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 Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:55 am
sergeant cry Hey Cobra,I checked and it turns out im the only one with the bBloodline,Smoke Shifter.Besides ieatsspammers I checked the guild member system and he wans't on it.Plus his says dormant......so does that make the head of the bloodline?
Yes, if you are the first to take the bloodline, then you are eligible, but before you are put as the head, you need to become a Chuunin.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:09 am
Dante: Alright, well first off, very nice work with the RP Sample. You're clearly a good writer and everything and I believe that you showed that you know the idea behind the bloodline. I would have liked to have seen a few uses of the bloodline's specific jutsu... HOWEVER, given the level of RP you've shown here, I'm confident that you could have easily done so if you had been so inclined.
...just don't prove me wrong. stare . That being said...
Despite what this picture may seem to represent...
COBRA APPROVES!!!
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:17 am
Calypso: Well, we do encourage unique bloodlines as well as customs, but before you would apply for a custom bloodline, You would have to submit the custom Bloodline itself for approval in the Custom Bloodlines thread. So, I will redirect you there...[LINK]
...just looking at your description however, allow me to offer two pieces of advice:
1 - To say that a clan was 'well Like and respected' but then to say 'they were killed off' ... seems disconnected. You might want to explain WHY they were killed off, especially if they were so well liked.
2 - To say that someone can form Steel from 'the moisture in the air' is a rather large jump in molecular rearrangement... even for ninja. for example, the crystal release is a combination of Earth and water, which allows the clan members to 'crystallize' any molecules they wish and use them in certain ninjutsu.
...you might want to re-think the specifics of how 'creating Steel' might work.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:21 am
Cobra_X Dante: Alright, well first off, very nice work with the RP Sample. You're clearly a good writer and everything and I believe that you showed that you know the idea behind the bloodline. I would have liked to have seen a few uses of the bloodline's specific jutsu... HOWEVER, given the level of RP you've shown here, I'm confident that you could have easily done so if you had been so inclined.
...just don't prove me wrong. stare . That being said...
Despite what this picture may seem to represent...
COBRA APPROVES!!!
Ah, my apologies. But I thought that we were simply meant to RP the basic skills-- the level one abilities-- during the RP and not the full extent of its powers. In any case thank you for your approval.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:27 am
D. Slayer W.: HOLY SH*T! YOU LIVE!
...now onto business. *ahem* You suck. I kid... I kid.
Not a bad RP Sample as I have come to expect from you. You showed SOME of the aspects of the Byakugan, but I didn't see any real use of the Gentle Fist, on a live target, which showed me that you understand who that works. I have fully confidence that you do actually know how it works though, so do you think you could just slightly edit your post (and maybe make the dummy a live target, where you can show the Jyuuken's actual effect?
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 9:41 am
i fixed it. is it better now? i also submitted my custom clan too.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 11:37 am
Rpc Name: Jinsoku Fuzen
Village: (Pending...) Cloud
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Anigan
What you know about the clan/bl: I know that they use the ablities of animals to fight. At stage 1, one can only use basic things like senses, speed, and other natural abilities. At stage 2, one can actually gain physical attributes. At stage 3, one can transform into the animal, making it somewhat like a shapeshifting abilites. Not completely sure but I think at stage 4 one can use more then one animal ability at a time.
Rp Sample:
Today was a big day for Jinsoku. He was just accepted into the Cloud Villages Anbu black ops and would finally be able to avenge his fallen clan by killing some of bastards that kill them. His mission was simple. He, along with his comrades, had kill members of the Leaf Village's Anbu and steal valuable blueprints of the village. He couldn't contain his excitement for this mission. The moment he heard about the mission all he did was train and sharpen his skills to a point of absolute perfection. The night was still and Jinsoku sat with his comrades under a large tree in the forest outside of the Leaf village. A cold breeze swept by, kissing each of the ninja lightly on the cheek and easing the tension that was no doubt building. Jinsoku and his twin brother Kajime were assigned to blitz their frontlines and take down as many opposing Anbu as possible. Jinsoku didn't need his snake sword for this fight, he wanted to kill these warriors with his bare hands.
