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A Lazy Polar Bear

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2017 7:50 pm
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Full Name: Yamata "Yato" Orochi
Nickname: Yato
Age: Unknown, assumed to be in her mid twenties
Birthdate: Unknown when she was first created
Gender: Female

Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 130 lbs

Appearance: Yamata's appearance is that of a rare gem. Having a very inhuman appearance she sticks out from the crowd rather easily. With her pale purple tinted skin, her deep crimson eyes, her pointed ears, purple lipstick, signature sly smile, or even her fangs she draws the attention of others rather easily. Yet she doesn't mind as it keeps her enemies focused upon her within combat. Standing at five feet six inches tall she doesn't have a demanding presence through her height... Underneath her clothing lies a wonderfully toned body. Her body is to the point where one can trace every muscle. She has the body of a professional body builder while maintaining a gorgeous lean build. With clothes covering her body others shouldn't ever be able to tell that she was a physical titan compared to most. Every muscle is well defined as well as having flawless skin. Even with her titan of a build she has full breasts which she has placed in a corset. This is mostly to catch her opponents off guard. As well as for her to show off her lucky endowment. With six pack abs of steel she typically keeps them hidden to deter people from knowing right off the bat. After all what's the fun in a fight when your opponent is already scared. Her current attire as well as her appearance has made her even more noticeable around the village. Starting from the top of her outfit and moving down she has been seen wearing a Van Helsing esque black hat with a similar in design black coat that reaches down to her calves. Her coat has a buckle on it as well that is below her collar bone. The purpose of it is to prevent her coat from flying off of her shoulders during her inhuman shows of strength. She wears a black corset that's the same shade as her coat and had yet it has a gold trim to it. The corset she wears is tied up from the front as well making it unique among standard corsets. She wears a black belt with a simple gold rectangle buckle upon it. Her red skirt, or rather mini skirt, reaches slightly past halfway down her thighs. On both sides of it are slits that go up a bit allowing her for full and comfortable movement upon the battlefield. Those of the ones that fight her that think they can get an eyeful of her panties will be surely disappointed. For the fact that she wears blank spandex underneath them that don't reveal much save for the shape of her a**. She wears boots that reach just up to the bottom of her knee. Yet again allowing her full movement while in combat and so on. Last but not least on her hands she wears comfortable leather gloves. This is due to some odd reason of her not wanting to get her hands dirty. Literally not figuratively.

Nindo: "There ain't no grave, that can hold my body down!"

Personality: Yato is very independent because she knows exactly what she is capable of. She rarely trusts others to finish up on a tasking she started as when she starts something she loves to finish it. Yato is an amazing friend to have, she will always be there to help, she's sympathetic most of the time, and most of all always willing to help a friend in need. She will help them get back on their feet and make sure they are on a good path. While doing this she expects nothing back in return. She is deep and full of mystery, as well as being full of intrigue, as if something is always going on within her mind. She is driven towards roles of leadership and goals of achievement, she will always want to climb then shinobi ladder when she can. All in an effort to be the very best, like no one ever was. She has an excellent sense of timing and manages it very well while being an exceptional organizer. She is very creative in her own manner as far as executing plans. She will always make good investments that could make her life easier or better down the road.

She might seem boring and stern because she lives by her self-discipline and responsibility. She analyzes each situation before deciding to take a move deciding on whether or not the rewards are worth the risk. Once more she might seem boring a lot of people but its simply her drive that pushes her to make smart decisions to prosper in life. Her self sufficient ways do tend to make others believe she is cold hearted. However the reason why she does everything herself is so that there is never any doubt everything will be done correctly and completely finished. It is all about controlling her surroundings. According to her there is an easy way to do things then the right way to do things. This makes complete sense to her as she's mostly stubborn and rarely agrees with others. This is an ongoing lesson for her ash she needs to learn that there is more than one way of doing things even though her way is mostly always right, it doesn't mean that she has to impose upon other individuals ways.

Yato has a complete necessity for structure and work because deep down she feels as if she is unworthy, as if she constantly needs to prove her worth to the village. Should she ever realize that all she needs to do is love herself... she'll open up and see the world in a new light, one that allows for pleasure and guild-free fun. What's most important to her is her need for security, not the standard sense of it, but the financial or material security. This is a very important driving force behind her ambition and her raw desire to succeed. She is always concerned with her public standing and prestige within the village. She's a loner but she also needs to feel appreciated, yet she is a master at hiding this fact. She is very self contained and she has many faces that she presents to her peers. She is known as aloof and indifferent towards others yet this is her concealing herself from the world, unfortunately most will never know who she is. This causes many feelings of insecurity and often causes her to question her own worth. She will always make it difficult to get emotionally close to her, because should she want to let them in she would never let them go. Emotional connections make them feel vulnerable yet satisfied at the same time. This is an ongoing internal conflict of contradictions within her mind.

She is a very ambitious person, always having something to pursue as she wants her life to be fulfilled and important. She is extremely patient and will wait a long time for something that she wants, when the opportunity comes her way, she will plan her steps carefully. She might appear hesitant in these situations but its never true. She simply knows that within life you only get one chance to succeed. She will wait until she has all the puzzle pieces before she starts to work and finish the puzzle. She will never accomplish anything with second rate results but rather with flying colors. She has a very active mind and strong powers of concentration. She likes being in control within her life. She's very cautious but this is only to see the whole picture before she takes a single step towards her goals. She'll always accept change but it has to be introduced slowly and incorporate it into her life just as slowly for her to get used to it. She tends to see the world in black or white only the definitive answer will come to her mind. There are never any gray areas as these are areas that she doesn't understand and makes her feel uncomfortable.

Lastly, deep inside, she is romantic and loving but it takes the right person to expose this. On the outside she might seem like she simply doesn't give a s**t. She's perfect for someone who's looking for a challenge. It will take time to get close to her, and one should never make her rush into a relationship. They would need to be patient, because she is extremely patient. She is a very classy woman as one is going to need to woo and court her like a proper lady. She will dominate and control the relationship but in her own subtle way. If one lets her take the lead, she'd never steer them wrong. She will offer nothing but a long lasting, loyal, and real relationship to hopefully get her happily ever after.

Village: Kirigakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Ninjutsu
____DisciplineElemental Specialist
Second Class: Bukijutsu
____DisciplineMystic Hero

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Bloodline: Jiongu

Chakra Pool: 390
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton
Chakra Color: Most of the time her chakra is a brilliant, menacing, shade of purple. However, when she is really upset, angry, or experiencing any intense negative emotions, her chakra becomes black with the same purple outline to it.
Chakra Materialization: Unknown at this time

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {No Bonus}
→ {None}
• Speed ► {No Bonus}
→ {None}
• Reflex ► {No Bonus}
→ {None}
• Fortitude ► {No Bonus}
→ {None}

Strengths:
• Close combat
• Elemental prowess

Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Elemental weakness

Fears:
• Living her entire life without purpose
• Dying in any other manner than combat

Reductions:
• Learns ninjutsu two posts faster
• Learns bukijutsu one post faster

Personal Attributes:
• Undecided at this time.

• Heart of the Sea: As she is a elemental specialist she has unlocked a hidden potential and furthered her prowess with Suiton. All Suiton techniques are treated as an X rank technique. She is not able to create a weaker technique than the rank it was appropriately learned at. However she able to make it stronger by using the correct amount of chakra, as per the rank she is trying to use it at. This doesn't enhance the ability of the technique in the slightest, should there be any, once more it only increases the strength of the technique. To explain further if she wanted to learn a B rank technique she'd have to learn it at the appropriate rank which of course is a B rank. Then upon learning it she's able to utilize it at B rank or above, so long as her body is able to use the chakra she's putting it into. Meaning she can't use an A rank technique as a genin.

• Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement.

• Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim, though this takes a small amount of time.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {White Smithing} || → {None}
• {Black Smithing} || → {None}
• {Rare Material Smithing} || → {None}
• {Weapon Smithing} || → {None}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Mining} || → {None}
• {Smithing} || → {None}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Suiton: : 00 / 08
• First Heart: : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01


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Weapon Type: None
Weapon Range: Doesn't exist
Weapon Weight: Doesn't exist
Weapon Size: Doesn't exist
Weapon Location: Doesn't exist


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]









Suiton









Second Heart










▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Unknown}


{Unknown}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{None}
• {None / None}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{None}
• {None / None}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X]

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Her life has a been an odd one as she's had anything but a traditional one. Starting her life by being nothing but an experiment in the attempt to obtain the secret of immortality. They were correct in their calculations but they made something far more dangerous than just an immortal life form. They made a dangerous weapon and they didn't know how to contain her.
 
PostPosted: Thu Aug 03, 2017 11:32 am
Aegon VI Targaryan

Tentatively Approved :
Your attributes aren't raising any red-flags for me. The wording is just... making me think... We'll get back with you ASAP!



The Wolf of Asgard


redacted
- A biography is required. Even for "mystery" characters I ask that you provide insight to your character's recent life. The history doesn't have to cover origins if that isn't what you wish to make known at this time.

- Personal Attribute:
Heart of the Sea
There is at least one part of this attribute which did raise a red-flag for me. "All Suiton techniques are treated as an X rank technique." Upon further reading I did notice the requirement that (i.e) a jutsu learned at B-rank can only be B-rank and above. Under the circumstances that this could escalate simple jutsu designed at E and D ranks to lethal level, I will have to say this this feature may not be accepted.


Personal attribute is accepted
"History" ruling is out of my hands



Please double check, as I am a happy mod in training:
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A Lazy Polar Bear

Snow Bachelorette

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 04, 2017 3:56 pm
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Full Name: Yamata "Yato" Orochi
Nickname: Yato
Age: Unknown, assumed to be in her mid twenties
Birthdate: Unknown when she was first created
Gender: Female

Height: 5' 6"
Weight: 130 lbs

Appearance: Yamata's appearance is that of a rare gem. Having a very inhuman appearance she sticks out from the crowd rather easily. With her pale purple tinted skin, her deep crimson eyes, her pointed ears, purple lipstick, signature sly smile, or even her fangs she draws the attention of others rather easily. Yet she doesn't mind as it keeps her enemies focused upon her within combat. Standing at five feet six inches tall she doesn't have a demanding presence through her height... Underneath her clothing lies a wonderfully toned body. Her body is to the point where one can trace every muscle. She has the body of a professional body builder while maintaining a gorgeous lean build. With clothes covering her body others shouldn't ever be able to tell that she was a physical titan compared to most. Every muscle is well defined as well as having flawless skin. Even with her titan of a build she has full breasts which she has placed in a corset. This is mostly to catch her opponents off guard. As well as for her to show off her lucky endowment. With six pack abs of steel she typically keeps them hidden to deter people from knowing right off the bat. After all what's the fun in a fight when your opponent is already scared. Her current attire as well as her appearance has made her even more noticeable around the village. Starting from the top of her outfit and moving down she has been seen wearing a Van Helsing esque black hat with a similar in design black coat that reaches down to her calves. Her coat has a buckle on it as well that is below her collar bone. The purpose of it is to prevent her coat from flying off of her shoulders during her inhuman shows of strength. She wears a black corset that's the same shade as her coat and had yet it has a gold trim to it. The corset she wears is tied up from the front as well making it unique among standard corsets. She wears a black belt with a simple gold rectangle buckle upon it. Her red skirt, or rather mini skirt, reaches slightly past halfway down her thighs. On both sides of it are slits that go up a bit allowing her for full and comfortable movement upon the battlefield. Those of the ones that fight her that think they can get an eyeful of her panties will be surely disappointed. For the fact that she wears blank spandex underneath them that don't reveal much save for the shape of her a**. She wears boots that reach just up to the bottom of her knee. Yet again allowing her full movement while in combat and so on. Last but not least on her hands she wears comfortable leather gloves. This is due to some odd reason of her not wanting to get her hands dirty. Literally not figuratively.

Nindo: "There ain't no grave, that can hold my body down!"

Personality: Yato is very independent because she knows exactly what she is capable of. She rarely trusts others to finish up on a tasking she started as when she starts something she loves to finish it. Yato is an amazing friend to have, she will always be there to help, she's sympathetic most of the time, and most of all always willing to help a friend in need. She will help them get back on their feet and make sure they are on a good path. While doing this she expects nothing back in return. She is deep and full of mystery, as well as being full of intrigue, as if something is always going on within her mind. She is driven towards roles of leadership and goals of achievement, she will always want to climb then shinobi ladder when she can. All in an effort to be the very best, like no one ever was. She has an excellent sense of timing and manages it very well while being an exceptional organizer. She is very creative in her own manner as far as executing plans. She will always make good investments that could make her life easier or better down the road.

She might seem boring and stern because she lives by her self-discipline and responsibility. She analyzes each situation before deciding to take a move deciding on whether or not the rewards are worth the risk. Once more she might seem boring a lot of people but its simply her drive that pushes her to make smart decisions to prosper in life. Her self sufficient ways do tend to make others believe she is cold hearted. However the reason why she does everything herself is so that there is never any doubt everything will be done correctly and completely finished. It is all about controlling her surroundings. According to her there is an easy way to do things then the right way to do things. This makes complete sense to her as she's mostly stubborn and rarely agrees with others. This is an ongoing lesson for her ash she needs to learn that there is more than one way of doing things even though her way is mostly always right, it doesn't mean that she has to impose upon other individuals ways.

Yato has a complete necessity for structure and work because deep down she feels as if she is unworthy, as if she constantly needs to prove her worth to the village. Should she ever realize that all she needs to do is love herself... she'll open up and see the world in a new light, one that allows for pleasure and guild-free fun. What's most important to her is her need for security, not the standard sense of it, but the financial or material security. This is a very important driving force behind her ambition and her raw desire to succeed. She is always concerned with her public standing and prestige within the village. She's a loner but she also needs to feel appreciated, yet she always tries to hide this fact. She is very self contained and she has many faces that she presents to her peers. She is known as aloof and indifferent towards others yet this is her concealing herself from the world, unfortunately most will never know who she is. This causes many feelings of insecurity and often causes her to question her own worth. She will always make it difficult to get emotionally close to her, because should she want to let them in she would never let them go. Emotional connections make them feel vulnerable yet satisfied at the same time. This is an ongoing internal conflict of contradictions within her mind.

She is a very ambitious person, always having something to pursue as she wants her life to be fulfilled and important. She is extremely patient and will wait a long time for something that she wants, when the opportunity comes her way, she will plan her steps carefully. She might appear hesitant in these situations but its never true. She simply knows that within life you only get one chance to succeed. She will wait until she has all the puzzle pieces before she starts to work and finish the puzzle. She will never accomplish anything with second rate results but rather with flying colors. She has a very active mind and strong powers of concentration. She likes being in control within her life. She's very cautious but this is only to see the whole picture before she takes a single step towards her goals. She'll always accept change but it has to be introduced slowly and incorporate it into her life just as slowly for her to get used to it. She tends to see the world in black or white only the definitive answer will come to her mind. There are never any gray areas as these are areas that she doesn't understand and makes her feel uncomfortable.

Lastly, deep inside, she is romantic and loving but it takes the right person to expose this. On the outside she might seem like she simply doesn't give a s**t. She's perfect for someone who's looking for a challenge. It will take time to get close to her, and one should never make her rush into a relationship. They would need to be patient, because she is extremely patient. She is a very classy woman as one is going to need to woo and court her like a proper lady. She will dominate and control the relationship but in her own subtle way. If one lets her take the lead, she'd never steer them wrong. She will offer nothing but a long lasting, loyal, and real relationship to hopefully get her happily ever after.

