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 Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 12:58 pm
Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx RPC Name: Srin Azio RPC Profile Link: Your Customs Link: RPC Rank: Master RPC Bloodline: Reaper RPC Class: Besersker RPC Element: Name of Weapon/Armor: (Snazzier names sound better then none) Description: (you can also add a picture in here, but I want to know what it does, also include general dimensions and what it's made of. Clip size for guns is a must.) Rank: (I want a ranks because I want to know how tough they are going to be) Passives: (Not every weapon needs a passive but they can be useful) Skills: (If any. Any other custom skills will need to be done in the custom skill thread. Also use the following format)
Skill Name
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Description
Rp Sample: (Include one or a shoe will come flying out of your screen/monitor)Wulf, please do not post empty and incomplete customs in the customs thread. If you want to work on the weapon/ etc you are thinking of submitting, it doesn't need to be in here. It only attracts attention to work that I can't do. That being said, let's take a look at your revised Gauntlets... Skills: Livegiver's: Skill Name Giver's shield B Rank Description Livergiver expands it's energy from the gauntlet and forms a medium sized shield of energy around his forearm. It expands out to 2 feet across and 2 1/2 feet tall. This Shield Can Block up to C ranked attacks. It uses B rank energy for each post in use and has a 5 post cooldown Edited This skill is approved. Nice work.Reborn. S Rank This skill takes great amounts of energy, the true life giving nature of this gauntlet comes to life.(Pun). This skill uses the energy in the users to slowly bring back someone who has been killed. This skill needs five whole posts to use. The energy goes into the body and slowly starts to reanimate the body's systems and slowly the soul of the fallen brought back by gods will. This skill can be used every Two months and leaves a massive burn on his body. This burn cover most of his upper chest and neck area, since his gauntlets do not burn like his skin only becomes charded. This cause S rank damage to srin but does not kill him.. it simply wounds him greatly and making most attacks doubled the damage when he is hit if not healed. The time is 2 months in Real Life Edited Approved. Again, nice work.Legion's Claw's Crimson Bolt C Rank The energies in the gauntlets slowly build up in Legion. As this is done the energy is shaped and aimed at the target. AS this done a bolt of this crimson energy is shot at the target which can leave up to 2nd to 3rd degree burns, it basically D rank damage per hit for awhile intil burns are healed Beside that they may be knocked off their feet from the force if they are 10ft. Edited Second or Third degree burns, while specific, isn't specific enough to determine the damage sustained. If you are expecting burns, please provide additional information (damage per post?) And also please provide a concrete amount of distance a target might be knocked. It won't be determined by the difference between strength, jsut if he is stronger than the target or not.Legion's Fist S Rank This skill covers the user in a dark red aura as it begins to charge for five posts. During these five posts the user begins to slow down by 2 speed, as this happens the gauntlets both begin to change, as this happens no attack can be made so the process isnt messed up. When the time is up the gauntlest have changed into massive forms of their selves giving his gauntlets more striking power. During this mode his striking power sends a shockwave though the person body either bring them to their knees of breaking bones. It can also be used in another way.. By simply waiting 2 more posts and than charging for another the massive gauntlets can be launched at a person. The range is up 35ft but after that its a slight chance to hit. After launch his arms are gone for 3 posts intil they finally come back to him..in which time he can not use any reaper based skills. The cooldown is ttwo week in rl There are parts of this skill that will work and parts that will not. Srin will be unable to use ANY attacks (not just physical) as the ksill charges to activate. Broken bones would be largely determined by the damage a character's already sustained and their strength by comparison to Srin. I recommend focusing on the shock waves and the potential the skill gives Srin to knock its target prone. Additionally, if the gauntlets are fired they do not turn into energy. If you are intending for Srin to be able to fire his gauntlets, once they are fired off of his body they are SEPARATE and vulnerable for 3 posts until he gathers the power to retrieve them or they can be retrieved for him. If you want this skill to have a RL cooldown, please make it two weeks. A week isn't even an entire fight in many instances.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:05 pm
You didn't post anything. What did you have to say?
