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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:17 pm
I haven't started writing yet. Not nearly. >_>;
I came up with an AWESOME idea for a superhero. I won't say anything for now, though, unless someone wants to hear about it. >_>;
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:32 pm
I would like to hear about it 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 1:25 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:08 pm
Awrighty!
The entire story is a combination of characters I've made, so consider the characters 'actors,' rather than their own people. Much like what Osamu Tezuka did, if you even know who I'm talking about. I'll explain that later, if people wanna know. >_>;
Anyway, the story is about a superhero named Boss Guy Smith. Yes, I'm serious. The reason he chose the name is because he hates superhero names that end with 'man,' and because he wanted a name that could possibly be 'normal,' even if it's far from the mark. That, and Boss gives him some authority. That leads into the next point; the only superpower he has is immortality. It is physically impossible for him to die, even though he feels all the pain. This has lead to the more commonly known name 'Miracle,' because the fact that he is NOT dead is a miracle in and of itself. His superhero costume is a simple white hoodie and black jeans, both of which are long enough to make it impossible to see any of his body. His secret identity is the game developer Jack Joe Johnson, who works at the developer/publisher powerhouse "Turnitoff Snowstorm,' working on tight deadlines to release games that get worse every year, even though he wants to make artistic games that the bosses think are too 'dangerous' to release. He has a bald head and a blue and green eye, and lives in a small apartment in the poorer area of the city.
Jack's sidekick, who Jack adopted because he realized he needed a sidekick, is named Captain Ninja Dood McAwesome III. The sidekick chose that name, not Jack. He kinda of regrets it now, because he can't change it. Anyway, he has the powers of flight, super-strength and heightened senses. He is also taller than Jack, which makes people confused as to who is in charge. His real name is Ilan, which was the only word his mother could say right before she died after giving birth to him. He's 6'3, and has long black hair that reaches slightly past his neck and two dark blue eyes. His costume consists of a flowing black cape, black spandex and a black cloth that wraps around his head.
The one other hero I have thought out is Crystal. She's in the profile in the first page of this topic. She's not immortal, though. She's just a fighter. She hides guns, knifes, explosives, and many other things in her pockets, and has two katana at her side. She announced her name and such publicly, so she has nothing to have that the bad guys could stop her with. She doesn't care about people, and she doesn't have any family; she only seeks justice by killing those who do wrong. She and Jack get along, but they are at opposite ends of agreement. She's also looking for a girlfriend, even though she know's in the back of her head that it's hopeless.
Whatcha think?
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:47 pm
Sounds great! Looks like lots of room for all sorts of sub-plots.
And if you need any help with villains... *raises hand*
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 5:11 pm
Would you be interested in making a short, about 5 page comic with me? I've always wanted to try making one, but I'm not really a good, creative writer.
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:18 pm
Well, maybe you could work with me on making it a webcomic or something, Goggles. >_>;
I can work with ya on making a comic, no problem. What do you want for a script?
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:29 pm
Nice story Blood! It definatly has its interisting parts. I like the funy names too lol. Keep it up, I would like to see how it turns out biggrin
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 7:08 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 12:34 pm
Another short chance for internet use!!~
I hope everything is well and your stories are going awesome! ((which I'm sure they are!!))
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 2:09 pm
I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but...
Crystal is horribly underweight! (A body-mass ratio less than 18.5 is underweight, she is 14.9!)
I was reading her description because I was thinking about trying to draw her but then I saw the height/weight proportion and I was like: eek
Is this on purpose? Is she meant to be terribly anorexic? Or did you just want her to be tall and 'thin'? If so, you might want to increase her weight to 186 pounds to go with her height of seven feet. That is bare-minimum to be considered healthy. sad
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 6:14 pm
I never did well with weight. I'll fix it. >_>;
Also, draw her? Really!? 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 7:04 pm
Blood_Miracle I never did well with weight. I'll fix it. >_>; Also, draw her? Really!? 3nodding Yus. 3nodding She's very interesting. Also, I like to experiment with different styles and when I saw her description I thought she'd go well with one I've got in mind. ninja
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:03 pm
Thanks for telling me she's interesting! I rarely make new characters,so I make each one really original. blaugh
Oh, want anything written? >_>;
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 5:15 pm
Blood_Miracle Thanks for telling me she's interesting! I rarely make new characters,so I make each one really original. blaugh Oh, want anything written? >_>; Oh, uh... whee I can't come up with anything but I am pretty terrible at writing. I come up with great ideas but putting them together into a story is difficult for me. sweatdrop
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