Village: Kirigakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Ninjutsu
____DisciplineElemental Specialist
Second Class: Bukijutsu
____DisciplineMystic Hero

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Bloodline: Jiongu

Chakra Pool: 390
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Suiton
Chakra Color: Most of the time her chakra is a brilliant, menacing, shade of purple. However, when she is really upset, angry, or experiencing any intense negative emotions, her chakra becomes black with the same purple outline to it.
Chakra Materialization: Unknown at this time

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {No Bonus}
→ {None}
• Speed ► {No Bonus}
→ {None}
• Reflex ► {No Bonus}
→ {None}
• Fortitude ► {No Bonus}
→ {None}

Strengths:
• Close combat
• Elemental prowess

Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Elemental weakness

Fears:
• Living her entire life without purpose
• Dying in any other manner than combat

Reductions:
• Learns ninjutsu two posts faster
• Learns bukijutsu one post faster

Personal Attributes:
• Undecided at this time.

• Heart of the Sea: As she is a elemental specialist she has unlocked a hidden potential and furthered her prowess with Suiton. All Suiton techniques are treated as an X rank technique. She is not able to create a weaker technique than the rank it was appropriately learned at. However she able to make it stronger by using the correct amount of chakra, as per the rank she is trying to use it at. This doesn't enhance the ability of the technique in the slightest, should there be any, once more it only increases the strength of the technique. To explain further if she wanted to learn a B rank technique she'd have to learn it at the appropriate rank which of course is a B rank. Then upon learning it she's able to utilize it at B rank or above, so long as her body is able to use the chakra she's putting it into. Meaning she can't use an A rank technique as a genin.

• Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement.

• Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim, though this takes a small amount of time.

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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {White Smithing} || → {None}
• {Black Smithing} || → {None}
• {Rare Material Smithing} || → {None}
• {Weapon Smithing} || → {None}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Mining} || → {None}
• {Smithing} || → {None}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Suiton: : 00 / 08
• First Heart: : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01


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Weapon Type: None
Weapon Range: Doesn't exist
Weapon Weight: Doesn't exist
Weapon Size: Doesn't exist
Weapon Location: Doesn't exist


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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]









Suiton









Second Heart










▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Unknown}


{Unknown}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{None}
• {None / None}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{None}
• {None / None}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X]

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Her life has a been an odd one as she's had anything but a traditional one. Starting her life by being nothing but an experiment in the attempt to obtain the secret of immortality. They were correct in their calculations but they made something far more dangerous than just an immortal life form. They made a dangerous weapon and they didn't know how to contain her.
 
PostPosted: Fri Aug 04, 2017 9:44 pm
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Full Name: Tokogami Nara
Nickname: Toko
Age: 16
Birthdate: 8/6
Gender: Female

Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 120

Nindo: N/A
Personality: Lazy and passive when there is nothing to do, unmotivated coming from her Nara blood. When there is a job to do or something that must be accomplished she switches to a more serious and deadly personality. Clever and complicated, such is the Nara way.

Village: Kiri
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Bukijutsu
____Discipline Mystic Hero:
Second Class: Ninjutsu
____Discipline Elemental Dual Wielder

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Bloodline: Nara

Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Dark Purple
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Archery
• Knives
Weaknesses:
• Bright Lights
• Work
Fears:
• Running out of supplies
• Running out of food

Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu one (1) post faster.
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Armory: Learn 1 Additional Buki Style
• I Have You Now: Take another post before Shadow Immitation Jutsu can be broken by force.

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Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Bow
Weapon Range: Long?
Weapon Weight: Small
Weapon Size: Short bow
Weapon Location: Back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 10 Arrows
• 5 Kunai
• Basic Clothes

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

{Raiton}


{Doton}


{Nara}


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

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A normal happy kid, with good parents who admired how cool ninja were. She set out to become one out of that admiration.
 

bb3000ae

Desirable Lover


Nostalgic Gaming Nerd

PostPosted: Sat Aug 05, 2017 8:20 pm
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Full Name: Due to his memory, or lack there of, he goes by an alias
Nickname: Tsukuyomi
Age: Nineteen
Birthdate: He can't really remember
Gender: Male

Height: 6' 4"
Weight: 275 lbs

Nindo: "When the sun rises~, I wake up and chase my dreams~, I won't regret~, When the sun sets~, 'Cause I live my life like I'm a beast~!"

Personality: Tsukuyomi is not the one who goes out on adventures of his own will. Nor will he lead the way on any of those adventures. Instead he is the one who follows Amaterasu and strengthens their adventures. He will be the one to "dot the I's and cross the T's." This perseverance is given to him by his stubborn side which also gives him his vast independence. He likes to do things his way. He is perfectly fine with being alone, this way he can get things done how he wants them to be done. He is not a follower nor is he brave enough to go out on his own. With his perseverance he can get things done and can do quite well for himself. He is an excellent friend. He will only have a few close friends instead of a vast amount of acquaintances. The few people he will hold close to him are guarded and protected. He will always treat his friends like family and he is always fiercely loyal and dependable. Although not a total social butterfly, he can be shy around strangers, the people who he lets into his life are treated like gold. He is a strong business individual. He is always the one who has immense perseverance, even when others have given up, he will always rage on. He has a knack for finance and he knows where money is to be made and have the ability to manipulate and set the path for his own success. He is not a frivolous spender but he likes to live lavishly and surround himself with nothing but the finest possessions and foods... Which in reality adds up to large spending habits. he will not spend all his money and cause his investments to fail, because if he does his security and stability will be gone and it will cause him immense stress.

He is deeply sensitive, the slightest comment or negative remark can and will be taken personally and he can easily get offended or hurt. His stubborn streak often results into laziness. He can be very lazy when someone gives him orders or wants him to do something he doesn't want to do. He is not lazy when it comes to himself. Once more he has immense perseverance, even when others have given up, he will rage on. Solid and persistent, just like the bull. He has a well known reputation for being stubborn, which isn't a bad thing all the time. The stubborn streak can cause him to butt heads and conflict with other alphas. He isn't fond of chance and likes the familiar and routine comfort of life. He is easy going and not one to pick a fight but should some poor souls attempt to provoke him, his wrath will be well known, for he has a temper underneath his calm surface. He is very responsive to his surroundings. He likes decorations, colors, and anything that appeals to all of his senses. He is down to earth and never really holding a grudge against people. He can tend to be lazy and is often called a master procrastinator by Amaterasu. He does have a strong, persistent drive that comes to life when he chooses, and no one would ever know that he is really lazy. The secret to this is he will push his laziness to the side when it comes to himself.

Village: Sunagakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Tamer
____DisciplineEternal Partners
Second Class: Tamer
____DisciplineNo Secondary Discipline

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Full Name: Amaterasu
Nickname: None given to her yet
Species: Wolf
Age: A few years old
Gender: Female
Height: 17.5 Hands high, or 70 inches.
Weight: Due to her massive size it's nearly impossible to get an accurate weight.

Personality: Amaterasu is a very independent wolf but she needs something to control or someone to admire her and appreciate her. She is fully capable of being successful on her own but she'll be happier if she has an audience and a following of people to look up to her. She prefers to never be alone. Tsukuyomi is attracted to her zest for life and her warm spirit. She has the ability to lift one's spirit and provide encouragement when times are rough. Her enthusiasm attracts people. She is a social butterfly, not because she wants to be but because people always naturally gravitate and surround her. She is a very difficult wolf not to like, often usually fairly balance, with a realistic personality. She never dwell's on the past, save for what Tsukuyomi went through, and often times thinks others are strange for doing so. She might be caught up in herself at times as she can be very self centered. But she is never too self absorbed to help those in need. She will pamper her friends and treat them well, as she is the ultimate friend. She doesn't hold a grudge and is always very forgiving. Due to the fact she has a respect and understanding of other people's differences.

She loves new and extraordinary things, as she despises dull, regular routines. If this is what she is faced with then she will simply create her own drama and excitement. She has an amazing ability to bounce back from any feelings of despair or unfortunate events. She doesn't like to be unhappy, it hurts her pride so she will take matters into her own... paws? and make things right again. She could come into conflict with other powerhouse types who will not take orders nor give an inch to her. She will not budge in her opinion. She will understand and accept the opinions of others but she doesn't take well to people trying to impose their beliefs onto her. She is extremely sensitive but hides it well. She loves praise and flattery, as her ego demands respect and adoration from others. The secret to her is that she needs to be needed.