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:08 pm
Ferregar You didn't post anything. What did you have to say? oh I editted forgot to change the bold sorry
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:19 pm
Ferregar Verideathul Ferregar Verideathul RPC Name: Kinetav Erth'azar RPC Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=24&t=21896169#328395871 RPC Rank: Student: RPC Bloodline: Anima RPC Class: Dark Avenger Gauntlets of Projection (See profile pic for gauntlet visual): As an adolescent, Kinetav knew that he'd have to wander around eventually because of his birth and class. For a means of easy, on-the-go mapping and hacking into abandoned buildings for refuge, the Anima paid a friend to design and create these gauntlets just for him. Via a mental command, the gauntlets can project a 3-D screen for maps that can also turn two dimensional for hacking against a surface such as an electrical lock or computer. Each hack requires three posts, and each post a D20 is rolled; detection is based on those rolls and the area the hacker is in: Shadowy, Dark Environments: 6 or higher, no detection Well Lit Environments: 11 or higher, no detection Shadowless Environments: 16 or higher, no detection Failing a roll causes all hostile guards or RPCs in the area to notice Kinetav, and to rush at him during that post. Kinetav *can* keep hacking, but next post he would take damage a rank higher than normal as he is especially vulnerable unless he discontinued the hack. If surrounded by friendly guards, doesn't take damage if all attacks are successfully blocked by said guards. Successful hacks on an unknown system upload additional data from that system, or if on a door uploads additional data about that one door to an additional, seperate from the gauntlets data chip that Kinetav carries in his belt, and can only download additional information from that chip to the gauntlets via a hardline link overnight. CANNOT HACK MEACHA RPCS FOR INFO OR ANY OTHER PURPOSE. The RL time stretch won't work, because RL time is too inconsistent when it comes to RP activity. There are extentuating circumstances (such as work, school, etc) that would render a person unable to "catch" Veri in the act even if they were able. What I would recommend is that for every post where Kinetav is attempting to hack a probability dice needs to be rolled to determine if he is detected or not, the probability of detection increasing or decreasing based on the location, NPC presence/ numbers and RPC presence considered. It will be more case by case than an actual time limit, but there's not another way to effectively give other players the chance to detect him. Now, as far as the gauntlets go, they are very technologically advanced even for The Citadel. I'm willing to pass them, but I want to know how Kinetav came across them, their importance to him, and to see a full RP sample regarding the item. Additionally, please increase the time it takes to hack by one post, to a total of 3. Hacking is a total novelty in Rykros because outside of The Citadel, there's not much of a purpose to it. As such, it will be more difficult and require more effort to do it effectively. Kinetav came upon a friend when he was younger who was a mechanic during his education years; realizing that the Anima would eventually become an outcast himself, he asked the friend what electronics in the way of hacking into doors and projecting maps he could make. Kinetav had to steal, lie, and cheat his way into paying off the overwhelming amount of money he began to owe to the friend as the gauntlets created went above and beyond the call the Dark Avenger had asked for: the Gauntlets of Projection. *Kinetav walked up to an abandoned house at night as he was seeking refuge; a dark 3-D projection screen appeared above one of his gauntlets before using his hands as a way to twist and move to the proper section of the program. Finally activating the proper file, the 3-D image of the area around him flattenedd into a 2-D image with numbers and letters on the keypad; the Dark Avenger smiles as he places this hacking device on top of the electronic keypad. Numbers begin to be pressed randomly by the 2-D image, but only artificially as the hacking process began; the direct contact between the screen and the keypad allowing the screen to test thousands of random possibilities as the Dark Avenger stayed vulnerable to all forms of damage, having to place his hands close to the surface to secure and maintain the projected screen. (Successful hack, no detection) Kinetav grinned wickedly as he saw the projection in front of him confirming the door's code (or if a system, uploading all information from said system) and transferring it to a spare computer chip that the Anima kept in his belt. He would have to download the information into the gloves later overnight, as he forgets the codes he hacked into by morning. Reaching a finger through the screen, the Dark Avenger punched the code in manually and watched the door open up. (Unsuccessful Hack, detected) Kinetav cursed as he saw guards walking towards him. Fortunately, he was in a somewhat dark to perfectly dark environment; the Dark Avenger simply releases his hands from the wall and either continues to fight like normal, or shadow step away from the combat if he is clearly out-matched. (Unsuccessful hack, detected in shadowless environment): ((Well, let's just say it's the equivalent of "oh ****" unless Kinetav has guards around him XD )) Excellent Kinetav, so far so good. If you're willing to take the 3rd post and work with the probability die, then this is approved. Done and done. Thank you very much B]
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:21 pm
xXLord OokamiXx Ferregar You didn't post anything. What did you have to say? oh I edited forgot to change the bold sorry Okay. Everything looks good except for Fist of Legion. Like I said, if you want it approved the arms have to be vulnerable after being fired. They don't magically turn into energy. Once you've fixed that, resubmit the whole talent in the right format with my comments removed, and you should be set smile
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:22 pm
Thank you. Your Gauntlets are approved. Remember to post them in your customs thread!