Jinsoku centered himself and opened up his large database of animals in his mind that he had witnessed with his Anigan. He was now at the four stage of the anigan and was considered prodigy of the Anigan. He gained the eyes of an eagle so that he could have better then 20/20 vision. The teeth of a lion, just in case he had to rip someone throat out. He also gained snake venom to add to the bite. The upper body strength of a gorilla and the legs of a kangaroo. Normal he would simply transform into a raven but since this wasn't a stealth mission he figured what would be the point. With his powerful legs he bounce off into action. ((since I'm displaying power and abilities, I hope its alright if I god mod.)) he quickly swung a haymaker of a punch at an unsuspecting Anbu Op, swiftly knocking him down and most likely out. With his leg strength he jumped in the air once more and drop kicked another hostile whom was running towards him. Now that the element of surpise was gone he need to switch legs. Jinsoku ditched the kangaroo legs and changed into ostrich legs. Using the sharp claws on his feet he performed a roundhouse kick and nearly ripped off the face of an op member who was trying to come from behind. Blood spilled everywhere within a matter of moments and under the moonlight, crimson blood laid on top of the grassy land like a painter had brushed red paint all over it. Jinsoku heard Kajime warn him about reinforcements coming so as soon as Kajime fully transformed into a squirrel, Jinsoku became a raven and took flight.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:17 pm
CalypsoNakamura i fixed it. is it better now? i also submitted my custom clan too.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 12:55 pm
when are u gona look at mine?
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:49 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:52 pm
ehh, what about mine? do i need to redo my RP sample?
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:14 pm
Cobra_X D. Slayer W.: HOLY SH*T! YOU LIVE!
...now onto business. *ahem* You suck. I kid... I kid.
Not a bad RP Sample as I have come to expect from you. You showed SOME of the aspects of the Byakugan, but I didn't see any real use of the Gentle Fist, on a live target, which showed me that you understand who that works. I have fully confidence that you do actually know how it works though, so do you think you could just slightly edit your post (and maybe make the dummy a live target, where you can show the Jyuuken's actual effect?
Lol. Yeah I know, back from the grave. I'll tell you more about why I was gone in the PM. XD And sure, I'll edit it. Was kind of thinking the same way since really, dummies don't have Chakra Points. XP
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:14 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 4:21 pm
Demonic Slayer Wasuken Rpc Name:Tatsuo Hyuga Village:Kirigakure Rank:Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for:Byakugan What you know about the clan/bl: Byakugan, also known as Evil Eye, is a doujutsu that the Hyuga clan use. A set of white eyes with pop up nerves around the corners. The Byakugan gives the user a vision that can see at very far distances and see a persons Chakra System and Chakra Points. This Doujutsu also gives the User the ability to use the Gentle Fist Taijutsu fighting stance which if hit at the points of their index and middle fingers can cancel out Chakra Points. But their drawback is that since it is a Doujutsu, it requires a lot of their chakra. They also have a 360o vision that cans see incoming attacks, but they do have a blind spot at the back of their neck, so Hyuga members have to be cautious in combat. Rp Sample: Tatsuo felt that his training was still insignificant, keeping his cool as he trains. He stood their with his eyes shut at his Gentle Fist stance, hearing the sound of nature. He felt the wind blow at him and felt calm air, giving him a small smile. He slowly open his eyes as a sound wave of some sort flashed as nerves bulge out at the edges of his eyes. He look around as his vision was white but could also see farther as his vision grew outward. He smirk as kunais and shurikens that was tied to branches lunged out at him. Seeing it coming, he dodged left to right, preforming a couple of spins as he ran to some of his class mates that agreed to help him in his training (sucks to be them XD). It felt like time was slowing down for him but knew it wasn't. He could see his target's Chakra System as they look like a set of nerves all over his body that glow with a blue color. In the middle is the center of his chakra. He then took a kick sweep with his right leg, tripping one of them as he slam his fingers into the target's chest which canceled or sealed 4 of their Chakra Points. The person himself flew back about 5 feet as he turn swiftly to the other guy next to him, slamming the tips of his index and middle fingers in it's left waist, closing yet 3 more. He finished the target off with a back flip kick to the face as he send him flying about 6 feet in the air, landing roughly on the ground. He sighed as this was getting boring to him. His eyes changed back to their normal form as the nerves vanished in a blink of a eye. seeing as both his class mates were done, He pick both of them up as he slump them over his shoulders and turn to where the exit of the ground was and started to walk, heading out of the grounds and back to the village. A smile crept across his face. Alright, I fix it a little bit. Had some minor spelling and grammar mistakes as well. XD
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