Chakra Pool: 250
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Katon and Raiton
Chakra Color: Most of the time her chakra is a brilliant, lively, vibrant shade of orange. However, when she is really upset, angry, or experiencing any intense negative emotions, her chakra becomes black with the same orange outline to it.

Chakra Materialization: Ethereal wisps of fire, made of chakra, flow around her like a blaze. Appearing and disappearing in random locations around her. The severity of these flames depends on her anger or will. Each emotion will earn varying results.

Strengths:
• Fighting alongside Tsukuyomi
• Close combat

Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Long range combat

Fears:
• Losing her partner, Tsukuyomi
• Her partner never regaining his memories

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 // 10


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Bloodline: Hyouton

Chakra Pool: 250
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Suiton and Fuuton
Chakra Color: Most of the time his chakra is a cold, ominous, vibrant shade of ice blue. However, when he is really upset, angry, or experiencing any intense negative emotions, his chakra becomes black with the same ice blue outline to it.

Chakra Materialization: Ethereal flakes of snow, made of chakra, flow around him like it is winter. Appearing and disappearing in random locations around him. The severity of these flakes depends on hisanger or will. Each emotion will earn varying results.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {0}
→ {None}
• Speed ► {2}
→ {A Wolf's Prowess}
• Reflex ► {0}
→ {None}
• Fortitude ► {0}
→ {None}

Strengths:
• Fighting alongside amaterasu
• Jack of all trades
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Master of none

Fears:
• Losing Amaterasu
• Never remembering his real name

Reductions:
• Learns Taijutsu two posts faster
• Learns Suiton and Fuuton one post faster

Personal Attributes:
• A Wolf's Pride: At the rank of genin he has obtained another taijutsu slot.
• Second P.A.: Unused at this time.

Tamer Attributes → 03 // 03
• A Wolf's Nose - Being a prodigy as a wolf tamer he has developed the sense of smell that's on par with a wolf. Being able to diversify many different things with ease as well as being able to smell something roughly two miles away. His sense of smell is so great that he's able to identify the species, gender, and even age within this two mile radius if he focuses. If a target is within his radius he can sniff them out with ease just like a wolf.

• A Wolf's Ears - Having hearing that's on par with a wolf's he's able to hear things up to six miles away. In combination with his hearing he's able to hunt his prey with ease. His hearing is equivalent to a wolf's allowing him to hear things at the extreme frequency of 80Khz.

• A Wolf's Prowess - Earning a wolf's muscular prowess and tail has landed him in a unique position. He has gained a moderate increase to his speed as well as a fantastic balance. It is difficult to throw him off balance in any situation.


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {White Smithing} || → {None}
• {Black Smithing} || → {None}
• {Tailoring} || → {None}
• {Armor Smithing} || → {None}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Black Smith} || → {None}
• {The Devout Believer} || → {None}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 18
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: None
Weapon Range: None
Weapon Weight: None
Weapon Size: None
Weapon Location:
• Doesn't Exist

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬




▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Hyouton


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{None}


{None}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 00
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X]

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Tsukuyomi doesn't remember a whole lot from his past. He has bursts of horrific battles every once in a while. He tries to push them aside but they will always overwhelm him at times. To the point Amaterasu needs to pull him back to reality. Yet he has always pushed forward even not knowing a lot about his past. To be honest he doesn't even really care as the past is the past to him. All he can do is move forward with Amaterasu.

What he does remember is being a slave and the horrible times that brought him. It was he and Amaterasu were separated and he landed himself in the eyes of slavers. They were quick to tattoo his face with their seal to show he was their property. What followed then was nothing short of pure horror. Something that Amaterasu would feel eternally guilty for.

One a moon filled night Amaterasu managed to find the caravan and tore the slavers apart in their sleep. Her nose guiding her to Tsukuyomi as she managed to free him from his prison. Then she carried him upon her back for miles until she found the sand village, by the anbu, and they were taken in.
 
PostPosted: Sat Aug 05, 2017 10:58 pm
The Wolf of Asgard


Personality - cannot be master of hiding your emotions as your character has no proper training.
You start with 6 formless slots
Heart of Water PA is illegal by our PA Approval Rules


bb3000ae


Chakra should be at 350 instead of 360.
You have a +2 to nin learning, not +1.
You start with 6 formless slots.
I have to ask for a slightly more detailed history. Please understand that this is to ensure everyone has an even starting point. For example; we do not allow Workers to have outright access to a family forge as they can RP that they do not pay material cost, and thus are free to make pure profit. Always willing to work with you, of course, so don't fret!



Nostalgic Gaming Nerd


You start with 6 formless slot but otherwise right to go!
 


BlackFruity

Crew

Lucky Loiterer


bb3000ae

Desirable Lover

PostPosted: Sun Aug 06, 2017 11:11 pm
BlackFruity
Updates made. Chakra should be 360 though I believe. Elemental Duel wielder class grants 10 more chakra to pool


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Full Name: Tokogami Nara
Nickname: Toko
Age: 16
Birthdate: 8/6
Gender: Female

Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 120

Nindo: N/A
Personality: Lazy and passive when there is nothing to do, unmotivated coming from her Nara blood. When there is a job to do or something that must be accomplished she switches to a more serious and deadly personality. Clever and complicated, such is the Nara way.

Village: Kiri
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Bukijutsu
____Discipline Mystic Hero:
Second Class: Ninjutsu
____Discipline Elemental Dual Wielder

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Bloodline: Nara

Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Dark Purple
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Archery
• Knives
Weaknesses:
• Bright Lights
• Work
Fears:
• Running out of supplies
• Running out of food

Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu one (2) post faster.
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Armory: Learn 1 Additional Buki Style
• I Have You Now: Take another post before Shadow Immitation Jutsu can be broken by force.

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Bow
Weapon Range: Long?
Weapon Weight: Small
Weapon Size: Short bow
Weapon Location: Back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 10 Arrows
• 5 Kunai
• Basic Clothes

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

{Raiton}


{Doton}


{Nara}


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 06 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

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Toko and her family lived out in the Water Country on a small uninhabited island. It was close to the Fire Country to which the family would make trips to hunt. They hunted in the Nara forest, supposed to be only for the clan but the game and plant life there could also be sold high on the black market.

Toko did not enjoy doing this, but when she brought this up her parents would smack her. She learned disagreeing would be punished so she did whatever they said. During one of their trips, they were hunting a special target. They jumped a Nara family in the woods, killing the parents and taking the kid with them. Back on the island they wanted to kid to teach them the Nara clan Jutsu. Information like that could be sold as well as help them. The boy refused and was beaten until he couldn’t move his legs. At night Toko brought him so left over food, she tried to release him but the boy was too beaten to run.

As thanks he showed her a couple of the jutsu, the parents walked in on her learning and began to beat them both. Toko used her new jutsu to stop her parents, but the damage had already been done to the boy and he died. In anger Toko marched them both out by their shadows and had them walk into the water til the bubbles stop. She left the island and headed for the main village, taking the last name Nara for the boy who did not make it.

 
PostPosted: Tue Aug 08, 2017 9:33 pm
bb3000ae

History and personality contradict each other - History says Toko 'adopted' the Nara clan name, while personality says she is Nara blood. Currently, the history is illegal anyway - it states Toko knows Nara jutsu when she can't know them (without maybe sacrificing the rank of Genin for Academy Student and not knowing the beginning jutsu - but that would still need approval of VC or Captain, and even then, they mayprefer actual blood-related Nara to learn the clan, not learners of the jutsu.

The Wolf of Asgard

Approved  


BlackFruity

Crew

Lucky Loiterer


bb3000ae

Desirable Lover

PostPosted: Tue Aug 08, 2017 11:25 pm
BlackFruity
Keeping it adopted, If that not ok then can we agree she had nara ancestors she didn't know about so carries the blood.


