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 Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 8:30 am
Accepted ^^ Miss-Tenebrae Brindlestep & Specklethorn Seems good! They seem to be a great set of characters. ^^ Go ahead and start roleplaying, I'll get them listed C:
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 5:39 pm
. : About Me : .
My name is Hareleap.
I'm a proud member of Stormclan.
I'm a Tom, I should know.
I'm Fifty-four Moons.
I'm a Senior Warrior.
My kin include N/A.
. : A Little Bit More : .
My favorite things!
Stormclan
Apprentices
The Sun
Rain - The drizzle kind, not the pouring kind
Helping Others
Giving advice that helps others
My least favorite things...
Needless bloodshed
When someone breaks the Warrior Code
Loosing clanmates
Twolegs
And, my fears.
Dogs
Those badger-like things that attacked us many moons ago (wolverines)
Loosing faith in Starclan
. : Getting Personal : .
I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Hareleap loves to talk. Not talk as in he won't shut up but he enjoys talking to his clanmates and helping them. This tom has a big heart and will gladly pour out advice if others ask for it. He isn't a terribly big fan of kits but he will tolerate them. Hareleap has more of a soft spot for apprentices, as they are training to become the future warriors of Stormclan. He's the kind of cat who can get you to spill your worries out. He's friendly and well, he's like that cuddly ol' grandpa that you love to talk to.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Hareleap is an orange tabby with amber eyes. Just that, nothing spectacular. He isn't the most handsome tom in the clan but he's not to hard on the eyes. Underneath his orange pelt are strong muscles that ripple when he runs. His legs are strong and they can take him up a tree quite quickly if he places his paws in the right places.
My history, don't go poking around!
Hareleap was born here in Stormclan to two loyal cats. He had a younger brother but he lost his family to some dogs before he became an apprentice. That is why he had a fear of dogs. Though he has never let that stop him. He went on to become an apprentice, then a warrior. He led quite an uneventful life. That is, until those awful things happened. First the Gathering attack then the flood.
He had always been the "strong one" of the group of apprentices; always being there when others needed someone. It seemed he had a knack for that. Harefleap would always appear when you needed to talk to someone. You could say that was his talent. It was almost like he could sense when someone was sad but really he just looked deeper. Most cats look at the surface, but not Hareleap no, he always looked deeper. Underneath the surface.
Hareleap has never had a mate and some cats have even asked him why not. It seemed that some cats were baffled that he didn't have a mate. His old mentor even told him, "You are such a sweet cat. Always there for others. Why haven't you swept a she-cat off her feet yet?" Hareleap always answered simply, that he hadn't found the right one. He wanted a she-cat who caught his attention and then kept it. Not one who caught his attention and then threw it away.
Anyways, Hareleap is a loyal warrior of Stormclan and always will be.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 5:45 pm
Accepted! All seems to be in order. C: I'll list & post him.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 12:13 pm
 . : About Me : .My name is Spottedkit >> Spottedpaw >> ???.
I'm a proud member of SeaClan.
I'm a she-cat, I should know.
I'm 15 moons old.
I'm an Apprentice.
My kin include ??? (Deceased Mother), ??? (Deceased Father), and Echosong (Deceased Older Sister).. : A Little Bit More : .My favorite things!
┋☀┋Dragonfire, she's my best friend!
┋☀┋SeaClan, it's the best! I love everyone in it too!
┋☀┋The Sea/Water/Swimming!
┋☀┋Sleep!
┋☀┋Food/Fish! Especially Salmon!
┋☀┋Having Fun!
┋☀┋NOT Being Alone...
┋☀┋Nature/Animals/Life
┋☀┋Fire, it's kind of beautiful...
┋☀┋Being dirty and messiness
┋☀┋Hunting and Fighting!
┋☀┋Freezeshadow...even if he's a grump, he's my mentor!
┋☀┋Being optimistic and cheerful!
