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 Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 3:17 pm
Celestine Ravencroft KaguraSakata Oh I remember that one I enjoyed it (and my little part) immensely, One thing I really need to edit with that story is the fact that Caelen never killed the High Priest. I actually mentioned that fact in another story, but I should probably find a way to put it into Caelen's intro story so people see right off that he isn't evil. The way I left things, it kinda makes it sound like he did kill the Priest. I really need to fix that. I also need to be more specific about the time frame in which the BFAA was searching for the hidden temple because it effects the timeline of when Cel arrived in Gaia and joined BFAA. I had to go back and read over it to make sure my Cel OC wasn't in it. The way I figure the timelines, Cel showed up a few months after BFAA summoned Caelen. I dont believe your Cel oc was in it we had Arc,Chef,me Hinata and Rem mentioned by name, and then a general Bartob group
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 3:21 pm
Celestine Ravencroft I just went back and read over the story in the Barton Chronicles that entailed how Caelen came to serve Barton. In reading it, I began to think it might be a good idea for everyone else to read over it as well to re-familiarize themselves with the story. Our RP is not just about the senshi, but Barton and BFAA too, so the back story may be very important to future events that happen in the RP. Try to ignore the spelling and grammar mistakes. I do need to go back and do some cleanup and maybe add in a few clarifying details, but the meat of the back story is still solid. Which page is it on again? I'll admit I've been bad about reading that thread.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 3:25 pm
Chibi Halo Which page is it on again? I'll admit I've been bad about reading that thread. Here is the direct link to the post containing the story. It's the first story in the post, called Dark Deliverance. Barton Chronicles
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 4:10 pm
Celestine Ravencroft Chibi Halo Which page is it on again? I'll admit I've been bad about reading that thread. Here is the direct link to the post containing the story. It's the first story in the post, called Dark Deliverance. Barton ChroniclesOkay thanks, I'll have to read that while I work on the general meat and bones of the rest of that post so I don't make any major mistakes with how I handle leading into things.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 4:24 pm
Chibi Halo Okay thanks, I'll have to read that while I work on the general meat and bones of the rest of that post so I don't make any major mistakes with how I handle leading into things.
Sounds good. Just be aware, I am in the middle of moving all of the Chronicles stories over to their new thread, so there is a slight chance something might break or accidentally get deleted. I'm trying to be as careful as possible, but I already found one story that's been partially cut. I just hope I still have the full story on file in my travel drive. gonk
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 5:29 pm
Celestine Ravencroft Chibi Halo Okay thanks, I'll have to read that while I work on the general meat and bones of the rest of that post so I don't make any major mistakes with how I handle leading into things.
Sounds good. Just be aware, I am in the middle of moving all of the Chronicles stories over to their new thread, so there is a slight chance something might break or accidentally get deleted. I'm trying to be as careful as possible, but I already found one story that's been partially cut. I just hope I still have the full story on file in my travel drive. gonk It's all good. I think I have what I need and it really doesn't change too much with how she's going to handle things. If I read it right they really don't know much beyond that one incident and just what Luca was trying to summon, just that he was playing around with dark magic. So it would be safe to say the others don't know too much about the bombing, the dead gods, the rumors (the GCA can't fully confirm things at this point) of a massive hit out for Gino Gambino's head, the possibility (rumors passed on from the Abbey up on Porta Denia) of a cult trying to recruit people to follow a dark and fallen god, a possible attack over on Dref Dur, and missing airships. They reacted to one battle in what could be all out global war if what I'm reading is right.
FYI the missing airships part is an incident Aylin dealt with near the beginning of this whole mess and what eventually caused the formation of the Casimir Alliance and may or may not have any relevance to the overall war for the very soul of Gaia (it was an RP plot that I was running with about five years ago when the Airship saga was still young).