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Full Name: Tokogami Nara
Nickname: Toko
Age: 16
Birthdate: 8/6
Gender: Female

Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 120

Nindo: N/A
Personality: Lazy and passive when there is nothing to do. When there is a job to do or something that must be accomplished she switches to a more serious and deadly personality. Clever and complicated.

Village: Kiri
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Bukijutsu
____Discipline Mystic Hero:
Second Class: Ninjutsu
____Discipline Elemental Dual Wielder

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Bloodline: Nara

Chakra Pool: 360
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Raiton, Doton
Chakra Color: Dark Purple
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Archery
• Knives
Weaknesses:
• Bright Lights
• Work
Fears:
• Running out of supplies
• Running out of food

Reductions:
• Learn Ninjutsu one (2) post faster.
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] post faster.
Personal Attributes:
• Armory: Learn 1 Additional Buki Style
• I Have You Now: Take another post before Shadow Immitation Jutsu can be broken by force.

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Ryo: 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Type: Bow
Weapon Range: Long?
Weapon Weight: Small
Weapon Size: Short bow
Weapon Location: Back

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 10 Arrows
• 5 Kunai
• Basic Clothes

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

{Raiton}


{Doton}


{Nara}


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 06 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬

Toko and her family lived out in the Water Country on a small uninhabited island. It was close to the Fire Country to which the family would make trips to hunt. They hunted in the Nara forest, supposed to be only for the clan but the game and plant life there could also be sold high on the black market.

Toko did not enjoy doing this, but when she brought this up her parents would smack her. She learned disagreeing would be punished so she did whatever they said. During one of their trips, they were hunting a special target. They jumped a Nara family in the woods, killing the parents and taking the kid with them. Back on the island they wanted to kid to teach them the Nara clan Jutsu. Information like that could be sold as well as help them. The boy refused and was beaten until he couldn’t move his legs. At night Toko brought him so left over food, she tried to release him but the boy was too beaten to run.

Parents walked in on her learning and began to beat them both. Toko used a knife to stop her parents, but the damage had already been done to the boy and he died. In anger Toko stabbed them to death. She left the island and headed for the main village, taking the last name Nara for the boy who did not make it.

 
PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2017 2:38 pm
HeadlessKoko

Somewhat-Tentatively Approved
(OOC: I still don't think the PAs are going to pass and I'd rather work out the kinks in my old character's first, but the first issue isn't going to be solved no matter how long I stare at the profile and the second matter is really taking way too long. Therefore, here she is.

About my first PA. I'm willing to give up the ability to use all ninjutsu except those listed as fuuinjutsu and kuchiyose if that helps make it more acceptable.)

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Full Name: Luna Majora
Nickname: Luna
Age: 11
Birthdate: 10/31
Gender: Female

Height: 4' 9"
Weight: 99 lbs.

Nindo: "Please don't leave me..."
Personality:Don't let Luna's unconventional choice of weapons fool you. She is a serious and diligent worker, dedicated and loyal to her family and friends. She may find it hard to express herself most of the time, but she truly cares for those who have earned her trust. She will defend and protect to her last breath, the determination of a knight belying her small frame. The type to silently suffer through her problems and others, Luna's work can usually only be seen by those who look for it. Any request for advice from her is rare, and so long as the only one hurt will be her, she'll make even major decisions without consulting anyone. For all her lack of self-preservation, though, Luna is incredibly careful about collateral damage on others, and perhaps asks for too many second opinions when an idea might hurt someone besides her. There isn't a particular expression that appears to be her trademark as she appears to have difficulty expressing anything. Her hardest expression is perhaps a smile. Her easiest expression appears to be the deadpan, "Are you serious?".

Village: n/a
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Bukijutsu
____DisciplineMystic Hero
Second Class: Worker
____DisciplineLegendary Smith

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Bloodline: Uzumaki

Chakra Pool: 200
Stamina Pool: 260
• The Uzumaki have deep chakra pools: +60 Stamina.
Chakra Element: None.
Chakra Color: Will-o-wisp blue
Chakra Materialization: A fire-like manifestation that frequently flickers into and stays as the shape of various mask designs. "Bubbles" of this fire, often consisting of a mask shape surrounded by further flames, float haphazardly around Luna's body.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Surprising Weapons
• Grace
Weaknesses:
• Probably not the most popular weapons for a reason
• I don't even know what she's supposed to be good at, like seriously
Fears:
• Floods
• Being alone

Reductions:
• The Uzumaki learn Ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] posts faster.
• Rogues/Wanderers learn Tai, Buki, Bloodline, Clan, and Custom jutsu one [1] post faster. This does not stack with available reductions in Dojo or Academies.
Personal Attributes:
• Majora's Kid - After generations separated from ninja influence, the descendants of the Majora line of the Uzumaki clan have lost their ability to use elemental ninjutsu. Their chakra is spread thinly over the five base elements, instead of focusing in the usual two or three, and as a result, they do not have an elemental chakra nature. In return, however, they possess greater talent for fuuinjutsu, an art that they've practiced extensively. Thanks to her Majora blood, Luna can create and use all fuuinjutsu up to their rank in the time it would take most others to use one technique (1 activation), the creation of the seal happening at the same time that the handsigns needed to use the fuuinjutsu are being done. Additionally, all fuuinjutsu and Uzumaki bloodline techniques count as ninjutsu of their rank for the sake of Mystic Hero PA. Fuuinjutsu, for the purposes of this PA includes the Kuchiyose techniques. When creating the seals for a fuuinjutsu, at least one seal must be no more than 1 meter away from the Uzumaki. Additional seals required for the technique can be located as far away as 50 meters at D-rank and an additional 50 meters for every body rank advanced, barring any customs that extend this range.
• Artistic License - Luna doesn't let bukijutsu and taijutsu styles limit her to one weapon or another. As long as it makes some sense, she can apply techniques from bukijutsu/taijutsu styles to any weapon, even a conversion from fist to Buddha statue. Additionally, her choice of unconventional weapons does not get in her way of honoring the customs and traditions of the style, making her creative adaptations a nonfactor in her pursuit of legacy techniques (if those ever become a thing).

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees (+1 smithing title)
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
    [To learn (1): Tendou no Fuuki (rigorous)

• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
    [To learn (7): Akira Style (fan), Denkakushi no Ha (comb), Kanboku (brush and ink), Butsuzou (statue), Hirahira no Uchiwa (fan), Hashi no Heisei (chopsticks), Uchiwa no Sokyaku (solid fan)]

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Weapon Type: Calligraphy Brush
Weapon Range: 8"/ 20cm
Weapon Weight: Less than 1lb.
Weapon Size: 8" x 0.3 inches(thickest point)
Weapon Location: A special scabbard made for the brush. Usually stored inside one of Luna's sleeves.
    • Unlike most calligraphy brushes, this one has been weaponized, Its body is made out of metal. Its tip is made out of rougher, more durable hairs than the traditional brush so that it can hold its shape even after repeated mishandling. There is a small vial within the handle of the brush that contains compressed ink. A small amount of ink, just enough to coat the brush, can be released by pressing a button on the side of the weapon. This method is hardly the proper way of getting ink on the brush, but the simple mechanism is needed to keep up with the speed of battle.

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• Clothes
• Shuriken x10
• Kunai x5

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Fuuinjutsu


Kuchiyose


Uzumaki


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Tendou no Fuuki
Stage 1
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Kanboku
Stage 1
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

Style
Stage 1
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 02

Medium Weapons: Small Brushes [Locked]
• D-rank
• C-rank

Soft Mental


Hard Mental


Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

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The Majora clan was a rather small branch of the Uzumaki clan that lived as a part of a barbarian tribe for generations. Like the rest of the tribe, this Uzumaki branch family lived peacefully within the Water Country, unaffiliated with any hidden villages or the like. In fact, the tribe spoke a different language than the internationally accepted language that all village's spoke. Within the tribe, only the Majora clan taught their children the language of the ninja world, and even then, it was only because knowledge of that language was required to use fuuinjutsu. The Majora still passed on the Uzumaki clan's teachings, the masks and the seals, but mostly out of tradition, with any combat application intended for self defense. In fact, it had been so long, entire generations, since any Majora had seen the battlefield that the family line had begun to lost some of the defining traits of shinobi, namely their elemental alignments.

