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 Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 10:29 am
Fenrir Graveheart avedis: I'm over-riding urban's decision and saying Denied. Because urban I don't think you realize just how powerful being able to control EVERY function of your body could be. Not only could he control his thoughts, memories, and heart, but he could also make his character immune to pain by cutting off his brain's access to nerve receptors. He could also block off his lungs to prevent digestion of poison, or even after being poisoned he could move his body so that it pushes it out. The point is he's getting a whole lot more than what you think, and being able to get it all for just a little laziness that isn't even going to affect him in battle is nowhere near worth it.
urban: Your talent is Denied too. I don't remember what it was you said your weakness was going to be when I told you that I'd approve something like this, but it sure as hell wasn't that he feels a little pain from dark attacks. The benefits more than outweigh the cost. And no, you can't get B-ranked paladin skills either. Your the one who suggested I go with the weakness in the first place. I simply agreed and finally got around to writing this up. But alright. Another day then And as for Avedis, I think it was good. Sure he gets all that, but I doubt he realized he got all that.
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Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 10:31 am
I thought your weakness was more along the lines of that you can't use any element skills or something.
And you can't give somebody something op just because you think they're too ignorant to use what they got to its fullest potential.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:52 am
RPC Name: William Rayne
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Shapeshifter Mage
Talent Description: Super-Shifting. He can Shift very fast, and into Very small animals as well, even insects.
Talent Weakness: Massively scared of death
How did the character get this talent?: As he was growing up, his mother dragged him everywhere, running from those that would kill that last of his kind. Before his mother died, He was taught How to shift, and due to the severity of his mother's hold over him an her fear of death, he developed it to, and it motivated him to shift. He was able to shift quickly to avoid danger, and into insects to look conspicuous.
Sample:
William ran fast, scared for his life. He was being chased by knights bent on killing him. He ran fast, running up walls, over buildings, but they seemed to be able to keep on his trail. He was cornered finally and as they attacked, he shifted into a bird, flying around a sword, and shifted immediately back into a human, punching the guard in the face. after that, the other knight swung and William turned into an ant, dropping fast and away from the blade. he transformed then into a rat and scurried away, turning into a bird and flying away.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 3:42 pm
RPC Name: Ronmaru
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Draconian/Berzerker
Talent Description: Ronmaru's talent is simple; he's faster than most Draconians could hope to be. By training his body more thoroughly than most would ever dare, he's strengthened himself enough to where the weight of being a Draconian isn't anywhere near as bad. (+2 Speed, +1 Strength)
Talent Weakness: Due to the extensive physical training Ronmaru underwent in order to gain further strength and speed, he lost a lot of his elemental manipulation abilities, meaning that he can only use one half of his elemental ability (Can only learn 7 of the 14 available fire techniques).
How did the character get this talent?: Like any other physical increase, Ronmaru attained further speed and strength from extreme physical training at the cost of losing one of his elemental affinities.
Sample:
"You think you'll win? Get real, loser!" Jurou said with a smirk as Ronmaru drove his heed down at him. As a shinobi, Jurou was able to dodge easily, whipping out of the way before any harm was dealt. It was plainly obvious that he'd dealt with Draconians before--a lot of their symbolic moves were already child's play for him to avoid. What he didn't realize was that Ronmaru was holding something back. This 'something' was a higher level of speed than most Draconians possessed while on ground. It was a result of all Ronmaru's physical training. As the ninja bobbed and weaved around his strikes, Ronmaru used the pattern to his advantage. After performing another set of kicks and punches--the likes of which Jurou dodged perfectly--Ronmaru rose his leg into the air to strike yet again. His adversary prepared to dodge out of the way more slowly as a taunt to Ronmaru. It was to his shock when the draconian's foot came down with more speed than he would've thought possible, smashing into his shoulder and driving him into the ground with a sickening crunch. The attack had shattered his shoulder and broken his left leg in two places--basically rendering his left side unusable. After delivering the final blow swiftly and painlessly, Ronmaru left the body for some Chimera to pick up later.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:01 pm
RPC Name: Stag
Rank: trainee
Bloodline & Class: Coleo Ranger
Talent Description: Allows the use of the camouflage skill in urban settings and allows Stag to climb on walls even if they are not made of stone
Talent Weakness: does not get the plus one speed from the fly skill
How did the character get this talent?: through years of urban dwelling
Sample: Stag leaps on the wall blending in to remain hidden. He crawls up onto the ceiling. Watching as his target and his two guards move below him. Slowly Stag draws his bows. He loads in a single arrows then drops down from the ceiling landing on top of one of the guards. He then stabs the other guard. He then stands still on the back of one of the guards. He pulls back the arrows and shoots his target in the back as it begins to run. Then stag steps off the guard stabbing him in the spine. Stag then leaps out of the doorway onto the wall of the alley blending in as the rest of the guards enter the room and find the mess and three bodies.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:37 pm
akira: Denied. That is a terrible weakness and I think you can already shape-shift into small creatures anyways.