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:23 pm
Ferregar Thank you. Your Gauntlets are approved. Remember to post them in your customs thread! Ferrgar they dont say they turn into energy
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:26 pm
xXLord OokamiXx Ferregar Thank you. Your Gauntlets are approved. Remember to post them in your customs thread! Ferrgar they dont say they turn into energy Correct, but it also doesn't say that they remain and are vulnerable when separated. It just says "they're gone" which sounds like they're vanishing
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:27 pm
xXLord OokamiXx Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx RPC Name: Srin Azio RPC Profile Link: Your Customs Link: RPC Rank: Master RPC Bloodline: Reaper RPC Class: Besersker RPC Element: Name of Weapon/Armor: (Snazzier names sound better then none) Description: (you can also add a picture in here, but I want to know what it does, also include general dimensions and what it's made of. Clip size for guns is a must.) Rank: (I want a ranks because I want to know how tough they are going to be) Passives: (Not every weapon needs a passive but they can be useful) Skills: (If any. Any other custom skills will need to be done in the custom skill thread. Also use the following format)
Skill Name
Rank
Description
Rp Sample: (Include one or a shoe will come flying out of your screen/monitor)Wulf, please do not post empty and incomplete customs in the customs thread. If you want to work on the weapon/ etc you are thinking of submitting, it doesn't need to be in here. It only attracts attention to work that I can't do. That being said, let's take a look at your revised Gauntlets... Skills: Livegiver's: Skill Name Giver's shield B Rank Description Livergiver expands it's energy from the gauntlet and forms a medium sized shield of energy around his forearm. It expands out to 2 feet across and 2 1/2 feet tall. This Shield Can Block up to C ranked attacks. It uses B rank energy for each post in use and has a 5 post cooldown Edited This skill is approved. Nice work.Reborn. S Rank This skill takes great amounts of energy, the true life giving nature of this gauntlet comes to life.(Pun). This skill uses the energy in the users to slowly bring back someone who has been killed. This skill needs five whole posts to use. The energy goes into the body and slowly starts to reanimate the body's systems and slowly the soul of the fallen brought back by gods will. This skill can be used every Two months and leaves a massive burn on his body. This burn cover most of his upper chest and neck area, since his gauntlets do not burn like his skin only becomes charded. This cause S rank damage to srin but does not kill him.. it simply wounds him greatly and making most attacks doubled the damage when he is hit if not healed. The time is 2 months in Real Life Edited Approved. Again, nice work.Legion's Claw's Crimson Bolt C Rank The energies in the gauntlets slowly build up in Legion. As this is done the energy is shaped and aimed at the target. AS this done a bolt of this crimson energy is shot at the target which can leave up to 2nd to 3rd degree burns, it basically D rank damage per hit for awhile intil burns are healed Beside that they may be knocked off their feet from the force if they are 10ft. Edited editted
Legion's Fist
S Rank
This skill covers the user in a dark red aura as it begins to charge for five posts. During these five posts the user begins to slow down by 2 speed, as this happens the gauntlets both begin to change, as this happens no attack can be made so the process isnt messed up. When the time is up the gauntlest have changed into massive forms of their selves giving his gauntlets more striking power. During this mode his striking power sends a shockwave though the person body either bring them to their knees of breaking bones. It can also be used in another way.. By simply waiting 2 more posts and than charging for another the massive gauntlets can be launched at a person. The range is up 35ft but after that its a slight chance to hit. After launch his arms are gone for 3 posts intil they finally come back to him..in which time he can not use any reaper based skills, and no real skills can be used leaving him open. The cooldown is ttwo week in rl
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:28 pm
Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx Ferregar Thank you. Your Gauntlets are approved. Remember to post them in your customs thread! Ferrgar they dont say they turn into energy Correct, but it also doesn't say that they remain and are vulnerable when separated. It just says "they're gone" which sounds like they're vanishing Okay I editted some. Now I said he is left open
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:56 pm
xXLord OokamiXx xXLord OokamiXx Ferregar xXLord OokamiXx RPC Name: Srin Azio RPC Profile Link: Your Customs Link: RPC Rank: Master RPC Bloodline: Reaper RPC Class: Besersker RPC Element: Name of Weapon/Armor: (Snazzier names sound better then none) Description: (you can also add a picture in here, but I want to know what it does, also include general dimensions and what it's made of. Clip size for guns is a must.) Rank: (I want a ranks because I want to know how tough they are going to be) Passives: (Not every weapon needs a passive but they can be useful) Skills: (If any. Any other custom skills will need to be done in the custom skill thread. Also use the following format)
