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 Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:48 pm
Zaine93 Its not the eyes, its the facial structures Yeah like pad chief said. Analyze. Copy and if you don't like it, add your own touch to it smile
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:50 pm
I already do that, and that it part of my issue I think, too many diff examples in differing styles.
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:54 pm
Zaine93 I already do that, and that it part of my issue I think, too many diff examples in differing styles. Which is why I say you should only focus on one artist. How about I show you someone it's possible to draw like http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/index?tags=hasanishiSee this guy, he uses A3 Paper, something we peasants don't have access to but none the less his art is awesome (or her, I really don't know) But Zaine it's really simple, slip your finger around your head and draw a face like that, you have a body, you have the internet, you can find figures of real people because you must remember to base your drawings off real people. I always do a small, crappy plan before I start with Orbs making joints and a triangle for a body with 2 other orbs for hips. If you hate your art then make it meticulous and make it hard on yourself. HUFF PUFF
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:01 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:11 pm
I've noticed one thing you might dislike about the facial structure.
That neck you drew on Zaine Academy Days is FOOKING MASSIVE. It's like a tree trunk, he should have no chin and yet he does.
He's kinda got an Aizen CHIN!
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:59 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 2:34 pm
 Torsin's latest drawing, and he should have three, or at least two more on the way, maybe even four.
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Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:50 pm
At first I thought this was a knock off of the Red Queen, but this seems to be a gun blade after looking at it again.
It seems fine as a drawing, but due to me being a**l about these type of things, it doesn't seem to be that practical for use in battle. I can more in depth about if needed.
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 4:00 am
Please do, I'm sure Torsin will find it interesting, also he got the clutch Idea from Red Queen.
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:45 am
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Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 11:32 pm
Igaru the eagle Please do, I'm sure Torsin will find it interesting, also he got the clutch Idea from Red Queen. -The curve on the blade is unneeded and would actually hinder firing, since the round would always the blade. To counter this, straighten the blade or make it a double-bladed weapon.
-If the actual gun bit is a necessary feature, use a gun that doesn't have a clearly visible, external magazine. A revolver would be the perfect weapon for this due to the magazine being held within the gun.
-The clutch is unneeded to fire the gun. adding a simple finger trigger, maybe even fashion it into some type of hand guard would do nicely and would also be more practical. The clutch doesn't need to be that long either, only long enough for two finger to grip it comfortably is good. A long clutch is going to require more effort than needed to just fire and the shifting would reduce your accuracy.
-The blade should be a little shorter and maybe a bit more defined on the end, similar to a machete blade. This would even out the weight a little and would make it easier to aim.
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 1:36 pm
Wow, a lot has been posted since I forgot about this thread (or was it because I scared all you guys off?)
Anyway, I would like some critique on my drawing of Zaine!
(Please ignore the deformed wolf-like thing; I abandoned the attempt to find a good reference and drew it from my imagination)
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:08 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:12 pm
Zaine93 Another of my recent arts (This is from another guild) http://th06.deviantart.net/fs50/300W/i/2009/321/0/f/Zaine_Tsukioma__Vaizard_by_ZaineCB93.jpg Stop drawing them at funny angles Zaine, I'll never quite be able to understand why you do that. Also Liani, the problem I'd say is that it lacks. Love. Did you love drawing it? If not, it lacks love. If it doesn't have love it isn't a drawing.
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