Luna lived a peaceful life as a child of the Majora. The only child of her family but not the only child of the small but not quite dwindling Majora clan, she spent her days as any child would. She ate, she played, she helped with what small chores she could handle, she learned, and she slept. In a close knit tribe as her's, being an only child just meant that her cousins and the other children were like her siblings. She looked up to and was taken care of by the older children. Those her age were her closest playmates, the ones she would play and fool around with the most. As for the younger, she would take care of and generally be held responsible for any in her vicinity.

Out of their small group, there was one older sibling figure in particular that Luna looked up to. It was not Takeda. However, Takeda was a popular favorite older sibling choice. He was reliable, strong, and trusted by the elders. In lieu of comic book heroes and a united oral tradition for the tribe, he was a hero to most of the children and was either envied or admired by the younger generation, with the admirers significantly outnumbering the enviers. He wasn't Luna's favorite favorite older sibling to go to when she needed help, but she certainly admired and respected him like all the others.

As a result, when Luna's small tribe decided to go to Kirigakure to work for much needed supplies and when Takeda expressed his disgust for the idea, a lot of the kids were prone to agree with him. Influence was a scary thing. Most of the kids didn't even have a reason to dislike Kirigakure, but they, especially the younger ones, still followed their older brother's lead. It was a superficial distrust, but it was still distrust. Even was a little glad when she found out that she wouldn't need to go.

Unfortunately, neither staying nor leaving would have changed anything. Too quickly for anyone to prepare, the waters swelled into a towering force of destruction that swept indiscriminately over the small island that Luna's tribe called home. The island swallowed by the ocean now, Luna lost her family.

As far as she knows, Luna is the only survivor from among those who stayed behind at their village. She was picked up by a wanderer, Tsuki, who happened to be travelling to Kirigakure to challenge its swordsmen. With the mysterious traveler, Luna made her way to Kiri to check for any survivors from her tribe in the village. Takeda, an only survivor himself, was just one of the many injured. Like finding a needle in a hay stack, Luna failed to hear any tell of him. With no news about any of her fellow tribesmen, she had little she could do but accept the harsh reality of her new world.

Alone. Lost. Luna didn't want this. Tsuki, more stranger than anything else, was now the most familiar person to Luna. The small child clung to this thin rope, and continues to cling to her savior to this day. All she asks is, "Please don't leave me..."


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azeiel the risen

blackfruity

Everything looks fine, I just can' t give my complete OK because I'm not 100% familiar with the workings of Fuuin [PA 1]. PA 2 looks.... fine?  

Hurrak

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BlackFruity

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2017 9:20 pm
Hurrak
HeadlessKoko

Somewhat-Tentatively Approved
(OOC: I still don't think the PAs are going to pass and I'd rather work out the kinks in my old character's first, but the first issue isn't going to be solved no matter how long I stare at the profile and the second matter is really taking way too long. Therefore, here she is.

About my first PA. I'm willing to give up the ability to use all ninjutsu except those listed as fuuinjutsu and kuchiyose if that helps make it more acceptable.)

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Full Name: Luna Majora
Nickname: Luna
Age: 11
Birthdate: 10/31
Gender: Female

Height: 4' 9"
Weight: 99 lbs.

Nindo: "Please don't leave me..."
Personality:Don't let Luna's unconventional choice of weapons fool you. She is a serious and diligent worker, dedicated and loyal to her family and friends. She may find it hard to express herself most of the time, but she truly cares for those who have earned her trust. She will defend and protect to her last breath, the determination of a knight belying her small frame. The type to silently suffer through her problems and others, Luna's work can usually only be seen by those who look for it. Any request for advice from her is rare, and so long as the only one hurt will be her, she'll make even major decisions without consulting anyone. For all her lack of self-preservation, though, Luna is incredibly careful about collateral damage on others, and perhaps asks for too many second opinions when an idea might hurt someone besides her. There isn't a particular expression that appears to be her trademark as she appears to have difficulty expressing anything. Her hardest expression is perhaps a smile. Her easiest expression appears to be the deadpan, "Are you serious?".

Village: n/a
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Bukijutsu
____DisciplineMystic Hero
Second Class: Worker
____DisciplineLegendary Smith

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Bloodline: Uzumaki

Chakra Pool: 200
Stamina Pool: 260
• The Uzumaki have deep chakra pools: +60 Stamina.
Chakra Element: None.
Chakra Color: Will-o-wisp blue
Chakra Materialization: A fire-like manifestation that frequently flickers into and stays as the shape of various mask designs. "Bubbles" of this fire, often consisting of a mask shape surrounded by further flames, float haphazardly around Luna's body.

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Surprising Weapons
• Grace
Weaknesses:
• Probably not the most popular weapons for a reason
• I don't even know what she's supposed to be good at, like seriously
Fears:
• Floods
• Being alone

Reductions:
• The Uzumaki learn Ninjutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [1] posts faster.
• Rogues/Wanderers learn Tai, Buki, Bloodline, Clan, and Custom jutsu one [1] post faster. This does not stack with available reductions in Dojo or Academies.
Personal Attributes:
• Majora's Kid - After generations separated from ninja influence, the descendants of the Majora line of the Uzumaki clan have lost their ability to use elemental ninjutsu. Their chakra is spread thinly over the five base elements, instead of focusing in the usual two or three, and as a result, they do not have an elemental chakra nature. In return, however, they possess greater talent for fuuinjutsu, an art that they've practiced extensively. Thanks to her Majora blood, Luna can create and use all fuuinjutsu up to their rank in the time it would take most others to use one technique (1 activation), the creation of the seal happening at the same time that the handsigns needed to use the fuuinjutsu are being done. Additionally, all fuuinjutsu and Uzumaki bloodline techniques count as ninjutsu of their rank for the sake of Mystic Hero PA. Fuuinjutsu, for the purposes of this PA includes the Kuchiyose techniques. When creating the seals for a fuuinjutsu, at least one seal must be no more than 1 meter away from the Uzumaki. Additional seals required for the technique can be located as far away as 50 meters at D-rank and an additional 50 meters for every body rank advanced, barring any customs that extend this range.
• Artistic License - Luna doesn't let bukijutsu and taijutsu styles limit her to one weapon or another. As long as it makes some sense, she can apply techniques from bukijutsu/taijutsu styles to any weapon, even a conversion from fist to Buddha statue. Additionally, her choice of unconventional weapons does not get in her way of honoring the customs and traditions of the style, making her creative adaptations a nonfactor in her pursuit of legacy techniques (if those ever become a thing).

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees (+1 smithing title)
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
    [To learn (1): Tendou no Fuuki (rigorous)

• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
    [To learn (7): Akira Style (fan), Denkakushi no Ha (comb), Kanboku (brush and ink), Butsuzou (statue), Hirahira no Uchiwa (fan), Hashi no Heisei (chopsticks), Uchiwa no Sokyaku (solid fan)]

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Weapon Type: Calligraphy Brush
Weapon Range: 8"/ 20cm
Weapon Weight: Less than 1lb.
Weapon Size: 8" x 0.3 inches(thickest point)
Weapon Location: A special scabbard made for the brush. Usually stored inside one of Luna's sleeves.
    • Unlike most calligraphy brushes, this one has been weaponized, Its body is made out of metal. Its tip is made out of rougher, more durable hairs than the traditional brush so that it can hold its shape even after repeated mishandling. There is a small vial within the handle of the brush that contains compressed ink. A small amount of ink, just enough to coat the brush, can be released by pressing a button on the side of the weapon. This method is hardly the proper way of getting ink on the brush, but the simple mechanism is needed to keep up with the speed of battle.