┋☀┋Positive attitudes and emotions
┋☀┋Bad weather, like thunderstorms, it's eye catching!
┋☀┋Uniqueness!
┋☀┋Friendship and meeting new cats!
┋☀┋Exploring~
┋☀┋Echosong...
My least favorite things...
┋☂┋Things not going my way!
┋☂┋Bossy/Negative//Think they're superior or better Cats!
┋☂┋Cats looking down on SeaClan or talk bad about it!
┋☂┋Being wrong!
┋☂┋Being Hungry
┋☂┋Lying, or being accused of it...
┋☂┋Thinking about my past...
┋☂┋Cats who look down on me
┋☂┋Failure
┋☂┋Negative attitudes or emotions
┋☂┋Unreasonable fights or battles
┋☂┋Not being able to get along with everyone!
And, my fears.
┋☁┋Losing control...
┋☁┋Not being able to save someone...
┋☁┋Being Alone...
┋☁┋Foxfire...
┋☁┋Losing anyone I hold dear.... : Getting Personal : .I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Spottedpaw is quite the she-cat, and I’ll tell you why. Ever since she was brought into the world, Spottedpaw has been quite the handful, even for her late sister, Echosong. She’s the kind of cat who’s tough, haughty, and won’t back down from a challenge or fight, and is willing to do anything to protect her loved ones and clan. This ginger she-cat isn’t afraid of being herself, being open to others, and break rules to do what she feels is right. As much as she is loyal, she is still a trouble making loud mouth that tends to be very annoying and doesn't have the best of manners, especially when she eats.
Spottedpaw loves to have fun! She is a lot like a tom-boy, and doesn’t behave very feminine, at all, unlike Echosong. Most she-cats find her revolting to be around due to her attitude and how “unshe-cat” like, she acts. Besides Echosong, she hangs out with toms most of the time. Spottedpaw could care less if she got dirty or made some cat mad. She enjoys annoying others or playing tricks. She’s quite the trouble-maker, and has fun doing that. Spottedpaw will mostly do the exact opposite just to get under your fur, or, be rebellious. It’s how she it.
In many ways, cats have said that Spottedpaw and Echosong are near opposites. While her sister is quite, gentle, reserved, and attentive, Spottedpaw is worlds apart. The younger sister is a lot more rambunctious, energetic, loud, chatty,and rarely pays attention. This makes the siblings nearly opposite in every aspect. They both still had a close bond and meant the world to each other. Maybe opposite, but it didn’t mean the sisters didn’t deal with one another with love and compassion.
Just because Spottedpaw has a reputation for being a hot-head, very stubborn, and messy, she’s still very loyal and powerful. At a young age, she had always been compared to her sister, and Spottedpaw hated it. She refused to change herself, believing that cats should always be their selves, so she simply aimed to be greater. She’ll fight for her clan with everything she has, without hesitation. Spottedpaw refuses to be looked down upon and instead, wants to be great, a cat that others can respect in one way or another.
Spottedpaw can be a lot of things, but what she isn’t, is a liar. She will never break a promise and will keep a secret to her grave. Being very dependable, she is quite the ally in your favor, and she won’t let you down. She’s easy to talk to and is pretty sociable, making it easy to get along with most cats. Unlike her sister, Spottedpaw loves to be around others, and honestly, can’t stand being alone. She really hates it, being “alone”. Balanced with her bad traits, Spottedpaw is very friendly, cheerful, optimistic, helpful, and is kind and compassionate too. She really does care for her friends and allies.
Being young, Spottedpaw is quite naïve in some things, and is quick to anger. She has quite the temper, and isn’t quick to bite her tongue when she should. Spottedpaw has a hard time controlling her temper, unlike Echosong, and can hold grudges for quite some time, depending on what you did. But, she has quick wits/senses, and, can be quite mature and intelligent if the time calls for it. She’s quite brave and courageous, so she doesn’t have many fears. She’s quite easy to read with emotion at times too.
