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 Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:46 pm
Thanks, I wanted him to not have a name so I tried to make up a story that would make sense XD As for the inspiration for his character...well, I'll wait a bit to see if anyone can pick it up yet :3 As for your cats, they seem to be fine but I'm not one the moderators for profiles, you should wait until either Leo, Asian or the Mule posts the final verdict smile
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 9:11 pm
First off, I must ask you refrain from spamming this thread. Do NOT keep pestering the moderators; you need to be patient! We will get to your profile as soon as we can. We also are limiting the moderators who are accepting profiles to just myself, Timber, and Hundred, because we are the executive mods, in a way.
Anyway. Amber looks good, so she's accepted!
Sunleaf has quite a few problems, though. First off, her being "raped by a rogue". No. Freaking. Way. That is NOT at all acceptable! Rape is by far such a human thing! I think you're going to have to redo that part of her bio I can't think of anything to change that with atm. Also, cars to cats are "monsters". Please change that. I won't be online for the rest of the weekend, so please quote hundredpercentasian or Winged Timberwolf to have it checked again.
I must again ask you to refrain from spamming this thread. Thank you. Also, please check the rules to prevent this from happening again. Everything looks good! Have Hundred or Timber post your profile because I will be gone this weekend! Accepted!It looks great! However, there are just a couple teeny tiny things. First off, the description of her eyes- you could just say "what humans would call hazel" or "green with gold and brown flecks". And also the "feminine style"- I don't know if cats would say that. I honestly have no idea o__o" So just to be on the safe side, maybe edit it and change it to something like "where is your sense of grace and elegance?"
I reallllly don't want to be nitpicky, but we're really cracking down on the cats vs. human terms things. Dx
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Leopardstreak Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 9:24 pm
I am just reposting Sunleaf all is fixed and I am so sorry for the spacing will nev happen again. I will delete all of those posts to make it up.  . : About Me : . My name is Sunleaf.
I'm a proud member of BreezeClan.
I'm a she-cat, I should know.
I'm 18 moons.
I'm a Queen.
My kin include Blazefoot(deceased mother), Forestclaw(deceased father), Blazepaw(deceased sister), Brackenfoot(deceased sister), Snowkit(deceased daughter), Cloverkit(deceased daughter), and Blazekit(deceased son). . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
- Finches
- Kits
- Hunting
- Taking care of kits
My least favorite things...
- Floods
- Fire
- Rude Tom-cats
- Two-legs(killed her kits by running them over(Unkown how they found the two-legged area))
And, my fears.
- Sickness(killed her mother)
- Two-legs
- Floods(killed father and sisters) . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Sunleaf is a very happy she-cat and never really hates life. This cat isn't just a golden looking cat she has a golden personality when around others. Some of the other queens have told her that when they around her they just feel warmer. She is a very sweet female and would never hurt a fly unless it meant keeping another clan member safe. Sunleaf is a very protective cat and will never leave a kit alone ever. She will never want what happened to her kits to happen to another queens kits. She is always ready to help another clan member with anything.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Sunleaf has a very golden tan fur pelt that has dark red tints in it. Her tail looks like a foxes tail with dark red-brown at the end of the tip of the tail. Her eyes are a deep bright blue color. She has dark brown-red marking ps on her forehead and inner ears. Her pelt looks like it is just radiating the sun's warm color.
My history, don't go poking around!
Sunleaf was born on the night of a great flood that killed many of Breezeclan's warriors including her own father. That same night her two older sisters died in the flood. One was a warrior and the other was an apprentice which was two young of an age to die. Sunleaf's mother was already weak from giving birth to Sunleaf, her only kit born that night, and was too weak to get to high ground. She stayed in the cold water all night with Sunleaf on her back to stay dry. Her mother became gravelly ill that night though and died two nights later.
Sunleaf was left with Blazefoot's, her mother, best friend to be taken care of. Sunleaf dedicated all her time to training to become a warrior like her father, but when she became pregnant with a rouge's kits she had to give up the dream. The clan was surprised that she fell in love with a rouge and mated with him. The rouge did not stay though after he found out the clan wold not accept him being the father. Sunleaf wasn't too happy about this but she understood the clan's feeling about this.
Moons after Sunleaf had the kits she went out to get some air and visit with old friends. While she was sharing tongues with some of her friends the kits were wrestling around the entrance of the camp. Blazekit decided to walk out of the camp and his sisters followed him. Surprisingly no one noticed them until later when Sunleaf looked to see if the kits were still having fun. When Sunleaf went looking for them she watched a monster pull away from a two-leg's house and saw her kits' limp bodies being crushed under the wheels. She was depressed for many moons after this, but evenutally became a happier female again. Now she is looking for a mate to make her forget about her horrible life.