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• Clothes
• Shuriken x10
• Kunai x5

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Fuuinjutsu


Kuchiyose


Uzumaki


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Tendou no Fuuki
Stage 1
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Kanboku
Stage 1
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

Style
Stage 1
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 02

Medium Weapons: Small Brushes [Locked]
• D-rank
• C-rank

Soft Mental


Hard Mental


Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

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The Majora clan was a rather small branch of the Uzumaki clan that lived as a part of a barbarian tribe for generations. Like the rest of the tribe, this Uzumaki branch family lived peacefully within the Water Country, unaffiliated with any hidden villages or the like. In fact, the tribe spoke a different language than the internationally accepted language that all village's spoke. Within the tribe, only the Majora clan taught their children the language of the ninja world, and even then, it was only because knowledge of that language was required to use fuuinjutsu. The Majora still passed on the Uzumaki clan's teachings, the masks and the seals, but mostly out of tradition, with any combat application intended for self defense. In fact, it had been so long, entire generations, since any Majora had seen the battlefield that the family line had begun to lost some of the defining traits of shinobi, namely their elemental alignments.

Luna lived a peaceful life as a child of the Majora. The only child of her family but not the only child of the small but not quite dwindling Majora clan, she spent her days as any child would. She ate, she played, she helped with what small chores she could handle, she learned, and she slept. In a close knit tribe as her's, being an only child just meant that her cousins and the other children were like her siblings. She looked up to and was taken care of by the older children. Those her age were her closest playmates, the ones she would play and fool around with the most. As for the younger, she would take care of and generally be held responsible for any in her vicinity.

Out of their small group, there was one older sibling figure in particular that Luna looked up to. It was not Takeda. However, Takeda was a popular favorite older sibling choice. He was reliable, strong, and trusted by the elders. In lieu of comic book heroes and a united oral tradition for the tribe, he was a hero to most of the children and was either envied or admired by the younger generation, with the admirers significantly outnumbering the enviers. He wasn't Luna's favorite favorite older sibling to go to when she needed help, but she certainly admired and respected him like all the others.

As a result, when Luna's small tribe decided to go to Kirigakure to work for much needed supplies and when Takeda expressed his disgust for the idea, a lot of the kids were prone to agree with him. Influence was a scary thing. Most of the kids didn't even have a reason to dislike Kirigakure, but they, especially the younger ones, still followed their older brother's lead. It was a superficial distrust, but it was still distrust. Even was a little glad when she found out that she wouldn't need to go.

Unfortunately, neither staying nor leaving would have changed anything. Too quickly for anyone to prepare, the waters swelled into a towering force of destruction that swept indiscriminately over the small island that Luna's tribe called home. The island swallowed by the ocean now, Luna lost her family.

As far as she knows, Luna is the only survivor from among those who stayed behind at their village. She was picked up by a wanderer, Tsuki, who happened to be travelling to Kirigakure to challenge its swordsmen. With the mysterious traveler, Luna made her way to Kiri to check for any survivors from her tribe in the village. Takeda, an only survivor himself, was just one of the many injured. Like finding a needle in a hay stack, Luna failed to hear any tell of him. With no news about any of her fellow tribesmen, she had little she could do but accept the harsh reality of her new world.

Alone. Lost. Luna didn't want this. Tsuki, more stranger than anything else, was now the most familiar person to Luna. The small child clung to this thin rope, and continues to cling to her savior to this day. All she asks is, "Please don't leave me..."


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azeiel the risen

blackfruity

Everything looks fine, I just can' t give my complete OK because I'm not 100% familiar with the workings of Fuuin [PA 1]. PA 2 looks.... fine?



So, let me break this down so I've got this right:
Majora's Kid - After generations separated from ninja influence, the descendants of the Majora line of the Uzumaki clan have lost their ability to use elemental ninjutsu. - this implies she cannot learn any elemental jutsu

Their chakra is spread thinly over the five base elements, instead of focusing in the usual two or three, and as a result, they do not have an elemental chakra nature. - this implies she can learn any elemental nature jutsu

Contradiction needs correction before it can be approved.


In return, however, they possess greater talent for fuuinjutsu, an art that they've practiced extensively. Thanks to her Majora blood, Luna can create and use all fuuinjutsu up to their rank in the time it would take most others to use one technique (1 activation), the creation of the seal happening at the same time that the handsigns needed to use the fuuinjutsu are being done. - unless the tech requires more than one activation post in its description, in which case all activations must be done.

Additionally, all fuuinjutsu and Uzumaki bloodline techniques count as ninjutsu of their rank for the sake of Mystic Hero PA. - must be stationary to use Fuuinjutsu.

Fuuinjutsu, for the purposes of this PA, includes the Kuchiyose techniques.

When creating the seals for a fuuinjutsu, at least one seal must be no more than 1 meter away from the Uzumaki.

Additional seals required for the technique can be located as far away as 50 meters at D-rank and an additional 50 meters for every body rank advanced, barring any customs that extend this range - Denied. Will allow up to 10 meters at D-Rank body and up to 50 meters from C-Rank body, even when used with Mystic Hero Discipline.

This PA is asking for:
Ninjutsu element to be 'replaced/altered' for Fuuinjutsu use (needs clarification)
Fuuinjutsu to be treated like Ninjutsu in casting time.
Fuuinjutsu to be applicable to Mystic Hero Discipline.
Kuchiyose to be treated as Fuuinjutsu is to this PA.
A range on seal creation from the user's position.

I beleive that is a little too much to be asking for in a single PA, even with limitations put in place alongside them.  
PostPosted: Wed Aug 09, 2017 10:13 pm
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Full Name: Maiko Nara
Nickname: Mai
Age: 17
Birthdate: June 8
Gender: Female

Height: 5'9
Weight: 190 lbs

Nindo: "I don't want my friends to get hurt, but if they're knuckleheads about accepting my help, I don't mind knocking some sense into them."
Personality: She breaks the mold in the Nara clan by being a hard worker, and is the exact type of strong, loud woman that Nara tend to be attracted to. If she has an opinion, everyone in the room will know it - and likely have ringing ears afterwards. She gets angry when things don't go her way and tends to get violent when she's angry. However, her brash and opinionated nature is often directed more at enemies than her own allies; yet, she has no problem shutting up an idiot on her own side. Her strength is in how protective she is of her own; she would easily sacrifice her life for anyone in her squadron or her village and wouldn't think twice about it. She's willful and demanding, and generally an abrasive personality, but she also wants what's best for those around her and is willing to fight for those too meek or unambitious to do it themselves. She also eats up praise but doesn't visibly receive it well, often brushing it off or hardly acknowledging it; though the kind words echo in her head for months later. She seeks approval that she never got from her parents but doesn't active search for validation.

Village: Kumo
Title: Genin
Rank: D-Rank Shinobi
First Class: Bloodline
____DisciplineBlood Bender
Second Class: Bloodline
____DisciplineThoroughbred

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Bloodline: Nara

Chakra Pool: 270
Stamina Pool: 250
Chakra Element: Maruton
Chakra Color: Red
Chakra Materialization: General materialization

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Stubborn
• Strong will-power
Weaknesses:
• Tempermental
• Impulsive
Fears:
• Murky, "bottomless" natural bodies of water where anything in the water is indiscernible
• Alzheimer's or amnesia

Reductions:
• Bloodline -2
xxx• Cost of BL tech -10
xxx• C/B/A/S-Rank refunds 5 stm or 5 chk depending on what was used
Personal Attributes:
• No use of any elemental ninjutsu, but maruton negates elements of same rank and lower
• Two posts less to train bukijutsu, one post more on genjutsu

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 04
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02

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Weapon Type: Tanto
Weapon Range: 10 inches
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs
Weapon Size: 16 in (handle incl.) x 3 in. x 1.5 in.
Weapon Location: Lower back, belt-like holster

