The Shadow Sphere Jutsu

Kumurai Aburame

Kumurai's Current Rank

Academy Student

Jutsu Rank

D (Genin)

Jutsu Element

Darkness

Description

The Shadow Sphere Jutsu is a basic technique that can be fired at an opponent. There are no hand seals seeing as this is a basic jutsu. All you need to do is center a small portion of your chakra in the palm. Some ninja would prefer balancing the chakra in one palm and centering it in the other. Others may use one palm it all depends on your preference. Kumurai himself finds it easier to center his chakra in the front of his kunai knife and fire it from there. Matching it's name the Shadow Sphere appears to be a purple ball with purple pulses inside. Once the Shadow Sphere hits someone or something it creates a small blast of smoke. However that does not make it a smoke bomb. The feeling should feel like having a quick hard swing from a baseball bat. Genin can only fire it 9 ft in front of them at max. Chunin can fire it 13 ft in front of them. Jounin and up can fire it 16 ft in front of them.

RP sample

Pending
 

Ephemeral Ozymandias

Obsessive Prophet


Orchid Moon

PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:08 pm


Just as long as its limit and has a weakness the jutsu is fine, its a good idea but has flaws to it based on how pots is set up. If the new part is added i don't have a problem with it.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:12 pm


Ok I'll ad that it can't be used in battle, and can be broken through physical pain.

SinnerXion


Panthers7
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:49 am


Panthers7
Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu:Meiton:Kyūketsukō (Dark Release:Inhaling Maw)
Rank of Jutsu:(Applies to the rank of the user and technique hit by.)
Range of Jutsu:Close-Long
Jutsu's Element:Darkness-(This move can only be accessed through Demon Gate Releases.)
Description:
How the Jutsu was developed

Zin developed this technique from his studies in the library. Upon researching the elements and ninja types and advantages,he noticed their was a link between his Demon Gates and this specific technique. The technique,was based of off the 'Chimera Ninjutsu.' Upon reading it's affects and disaffects,Zin noticed that the ninjutsu had to many faults and should be disregarded except for two techniques.(The one's displayed up and down.) Upon reading the powers and the element it possessed,Zin immediately started to incorperate it into his fighting style. Hoping that this would influence his abilities through his Demon Gates further.
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Upon unlocking the Demon Gates,the user under goes a change in elements;mostly because the jutsu that is used to perform the Demon Gates is of the Meiton Nature. Upon releasing the gates,the user will be able to unlock ninjutsu's within the gates. There are only two. One,is the parenting jutsu called,'Meiton:Kyuketsuko' or Dark Release:Inhaling Maw. During which,the user will form two seperate dimond shapes on each of their palms. The 'dimond's' shape,will be stacked ontop of each other. This formation will be better explained later on.

The upper dimond is what performs this particular technique. Upon lifting the users hand,the user will be able to use the Darkness chakra to absorb chakra from the opponent. Although,not in the same status as the 'Chakra Absorbtion Technique',which is usually performed through physical contact or better known as Taijutsu. No,this technique is the brother of that technique. Instead of absorbing chakra through Taijutsu,this technique absorbs chakra through ninjutsu. You see,the user can absorb chakra of their rank from the ninjutsu that was performed from the attacker. This chakra will be swallowed by the nature of the Darkness Element,in which will come into the upper dimond that sits on top of the lower dimond of the user's palm. Upon which,the user of the Meiton(Darkness Element) will learn about the user's ninjutsu,element,and chakra usage to perform the technique that was absorbed. This will increase the user's knowledge base,as well as usage of the elements as when the user gets stronger,they will be able to actually use the jutsu's and elements that absorbed.
Rules