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:50 am
Thanks for looking over my profile Leo ^ ^ I changed the eye color to look like a pale green but slightly tinted with brown. Also I replaced the word "feminine" with manners and respect. While I was at it, I thought I also change the other she-cat's behaviours by making it less human-like. Plus i'll post Echo's profile ^ ^
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Leopardstreak Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 8:34 pm
Well, thank you very much, dear. c: Sunleaf looks much better- if she hasn't already been posted, then I'll get right on that! Accepted!Looks wonderful, m'dear! <3 Thank you so very much! Approved! C:
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2012 7:15 pm
 . : About Me : . My name is Valiantstride.
I'm a proud member of Breezeclan.
I'm a tom, I should know.
I'm 25 moons (2 years 1 month).
I'm a deputy.
My kin include Silvermoon (mother, retired), Sedgeclaw (father, retired), two deceased siblings. . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
+ The ladies~
+ Rabbits
+ Patrols
+ Apprentices and kits
+ Gentle breezes
+ Ladies complimenting his handsome good looks
+ All his clanmates
My least favorite things...
- Fierce gales
- Sheep
- Rats
- Clanmates suffering
And, my fears.
// Failing Galestar
// Breezeclan its trust in him
// Monsters . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Valiantstride has a bit of a gallant hero, “knight in shining fur” complex. He often believes he has to step in and “save the day” if anything is wrong, such as a petty squabble within the clan or a fight breaking out. He is a self proclaimed noble hero and tries his best to be a valiant and righteous tom, and if kits pester him he will tell (often exaggerated) stories of his glorious fights and heroic moments of his past. He has a self-made code of honour which does not allow him to attack she-cats, as he firmly believes that a proper tom should not harm a hair on any female. He is a strict follower of the warrior code, viewing it as the ancient and righteous code that has been passed down through generations and must not be disobeyed. As well as having a big hero personality, he is a loyal warrior at heart and will gladly protect Breezeclan with his life. With a jolly, forgiving attitude, he has a tendency to give other cats nicknames, whether they like it or not. He is a bit of a charmer with she-cats and will flirt with them playfully but none of his affectionate words hold any meaning, as he is unwilling to open up his heart to another.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Handsome, muscular and resembling a miniature tiger, Valiantstride spends hours each day grooming his sleek tabby fur. He is a ginger tom with very distinctive tabby stripes, and his unique markings make him stand out in a crowd. Although he is not particularly large, he has very muscular quarters which allow him to sprint at high speeds, as well granting him a powerful jump. He is a handsome tiger-striped tom and he knows it well, often using his looks to charm she-cats.
My history, don't go poking around!
Valiantstride was the oldest in a litter of three. At that time, warriors were scarce in Breezeclan so his parents often had to leave them alone for long periods of time in the nursery. Since Valiantkit was the oldest, he was put in charge of his younger siblings, and he took on the role as their protector. However, disaster struck one day as a fox raided the camp, carrying off Vaiantkit’s two siblings despite Valiantkit’s desperate and futile attempts to fight off the fox. His parents were not in camp and even though Valiantkit's squeaks alerted the other cats and the clan managed to drive the fox out, his siblings were still taken. To this day, Valiantstride still blames himself for his siblings’ deaths.
The day he was made a warrior, he swore to be a gallant warrior who would lay his life down for Breezeclan without a doubt. Gifted with good looks, many she-cats tried to win his affections, but Valiantstride found himself drawn to a pretty white she-cat named Eclipsesky. It started off with them playfully teasing each other, then they gradually spent more time together. The two grew close and became more than just good friends, spending long periods of time sharing tongues everyday. Alas, that good fortune did not last long for Valiantstride.
Valiantstride had been wanting to ask her to be his mate but could never bring himself to ask the ultimate question, and finally on a day of leaf-green four moons ago, he plucked up his courage and set his mind on confessing his love for Eclipsesky. She had been chosen to go along on the dawn patrol, and Valiantstride used this time to go over his prepared speech, having chosen his words carefully - along with a little help from some of his clanmates. Pacing around in circles in his den, Valiantstride tried to build up his courage for the ultimate moment.