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• Tanto
• x15 Kunai
• Fishnet shirt
• Tank top
• Black body suit (to shorts)
• Those ninja shoes
• Black, basic knapsack

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Nara


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Enchantment


Illusory


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s

Current Slots Available → 00 // 03
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X]

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Maiko's older sister was well-mannered and well-received, and overall just a kind lady. She was ten years older than Maiko and always stole the show,
even on Maiko's birthdays. Maiko was constantly told to be more like her sister, to be well-behaved and ignore her own feelings so that others would like more. It led to a growing feeling of injustice, and when her sister died because of a rogue shinobi attack during a trip to Takumi, Maiko decided she was going to be better than her sister by becoming a shinobi herself and preventing such tragedy. She has a strained relationship with her parents even today, and lives in her late sister's old home since it's paid off and needs a housekeeper. Maiko practices ninjutsu out of spite and motivates herself through anger, but is growing closer and closer to her classmates and villagers.


killing katsurou yamanaka in kirigakure in order to pursue this character.  

ghostfinch

Seeker


Pandora Green

Aged Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2017 3:50 am
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Full Name: YuRI Autsumoro
Nickname: Lurker
Age: 20
Birthdate: june 22nd
Gender: Male

Height: 6 ft 2
Weight: 180 pounds

Nindo:"OMNuMNOMNOMNOM. "
Personality: typically looks at others outside his bubble as food sources, with personalities. Some of these aren't to be eaten. However he isn't incapable of forming bonds. He sees those outside his circle to be spare blood and our meat shields. Agressive and almost always cranky if he hasn't "fed" in a few days. Fairly unpredictable though some can if they observe him long enough. Doesnt tend to hide but has an aversion to light.

Village: kumogakure
Title: Genin
Rank: D
First Class: Tamer
____
Second Class: Tamer
____Discipline
Eternal Partners: The user is able to nurture, grow, and bond with a single animal, almost becoming an animal themselves with traits, characteristics, and natural weaponry. This single animal will be exactly the same at the user's level in chakra and stamina pool, and able to manipulate any two elements, and perform 3 activations a post (max of 2 offensive). The user gains an additional 10 Ninjutsu slots per rank, which may be split between them and their chosen animal as desired. The user also gains one [1] tamer attribute at each rank (must be submitted for approval).
Specialization:If this class is taken as the first and second class, then each of the animals start with an additional 4 ninjutsu. Additionally, the user gains 2 tamer animal attributes (must be submitted to the customs thread) as well as learning 1 animal language per rank after 8 posts of training. Animal languages do not have to be vocal in nature, but the species of the animal must be taken into consideration when it comes to complicated commands. Even shinobi animals will not be able to understand and compute complex orders the way a human can.

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Full Name: Iris
Nickname: {Nicknames or Aliases}
Species: Sulaweisi fruit bat
Age: 2 years
Gender: Femals
Height: 4 inches
Weight: miniscule

Chakra Pool: 275
Stamina Pool: 275
Chakra Element:
Chakra Color: green
Chakra Materialization: looks like a mach cone
Strengths:
• Flight
• Small target
Weaknesses:
• Light body
• Fragile
Fears:
• Snakes
• Hawks

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 // 14


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Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank}

Chakra Pool: 275 
Stamina Pool: 275 
Chakra Element: wind, earth
Chakra Color: pink
Chakra Materialization: floating eyes

Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→ {Where does this come from?}

Strengths:
• Ferocity
• adaptable
Weaknesses:
• photosensitivity
• needs to feed regularly to maintain full potential
Fears:
• Catholics
• Losing his teeth

Reduction
• Learn taijutsu two [2] posts faster.

Tamer Attributes → 03// 11
• Apex predator: natural Weapons are hard as steel, the surrounding tissue just as hard. Two canine teeth are holow but just as durable, nails like small knives on his hands
• Flight: Yuri has large bat wings hidden folded against his back. They lay perfectly flat but when extended can rip his own top off with the force they deploy. These are capable of actual flight at his normal speed for 10 stamina per post at genin. 5 at chunnin and free at Jonin
• Echo location : Able to sense mapping of surroundings accurately using present soundwaves
Personal Attributes:
• Cannibal: after drinking blood yuri receives a "heavily" boost to strength if it is within the last 2 days of rp. If he hasn't drank blood in the last 2 days his strength is decreased moderately. This bonus applies for 15 in combat posts otherwise, due to extra energy being burnt off. After the 15 posts are up he returns to normal strength and is only weekend after the emergent which used the 15th post.
• Spurred on: During combat the presence of bleeding entities pushes yuri forward with a blood lust. For every person bleeding or jutsu active in the field involving blood, yuri receives a slight increase to his speed. However the higher his boosts from this attribute the less he is able to distinguish friend from foe.
• Venomous Nature: Grappling attacks may be made through bites with no detriment to the users mouth.
• Familiar: If Yuris bat dies, it revives in 30 days time.

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Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero}
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero} {Additional information in mission board subforum}

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}

Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}

Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 14
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00

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Weapon Type: Cestus
Weapon Range: Personal
Weapon Weight: Boutafew
Weapon Size: his hands
Weapon Location: on his hands
• an ancient battle glove, sometimes used in pankration. They were worn like today's boxing gloves, but were made with leather strips and sometimes filled with iron plates or fitted with blades or spikes, and used as weapons.

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• Umbrella
• 15 senbon
• {Personal objects kept by the character should be listed hall clothing
•Necklace (pennacle)

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ] 

{Your first element's name} {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton}


{Your second element's name} {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton} {If only one element, remove section}


{Other jutsu type's name} {Bloodline, Kugutsu, Eiseijutsu, etc.} {If none, remove section}
• 

▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}


▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s
Current Slots Available → 00 // 02 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Hard Physical

Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}

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YuRI started out ********. His parents were miguided siblings. One with anger issues and some mental instability, the other with a few. ..physical deformities. Somehow they made a person capable of functioning enough to pass kumo academy. Yuri however isn't entirely normal. Many am animal has disappeared from the back alleys near his home. He devoloped a taste for blood at an early age, his body flourishing on it. So much that it fuels him like a drug. If he doesn't get it, he goes through withdrawal and becomes weak. Oddly enough, the withdrawal never ends for him. He never had any real friends, even in the academy and doesn't have a happy home life. It only got worse after his parents found a half eaten doc in his bedroom. This of course is all swept under the rug in his family. Everyone denis he is anything but a well adjusted graduate of the academy.
 
PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2017 11:42 am
time and timor

killing katsurou yamanaka in kirigakure in order to pursue this character.


Tentatively Approved :: my only quib is the height to weight ratio.
It is realistic but i'm curious as to what her extra 30lbs are? Is it muscle?

Make sure your inventory is fleshed out: Do we have pockets? Bags? Is she carrying any hair-ties? Bubble gum? Little things. In the words of Fruity, "this is to prevent the whole 'I pull X out of a hidden pocket that was not damaged from the last attack you made against me! "

Holy Rinaku


Things are looking good for your profile, now that I've been informed about the classes some more...
Another mod will review your attributes!

My only recommendation is that you give a little more detail to your inventory, also. Secret pockets in his coats or pants, maybe? Your call.


azeiel the risen
blackfruity
 

Hurrak

Eternal Lop


ghostfinch

Seeker

PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2017 12:42 pm
Hurrak


Tentatively Approved :: my only quib is the height to weight ratio.
It is realistic but i'm curious as to what her extra 30lbs are? Is it muscle?

Make sure your inventory is fleshed out: Do we have pockets? Bags? Is she carrying any hair-ties? Bubble gum? Little things. In the words of Fruity, "this is to prevent the whole 'I pull X out of a hidden pocket that was not damaged from the last attack you made against me! "


pocketless body suit.
no extra stuff; usually i give my charas smth but i'm not really worried about it with maiko bc i've never used the extra stuff on any of my others
the flak jacket will have to be purchased so i won't reference that yet in inventory
i usually put a little extra weight on my characters - call it chub xD
edit; well ok i guess i should add a knapsack for all those kunai lmao  
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