She hates being wrong too, and believes that her opinions matter a lot. She likes doing things her way, and doesn’t want to do otherwise. Something funny about this “all knowing” she-cat, is her timidness. She can be quite cocky in things, but, she’s very jumpy towards even the littlest of things. Spottedpaw is easy to scare; so much as a leaf brushing her leg slightly will send her off with a yelp. Spottedpaw will act as if nothing happen at all though, to hide her burning embarrassment underneath. She also is very clumsy, unlike her graceful and elegant counterpart, Echosong. Spottedpaw isn’t very graceful, and will trip on nearly anything, if air was an object able to trip on, believe me, she would trip.
Even with all of these traits, Spottedpaw is still the fierce compassionate she-cat we all know and love. She'll do what she believes is right, without hesitation, and is a true friend that a cat would love to have. If you don't mind a cat who'll most likely tread on your tail, on "accident".
It's what I am, like it or not.
If fire could walk on paws and mew, that would be Spottedpaw. She’s a pretty little thing with a fiery pelt. Spottedpaw’s fur is almost always ruffled, more in a cute kind of ruffled way than anything. She doesn’t really groom herself as much as her sister, who’s a neat freak. She’ll do what she can to her pelt to get by, nothing more. Spottedpaw is a dark ginger she-cat with a distinctive dappled coat, but her pelt is more like a blazing flame that lights like a flaming sun in the right lighting. Like I said, she’s like a walking fire. Her fur always appears quite healthy and glossy though, relatively sleek yet having that ruffled appearance. Spottedpaw’s pelt is medium-short, not quite long, but long enough to keep her decently warm and move through the water like a fish.
Something that Spottedpaw has, that may be her most beautiful feature, is her eyes. They are a brilliant yet intense as a blazing fire, emerald-leaf green. Her eyes are large and clear, but seem fiery at the same time, if green fires existed. Echosong would remind the apprentice that her eyes were exact copies of their father’s.
Spottedpaw has graceful limbs that aren’t as long as most cats, since she’s quite small, but they are quite strong, with powerful hind legs, allowing her to swim quite easily. Her paw pads are a soft black, paired with a soft, strong, pink nose to boot. Something that is characteristic of the young she-cat, is her long, bushy, squirrel-like tail. Spottedpaw often recalls how Echosong would feel uncomfortable with her younger sister’s tail since it appeared so squirrel-like, Echosong disliking squirrels greatly.
Though she may not appear it, Spottedpaw is quite strong. But, like I said, she doesn’t appear tough. She’s unusually small, having been born nearly dead and very tiny. Spottedpaw is a small, light-framed she-cat with a lean, lithe build. She has her father’s sturdy muscles, though she is no where near the power, build, or strength her father had. In all, Spottedpaw is a very pretty she-cat, or so others have told her. Though, I don’t think Spottedpaw would care for her looks as long as she could fight well and swim, much to the confusion of she-cats. But, something Spottedpaw doesn’t like is how similar she looks to her dad. When she was younger, Echosong would sometimes have trouble looking at the ginger she-cat without being reminded of her father, which both siblings don’t like to mention. This troubles Spottedpaw greatly, since the adolescent cat never knew her mother or father very well.
My history, don't go poking around!