Yowls of shock and horror rose from the camp, and Valiantstride looked outside to see what was going on. His clanmates were crowding around something, and he pushed past the crowd to see what the fuss was about...only to be met with Eclipsesky's bloodied and broken body. She had been hit by a monster while chasing a rabbit, and died instantly. Valiantstride could only stare open-mouthed in shock, unable to take it in. The she-cat he had loved and had planned on asking to be his mate, now lay dead before him. He spent moons silently grieving, hiding his grief from his clan as he carried out his warrior duties. He made a vow to Eclipsesky that he would never love another, and that she would always have a special place in his heart. Even today, behind his jolly attitude and valiant demeanour, is a tom unwilling and unable to love another.((Edited OOC: Yep, bio is a bit more colourful and personality is a bit deeper, Echo is satisfied finally mrgreen ))
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2012 1:12 pm
 . : About Me : . My name is ℝunningkit~Paw~Stream.
I'm a proud member of Stormclan.
I'm a Tom, I should know.
I'm 2 moons.
I'm a Kit.
My kin include All Deceased. . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
❣ StormClan
❣ Clanmates
❣ Starclan
❣ Newleaf
❣ Playing Warrior
❣ Littermates
❣ Playing Hunting
❣ Peace
❣ Friends
❣ Adventures
❣ Exploring
My least favorite things...
✗ Storms
✗ Lightning
✗ Illness
✗ Lies
✗ Fights
✗ Rough play
✗ Mean cats
✗ Rudeness
✗ the Cold
✗ Boring cats
✗ Boring games
And, my fears.
☒ Sickness
☒ War
☒ Death
☒ Failing Stormclan
☒ Failing Starclan
☒ Hunger
☒ Floods . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
He's a bouncy kit, with a bunch of energy inside of him. He loves to find things to get into and always gets into trouble. Runningkit loves to play, wrestle, and practice being a warrior. Instead of laying around all day, he loves to play with kits and run around finding things to make trouble. He is a very clumsy kit, but is a very rambunctious kit. Runningkit's heart is very courageous and he has the makings of becoming a great warrior.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Runningkit is an Egyptian Mau pure breed kit. He has pure blue eyes and a blue nose. His pelt is grey with silver stripes and black stripes. His ears are mostly black with some silver lining. Runningkit's tail looks like a lemur tail.
My history, don't go poking around!
Runningkit was born two moons ago in Stormclan and his mother died in birthing before she cold have the rest of the litter. Her rest of the litter all of Runningkit's brothers and sisters died as well. Runningkit never knew his father and is now an alone kit. He wants to become a great warrior, one day become deputy, and eventually hopefully leader.
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Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 9:58 pm
Cat’s profile:  . : About Me : . My name is Kindsoul .
I'm a proud member of Seaclan.
I'm a she-cat, I should know.
I'm 15 moons.
I'm a Warrior.
My kin include None . . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
- To help cat's in need
-My clan mates
-Fish
-Kindness
My least favorite things...
- Unnecessary harshness
-Pain
-Crowfood
And, my fears.
Drowning
friends getting hurt . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Kindsoul is named for her kind and gentle personality. She dislikes fighting, and loves to make friends with everyone. She would have made a good medicine cat, but she wanted to learn how to hunt for and protect her loved ones. Despite her loving nature she wont stand for something she views as injustice or someone hurting someone she loves. In matters like that, she will fight with all her might, though using her voice rather then her claws. She is very loyal to her loved ones, and will help them even if she knows they are wrong. She loves to help those in need.
It's what I am, like it or not.
I am a thin and agile cat. I am white with grey patches all over my body, a black nose, and beautiful light green eyes. Despite my gentle build, I have muscles earned from hunting, fighting, and swimming. The pads on the bottom of my feet are black and pink. I have white rings on my grey tail.
My history, don't go poking around!
She was born from to Seaclan warriors. She was the only cat in her litter so she was very well loved by her parents. They were older when they had her though, and both went to starclan by natural causes, before she was made a warrior. Went she was young, before she’d learned to swim, she almost drown. Obviously she didn’t, as her older clanmates were easily able to save her. But now she doesn’t like the water. She can swim as well as the next Seaclan cat, but she doesn’t enjoy it. She tries to hide this fact, as she’s ashamed of it.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 12:34 pm
 . : About Me : . My name is Treewhisker.
I'm a proud member of Nightclan.
I'm a She-cat, I should know.
I'm 18 moons.
I'm a New Warrior.
My kin include Poisintail(Father), Leafear(Mother), and Amberclaw(sister)[All Deceased]. . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
> Nightclan
> Starclan
> Peace
> Hunting
> Kits
> Elders
> Night
> Mice
> Forests
My least favorite things...
> War
> Fights
> Killing
> Monsters
> Sickness
And, my fears.