digitality: Denied. You only have one element anyways dude, so your weakness is void.
polar: Accepted
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:38 pm
Oh...really? ********. XD I'll think of something else, and repost when I'm done.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:16 pm
How about that? I can add onto it a bit more if you'd like.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:21 pm
No, that won't work either. To be honest dude I don't think there's a fair cost for a talent that gives you that much power. I mean you're already a draconian berzerker so with this talent that would give you what, 13 strength and 8 speed? Plus your scales will grow harder with rank so pretty soon it'll be like you have steel armor for skin. Sorry dude but the speed decrease is like the ONLY real downfall to the draconian and I'm not about to let you bypass that at the cost of a few techniques. I'd suggest taking your time to think about some other talent. You don't need one to start off.
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:24 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:24 pm
RPC Name: Yensen D. Howitzer
Rank: Expert
Bloodline & Class: Robot Mechanist
Talent Description: It grants him the part, Khaos Engine. This causes energy to flow through the metals on his body, but only when he is 100% shut down. This metal's energy attracts to other sources of the same energy, thus slowly bringing him back to life.
Talent Weakness: He has to make a whole new body to use, as the remnants of the old one are likely unusable, and are only enough to create the bare skeleton of a machine. Enough to get him around. This means any special abilities the body grants, are gone. If the Khaos engine is removed, the parts will converge on it, but slowly, and taking much time. Up to a months time normally.(Although it doesn't seem like much, it is. Making a whole new body involves getting the idea for it, getting it through customs, and then actually making it in the RP.)
How did the character get this talent?: Really this was explained in the weakness and the description.
Sample: I'm good. Considering it's not that difficult to understand.
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:56 pm
Fenrir Graveheart akira: Denied. That is a terrible weakness and I think you can already shape-shift into small creatures anyways.
digitality: Denied. You only have one element anyways dude, so your weakness is void.
polar: Accepted >.> Are you denying me because my weakness is too much XD Or... Do you mean it is bad, because by scared of death, it means that when he fights, he shakes.
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:58 pm
RPC Name: William Rayne
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Shapeshifter Mage
Talent Description: Super-Shifting. He can Shift very fast, and into Very small animals as well, even insects at fast
Talent Weakness: his body is tired faster, therefore the battles have to last less time.
How did the character get this talent?: As he was growing up, his mother dragged him everywhere, running from those that would kill that last of his kind. Before his mother died, He was taught How to shift, and due to the severity of his mother's hold over him an her fear of death, he developed it to, and it motivated him to shift. He was able to shift quickly to avoid danger, and into insects to look conspicuous.
Sample:
William ran fast, scared for his life. He was being chased by knights bent on killing him. He ran fast, running up walls, over buildings, but they seemed to be able to keep on his trail. He was cornered finally and as they attacked, he shifted into a bird, flying around a sword, and shifted immediately back into a human, punching the guard in the face. after that, the other knight swung and William turned into an ant, dropping fast and away from the blade. he transformed then into a rat and scurried away, turning into a bird and flying away
((Edited his weakness))
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 6:23 pm
RPC Name: Sabal
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline & Class: Incubus Trickster
Talent Description: By playing with himself, Sabal regains D rank energy for every post he does so. If a woman is watching him but not touching him, it becomes double.
Talent Weakness: All bloodline abilities involving draining energy from others is halved.
How did the character get this talent?: There's a recessive coding in his genes that allows for this manifestation in his kind.
Sample: Sabal panted and looked around. The monster was dead but he was far from back to safety just yet. Striking on an idea, Sabal found a hiding spot to have some fun with himself. It normally calmed him to do something like that and he needed calming. Finishing with himself, he actually felt a little refreshed. Giving a shrug, he did it again, hoping to feel even better. Sabal was amazed by the fact this was working. He felt like a new demon. Cleaning off his hand and pulling his pants back up, Sabal crawled out of the hiding spot and continued on his way.
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