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 Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 5:17 pm
((Heres an updated description. Not really much I could update on the RP sample sweatdrop ) Your Rank: Sannin Name of Jutsu: Ikimono Henkan- Animal Transformation Rank of Jutsu: S Rank Description: This skill allows a Chiroku to transform one animal into another animal of a different species by touching it. This skill could make a small fly into a ferocious lion. The animal could try to resist the transformation but if it is severely weakened and more chakra is poured into the jutsu (minus an extra 5 Chakra Points) then the Chiroku could transform the animal. Though if the animal does not struggle then the Chiroku can transform the animal with ease. The Chiroku has to have used the Animal Telepathy jutsu and tasted the blood of a member of the species that it is changing and the species that it will change into. The Chiroku that is using this jutsu has a limit to the number of species it can use and we refer to this number as an animal data bank. Once a species has passed the requirements it is added to the users animal data bank. -Chuunins can only have 5 species in their animal data bank. -Jounins can only have 7 species in their animal data bank. -Sannins can only have 10 species in their animal data bank. Rp Sample Quote: Ukiyo had taken the small bird that he named Cheep-cheep and let him rest on his shoulder as he traveled. He was walking a long way on his journey to the Stone Village. Five days had passed since he began walking and throughout the whole walk he felt as if he was being watched. He stopped in the center of the long dirt road as he began to speak. "Really, this has gone on for far too long. If you are going to be doing something to me, why not attack now?" Six genin level bandits appeared as they looked at Ukiyo. "So I guess this will be a two on six battle. Are you ready Cheep-cheep? They mocked him, antagonized him and said that he and his bird wasn't much of a threat. Ukiyo let Cheep-cheep fly in place for a moment as he raised his hand over the bird and it glowed a bright white color and transformed into an elephant. "Now...are me and my friend still not much of a threat?" Ukiyo smiled as the bandits began to run away.
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 5:33 pm
I'd still like to see a limit on just how different in size the creature can be. Your small fly example is just too excessive.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 5:58 pm
Mistah BomChickaWahWah ((Heres an updated description. Not really much I could update on the RP sample sweatdrop ) Your Rank: Sannin Name of Jutsu: Ikimono Henkan- Animal Transformation Rank of Jutsu: S Rank Description: This skill allows a Chiroku to transform one animal into another animal of a different species by touching it. This skill could make a small fly into a ferocious lion. The animal could try to resist the transformation but if it is severely weakened and more chakra is poured into the jutsu (minus an extra 5 Chakra Points) then the Chiroku could transform the animal. Though if the animal does not struggle then the Chiroku can transform the animal with ease. The Chiroku has to have used the Animal Telepathy jutsu and tasted the blood of a member of the species that it is changing and the species that it will change into. The Chiroku that is using this jutsu has a limit to the number of species it can use and we refer to this number as an animal data bank. Once a species has passed the requirements it is added to the users animal data bank. -Chuunins can only have 5 species in their animal data bank. -Jounins can only have 7 species in their animal data bank. -Sannins can only have 10 species in their animal data bank. Rp Sample Quote: Ukiyo had taken the small bird that he named Cheep-cheep and let him rest on his shoulder as he traveled. He was walking a long way on his journey to the Stone Village. Five days had passed since he began walking and throughout the whole walk he felt as if he was being watched. He stopped in the center of the long dirt road as he began to speak. "Really, this has gone on for far too long. If you are going to be doing something to me, why not attack now?" Six genin level bandits appeared as they looked at Ukiyo. "So I guess this will be a two on six battle. Are you ready Cheep-cheep? They mocked him, antagonized him and said that he and his bird wasn't much of a threat. Ukiyo let Cheep-cheep fly in place for a moment as he raised his hand over the bird and it glowed a bright white color and transformed into an elephant. "Now...are me and my friend still not much of a threat?" Ukiyo smiled as the bandits began to run away. Alright well I can also add this size ratio chart. That way things can only get changed within class range and when something is changed it can only go up and down. That way if I wanted to change a fly into a giraffe like your example I would have perform the S Ranked jutsu 3 times. Sound better? And wait can I use dinosaurs or were you joking about the brontosaurus? Small animals Things like flies, ants, and worms. Moderate Small animals Things like squirrels, rabbits, and dogs. Moderate Large animals Things like lions, rhinos, and bears. Large animals Things like elephants and giraffes.
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:02 pm
Well, turning a giraffe into a dinosaur was an example as to why you should have a limit by species you have come into contact with. Add the chart and an explanation of it to your description and I'll look it over.
I still like the idea of a scan jutsu to learn more about animals/obtain their DNA though.
Edit: If the jutsu is limited to only transforming by close size, I can approve it at a lower level, and you can add the S-Rank boost to "Upgrade" them separately.
