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 Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:15 pm
Alpha_Misa-of_the_wolfs @Nic:Approved Edited by Lance Fulgurant: no, you're not, I already explained what you need to change. Unless of course Alpha wants you to be her new chunin, thus closing that auto-rank position. Although you will still need to change some things, like your taijutsu i changed it
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:18 pm
Alpha_Misa-of_the_wolfs they can't go to rock or mist cuz its closed rock isnt closed or mist xp rock has 4 to 5 people and mist has more
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:41 pm
I did iAsakura's profile with him. He's accepted now.
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:14 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:18 pm
Nicolasmatt Nikorasu Sutone 
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name:Nikorasu Sutone
Nicknames:Nik, The Black Flame
Age:16
Birthdate:Jan 4
Gender:male
Village: Sand
Race:Mixed (Black and White)
Rank:Genin
Shinobi Profession:Ninjutsu ninja/ kill all threats
Ninja Type/Class:Chakra Control,Speed Ninja
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon:none
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color:black
Chakra Level:low
Chakra Element:Fire
Battle Strength:Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Summonings
Battle Weakness:Genjutsu, close combat
Fights Won:0
Fights Lost:0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1.When using fire jutsu the flame is Black
2. Great accuracy
3. enhanced hearing
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location:
Headband Style:Straight
Headband Color:Black
Flack Jacket Style:Normal
Flak Jacket Color:Black
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon:none
Weapon Range: none
Special Abilities:none
Weapon Location: none
Exploding Smoke Grenade=10
Makibishi= 5
Shuriken= 25
Light Bombs= 15
Kunai Holster Location:left leg (low)
Kunai Holster Color:White
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location:right leg (low)
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color:White
Backpack Style:Two straps
Backpack Color:White
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:Back
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:White
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╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality:Cocky, Nice, Flirty
Nindo:I choose my own path
Height:5,8
Weight:155
Original Eye Color:brown
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╫Background Information╫
Nik was born in konoha. His mother and sister was killed by his insane father. So now his father is in jail. Nikorasu lives with his uncle and his older brother. His older brother helps him train rarely. Nik's brother often travel around the world and comes back home every two years. Their uncle is a constuction worker. He used to be a ninja until he failed to save his best friends so he lefted his home town. They moved to the Sand Village.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- just get rid of the enhanced accuracy and the enhanced hearing, and make it clear that the black fire doesn't actually affect the power of your jutsus and it's fine
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:19 pm
Lance Fulgurant Nicolasmatt Nikorasu Sutone
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name:Nikorasu Sutone
Nicknames:Nik, The Black Flame
Age:16
Birthdate:Jan 4
Gender:male
Village: Sand
Race:Mixed (Black and White)
Rank:Genin
Shinobi Profession:Ninjutsu ninja/ kill all threats
Ninja Type/Class:Chakra Control,Speed Ninja
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon:none
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color:black
Chakra Level:low
Chakra Element:Fire
Battle Strength:Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Summonings
Battle Weakness:Genjutsu, close combat
Fights Won:0
Fights Lost:0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1.When using fire jutsu the flame is Black
2. Great accuracy
3. enhanced hearing
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location:
Headband Style:Straight
Headband Color:Black
Flack Jacket Style:Normal
Flak Jacket Color:Black
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon:none
Weapon Range: none
Special Abilities:none
Weapon Location: none
Exploding Smoke Grenade=10
Makibishi= 5
Shuriken= 25
Light Bombs= 15
Kunai Holster Location:left leg (low)
Kunai Holster Color:White
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location:right leg (low)
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color:White
Backpack Style:Two straps
Backpack Color:White
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:Back
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:White
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╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
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╫Character Description╫
Personality:Cocky, Nice, Flirty
Nindo:I choose my own path
Height:5,8
Weight:155
Original Eye Color:brown
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╫Background Information╫
Nik was born in konoha. His mother and sister was killed by his insane father. So now his father is in jail. Nikorasu lives with his uncle and his older brother. His older brother helps him train rarely. Nik's brother often travel around the world and comes back home every two years. Their uncle is a constuction worker. He used to be a ninja until he failed to save his best friends so he lefted his home town. They moved to the Sand Village.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- just get rid of the enhanced accuracy and the enhanced hearing, and make it clear that the black fire doesn't actually affect the power of your jutsus and it's fine ok, editing
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:22 pm
i changed it on the original post
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:00 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:15 pm
Nicolasmatt Nikorasu Sutone
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name:Nikorasu Sutone
Nicknames:Nik, The Black Flame
Age:16
Birthdate:Jan 4
Gender:male
Village: Sand
Race:Mixed (Black and White)
Rank:Genin
Shinobi Profession:Ninjutsu ninja/ kill all threats
Ninja Type/Class:Chakra Control,Speed Ninja
