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 Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:25 pm
SweetHotChocoIate First there are a few changes I want you to make. Her ability to manipulate people's minds to believe her lies is not going to work. As much as possible, don't use abilities that will control what other people's characters think or do. That power can be easily abused and can cause some unhappy people. I'd rather not have to deal with it. Please pick something else. Her flaws won't work. Anti-social and rudeness can work as flaws. But not being athletic won't work. There are characters in the school who are not athletic and the don't even have it listed as a flaw. Not being able to dance also cannot be considered a flaw. The majority of the characters in the guild probably can't dance either. So you just need one more flaw. It's okay to have trouble at this area since a lot of other people have a hard time getting a character accepted due to flaws. So one of our crew members graciously made this thread for your convenience. Feel free to look at it if you need help with your last flaw: Character Flaws - Doing it rightI've edited it, please read it over and tell me if I need to fix anything else!!
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:33 pm
Alright. She's accepted. She'll be staying in the Amethyst dorm. Dont' forget to put her profile in the Accepted Character Profiles subforum and to sign her up to a class. Today is Week 1: Monday so it's first period. And the last flaw about skin problems, I'm sure everyone is prone to that and it wouldn't really count as a flaw. I don't think anyone woudl notice it much. But it's fine. You can add that in since you've met the at least three requirment. ^^
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:33 pm
SweetHotChocoIate Teacup Kittens Teacup Kittens SweetHotChocoIate He can't have complete control of ice. There has to be some limitations. I know he's supposed to be some kind of ice god, but that's just way to overpowered. Why is a god hanging out at Rosentale anyways? Rosentale will accept him either way, but you need to think about the character and their pride and think: "Will he attend this private high school?" I mean, it looks like he's coming here willingly since the bio doesn't tell us why he's here or if he's forced to be here. Ice and wind are not the same thing. And summoning things is just way to vague. What does he summon? Cake? You need to be more specific. And remember, short tempered people are people who get MAD EASILY. More than a normal person, okay? So I want to see that when you RP with him. Alright. Thanks! ^^ Kk! I'll go fix him surprised I made him into a demi-god, somone who just found out he was a god. He will not be fully in controll of his powers. And I fixed it, he summons demons. And I changed it, hes not going to be short tempered, thats my other character. I wan't kuro to be rude yet calm. If the demons he summons are powerful, there should be some limitations to when he can summon. Also, use that power wisely. Teachers will hate him (and he can possibly get some severe consequences) if he summons a demon at school or during class. It will startle the other students too. I guess the only appropriate place to summon would be at the Training Grounds. Thanks for making the changes. Kuro is accepted. He'll be staying in the malachite dorm. Thank you! Have a good day 8D
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:51 pm
Thank you for following the directions. But there's still more to just posting your character here. I just need you to make some changes with some of the information that you have.
She cannot have mind control since many RPers do not take kindly to having their characters controlled. Please pick a different power. As for eating souls, I also don't think it would be a good idea if she had that power either. There are many other powers you can pick, so please choose something else. ^^ Just remember not to make an overpowered character because this is just a high school RP.
We won't be accepting the flaw "clutz" since a lot of people have used it and it's not really working out as a proper flaw. You can keep it if you want, but it can't be counted. Heartless and cruel are pretty much the same thing so you can just have them as one flaw. So you need two more flaws. If you need help with making flaws you can refer to Character Flaws - Doing it right thread. You can also look around the Resources subforum for more help on character building.
Hope it helps! ^^
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:00 pm
 Character Information:
Student Name: Tara
Species: Human
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Personality: Kind, Considerate, Shy
Bio: Tara was born on a summer's eve but there was something wrong with her her parents didn't like at all. She was human, but her parents weren't. They were both wizards so they did everything they could to transform Tara into a beautiful wizard they always wanted her to be. When Tara turned 16, her parents sent her to Rosentale Academy since they didn't have much time to "babysit" her.
Skills and Abilities: Tara can run and do anything faster than anyone could, even the fastest animal.
Character Flaws: - Soft-hearted
- Vulnerable
- Feeble
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single, but isn't interested in no one.
