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 Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:55 pm
@Spammie: Approved, but keep in mind that the paper can come from you, and also remember your weaknesses!
@Gaara: That's a nice RP sample and all, and you show a good understanding, though you barely used the Byakugan :l Use some of the techniques there, nor did you mention anything about the chakra points.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:18 pm
Rpc Name: Azuma(Tentative)
Village: Rock
Rank: Genin(Tentative)
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Satetsu
What you know about the clan/bl: The Satetsu is the result of experimentation by the Third Kazekage. In effort to replicate the techniques of the One-Tailed Shukaku Demon, the Kazekage used iron dust in combination with earth and lightning chakra to create magnetic Sand, replicating the demon's abilities to some degree.
Rp Sample:
Twilight, a peaceful time of day to most people, a time to wind down and relax. As the sun nestled itself in the horizon, a lone figure could be seen making its way towards the town. He was garbed simply: black hakama and white tunic, and carrying only a staff and a scroll across his back. Slowly he approached the town, garnering looks from the citizens. Many turned their heads to see this stranger, some marvelling at the peace and calm he aired, others looking at him in suspicion and distrust. He ignored these looks and made his way to the inn for the night. Once he had checked in, he set out into the down for dinner, not bothering to look into his room or drop off anything. As he walked the town, he stopped and humbly asked a few townspeople for directions to a restaurant. One younger man pointed him down an alleyway, speaking of a shortcut to the restaurant. The stranger thanked the man and took the shortcut.
As he walked, a man approached him. "Got some change for me sir?" he asked in a drawl, as if he were tired. "I do not sir" was the reply the stranger issued, before attempting to continue. "What's your hurry mister?" the voice asks, stepping into the stranger's path, cutting him off. "I mean to have dinner and retire for the night" he replied calmly, moving to step around the man. "That means you have money for us" a new voice crowed behind the stranger. The stranger turned, noting two men had come behind him, one holding a wickedly curved knife, blade gently twinkling in the remainder of the sunlight. The man in front produced a similar knife, grinning wickedly. "I mean none of you harm, but I implore you to allow me passage" he spoke with no fear, only calmness, serenity. "Ha, hahahahahah, he's got balls" one of the men chuckled, causing the other two to grin. "Hand over your money and we might let you walk away" the apparent leader threatened, taking a step forward while moving te knife lower. The stranger moved simply yet gracefully, swinging his staff from over his shoulder. As he did so, iron dust poured from the opposite end, blinding the knife-wielder behind him. The one in front of himi, brought his knife up, blocking the staff's collision course for his head. The stranger held the staff there for a moment, reaching his hand down to collect some iron dust from the staff and throwing it into the mugger's eyes as well. Simple, yes, cheap, yes, but effective nonetheless. Both knife wielders fell to the ground, trying to rid their eyes of the irritating particles. The stranger lifted his hand, palm open, in front of the remaining, knifeless mugger. One gesture of his hand, and two sickening squelches could be heard, one of each of the mugger's eyes being crushed by the Iron Sand. The stranger turned to the knifeless mugger, a calm look still in his eyes. "Why do you not attack me as your comerades have?" he asked, only slightly confused.
"I..I..I don't want any trouble mister. I just hang with them for the money and protection" he stammered, tears flowing rivers from the boy's eyes. In an instant, the iron sand had freed itself from both of the armed muggers and formed bands around the boy's hands, squeezing them painfully. "You two should rethink your lives. Mugging the innocent will only get all of you killed. Now disappear" he chastised, releasing the iron sand around the boy's hands, leaving a ring of bruises and blood. One motion of the stranger's hand, and all of the sand retracted into his staff as he walked on, intent for his dinner and rest.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:16 pm
re-entry
Rpc Name:Kai
Village:Konogakure
Rank:Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Pin Point
What you know about the clan/bl: Not much. I know that the clan members is scatter everywhere and one of their goal is to look for each other. They usually wear clothing where they can hide weapons or in their long hairs. They control weapon and are natural assassin.
Rp Sample: Kai walked up to the training ground with a grim expression. He hated doing this sort of thing because of the concentration it took and what his sensei usually do to him. Kai took in a deep breath as he arrived next to the only tree withing a two miles radius. He sat down and took out the twenty kunais in his kunai holder and placed them in front of him. He also unsheathed his katana and placed them next to the kunais.
Kai picked up his katana as he slowly stood up and began to stretch. As he stretch, the katana slowly feel like a part of his arm, a part of his body and soul. After a while Kai stopped and stared at the seal on the handle of the katana. A smiled slowly formed on his face as the memory of the day that he formed the seal on the katana. He placed the katana back in it sheath and sat down.
