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 Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:38 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Epilog StrawberryZ0mbie Hi! Before your character is approved can you be more specific about her powers? "Psychokinesis" is a very broad term that covers just about any sort of telepathy or telekinetic ability. We will need something more specific than that before she can be approved. Thanks! I'll fix it right now. :3 Awesome, just quote me when it's done so I can have another look! <3
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:40 pm
Bellatrix is approved and will be staying in Amethyst Dorm. Welcome to the RP! If you have any questions feel free to ask or post in the chat thread about them!
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:47 pm
I changed up the ability, is it good now?
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:51 pm
CoolQueerLeader I changed up the ability, is it good now? That's perfect. =3 She'll be staying in Amethyst Dorm. ^^
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:52 pm
Epilog StrawberryZ0mbie Epilog StrawberryZ0mbie Hi! Before your character is approved can you be more specific about her powers? "Psychokinesis" is a very broad term that covers just about any sort of telepathy or telekinetic ability. We will need something more specific than that before she can be approved. Thanks! I'll fix it right now. :3 Awesome, just quote me when it's done so I can have another look! <3 and I forgot to mention--if you haven't already, don't forget to create a profile thread in the Accepted characters forum! ^_^ Thanks!
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:08 am
StrawberryZ0mbie Lord Damien1 StrawberryZ0mbie Hrm.. Okay. I have a few questions, caveats and required changes. 1. Why is this pure evil guy in a highschool? He murdered his parents and then decided the best way to hide from the authorities was to join highschool or something? I'm a little confused as to his motivation... 2. What exactly do his "shadow balls" do? (We don't use a rolling system so you'll need to come up with another way to determine the strength...of his balls.) 3. Falling in love isn't really a flaw per se and considering that he hates everything, it seems there's a pretty slim chance of him falling in love anyway. On top of that, and let me stress, this is a highschool RP. Avoiding light is going to be, well, pretty much impossible in every sense of the word. Because they use lights...a lot. You may wish to hammer out some of the details and make them fit a highschool themed RP a little better. Despite the odd races, I assure this is very much a pretty normal highschool---not a huge battle oriented RP or place where people who viciously murder their parents get to run around without being arrested. 1 - The school is a perfect place for him to hide from the authorities as they wont believe that he killed his parents because of what they did to him. He is evil yes but he wants to learn still about others and maybe just maybe he could change how he is and become a better person. He motivation is to learn how to become a better person despite him hating everything he wants to see if he could learn to be good or at least a better person all together 2 They are pretty much balls of energy of shadow. They can either be used to attack someone in a fight or they could be used to turn someone into what he is A Shadow human. But that rarely happens and he wont use that ability unless the other person wants it to happen and if everyone agrees. So mostly just balls of shadow energy 3 Yes in a way that is true. But falling in love to him is like getting poisoned by a snake. It weakens him and his ability to control the shadows. In fact if he falls in love despite him hating everyone and everything. He loses the power to control the shadows.. Thus its a flaw that even though he hates everyone and everything one part of him can fall in love with someone in the right moment He going to high school to learn how to be a better person. To learn how to not hate others and to finally allow others into his life. Its about him trying to find himself once more and a high school is a perfect place to do so Please include the information about why he's joining the highschool, as a part of his profile. It's very useful information and shouldn't be left out. I am not sure what you mean by "shadow energy" but I am vetoing the idea that he can turn others into shadow humans like he is. ^_^ You can keep the shadow energy part though. I'm assuming it's like regularly "energy" and just happens to look like a ball of darkness or something. Please try to include some real flaws besides "he might fall in love." You can keep the light one since there is literally light everywhere in the RP, which will make things difficult for him, but the other one is not going to count. You can include some of his personality flaws--like how he's an evil jerk who likes to torture people and things. Thanks! Quote me again when you've made these additions. <3 Done I hope my profile is OK now smile
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:26 am
i don't really have time to look at it today, but I left a note for one of the other crew members to have a look when they get online in a few hours. ^_^
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:43 am
 Character Information:
Student Name: Kuro Anemoi
Species: God of Coldness/Ice
Age: 18 and will never age
Gender: Male
Personality: Kuro was a very cheerfull young man until what happened in his past, hes alwas disliked everything around him and is always quiet. Hhes icy and cold and hates to become friends with anyone.