Likes:
- Peacefulness
- Ice Cream
- Music
Dislikes:
- Show-offs
- Liars
- Stupidity
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:04 pm
That picture is taken, and having no power is not a flaw.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:07 pm
Teacup Kittens That picture is taken, and having no power is not a flaw. Don't worry about the accepting, just leave it to the crew members. ^^
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:12 pm
As Teacup Kittens has mentioned, someone is already using that picture, but you can always change it to another picture.
The ability is a bit too much. You can say she can run fast, but being faster than anyone else is just a bit too much. Please tone it down a little.
There are many characters that has no powers so it really can't be considered a flaw. After all, they don't think it's a flaw but rather just something they have to live with.
Clumsiness cannot be considered a flaw. It's just too overused and not often played in the RP. You can keep it, but you need to pick something else.
Shyness is also a way too overused flaw and we have stopped accepting it too. Most of the shy characters eventually ease out of their shyness during the RP, so we consider it as a cheater flaw as it is there in the beginning and it's gone as the character makes friends.
You're trying hard which is good, but please try to think about the flaws a little bit more.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:20 pm
xLieselotte Teacup Kittens That picture is taken, and having no power is not a flaw. Don't worry about the accepting, just leave it to the crew members. ^^ Okay! 8D
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:23 pm
xLieselotte As Teacup Kittens has mentioned, someone is already using that picture, but you can always change it to another picture.
The ability is a bit too much. You can say she can run fast, but being faster than anyone else is just a bit too much. Please tone it down a little.
There are many characters that has no powers so it really can't be considered a flaw. After all, they don't think it's a flaw but rather just something they have to live with.
Clumsiness cannot be considered a flaw. It's just too overused and not often played in the RP. You can keep it, but you need to pick something else.
Shyness is also a way too overused flaw and we have stopped accepting it too. Most of the shy characters eventually ease out of their shyness during the RP, so we consider it as a cheater flaw as it is there in the beginning and it's gone as the character makes friends.
You're trying hard which is good, but please try to think about the flaws a little bit more. Okay. I updated it.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 4:42 pm
Um... you didn't change her abilities. She can't run faster than anyone could. You're unintentionally downgrading the other characters that can also run fast. You can just say she can run fast.
Why don't you just say "overly sensitive" in place of soft-hearted and vulnerable. Soft-hearted really can't be considered a flaw. It's like you're saying kindness is a flaw, and most people would object to that.
And what do you mean by feeble? Is she physically weak or weak in the mind? If she's weak in the mind, then that just counts as overly sensitive. If she's physically weak, how can she run fast?
You can always refer to the resources that I suggested to your for help. ^^
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:54 pm
 Character Information:
Student Name: Morgan O’Donald
Species: Werewolf
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance description: Morgan is a gigantor who stands at a height of 6’4.” Other than that, he’s naturally blonde, but he does enjoy dyeing his hair. Depending on his mood, there is no doubt that there will be an assortment of colors.
Personality: Morgan is more of a puppy rather than a big bad wolf. He is simply a free-spirited guy who enjoys a carefree life, which can lead to people thinking that he’s naive at times. Which he generally pretends to be. Don’t get him wrong though. In no way is he stupid but he seems to be missing a few brain cells every now and then. While Morgan is in fact aware of the fact that he gets made fun of, he is, however, willing to look past the dog jokes and what not in good nature. Other than that, he prefers playing the oblivious role to avoid trouble.
Bio: Morgan was born as a werewolf, so he’s no stranger to it. However, as the first born, he was expected to be the leader in his pack, but since he didn’t exactly meet the standards, his younger brother was appointed it instead. Seeing as though he didn’t make it, he applied himself into Rosentale to make himself feel better about being a disappointment in his family.
Skills and Abilities:
- Frisbee catching. With his mouth. This is some serious skill right here. 8D
- Transformation is a gooooo! In other words, he’s able to control his shifting.
- Landing on his feet. He personally trained himself to do this whenever he falls, but he tends to get the occasional sprained ankle or worse when he does so.
- Heightened sense of smell and hearing. If he catches whiff that someone has treats, he will annoy them.