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 5:35 pm
I'm sure you'll find a way to work all of that in eventually. Oh, I left you a slot for promoting the CGA in the new Barton Historical Records Archive. I think since you are on the crew, you can edit my post, so feel free to add any links and info about the GCA. I consider it an important part of the Barton/Gaia history, so we may as well have a link to the guild or GCD thread at least.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 6:56 pm
Celestine Ravencroft I'm sure you'll find a way to work all of that in eventually. Oh, I left you a slot for promoting the CGA in the new Barton Historical Records Archive. I think since you are on the crew, you can edit my post, so feel free to add any links and info about the GCA. I consider it an important part of the Barton/Gaia history, so we may as well have a link to the guild or GCD thread at least. Ball's in your court now. xp
And thanks for considering that. I can definitely work up something for that which will fit in with the guild and better explain the Barton branch, especially the official position they take around town. Every town has a branch of the Alliance. At least that's what I kind of want to have the Alliance to be something global.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 7:19 pm
Accio Alice `Hydro Well if anyone wants to interact with Charm or DV let me know, right now I'm kinda just waiting to see what you guys are doing. I don't really have much for Charm to do unless someone else does something and DV will probably just stalk the mansion during the night. She's bored. xP Well Alice!OC was who Hydro!OC encountered back on the bridge, right? DV will definitely react to her. Charm's free game to interact with if you're near her. She might not know what to make of you. Sorry late response things and forgetting. Also I posted with Charm again just because.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 7:56 pm
The long ramble is now posted. xd I wasn't kidding abut heavy monologue. Ack, I think maybe I overdid it, but from my perspective, Caelen's been wanting to clear the air for some time now and just never had a chance.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 8:06 pm
Celestine Ravencroft The long ramble is now posted. xd I wasn't kidding abut heavy monologue. Ack, I think maybe I overdid it, but from my perspective, Caelen's been wanting to clear the air for some time now and just never had a chance. Poor Cae. crying Don't worry I'm sure I'll have some long posts coming up, it's just that I mainly need Charm to be nosy about everything, so she listens in on things.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 8:08 pm
It's ok Hydro. Oh, I also made a couple of important edits to the fourth set of blue text in that post, so you might want to go back and catch it.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 8:23 pm
Celestine Ravencroft It's ok Hydro. Oh, I also made a couple of important edits to the fourth set of blue text in that post, so you might want to go back and catch it. I just re-read it; I'm hoping everyone doesn't scatter in the morning, because Charm is probably going to try to talk to everyone about something important.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 8:30 pm
`Hydro I'm hoping everyone doesn't scatter in the morning, because Charm is probably going to try to talk to everyone about something important. Well, she's free to hang around the Manor and talk to the BFAA members. I doubt the town will have school or any real businesses open at all the next day after everything that happened. They're probably too spooked and afraid they'll just get attacked again. Can't say I'd blame them. sweatdrop It would make sense to me to have some of the senshi begin training, but I don't know if people will want to send their OCs home to get a few things and say hi to parents/family or not first. We'll just see how it plays out. I know I want Lunette to go home, find a lot of her apartment building got badly damaged because of the tremors the day before, and basically just decide to take her rabbit (who hasn't been fed since the morning of the crow attack at this point), and stay at the Manor. She still needs to talk to Caelen anyhow.
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Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 8:33 pm
Celestine Ravencroft `Hydro I'm hoping everyone doesn't scatter in the morning, because Charm is probably going to try to talk to everyone about something important. Well, she's free to hang around the Manor and talk to the BFAA members. I doubt the town will have school or any real businesses open at all the next day after everything that happened. They're probably too spooked and afraid they'll just get attacked again. Can't say I'd blame them. sweatdrop It would make sense to me to have some of the senshi begin training, but I don't know if people will want to send their OCs home to get a few things and say hi to parents/family or not first. We'll just see how it plays out. I know I want Lunette to go home, find a lot of her apartment building got badly damaged because of the tremors the day before, and basically just decide to take her rabbit (who hasn't been fed since the morning of the crow attack at this point), and stay at the Manor. She still needs to talk to Caelen anyhow. Maybe I could have her converse with Alyin and ask if they call could meet back at a certain time. That would play well into what Charm will need to do for what I'm planning, she wants to direct the senshi's attention toward a person who will give them some information on our villian.
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