”Echosong never talks about our past very much. When I try to bring it up, she always gets this pained expression and says “I looked a lot like her, but she was a lot more beautiful.”, so, I try and avoid it. All I know are the basics, and that Momma died soon after giving birth to me…I wonder if father blamed me for her death… I remember large warm eyes looking down at me lovingly, but they seemed to shatter with pain…”
Spottedpaw had lived in SeaClan all her life, as an average she-kit. She had a very loving mother she never knew. A tragic event soon entered the family’s lives. It literally changed them forever. Her mother’s young life was taken, she was found killed. But the Clan never knew how or why she had left this world. Spottedpaw was too young to really remember what happened, or really feel sorrow. Echosong, on the other hand, was hit hard by this, but forced herself to move on. Their father took it the hardest, and he took a turn for the worst soon after. He was literally crushed, shattered. He was devastated for what seemed like moons. Echosong said that father always seemed hurt or his face would twist into that of grief or pain when regarding Spottedpaw’s older sister. Maybe it was because the older daughter looked too alike to their late mother. Father never seemed very happy when he saw Spottedpaw either, he looked angry though, as if Spottedpaw was the reason her mother died. Was she? Echosong always said to not take their father’s words to heart, and to ignore it. But, Father lost it, not being able to control his pain; he took his own life, drowning himself. The Clan took both losses hard, the couple having been quite loved and popular in the clan. Echosong was scarred from such events, her father finishing it off. Now Echosong rarely brings up those memories, but refuses to let them get in the way of her life, Spottedpaw found that it was easier to do the same. It was up to the remaining siblings to look after one another.
Spottedpaw grew up with her older sister watching her back, like a new mother. Echosong was always their for the she-cat, making sure she was safe and from harms way, no matter how much trouble the ginger trouble-maker got herself into, not to mention made. They both had a very tight bond and relationship with one another; they meant the world to eachother. No. They were all they had left.
She became an apprentice with her new mentor, the great leader of SeaClan’s infamous son, Freezeshadow. He pushed her very hard, and made sure the apprentice would learn all there is to being a powerful and great warrior. Spottedpaw would always complain, whine, and try to escape duties and training. But, to no avail, the grey warrior always found a way to find and punish her further. They weren’t always on good terms, but mentor and apprentice both shared a bond and worked hard with one another. Spottedpaw wanted to be stronger for her siblings and her both.
Many events came across the apprentice’s life, meeting the rouge-gladiator-turned-SeaClan Deputy-she-cat, Dragonfire. The two instantly clicked and became best friends, only drawing closer after Dragonfire reunited with her long lost sister, Phoenixice. It was a good life, until Foxfire came into the picture. She was framed by the darkly ambitious tom for the death of a BreezeClan kit, Blossomkit, it was sad, really. The young apprentice was seen as a murderer to BreezeClan and the kit’s siblings, not to mention she carried a bad reputation in SeaClan too. Spottedpaw wasn’t sure how to fix it! How was she able to compete for her innocence against the famed and “trusted” warrior, Foxfire! Luckily, Spottedpaw’s close friends and kin stood by her side, unfazed by the event with the knowledge that Spottedpaw was a good-hearted she-cat who would never take the life of a cat, not to mention another clan’s kit. Foxfire knew of Spottedpaw’s knowledge of the event, and that the she-cat knew his plans with evil. Foxfire was intent on destroying her and those she cared about. The tom was pure evil, and only hungered for power. It only continued to get worst. The blood-thirsty tom did harm to many, including a cat who knew far too much for Foxfire’s safety, Snowcherry of BreezeClan. Foxfire caused much pain to the clan of the ocean, and he was stopped when it was all too late.
Spottedpaw had been away on an assessment when Foxfire had lured her beloved sister, Echosong, out of camp and to a dangerous Cliff-side in SeaClan. Foxfire decided to put his plans inito action, knowing all too well that the suspicions around him were growing further. Foxfire turned and tried to kill Echosong. The two had a fierce battle, one for darkness, and the other, for light. But, things would not look up for SeaClan, or Spottedpaw. This became the worst day of Spottedpaw’s life. The cruelest event to happen in the moons that she had lived. Echosong’s death.