- Intelligent. He seems like a slacker, but he’s really not. He’s not a big fan of showing off his brains though.
Character Flaws:
- Obedient. As in, if you tell him to sit, he will do so without noticing. However, this applies to only dog commands.
- Oblivious. Or at least, he chooses to be so when he feels the need to avoid confrontation.
- Fake. He can’t stand up for himself or others, so he just smiles and bears with it.
- Coward. He will dodge any topics that go out of his comfort zone.
- Liar. Like many, he’s an active user of white lies.
- Two left feet. He has been known to step on feet if he’s dancing.
- Self-Conscious. He will never admit this anyone though.
- Lack of instinct. He’s very bad when it comes to sensing danger. In fact, he probably won’t realize that he’s in any trouble unless he sees it for himself.
Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual
Status: Single
Likes:
- …. Dog Biscuits. They are his secret pleasure, and he will make sure no one will find out!
- Cats.
- Food.
- Shoes. Don’t worry. He won’t chew on them
Dislikes:
- Silver.
- Dog Whistles.
- Jokes about him.
- His allergies.
- Rose.
Extra Information:
- The full moon doesn’t affect his shifting, but it does happen to affect his mood. When it’s about to arrive, Morgan tends to bounce all over the walls with his hyperness, and when it’s over, he gets rather... grumpy.
- Morgan’s character flaw of not being able to listen to his instincts can be a good thing when it comes to socializing since he’ll be friendly with everyone regardless of any disagreements between race.
- If you throw a stick, he will fetch it. Please, do not throw a stick off a cliff because he will be tempted.
- He’s allergic to fur. That even applies to himself when he shifts into a wolf.
- It should be known that Rose is Morgan's bully friend from middle school, and he does his best to avoid him for reasons that should not be known.
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:55 pm
Character Information:
Student
Name: Marcellin “Rose” Bellerose
Species: Incubus
Age: 17 [though he’s a grade younger than he’s supposed to be since he was held back in elementary school]
Gender: Male [well, TECHNICALLY incubi can switch genders, but Rose prefers being male, so he always sticks to that]
Appearance Description: Rose looks like your typical blond pretty-boy, blue eyes, handsome face, great body, and all. Well, that’s just what he looks like when he alters people’s perception of him. He isn’t really too great looking, having shaggy black hair that gets in the way of his even blacker eyes. His face still shows signs of bruises and gashes from the torture he’s been through in the past. In fact, several of his teeth are fake and his jaw had to be repaired twice. Even ignoring all of his scars, he has a very rough look about him that makes him incredibly intimidating to look at. The only thing that stays the same between how he really looks and the altered perception are the two steel cufflinks on his wrists, each with a bolt sticking out of them, labeling him as an incubus for all to see.
Personality: One could say that Rose is a pervert very bold and adventurous. Ever since he was young, he has been extremely rebellious, almost to the point that he did the opposite of what everyone said. He can be very defiant when it matters, but most of the time he’s laid back and amusing to be around. He likes to be in a group at all times and is a total flirt, which either draws people to him or pushes them away. He has two big problems with relationships though. Back in Middle School, he formed a crippling fear of women to the point that he’s prone to passing out or feeling nauseous if a female gets too close for comfort. And the second problem is that he tends to attach himself to one person and chase after them without giving up, no matter if they don’t feel the same way in return, dislike him, or even hate him. He can be very lustful at times thanks to being an incubus, but he tries his best not to, preferring love over lust.
Bio: Rose isn’t exactly a normal high school student. He was born and raised by an underground mob boss (who also happened to be a very powerful demon), and it wasn’t cool like in the movies. His father always treated him like garbage, no matter what he did. For the longest time, Rose forgave him and always answered him with respect; at least until he found out his father killed his mother because she birthed him a “weak and pathetic demon child.” After that, Rose became furious and refused to listen to a word he said. His rebellious attitude and his family’s ties to drug and weapon smuggling brought him into the wrong crowd. It was only when he met his first love in Middle School did he steer back onto the right track.
Somehow, his girlfriend managed to get him to quit his drug addiction and tried to break off his ties with his family. That only lasted about a year when his incubus instincts took control. She never spoke to him again after that night.