Something along the lines of making different levels of the jutsu.
E - Tiny animals. Insects, mice, moles.
D - Small animals. Cats, Dogs, Rabbits.
C - Average animals. Large dogs, monkeys, bear cubs.
B-A - Large animals. Lions, tigers, bears.
S - Massive animals. Elephant, rhino, grizzly.
And then an extra S-Rank chakra boost could move them one slot up or down the grid.
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:09 pm
Hinote look at mine now. it is edited.
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:16 pm
Hinote Tosatsu SinnerXion ((Since this was already in Naruto I wasn't sure if I should make an RP sample.)) Your Rank: Jounin Name of Jutsu: Sakki (Killing Intent) Rank of Jutsu: E-Rank (Passive) Range of Jutsu: Eye Contact Jutsu's Element: Universal Description: Killing Intent is simply the user giving off their pure killing intention, and having it affect their opponent and others around them[1], up to the point of paralyzing them. When the Killing Intent is particularly strong, it can even give the victim visions of their own gruesome death. This can cause the Killing Intent to be confused with a genjutsu, despite not being a jutsu at all. At each rank the effect of this technique grows. Genin- At this rank the user can scare small animals like dogs, but can only give people a chill down their spine. Chuunin- At this rank the user can paralyze whot they are staring at either in be human or animal. (1 Post) Jounin- At this rank the user can can give a victim a glims of their gruesome death as well as paralyze them. (2 Posts) Add the effects per rank and this is approved. Edited
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:21 pm
@Zetsu:
Unhinge - Approved
Shark Blade - Need to take that up with someone else, I don't think I can approve it. And the rip off of Orochimaru is disturbing. You know that was a summoner jutsu, right?
Shark Strike - Making even more sharks when the original is destroyed goes against all rules of matter. You can't simply make something from nothing like that. You would have to either be coming up with more water somehow, or the sharks keep getting smaller.
And the other two still require a special sword.
As for that bit on the end of your sample, you are aware that Zetsu was posing as Kisame? That trick wouldn't work with just anyone, and you would need a special jutsu to even consider it.
@Xion: Approved. You might want to specify whether it uses chakra though. Is that what the passive bit means?
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:23 pm
still not fully approved...so
Your Rank:genin (these are for the whole clan)
Name of Jutsu:Kagemushi (shadow bugs)
Rank of Jutsu:E
Jutsu's Element:bug user
Description: The Aburame ninja plants a small number of bugs on a target that are well hidden on a target. These bugs sap the target's chakra slowly. Due to the low chakra drain, ranking ninja are not strongly affected. This jutsu can also be used to eat chakra objects, like chakra strings and traps. This is most effective against puppet-masters. They are not able to eat high energy chakra attacks like chidori and rasengan.
note: if my suggestion for the Aburame-clan system gets approved, the "small number" would be "1 group max". and the chakra drain per turn would probably be something around 2 per turn.
Rp Sample Nagisa smiled, as the bugs crawled up the ninjas legs. He was too busy attempting to attack her with his weak punches. She was able to dodge most of the attacks, and her bugs had ample opportunity to crawl and hide on their target. After a few moments of dodging punches, she jumped back a few feet. She knew he liked to switch to katon as soon as he had enough range, and she knew that with the bugs hiding on him, and draining his chakra, that he would run out of chakra really quickly.
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:34 pm
Yeah thats what it means. its like the electricity resistance technique. So no it doesn't use chakra. And thank you
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:35 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:36 pm
how do you get out of that jutsu sinner?
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:39 pm
Its not really a jutsu. Its just the raw killing intent of the user, so its not like genjutsu. its like instant.
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:40 pm
So you just look at me and I cant move for 2 posts?
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:45 pm
Due to fear and seeing yourself getting killed, yes
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:46 pm
Hinote Tosatsu @Zetsu: Unhinge - Approved Shark Blade - Need to take that up with someone else, I don't think I can approve it. And the rip off of Orochimaru is disturbing. You know that was a summoner jutsu, right? Shark Strike - Making even more sharks when the original is destroyed goes against all rules of matter. You can't simply make something from nothing like that. You would have to either be coming up with more water somehow, or the sharks keep getting smaller. And the other two still require a special sword. As for that bit on the end of your sample, you are aware that Zetsu was posing as Kisame? That trick wouldn't work with just anyone, and you would need a special jutsu to even consider it. Like I said, the Shark blade must be created in custom Weapons by the Hoshigaki user. all the blades are different. Yes, I know it is a rip off of Orochimaru, but this way it adds so much dramatic effect. You can create the sharks from any source of water, and when the first one died, it turned to water, enough water to support two more. and the next two added to the puddle, enough water to surround Ray. When they die, they are about equal to 5 gallons of water.
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