*) The user most know Kiri biggrin emon Gate Release
*)The user,can only absorb one technique during Kiri biggrin emon Gate Release. Mostly because the Gates are short in time limit,and the body is already in enough strain by performing the technique.
*)The user,will not be able to access the element they absorbed,nor the jutsu they absorbed until Jounin level or higher.
-But the catch is,even though the user absorbs the elements and the jutsu's of the opponent,they will have to spend an extra chakra cost to activate it. For example,Zin absorbed someone that utilized a Suiton Ninjutsu element. Upon doing so,when he wishes to use that element,the jutsu's will cost and extra 5 chakra points. So basically,anything that wasn't his primary nor secondary elements,as well as,anything element that he absorbed through ninjutsu will have this extra chakra punishment.
*)The user also will not be able to absorb custom Jutsu's. They will be able to add resistence to the ninjutsu's technique's by using the Darkness Element,but custom jutsu's cannot be totally absorbed.
*)Darkness Element,in this case,only can absorb Ninjutsu attacks,and those attacks can only be absorbed if it is of your rank. If it is higher than your rank,you will absorb only a fourth of the ninjutsu's power,but you will not totally absorb the technique which means you cannot use that jutsu.
Rp Sample Zin had just finished the Chuunin Exams and was ready to tackle on some new techniques. He had read up on techniques of the Meiton category and knew he could unlock it through his Demon Gates. Waiting until nightfall,when the moon was at it's fullest,Zin exited his hut in hopes to have the training grounds empty. He liked keeping his Demon Gate opening rather.....secretive. Though,as he came upon the grounds Zin noticed a figure sleeping underneath a large oak tree. Upon closer investigation,Zin noticed it was Matsuya. Narrowing his eyes Zin still remebered the jutsu he made the child vow to;but.........it rather had been forgiven since he found a way to slither out of it. Plus,he couldn't really hate the person that rather helped him nearly all his life. Moving forwards,Zin poked Matsuya on the head with his little finger and hissed out,"Onii-san..........Onii-san wake up."He said before finally stirring the Hokage from his slumber. Zin giggled and shook his head as the child noticed his puzzled look;it seemed that he didn't expect to have slept for such a long time. As he let Matsuya re-collect himself,he looked up to the serpant child,"Yes Zin what do you want? More importantly what are you doing outside this late?"He asked narrowing his eyes as even the snack shops he knew the child raided with his mission money and the money his father left for him wouldn't be open at this hour. And though Zin made a vow,he still held that.....darkened presence that despite how much he acted like a child his mind was far within darkness."Ah,nothing.......It just the training grounds are so much more peaceful when everyone is gone."Zin said as he looked up to the moon;indicating it was a around two o'clock."But since your here,I have a question for you Matsuya-senpai......Can we train like we use to? I have.....some jutsu's I which to try out.....And who better than to train with than with your big brother,yes?"Zin said as he looked up to Matsuya when he stood up. The boy pulled the ever winning 'family' card. He knew that Matsuya,even if it was to protect the village,wanted to rather build the older brother figure back with Zin. Matsuya looked down to the bright-eyed slitted child and sighed as he looked up to the moon and smirked,"Well I guess I have nothing better to do. And since I missed your fight at the Chuunin exams,I might as well make it up. Hopefully,you'll be more of a challenge this time."Matsuya said with that same smirk as Zin narrowed his eyes and pouted. Playing the 'cute-child' role to the fullest."You better not go easy on me or you'll be sorry!"Zin said as he moved a little farther away and walked parallel to Matsuya was was mirroring the childs moves;almost as if trying to stay one step ahead of the boy. Zin smiled and bursted towards Matsuya at a fairly excellent speed,although for a Sannin,especially a Kage,it wouldn't be too much trouble. Zin bombarded him with kicks,punches,feints to punch/kicks,and some versions of Konoha's Strong Fist. Matsuya easily was going to dodges,re-direction of the punches and kicks and counters. One foot he finally caught and tossed the child up into the air as he laughed,"Come on Zin......is that all you can d-"He blinked as he saw Zin,after regaining himself,started to spin down towards him. Upon spinning, he flicked out his feet and arms and yelled out 'Kai' in which the weights upon his ankle's and wrists were flung from his body;turning an in-close Taijutsu technique into a long ranged technique. Matsuya dodged them with a slight problem,because of the surprise,but regained himself to block Zin's Ax kick.Taking the childs foot,Matsuya flung the child into some bushes and laughed softly,"Come on now Zin.....I've seen you fight with more ferocity when you fought Haseo. Is this all you've go-..........What is that?"He said as he noticed dark and purple chakra emitting from Zin. It was the same chakra that emitted from him when he was bound in the chains;it was also very interesting upon seeing this as Zin's chakra color is normally royal purple. Moving a little cautiously and figuring out tactics to counter what the child was doing he narrowed his as he heard a soft hissing of words before an explosion of chakra came from the area that Zin landed. When the Naga child rose back to his feet,he'd feel that dark untamed hatred pour from the boy like the gates of hell just opened within his soul. From those slitted eyes,Matsuya saw the father of Zin in essence,seeing through him."Interesting technique Zin........I see you've been working on new method's of the inner gates."Matsuya said as he crouched down and waited for Zin to attack;seeing as he didn't know this technique,he shouldn't leave anything to chance. Zin hissed as he said in that false voice,"I warned you Onii-san.......I'm nothing like when I was little."He said as the sentence had a bit of a venomous bite to it near the end before Zin shot forwards. His speed would be of another that of another rank and when he caught Zin's fist,Matsuya felt his arm bulk back slightly;showing his strength was had taken a great increase. It wasn't long before Matsuya knew that he actually try with Zin in this state, as his punches and kicks were coming at him with speedy accuracy and killing intent;two things that rather in powered the child. Finding an opening,Matsuya lit his hand using the 'Fire Release:Flaming Palm Technique' and thrusted it to the boy."Too slow Zin!!!"He called out before shivering to the devilish smirk Zin made;mostly because those fangs gave him the look of inhuman proportions. He also noticed why when he saw Zin immediately meeting his palm to where Matsuya thrusted it but kept it a few yards inches away before Matsuya felt something strange. When he looked down,he saw his flamed hand being sucked into Zin's palm like a vacuum. Upon closer expection,he noticed it had two dimond's stacked onto each other. The top dimond,was the one that was sucking in his chakra and absorbing the Katon chakra that was used to create it. Blinking he caught a hard round house that knocked him back a few inches as Zin closed his eyes and hissed,"Katon:Houka Hira no Jutsu.........Was it not?"He asked softly as he clentched his fist and smirked,"I thank you Onii-san......"Zin hissed as Matsuya narrowed his eyes in trying to understand what just happened. It seemed Zin had dabbled with chakra elements within the technique that he uses. During which,one was absorbing chakra. Narrowing his eyes,Matsuya took the offensive as Zin met up with them as they collided in a fiece exhange of Taijutsu. Kicks,punches,reversals into hard counters all firing up within moments though Zin was rapidly being over-powered by the Hokage. Finding a solid opening,he struck Zin with a 'Great Kai Punch' to see if the technique the child used could absorb Taijutsu techniques. Upon seeing Zin's unwanted expression and saw the child flying a couple yards back and landing into a deep stance,he could come to a hypothesis that the jutsu Zin created only applied to Ninjutsu. But,he'd add a few more tests before applying this method and coming to a solid conclusion.
((To be continued below.))