Echosong was sent, after cursing Foxfire, over a cliff, to meet her watery grave. Foxfire soon followed, after a battle with Griffonsea and Moss-star herself. It concluded with the end to the treacherous Foxfire, but at the price of a 2 great warriors who had assured ranks in StarClan. Spottedpaw will always honor her sister as a hero, knowing that Echosong sacrificed herself for her clan and, for her sister. She knew Echosong did it for her, in a way, to keep Spottedpaw from death herself. Echosong probably knew, in those fleeting moments before her end, that Foxfire would go after Spottedpaw, if not Echosong. SeaClan still honors the late heroes, but don’t speak about it much, to avoid bringing up painful memories, especially for Spottedpaw, the younger sibling of Echosong, and Moss-star’s kits, Griffonsea and Freezeshadow.
Life continued on, in all the hardships and beauties of life. Spottedpaw was determined to live for her sister and stay strong for her, knowing that Echosong would have wanted her and her clan to continue prosperous lives. The crime Spottedpaw had been framed for was forgiven and forgotten, the clan learning that it was Foxfire who committed the terrible deed, that Spottedpaw was indeed innocent. Spottedpaw continues to train under Freezeshadow and serve her clan, the further chapters of her life have yet to unfold. ((Lol dudes, this is the return of Spottedpaw. But, remember, she NEVER left SeaClan. She simply went NPC like most of the cats in the timeskip, she was ALWAYS in the clan, just serving like a loyal apprentice. She's nearing the end of her apprenticeship though c: <3))
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 7:38 pm
For the record, Neko, this profile is too long XD The Member profiles are for adding detail like this. Could you summarize it so that it's not paragraphs long? Also, there's just a few things about her that I'm a bit confused about. D: -If she's echosong's sister, shouldn't they be the same age? Echosong was well over 25 moons... -You created this cat BEFORE the 1-year timeskip, so her age from before should have 12 moons added on. I mean, she has to have aged D: -Whatever her age, she is most likely a warrior now, so we'd like to know what you want her warrior name to be.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 7:44 pm
WTNC Mule For the record, Neko, this profile is too long XD The Member profiles are for adding detail like this. Could you summarize it so that it's not paragraphs long? Also, there's just a few things about her that I'm a bit confused about. D: -If she's echosong's sister, shouldn't they be the same age? Echosong was well over 25 moons... -You created this cat BEFORE the 1-year timeskip, so her age from before should have 12 moons added on. I mean, she has to have aged D: -Whatever her age, she is most likely a warrior now, so we'd like to know what you want her warrior name to be. xD I didn't realize that, ok c: I'll edit the profiler then~ Thank You for the info, also Echosong is from a different litter :B Spottedpaw is the only kit from the final litter their mother had. You know, like Ferncloud and her...babies eue Anyways, I'll go edit it c: I'd like her warrior name to be Spottedfire~ How many moons has it been owo? I wasn't sure eue had it been 12 moons since surprised ? She's 18 moons? xD She was 6 moons before the skip ^^ Pretty sure eue
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 7:48 pm
OH wow! I could've sworn she was spottedpaw before the skip, my mistake. So any idea on who her mentor was, or was it never mentioned? :0 And yeah whatever her age was will have 12 moons added onto it...12 months in a year ;w; so she'd be 18 moons, at least.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:34 pm
 . : About Me : . My name is ShadeStep.
I'm a proud member of SeaClan.
I'm a Tom, I should know.
I'm 20 moons.
I'm a Warrior.
My kin include no one that is alive. . : A Little Bit More : .My favorite things!
-Night
-Sea
-Leaf-fall
-Fighting
-Love
My least favorite things...
-Day.
-Not having my family.
-Not having friends.
And, my fears.
-Dieing with no mate.
-Getting in trouble.
-Causing others in his own clan harm. . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
ShadeStep is very shy and does not act out alot when not needed. But, when it is needed, like in a battle, he is all for it. He is a tough fighter and a romantic lover. ShadeStep has his moments of depression, aswell as his up-beat moments. He trys not to judge others, but he can tell if he doesn't like a cat. Usually, if he has a friend, they are his best friend. He is a fierce and loyal warrior, even if it goes against his feelings. Yet again, he will not go against his friends.