Bio:
There was princess and a young commoner who where deeply in love. But like all princess and common love is that it's forbidden correct? It didn't stop their love though, they snuck away together when no one was looking but it didn't last long till the king had found this love and locked his daughter in her room to never see that commoner ever again. Though the stubborn princess refused to stop seeing her love. Every night she would secretly drop rose colored letters out her bedroom window, hoping that one night the commoner would get them...and he did.
When the commoner read the letter, it told him about the king and how he didn't want his daughter to love him, it also told him about what the princess wanted to do. She wanted to run away to the mountain. The commoner then sent his letter, giving it to a trustworthy servant who gave it straight to the princess. The commoner's letter agreed to the princess request, saying to run away tonight...and it was settled,
The princess had climbed down her window that night, tying her sheets together and throwing them out were the commoner was down below with his brown horse. The princess happily went down. The commoner and the princess rode off, going deep into the mountains but happy endings are not that easy.
That night in the mountains a strange winter storm had viciously blew making the commoner and the princess to stop rest. The commoner and the princess laid near a large tree to keep away from the chilling winds. Then they slept, waiting for the morning sun to wake and warm their faces but warmth never came. The commoner woke up but the princess was still in his arms asleep and cuddling to him like she wanted to stay warm. The commoner smiled and shook her to wake her up but she still didn't wake. The commoner shook again, now calling her name but yet nothing. He then finally touched her cheek...ice cold it was. The commoner gasped with fright. The princess was frozen to death. The commoner glanced at where his horse was standing but now was laying, covered in snow and dead as well. The commoner wept, how did he not freeze? What had happened? Suddenly though, a women wearing a beautiful white dress appeared in front of him "It is your fault" she said "You are the reason young beautiful flesh is now frozen and dead" The women then said that he himself is the god of ice.
Why he came to this school? After he found out that he was a god of ice, he decided that he needed incontroll of his powers. He searched around and around for a school that will help him be fully in controll. He then found a school called Rasental.
Skills and Abilities: Ice magic and summoning demons
( Currently he is a Demi-God, he just found out what he is, and isn't fully controll of his powers. )
Character Flaws:
- icy
- Rude
- Ignoring people
- Likes to do things on his own way.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Likes: (at least 3)
- Ice
- Alone
- Coldness
- The night
- Moon
- Stars
Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Warm things
- People Yelling
- The sun
- Beauty
- Sweetness
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:44 am
StrawberryZ0mbie i don't really have time to look at it today, but I left a note for one of the other crew members to have a look when they get online in a few hours. ^_^ Pfft, its going to be so lonley without you! D:
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:45 am
Teacup Kittens StrawberryZ0mbie i don't really have time to look at it today, but I left a note for one of the other crew members to have a look when they get online in a few hours. ^_^ Pfft, its going to be so lonley without you! D: D: Another icy person. I wonder what Isamu will think!
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:46 am
Ayame Sunshine Teacup Kittens StrawberryZ0mbie i don't really have time to look at it today, but I left a note for one of the other crew members to have a look when they get online in a few hours. ^_^ Pfft, its going to be so lonley without you! D: D: Another icy person. I wonder what Isamu will think! Let them meet and see before there eyes! 8D
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:49 am
Teacup Kittens Ayame Sunshine Teacup Kittens StrawberryZ0mbie i don't really have time to look at it today, but I left a note for one of the other crew members to have a look when they get online in a few hours. ^_^ Pfft, its going to be so lonley without you! D: D: Another icy person. I wonder what Isamu will think! Let them meet and see before there eyes! 8D Haha xD
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:51 am
Ayame Sunshine Teacup Kittens Ayame Sunshine Teacup Kittens StrawberryZ0mbie i don't really have time to look at it today, but I left a note for one of the other crew members to have a look when they get online in a few hours. ^_^ Pfft, its going to be so lonley without you! D: D: Another icy person. I wonder what Isamu will think! Let them meet and see before there eyes! 8D Haha xD Is my profile okay? Since your a crew, you can accept it! I can't roleplay with him, yet - teary eyes -
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:00 am
He looks okay to me. It appears that you did make all of the necessary changes that Berry asked of you. He is accepted. The only problem is that I can't add him to a dorm, one of the other mods will have to do that later
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:33 am
Ayame Sunshine He looks okay to me. It appears that you did make all of the necessary changes that Berry asked of you. He is accepted. The only problem is that I can't add him to a dorm, one of the other mods will have to do that later YAY~ < 3
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