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Your Rank:Genin
Name of Jutsu:Meiton:Jajjimento (Dark Release:Judgement)
Rank of Jutsu:(Applies to the user and technique hit by)
Range of Jutsu:Close-Long
Jutsu's Element:Darkness-(This move can only be accessed through Demon Gate Release)
Description:This technique,is the move usually used AFTER the 'Inhaling Maw' technique. During this,the user has a choice to either keep the chakra they have obtained and use it's elements,or,release the chakra back to the user with an additional chakra of the same cost. Meaning,if Zin was fighting at Chuunin level and as user of the same level used a Chuunin Jutsu;Zin could keep it and the element it possesses or fire it back. Now for this jutsu,Meiton:Judgement,Zin would repel the chakra back to the opponent using their chakra,plus his Chuunin chakra cost to double the cost. It would be the same as if an S-ranked Zin,absorbed an S-Rank move;if he wanted to release the technique,Zin would have to release it,plus using an S-Ranked Chakra cost.
The attack itself

After the opponent has had their ninjutsu absorbed by the dimond that sits on top of the palm,the user will be able to release the chakra in double from the lower dimond.The lower dimond is the 'attacking' side of this 'Darkness Elemental' move. Upon absorbtion,the user will raise the palm up and fire highly condensed chakra(the coloring will be black and whatever color the user's normal chakra will be) and blast the opponent back. The reason the chakra is highly condensed is because of jutsu firing the opponents chakra back,the user if firing chakra back plus chakra of equal value.This was made from Zin's research with the technique. If he didn't push chakra into it to match that in which he absorbed,the move will become unstable and cause an explosion. But,if Zin adds his own chakra of equal value to the user,the chakra blast will be more stable as well as influence more power to it.
Rules

*)All rules that are within displayed above.
Rp Sample (( Continuing from above ))
Slowly Zin got back up to his feet as he leered at Matsuya with the same killing intent. During his demon gate he wanted nothing but to shred him to pieces. Gripping his fists,Zin slowly re-gathered himself as he started to walk forwards and at an oblique angle while Matsuya mirrored the child."You've become stronger Zin.........Though you should be wary of that power. It seems to take a rather large toll on you."He said softly as he noticed Zin's slowly ragged breathing and his slitted eyes that became thinner;something he usually saw when Zin was reaching his physical limitations while at the same time he was usually at his most dangerous state. "You don't know the power that I hold Onii-san..........."Zin said as he ran forwards and jumped up,to strike Matsuya with a 'Painful Sky leg' technique this he missed without much of a problem. But Zin knew it was going to end up in a miss as all he wanted to do was to get closer. Lifting up the palm facing Matsuya,the dimond that was below the upper dimond glowed a brimstone orange before Matsuya saw dark purple flames firing out at him like a cannon. His eyes widened as he body flickered at the last second,and watched from afar the large flames devouring and conquering anything in it's path. Narrowing his eyes,the Hokage noticed the flames were truly anything special;powerful but not special. It seemed the child released pure,condensed and essenced chakra and matched it with his own. But he noticed Zin wobbling where he stood and fainting. It seemed the strain on the little one's body was too great for him to control and that last attack seemed like it put far too much strain on his body. When Matsuya approached,he looked at the unconcious Naga's palms and noticed the markings were gone;as well as the deep killing intent that he had. Sighing and shaking his head,he picked up Zin and took him to the hopstial,This child will be great if we can keep him good. He stopped and looked back at the power of the technique. Three to four tree's sent into pure annihilation while the dark purple chakra flames were lightly lit upon the charred grass. Strong indeed for such a young age.......Strong indeed.
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 5:05 pm