Some days afterwards, he woke up with an aching head in the middle of nowhere. A crowd of young women dressed in very dark, tribal looking clothes circled around him like it were some sort of ritual. The events that took place there were too graphic and disturbing to describe, but after he managed to escape from the anti-demon female cult, he was stuck in a hospital bed for three months, and recovered at home for a few more. His scars and limp may never fade. He tried going to school afterwards, but as soon as he entered the classroom and saw all the girls in the class, he passed out. He was homeschooled for a long time after that.
Back even before he was with his girlfriend, he was questioning his sexuality [he claimed to be bisexual back then], and after being scared to hell and back by women, he decided it was time to come out of the closet to his father. Of course, being a very traditional demon, he didn’t approve of having an incubus son that was gay, let alone seeing all the other imperfections about him. Fed up with his “failure of a son,” he kicked him out onto the streets. Rose soon learned of Rosentale and went straight there so he could have a place to stay and finish his education so he could support himself.
Skills and Abilities:
- Entering and Altering Dreams: Since Rose tries to be as little demon-like as possible, he never uses this ability the way it was intended to be used. The only time he uses it if he wants to give a pleasant dream to someone who needs one.
- Altering Visual Perception: Incubi are naturally hideous creatures, but to help them seduce their victims, they are able to make themselves appear beautiful or handsome to others. This ability occurs subconsciously and only stops when Rose is asleep or unconscious.
- Gender Switching: Can do it, never will. Too much manly pride to be female.
- Draining Life Force: Having sex with an incubus will make you ill. Enough times, and you’ll die. Enough said. *terrible censoring job*
- Information Gathering: This is one of the only skills Rose has ever formed in his life. Given only an hour, through a combination of spying and the internet, he could find out a person’s entire life story and more. He does this whenever he forms a new crush. Yes, he’s a creepy stalkerface.
- Speaks Fluent French: It was his first language, but he’s starting to forget a lot because he’s been speaking English so long.
Character Flaws:
- Somewhat self-centered at times.
- PERVERT.
- Not too bright [even if he tries in class, he’d be lucky to get away with Cs]
- Crippling fear of women [really bad considering the school is like 2/3 female XD]
- Too persistent
- Smokes regularly [has coughing fits sometimes because of it]
- Once had an addiction to weed. Has overcome it, but it can come back to haunt him.
- Easily persuaded
- Not very attractive when one of his above abilities aren’t working
- Falls under peer pressure
- Has a permanent limp
- Plenty of scars, mostly along his chest, arms, and face
- Damn, he has a lot of flaws… O.o
Sexual Orientation: Homosexual
Status: Single
Likes:
- People [fun to watch and be around]
- Dogs [man's best friend =D]
- Older guys [not TOO old XD just a few years. He feels they’re more mature]
- Embarrassing people [it’s practically a hobby to him]
- Social events [parties and such]
- Roses [... Duh.]
- Bright colors [not pink though. His favorite color is yellow]
- Romance
Dislikes:
- Dark colors
- His father [and family]
- Gangs and crime
- His addictions
- Being a demon
- Women [well, not really a dislike. He’s just afraid.]
- People who call him by his real name [It's ROSE, b***h! XD]
- Angels [he just jelly]
- Fire [only when it’s too close]
- Sharp objects [same as above]
Extra Information:
- He can get used to being around a woman, but it takes a REALLY long time. If you’re even going to attempt it, you'd better be persistent.
- His father’s gang is well-established in a top secret area near Rosentale and somewhere in France. The gang is little known for strategy’s sake, but anyone with a decent amount of knowledge of local gangs and organized crime would know about them. They are set up almost like a country, with their own monarchy, small military, and everything. Their goal is to gain power more than money.
- Warning to [younger] male teachers: Beware this student. He is not afraid to target you. XD
- Gets more perverted during storms. Don’t know why? Do your research. =D
- Rose once knew a little doggy named Morgan that he teased all the time. Yep, just teased. Never bullied. Nope. Never.
Tried to keep it PG-13 by being vague-ish. D= Damn you, Huong, forcing me to make all these characters...
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Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:00 pm
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