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╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon:none
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color:black
Chakra Level:low
Chakra Element:Fire
Battle Strength:Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Summonings
Battle Weakness:Genjutsu, close combat
Fights Won:0
Fights Lost:0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1.When using fire jutsu the flame is Black (doesn't make any fire jutsu more powerful)
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
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╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
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╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫
Headband Location:
Headband Style:Straight
Headband Color:Black
Flack Jacket Style:Normal
Flak Jacket Color:Black
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon:none
Weapon Range: none
Special Abilities:none
Weapon Location: none
Exploding Smoke Grenade=10
Makibishi= 5
Shuriken= 25
Light Bombs= 15
Kunai Holster Location:left leg (low)
Kunai Holster Color:White
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location:right leg (low)
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color:White
Backpack Style:Two straps
Backpack Color:White
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:Back
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:White
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╫Technique List╫
Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Character Description╫
Personality:Cocky, Nice, Flirty
Nindo:I choose my own path
Height:5,8
Weight:155
Original Eye Color:brown
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Background Information╫
Nik was born in konoha. His mother and sister was killed by his insane father. So now his father is in jail. Nikorasu lives with his uncle and his older brother. His older brother helps him train rarely. Nik's brother often travel around the world and comes back home every two years. Their uncle is a constuction worker. He used to be a ninja until he failed to save his best friends so he lefted his home town. They moved to the Sand Village.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- APPROVED!!! congratulations, please feel free to begin posting in Sunagakure after posting your profile in their profile topic
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:42 pm
you know what i'm going to apply for the chuunin rank, i dont feel like starting from the beggining
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:46 pm
Umm, your profile says one of your strengths is summoning, but there are no summons listed. Was that a mistake, or are you going to apply for a summon later?
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Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:50 pm
gregar828 Umm, your profile says one of your strengths is summoning, but there are no summons listed. Was that a mistake, or are you going to apply for a summon later? yea, later xd
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 5:20 pm
Kano Tenshi
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Kano Tenshi
Nicknames: Kano
Age: 18
Birthdate: May 18th 1991
Gender: Male
Village Cloud village
Race: Hawaiian/Japanese
Rank: Academy
Shinobi Profession: Full time Shinobi
Ninja Type: Tatical Ninja/Combo User
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: Tendril Bloodline
Clan:
Current Bloodline Stage: Beggining stage 1
Chakra Color: Chakra color Blue
Chakra Control:Medium
Chakra Level: Low
/Bloodline or Cursed seal or Lesser Demon= Low
Chakra Element: Raiton
Battle Strength:Ninjutsu
Battle Weakness:Genjutsu
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
*Note Special shinobi skills must be approved BEFORE posting your profile*
1.
2.
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location:
Headband Style: Over forhead
Headband Color: Black
Flack Jacket Style: un-zipped down all the way
Flak Jacket Color: Black
Weapon Class: Duel Katanas
Name of Weapon: Kuro-Tenshi
Weapon Range: Sword range
Special Abilities:
Weapon Location: crossed against my back
Exploding Smoke Grenade=3
Makibishi= 3
Shuriken= 3
Light Bombs= 2
Kunai Holster Location: Back right above left butt cheek
Kunai Holster Color: Black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: right side above hip
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Grey
Backpack Style: None
Backpack Color:
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: Behind back above butt
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: Black
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫
•Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
•Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
•Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)
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Ninjutsu
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Genjutsu
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Taijutsu
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╫Character Description╫
Personality: Patient/Calm
Nindo: Intelligence plus Honor equals Character
Height: 6'1
Weight: 165IBS
Original Eye Color: Green
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╫Background Information╫
Kano Tenshi, raised in the Tenshi household with his mother a medical ninja and his father an obsessed puppet master both respected ninja in their village. Kano could feel his dads sanity slipping away with time until his 13th birthday when he came home that day only to find blood all over his house and his parents gone...exactly 2 years later Kano's dad had replied witha birthday surprise, being his mother a puppet and the dad an insane loon come to give me the same fate as my mother. One of our village ninja's caught word of the return of my father and came to find out what happened only to find Kano with a kunai in his upper right shoulder and Kano's dad about to finish me off as my vision was fading out i saw that ninja pull his katana as it was thrusted through my dad's back and out in between his chest. After recovered i left the village and all its bad memories behind to head out to the cloud village. (Idk if i did this right if not please feel free to let me know haha if not ill erase this parenthesis part)
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:38 pm
Kano approved once you write out a backstory
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