MageTech


Name of Jutsu: Chain Style: Vision of Flames (Up to Lance)
Rank of Jutsu: D-rank
Range of Jutsu: Within the users normal eye sight distance.
Jutsu's Element: N/A
Description: The user focuses chakra into their eyes before forming a set of hand seals. After doing so the users eye's become black with white pupil. This jutsu will not effect any bloodlines involving the eye's. Once this jutsu is complete the user is able to see the heat signatures of everything around him. Non-living objects will have dark coloring to it and living objects will have bright coloring. This allows the use to spot invisible enemies such as ones using camouflage jutsu or allows for superior tracking. This is due to living objects leaving a faint heat signature behind for a while when they touch non-living objects. A sample of this would be, being able to see someones footprints when there are no other clue that a person has been there. If the person being tracked had to have moved through more than 7 areas in a village, 3 areas in a country or 2 completely different sub-forums, then you can no longer track them, also if the person moves through a heavily populated area such as a market, it would be near impossible to keep track of their signature amongst all the other heat signatures. This jutsu last for 4 Posts.



Talked to Lance about it, he gave me a post/area limit.

MageTech


xXZetsubou-KaesuXx

PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:39 am


Hinote Tosatsu
@Zetsu:

Unhinge - Approved

Shark Blade - Need to take that up with someone else, I don't think I can approve it. And the rip off of Orochimaru is disturbing. You know that was a summoner jutsu, right?

Shark Strike - Making even more sharks when the original is destroyed goes against all rules of matter. You can't simply make something from nothing like that. You would have to either be coming up with more water somehow, or the sharks keep getting smaller.

And the other two still require a special sword.

As for that bit on the end of your sample, you are aware that Zetsu was posing as Kisame? That trick wouldn't work with just anyone, and you would need a special jutsu to even consider it.


Like I said, the Shark blade must be created in custom Weapons by the Hoshigaki user. all the blades are different.

Yes, I know it is a rip off of Orochimaru, but this way it adds so much dramatic effect.

You can create the sharks from any non living source of water, and when the first one died, it turned to water, enough water to support two more. and the next two added to the puddle, enough water to surround Ray. When they die, they are about equal to 5 gallons of water.

Zetsu was not, because both halves of him were with Madara, and The black half showed up to see Kisame's trick. Trust me, I read up on that , then when the white half joined the black half over the member's dead body, they said time to feed. >.< Trust me, I wouldn't have added that part unless I knew what I was doing.

And I plan on making that jutsu, the fact that there is not a jutsu for that is slightly disturbing to say the least, I figured someone would have made it by now. as soon as these jutsu are tweaked and approved, I plan on making that jutsu.

Also please look at my custom jutsu again >.< I edited them...
PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:54 pm


repost from last page.

Your Rank:genin (these are for the whole clan)
Name of Jutsu:Kagemushi (shadow bugs)
Rank of Jutsu:E
Jutsu's Element:bug user
Description: The Aburame ninja plants a small number of bugs on a target that are well hidden on a target. These bugs sap the target's chakra slowly. Due to the low chakra drain, ranking ninja are not strongly affected. This jutsu can also be used to eat chakra objects, like chakra strings and traps. This is most effective against puppet-masters. They are not able to eat high energy chakra attacks like chidori and rasengan.

note: if my suggestion for the Aburame-clan system gets approved, the "small number" would be "1 group max". and the chakra drain per turn would probably be something around 2 per turn.
Rp Sample Nagisa smiled, as the bugs crawled up the ninjas legs. He was too busy attempting to attack her with his weak punches. She was able to dodge most of the attacks, and her bugs had ample opportunity to crawl and hide on their target. After a few moments of dodging punches, she jumped back a few feet. She knew he liked to switch to katon as soon as he had enough range, and she knew that with the bugs hiding on him, and draining his chakra, that he would run out of chakra really quickly.

Hikaro_rin
Crew


MageTech

PostPosted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:55 pm


Is Hinote still allowed to approve Jutsus or is that over due to Gregar being back?
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