It's what I am, like it or not.
ShadeStep is a black cat that has pointed ears and yellow eyes. He has a long tail that is slick and shiny. His fur is shiny and slick (most of the time) and is perfect for the rough sea waters. His pads on his legs are white, which is strange for a black cat. And his fur is medium sized, great for the water.
My history, don't go poking around!
ShadeStep is a black cat with a normal history with a few twists. His mother died giving birth to him and his brother and his father died when the camp was raided by a group of rogues. After their father died, him and his brother went after the rogues to get revenge for what they had done. But, when they raided the group, his brother died with one fierce swip from a rogue. So, ShadeStep turned tail and ran. Now, he cannot forgive himself for that day... 
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:02 am
WTNC Mule OH wow! I could've sworn she was spottedpaw before the skip, my mistake. So any idea on who her mentor was, or was it never mentioned? :0 And yeah whatever her age was will have 12 moons added onto it...12 months in a year ;w; so she'd be 18 moons, at least. Yeah c; She should be a new warrior. Echo wus tellin me bout cats and their ages xD and how ridiculously young most of our cats are :B Anyways, her mentor was Freezeshadow c: the one before was an NPC, Sageleaf xD Moss-star assigned Freezebutt to Spotty > w < I'll edit it today and post Moonblaze! I have more time now biggrin YAY~
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:10 am
Cats in the wild can live up to about 8 or 9 years old, so most of the cats in WTNC are ridiculously young XD I think Galestar is the oldest cat I've seen so far, 40-something moons? Second would be Ghostwhisper, 30 moons lol.
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Leopardstreak Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:01 am
There are a couple of things wrong with your profile. First off, did you read our rules? The reason I ask is because there is a direct example of what not to do, but of what you just did. Now, I'm not trying to be mean, but one of our first and foremost rules are to have correct spelling and grammar. This means at least 5 sentences per post, and there is a minimum of 5 sentences for each description in the profile. As far as I can see, you fulfilled that requirement.
Now, one the most major errors I found was the spelling of your cat's name, ShadeStep. We've had problems with this in the past, so please don't take this the wrong way. Names MUST be spelled correctly, like in the books- so please fix it so your cat's name would read as Shadestep. Please keep this in mind, because if this continues, you could possibly be blacklisted as a rule breaker, and we don't want that!
Another problem is that the picture on the profile isn't showing up. I looked at the coding of it, and the picture that you added to the bottom should be in the top right corner. All you have to do is take the URL from the picture and insert it between the [ imgright ] [ /imgright ] at the top of the profile coding.
Also, please insert the colors where it says to. You only need two or three colors, and any are acceptable. That's nothing big, but all the coding must be completed.
Once you fix these issues, then quote me and let me know- I'll have a look see and then I (or the mule) will post it in the SeaClan profiles! DO NOT post it yourself. We have a new system to regulate profiles. Thanks!
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 3:44 pm
. : About Me : .
My name is Spottedkit >> Spottedpaw >> Spottedfire.
I'm a proud member of SeaClan.
I'm a she-cat, I should know.
I'm 18 moons old.
I'm a New Warrior.
My kin include ??? (Deceased Mother), ??? (Deceased Father), and Echosong (Deceased Older Sister).
. : A Little Bit More : .
My favorite things!
┋☀┋Dragonfire, she's my best friend!
┋☀┋Freezeshadow...even if he's a grump, he's my old mentor!
┋☀┋SeaClan, it's the best! I love everyone in it too!
┋☀┋The Sea/Water/Swimming!
┋☀┋Sleep!
┋☀┋Food/Fish! Especially Salmon!
┋☀┋Having Fun!
┋☀┋Serving my Clan as a warrior!
┋☀┋Nature/Animals/Life
┋☀┋Fire, it's kind of beautiful...
┋☀┋Being dirty and messiness
┋☀┋Hunting and Fighting!