Kai took in another deep breath before staring at the kunais. He slowly blocked off everything around him except for the kunais in front of him. It took him several seconds before the only thing that he saw is the kunais and nothing else. He then saw the seals slowly formed on the kunais blade and let out a sighed of relief when the seals formed complete. Kai opened his eyes and picked up the kunais but dropped the kunais when he felt that something was wrong. His hand reached for the necklace around his neck but felt nothing. "Not again." He sighed.
He knew that his sensei have stolen his precious necklace and he also knew that he would find it on his bed at home. He hated how much concentration it took to form the seals, and also what his sensei does to him when he do. He let out a tired sigh and decided to look for this sensei later and test out the kunais now. Before he does it though he choose three special kunais and formed the elemental seals on it. On one he formed the wind seal, the other he formed the lightning seal, and the last he formed both seals on it.
He picked up all of the kunais and walked toward the practice range. In front of him was several target practice at different range. Some were close while other were about 50 meters away. With a smiled on his face he launched the first kunai at the closest target, 10 meters away. He watched as it pierced the middle of the big red circle. It seem that his aim have improved a bit thank to the seal.
He went through the process again and again with the other 16 normal sealed kunais. Each of them hitting their mark all the way up to 30 meters away. It was after 30 meters that he began to miss his target. The kunais was being blow away by the strong wind current. He sighed and picked up the wind sealed kunai. Aiming for the 50 meters target he waited and waited until the right moment. He threw the kunai right when a strong wind current blew, and he watched as the kunai left his arm and hit the target a few second later. The wind didn't affect it because of it wind element seal and it actually make the kunai much faster. Kai took out the lightning sealed kunai and threw it at the target 10 meters away. He watched as the kunai hit the target and an electric current spread around it. If it was a human then he or she would be paralyzed. He smiled and walked back to the tree and sat down.
He examined the last elements sealed kunai. The wind would make it faster, and the lightning element would created a blinding light and paralyzed the opponent, but it have it weakness. The wind element is weak against the fire element and, the lightning is weak against wind, but the wind sealed can help nullified the lightning weakness. He loved how his two element helped each other. He let out a tired sigh before closing his eyes and felled asleep.
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 11:27 pm
Hizuma the Troublesome Rpc Name: Azuma(Tentative) Village: Rock Rank: Genin(Tentative) Bloodline or Clan applied for: Satetsu What you know about the clan/bl: The Satetsu is the result of experimentation by the Third Kazekage. In effort to replicate the techniques of the One-Tailed Shukaku Demon, the Kazekage used iron dust in combination with earth and lightning chakra to create magnetic Sand, replicating the demon's abilities to some degree. Rp Sample: Twilight, a peaceful time of day to most people, a time to wind down and relax. As the sun nestled itself in the horizon, a lone figure could be seen making its way towards the town. He was garbed simply: black hakama and white tunic, and carrying only a staff and a scroll across his back. Slowly he approached the town, garnering looks from the citizens. Many turned their heads to see this stranger, some marvelling at the peace and calm he aired, others looking at him in suspicion and distrust. He ignored these looks and made his way to the inn for the night. Once he had checked in, he set out into the down for dinner, not bothering to look into his room or drop off anything. As he walked the town, he stopped and humbly asked a few townspeople for directions to a restaurant. One younger man pointed him down an alleyway, speaking of a shortcut to the restaurant. The stranger thanked the man and took the shortcut. As he walked, a man approached him. "Got some change for me sir?" he asked in a drawl, as if he were tired. "I do not sir" was the reply the stranger issued, before attempting to continue. "What's your hurry mister?" the voice asks, stepping into the stranger's path, cutting him off. "I mean to have dinner and retire for the night" he replied calmly, moving to step around the man. "That means you have money for us" a new voice crowed behind the stranger. The stranger turned, noting two men had come behind him, one holding a wickedly curved knife, blade gently twinkling in the remainder of the sunlight. The man in front produced a similar knife, grinning wickedly. "I mean none of you harm, but I implore you to allow me passage" he spoke with no fear, only calmness, serenity. "Ha, hahahahahah, he's got balls" one of the men chuckled, causing the other two to grin. "Hand over your money and we might let you walk away" the apparent leader threatened, taking a step forward while moving te knife lower. The stranger moved simply yet gracefully, swinging his staff from over his shoulder. As he did so, iron dust poured from the opposite end, blinding the knife-wielder behind him. The one in front of himi, brought his knife up, blocking the staff's collision course for his head. The stranger held the staff there for a moment, reaching his hand down to collect some iron dust from the staff and throwing it into the mugger's eyes as well. Simple, yes, cheap, yes, but effective nonetheless. Both knife wielders fell to the ground, trying to rid their eyes of the irritating particles. The stranger lifted his hand, palm open, in front of the remaining, knifeless mugger. One gesture of his hand, and two sickening squelches could be heard, one of each of the mugger's eyes being crushed by the Iron Sand. The stranger turned to the knifeless mugger, a calm look still in his eyes. "Why do you not attack me as your comerades have?" he asked, only slightly confused. "I..I..I don't want any trouble mister. I just hang with them for the money and protection" he stammered, tears flowing rivers from the boy's eyes. In an instant, the iron sand had freed itself from both of the armed muggers and formed bands around the boy's hands, squeezing them painfully. "You two should rethink your lives. Mugging the innocent will only get all of you killed. Now disappear" he chastised, releasing the iron sand around the boy's hands, leaving a ring of bruises and blood. One motion of the stranger's hand, and all of the sand retracted into his staff as he walked on, intent for his dinner and rest. Hizuma you have a mist RPC with Byakugan. That's not good enough?