Skill Name
Rank
Description
Rp Sample: (Include one or a shoe will come flying out of your screen/monitor)Wulf, please do not post empty and incomplete customs in the customs thread. If you want to work on the weapon/ etc you are thinking of submitting, it doesn't need to be in here. It only attracts attention to work that I can't do. That being said, let's take a look at your revised Gauntlets... Skills: Livegiver's: Skill Name Giver's shield B Rank Description Livergiver expands it's energy from the gauntlet and forms a medium sized shield of energy around his forearm. It expands out to 2 feet across and 2 1/2 feet tall. This Shield Can Block up to C ranked attacks. It uses B rank energy for each post in use and has a 5 post cooldown Edited This skill is approved. Nice work.Reborn. S Rank This skill takes great amounts of energy, the true life giving nature of this gauntlet comes to life.(Pun). This skill uses the energy in the users to slowly bring back someone who has been killed. This skill needs five whole posts to use. The energy goes into the body and slowly starts to reanimate the body's systems and slowly the soul of the fallen brought back by gods will. This skill can be used every Two months and leaves a massive burn on his body. This burn cover most of his upper chest and neck area, since his gauntlets do not burn like his skin only becomes charded. This cause S rank damage to srin but does not kill him.. it simply wounds him greatly and making most attacks doubled the damage when he is hit if not healed. The time is 2 months in Real Life Edited Approved. Again, nice work.Legion's Claw's Crimson Bolt C Rank The energies in the gauntlets slowly build up in Legion. As this is done the energy is shaped and aimed at the target. AS this done a bolt of this crimson energy is shot at the target which can leave up to 2nd to 3rd degree burns, it basically D rank damage per hit for awhile intil burns are healed Beside that they may be knocked off their feet from the force if they are 10ft. Edited editted
Legion's Fist
S Rank
This skill covers the user in a dark red aura as it begins to charge for five posts. During these five posts the user begins to slow down by 2 speed, as this happens the gauntlets both begin to change, as this happens no attack can be made so the process isnt messed up. When the time is up the gauntlest have changed into massive forms of their selves giving his gauntlets more striking power. During this mode his striking power sends a shockwave though the person body either bring them to their knees of breaking bones. It can also be used in another way.. By simply waiting 2 more posts and than charging for another the massive gauntlets can be launched at a person. The range is up 35ft but after that its a slight chance to hit. After launch his arms are gone for 3 posts intil they finally come back to him..in which time he can not use any reaper based skills, and no real skills can be used leaving him open. To stay away from confusion the gauntlets are still in that form intil they return to his body.. The cooldown is ttwo week in rl
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 5:14 pm
Approved! Please remember to put this in your customs thread.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 5:18 pm
Ferregar Approved! Please remember to put this in your customs thread. thank you ^w^ we finally came to middle ground XD
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Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2012 6:33 pm
RPC Name: Allysa RPC Profile Link: HereYour Customs Link: HereRPC Rank: Student RPC Bloodline: Kakurenbo RPC Class: Mage RPC Element: All! Name of Weapon/Armor: Retribution Description: ~^_^~ Rank: Same as Allysa Passives: Tail Consumption: Once Allysa gains her fourth and eighth tail, she will grow them like normal, but the skills she would normally learn from the tails are consumed by the blade. At each consumption, Retribution adds a strength bonus to Allysa. Fourth Tail = +1 Strength Eighth Tail = +2 Strength These bonuses are only in effect while she uses Retribution. Skills: Skill Name: Bleed Effect Rank: B Description: Retribution is coated in a red aura for 2 posts. If it's blade cuts an opponent within this time, an illusion activates that makes it seem as if blood endlessly flows from the wound. The opponent becomes disoriented for 1 post, and cannot attack during that time. Has a 3 post cooldown. Skill Name: Bleed Effect v2 Rank: A Description: Retribution is coated in a black aura for 2 posts. If it's blade cuts an opponent within this time, 250 energy is drained from them and gained by Allysa. Has a 4 post cooldown. Skill Name: Bleed Effect v3 Rank: S Description: Retribution is coated in a shimmering aura for 2 posts. If it's blade cuts an opponent within this time, the opponent suffers from -2 to both strength and speed for 2 posts. Has an 8 post cooldown.
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