┋☀┋Positive attitudes and emotions
┋☀┋Bad weather, like thunderstorms, it's eye catching!
┋☀┋Friendship!
┋☀┋Echosong and all of my kin and loved ones!
My least favorite things...
┋☂┋Things not going my way!
┋☂┋Bossy/Negative/Think they're superior or better Cats!
┋☂┋Cats looking down on SeaClan or talk bad about it!
┋☂┋Being wrong!
┋☂┋Being Hungry
┋☂┋Lying, or being accused of it...
┋☂┋Thinking about my past...
┋☂┋Cats who look down on me
┋☂┋Failure
┋☂┋Negative attitudes or emotions
And, my fears.
┋☁┋SeaClan's fall
┋☁┋Losing anyone I hold dear...
┋☁┋Being utterly alone...
┋☁┋Foxfire...
. : Getting Personal : .
I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Ever since she was brought into the world, Spottedfire has been quite the handful. She’s the kind of cat who’s strong-willed, tough, haughty, and won’t back down from a challenge or fight, and is willing to do anything to protect her loved ones and clan. Spottedfire is a tom-boyish she-cat who isn’t afraid of being herself, being open and social to others, and breaking rules to do what she feels is right. She’s quite brave and courageous, so she doesn’t have many fears. As much as she is loyal, she is still a trouble making loud mouth that tends to be very annoying, messy, and doesn't have the best of manners, especially when she eats.
In many ways, cats have said that Spottedfire and Echosong are near opposites. While her sister is quite, gentle, reserved, and attentive, Spottedfire is worlds apart. The younger sister is a lot more rambunctious, energetic, loud, chatty,and rarely pays attention. This makes the siblings nearly opposite in every aspect. Just because Spottedfire has a reputation for being a hot-head, very stubborn, and messy, she’s still very loyal and fierce. Spottedfire refuses to be looked down upon and instead, wants to be great, a cat that others can respect in one way or another. Spottedfire is very friendly, cheerful, optimistic, helpful, and is kind and compassionate too, complete with a good heart. She really does care for her friends and allies.
Being young, Spottedfire is quite naïve in some things, and is quick to anger. She has quite the temper, and isn’t quick to bite her tongue when she should. But, she has quick wits/senses, and, can be quite mature and intelligent if the time calls for it. She likes doing things her way, and doesn’t want to do otherwise. Something interesting about her is her timidness. She can be quite cocky in things, but, she’s very jumpy towards even the littlest of things. She also is very clumsy, and will somehow trip on almost anything.
It's what I am, like it or not.
If fire could walk on paws and mew, that would be Spottedfire. She’s a pretty little thing with a fiery pelt. Spottedfire’s fur is almost always ruffled, more in a cute kind of ruffled way than anything. Spottedfire is a dark ginger she-cat with a distinctive dappled coat, but her pelt is more like a blazing flame that lights like a flaming sun in the right lighting. Her medium-short fur always appears quite healthy and glossy though, relatively sleek yet having that ruffled appearance. One of her most beautiful features, are a pair of large, brilliant, yet intense as a blazing fire, clear emerald gems we call eyes. She has powerful hind legs and limbs. Her paw pads are a soft black, along with a soft deep pink nose. A unique characteristic is her long, bushy, squirrel-like tail. Spottedfire is an unusually small, light-framed she-cat with a lean, lithe build. In all, Spottedfire is a very pretty she-cat, or so others have told her.
My history, don't go poking around!
Spottedkit had lived in SeaClan all her life, as an average she-kit. She had a very loving mother she never knew. A tragic event soon entered the family’s lives. It literally changed them forever. Her mother’s young life was taken, she was found killed. But the Clan never knew how or why she had left this world. Spottedkit was too young to really remember what happened, or really feel sorrow. Echosong, on the other hand, was hit hard by this, but forced herself to move on. Their father took it the hardest, and he took a turn for the worst soon after. He was literally crushed, shattered. He was devastated for what seemed like moons. Then, Father lost it, not being able to control his pain; he took his own life, drowning himself. Echosong was scarred from such events, her father finishing it off. Now Echosong rarely brings up those memories, but refuses to let them get in the way of her life, Spottedkit found that it was easier to do the same.