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:21 am
tinymini7: Alright, very good edits. Sooo....
Despite what this picture may seem to represent...
COBRA APPROVES!!!
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:33 am
Gregar828 Hizuma you have a mist RPC with Byakugan. That's not good enough?
Hizuma: Do you already have another RPC? I don't think people are allowed to have 2.
...if you are however choosing to make a NEW RPC, I would have to say that I would thoroughly approve of your application.
The RP sample was very well written and you showed you know the concept behind the iron sand. Two things however (which im sure you'd be able to do) would be to somehow incorporate an actual iron sand jutsu into the RP, and even show it's weakness to fire perhaps?
Just thoughts really. But I did really enjoy reading the sample.
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:26 pm
Lament_of_the_lonely @Gaara: That's a nice RP sample and all, and you show a good understanding, though you barely used the Byakugan :l Use some of the techniques there, nor did you mention anything about the chakra points. Ok, i can use more, i just was using it as if he was still an academy student, didnt want to OP it. i'll edit and repost.
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 3:55 pm
Hey Cobra,I checked and it turns out im the only one with the bBloodline,Smoke Shifter.Besides ieatsspammers I checked the guild member system and he wans't on it.Plus his says dormant......so does that make the head of the bloodline?
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 6:30 pm
so are u people gona approve mine?
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Posted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:20 pm
Rpc Name:Tatsuo Hyuga
Village:Kirigakure
Rank:Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for:Byakugan
What you know about the clan/bl: Byakugan, also known as Evil Eye, is a doujutsu that the Hyuga clan use. A set of white eyes with pop up nerves around the corners. The Byakugan gives the user a vision that can see at very far distances and see a persons Chakra System and Chakra Points. This Doujutsu also gives the User the ability to use the Gentle Fist Taijutsu fighting stance which if hit at the points of their index and middle fingers can cancel out Chakra Points. But their drawback is that since it is a Doujutsu, it requires a lot of their chakra. They also have a 360o vision that cans see incoming attacks, but they do have a blind spot at the back of their neck, so Hyuga members have to be cautious in combat.
Rp Sample: Tatsuo felt that his training was still insignificant, keeping his cool as he trains. He stood their with his eyes shut at his Gentle Fist stance, hearing the sound of nature. He felt the wind blow at him and felt calm air, giving him a small smile. He slowly open his eyes as a sound wave of some sort flashed as nerves bulge out at the edges of his eyes. He look around as his vision was white but could also see farther as his vision grew outward. He smirk as kunais and shurikens that was tied to branches lunged out at him. Seeing it coming, he dodged left to right, preforming a couple of spins as he ran to some of his class mates that agreed to help him in his training (sucks to be them XD). It felt like time was slowing down for him but knew it wasn't. He then took a kick sweep with his right leg, tripping one of them as he slam his fingers into the target's chest which canceled or sealed 4 of their Chakra Points. The person himself flew back about 5 feet as he turn swiftly to the other guy next to him, slamming the tips of his index and middle fingers in it's left waist, closing yet 3 more. He finished the target off with a back flip kick to the face as he send him flying about 6 feet in the air, landing roughly on the ground. He sighed as this was getting boring to him. His eyes changed back to their normal form as the nerves vanished in a blink of a eye. seeing as both his class mates were done, He pick both of them up as he slump them over his shoulders and turn to where the exit of the ground was and started to walk, heading out of the grounds and back to the village. A smile crept across his face.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 4:56 am
Rpc Name: Kubiwa Kaguya
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Kaguya
What you know about the clan/bl: In the anime/manga, they are a clan of savage shinobis that possessed the ability to utilize their skeleton in combat. Kimimaro Kaguya is the sole user, in the the anime/manga, clan members also benefit from increased natural regenerative powers, most obviously regenerating the bones that they removed from their body, or are broken while being used.