> Death
> Fires
> Sickness
> Clan's Disapproval . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Treewhisker is a very negative cat and always looks at things it he worst possible way. When something is going wrong her words sometimes make things even worse. Deep down in her personality though she is a very sound cat and doesn't want to cause problems. Treewhisker looks at herself as a bringer of bad luck. She is also a very clumsy cat that trips over her own tail all the time. She is very to herself sometimes and normally never feels accepted by her clan mates.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Treewhisker has mostly a white pelt with black spots all over her. Her back is black and so is her tail. The back of her hind legs are black, but the front of her hind legs are white. Her front legs are white and the back of her neck is white. She has black ears and a black mask on her face that covers one eye. Her nose is pink and her eyes have a bit of pink around them. Her eyes are an warm amber color.
My history, don't go poking around!
Treewhisker was born in Nightclan, but not from two Nightclan cats. Her father was a Nightclan warrior, but her mother was a rogue. When her father mated with her mother the clan allowed her to stay in the clan until she had her kits. Treewhisker was one of the two kits born, but her sister Amberclaw died in a fight with a rogue that knew their mother. Treewhisker's mother had to leave the clan after the kits were 2 moons old so Treewhisker never knew her mother really. Her father choose to go with her mother and both were killed by starvation. Now Treewhisker just got her warrior name and holds it with pride.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 3:13 pm
. : About Me : .
My name is Onekit.
I'm a proud member of Nightclan.
I'm a She-cat, I should know.
I'm New-born.
I'm a Kit.
My kin include Shimmerstep [mom], Guardianvow [dad].
. : A Little Bit More : .
My favorite things!
Shimmerstep - mommy
Guardianvow - daddy
The stars
Moon
Beatles
My least favorite things...
Meanies
Watching others in pain
Being all alone
And, my fears.
Mom and Dad getting hurt
Deep water
Foxes
. : Getting Personal : .
I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Onekit is average. She's not terribly shy but neither is she really outgoing. There's a fine line between being shy and secluded and outgoing and annoying; she is sitting in the middle of that line. Being an only kit, she doesn't quite know what everyone else talks about when they start meowing about siblings and such. She's a little curious about why she's the only kit out of the litter but she doesn't press the matter much.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Onekit is a pretty silver Bengal she-cat. She is small in stature and short in length but she is quick and she uses that to her advantage. The silvery cat has pretty silver eyes. Her nose is a dark colour and her ears are... Well, upon the first glance her ears look bigger than normal.
My history, don't go poking around!
Born to Shimmerstep and Guardianvow of Nightclan; Onekit is the only kit in the litter. She absolutely adores her parents and enjoys conversing with her mother; usually only playing with the other kits when she's asked by them or told to go play by her mother or father [sometimes both of them tell her this].
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 4:06 pm
May I please advise you to choose a different name for your cat? There is a she-cat by the name of Featherheart in StormClan. We would like to avoid more than 1 cat with the same name. Would you mind changing it please? Thank You. The owner of the current Featherheart is a long time member and I don't think we need two Featherhearts running around... Sorry! Have a nice day and I hope you understand.
Would you mind expanding your cat's description? It's a 5 line minimum for all descriptions following the likes and dislikes.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 5:43 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 8:33 pm
Approved C: Good touch on the romance there Runningkit is approved however Treewhisker's profile contains a mistake that needs to be fixed. Please note that we're roleplaying as cats, not human. Therefore the term "people" isn't valid, please fix that. Just make sure you double check your profile, because in some parts you addressed your cat as Featherheart when she is named Kindsoul. Please change that C: IF you like the name Featherheart, then you can have it but just make sure either the first or last part of the name is changed, that way the names stays unique and less similar. It doesn't matter who stayed here longer than the other, as long as you keep things equal and fair with the others is all we ask (: Just one teensy thing. Try not using the term child since it's referred to humans rather than cats ^ ^ ; other than that, it's accepted :3 Thank you for helping Loiiy-chan with her profile, we appreciate your kindness and help; however please refrain yourself from continuing this action. Leo mentioned this to Thistle earlier and frankly, this action seems to be growing. Again, we appreciate the offer however just stick with your job as a crew. Thanks (:
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 8:40 pm
Sky, I don't mean to sound like I'm jumping to conclusions, but Treewhisker's personality is really similar to Ghostwhisper >_< Not to mention the "bringer of bad luck" and the mask. I'm just voicing my opinion, so feel free to prove me wrong. Thanks :3 Knight in shining fur to the rescue, Breezeclan have no fear~
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 9:31 pm
Oh um the mask thing I looked it up on the Internet on how to describe that so I can change that and the Bringer of bad luck thing it's just something she thinks if of herself because she thinks that when ever she does something it goes wrong I didn't even read Ghostwhisper's profile so I had no idea about the personality. So sorry for that if you want me to change it by all means I will. I fixed Treewhisker's people thing.
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