Spottedpaw has had many hardships enter her life after that, much of it having to do with Foxfire, the tyrant of SeaClan who was intent on an ambitious and murderous path. Foxfire framed Spottedpaw for a BreezeClan kit's murder she didn't commit, Foxfire knowing that Spottedpaw knew too much of his plans. Suspicion grew for the tom until he knew he was running out of time. He has lured Echosong out of camp and killed her. Moss-star entered the battle and died as well, taking Foxfire's life in the process, over the cliff-side in SeaClan. Spottedpaw was devestated by the news but knew she had to move forward, though she rarely speaks of the incident. She knows she must continue for herself and her sister. Now, Spottedpaw has become Spottedfire after finishing her apprenticeship to Freezeshadow, and begins these new chapters as a new warrior.
((Lol dudes, this is the return of Spottedpaw/fire. But, remember, she NEVER left SeaClan. She simply went NPC like most of the cats in the timeskip, she was ALWAYS in the clan, just serving like a loyal warrior/apprentice. She's a newly made warrior~ c: <3))
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:49 pm
That looks much better! Thank you very much, Neko! We'll get it posted immediately. ^^
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:42 pm
 . : About Me : . My name is Thor.
I'm a proud member of StormClan.
I'm a tom, I should know.
I'm 46 moons old.
I'm a rogue/warrior.
My kin include Thunderflight (daughter), Lightningkit, Tempestkit, Blizzardkit, and Twisterkit (grandchildren).. . : A Little Bit More : . My favorite things!
- Thunderflight and her offspring
- StormClan
- Eating/hunting (food)
- Being of service
- Helping those in need
- Storms
My least favorite things...
- Storms/rain
- Ebonysun
- Anyone who dislikes StormClan
- Dogs
And, my fears.
- Storms/rain (afraid of water)
- Losing another family member . : Getting Personal : . I'm not going to change, it's who I am.
Thor is a quiet and stoic cat who lets his actions speak for themselves. He has a slightly different way of speaking because he comes from so far away; he tends to speak in broken sentences (and this is for a reason). Because of this, he feels rather awkward when talking, so he tends to keep silent. He is a very calm cat and usually has a clear head, but if you poke his sore spot (his daughter) in any way, he can lose his temper very quickly. He is extremely overprotective of his family. In truth, he has a soft heart under his shell.
It's what I am, like it or not.
Thor is a jet-black maine coon, like Thunderflight. He has a single white patch of fur under his right forearm. His eyes are a deep, dark blue. His fur is very thick (which keeps him rather comfortable during winter and can give him heatstroke in some summers). His tail is long and fluffy.
He has a long muzzle (not pudge-faced) and long whiskers. His teeth and claws are thick and sturdy He is covered in scars from his life as a rogue (constantly defending himself).
My history, don't go poking around!
Long story short, Thor was once a boat cat with a twoleg couple. The boat crashed and Thor wandered the land until he met Noor, Thunderflight's rogue mother. They had a forbidden affair and had to flee with the children after Noor's family found out. They split up, hoping to divert their attackers. After Noor, the kittens she grabbed with her, and most of her attackers were electricuted by a bolt of lightning, Thunder was found by StormClan warriors and allowd into the Clan. Thor was seperated by the kittens he grabbed and wandered the territory, searching for his lost family for moons.
He finally ran into Thunderpaw during the search for the cure for the Madness and willingly joined StormClan to help his daughter's rescuers. After the Slayers were vanquished, he stayed in StormClan to help them recover and eventually began to love the warrior way. He wants to join and hopes to ask Silverstar soon.
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