Rp Sample:
Kubiwa Kaguya had been tasked by the owner of the dormitory he was staying in, to fetch some wood carvings he had requested from the wood sculptor just out of town. He carried the ornaments inside a plastic bag as he made his way back towards the village, they were very well-made and they were worth every bit of coin the owner had pain, which he told Kubiwa was a great amount, asking him to take care of them while on his way back. Lifting his head a bit he saw the entrance to the village just a few meters away from the next road curve, nodding to himself he continued onward, however, little did he know he was walking straight into a trap.
Just then a bomb was tossed in front of him, instinctively he jumped back and away from the bomb. However, in mid-air he saw several shuriken thrown from the shadows, they were aimed not towards him but towards the bag he was carrying. He knew then that they were after the expensive ornaments inside and without a second thought he blocked the shurikens with his leg which he had managed to lift in time. Landing with a thud, he rolled for a bit in the dirt before coming to a stop, he attempted to stand up but the pain forced him to kneel back down.
"Well, well, seems like you know how expensive those things are, brat." came the voice of the thieves' leader. They emerged from the shadows one by one, they were a small group, only three, including the leader. "Give us the bag kid, the weather's too hot for me to waste any more energy on a weakling like you." signaling to his men, the bandit leader and his thugs circled Kubiwa. He knew he was going to die either way, but giving in to these thieves wasn't option for Kubiwa, no, rather, failing a mission was not an option for him.
"No." he spoke, confident and firm in his response as he hid the bag inside his clothes. The leader chuckled as he snapped his fingers, with that the two thugs rushed towards Kubiwa with their daggers bare. He waited for the right time to strike, until they were close enough for his 'weapons' to reach them. As they neared their striking distance, he knew it was now or never. The thieves swung their daggers at him, aiming for his shoulders, but before their blades could reach his flesh, their blood was already dripping down into the ground. Both of them looked at Kubiwa, tracing his arm to find out what had been pierced them. Their eyes widened in shock as they saw two curved bones jutting out of his Kubiwa's forearms and embedding themselves into their abdomen.
He threw the thugs to the side, just in time to counter their leader's attack from behind. Parrying his dagger with one with his left arm's bone, before skewering his neck right arm's bone. The leader fell to the ground dead, his blood oozed out of the fatal wound as Kubiwa took care of the shuriken wounds on his leg. After bandaging them, he slowly stood up and began limping towards the village gate, no doubt the guards and the owner would be asking him some questions, he looked into the bag and saw the all of the ornaments were intact, breathing a sigh of relief he continued on, already he hearing the guards' surprised shouting at his wounded figure.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:00 am
Rpc Name: Kikimaru Taru
Village: mist
Rank: academy
Bloodline or Clan applied for: umm I have an extint clan I want to apply for
What you know about the clan/bl: well, since I made up the clan, I pretty much know everything, but I will explain. Ok, the Taru clan was known for making steel weapons by using the metal in their own blood. they were well liked and respected, but were killed off years ago by a rouge group of ninjas, only a few members of the clan survive to this day.
Rp Sample: Kikimaru panted as the fires raged her clan's home. she screamed when a flaming bored came crashing down on top of her. "Mother!" she cried as she ducked, scared that she was going to die. before she could cry again, a giant steel shield surrounded her, making the board bouce harmlessly off of Kikimaru. she looked around frantically and her mother ran to her, picking her up. "I'm here, sweetheart. It's going to be ok." Kikimaru kept her eyes closed tightly as her mother ran out of their burning house and into the clearing of the clan. her mother swished her hand, making a giant steel shield, blocking any flying debree or burning wood. her mother ran as fast as she could until she and Kikimaru were safely out of the clan's gates and in the forest. she looked back to see her birthclan go down in smoke and flames. there was no time for tears, for she had her daughter to think about. so, she turned her back on the destroyed clan, and trudged on to their new future.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:53 am
iiLov3_Kendra so are u people gona approve mine?
Allow me to respond to this in the best way I possibly can...
DENIED!!!
The evident rudeness shown in referring to the Bloodline Approval Mods as 'You people' aside... You have a LOT of edits to make before you can be approved for your bloodline.
First off, the whole point of this process and your RP Sample is to show how you would use the Bloodline's abilities, and in the process prove to us that you know how to RP with them properly and show a good understanding of the abilities/limitations.
...you included none of this. Brushing your teeth and referring to 'training' isn't good enough. Please rewrite the RP sample to include specifics on how you would use the bloodline's abilities in combat or otherwise.
Also, as a minor note, you need to work on both your spelling, grammar, and syntax when Roleplaying. I would recommend you to the RP Academy.
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