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One thing, you change the Insant Part, which is good, but your Bankai is also just a little overpowered. The Flame wall I'm not going to touch, you should be able to fix that yourself, but your bankai seems to be Offensive and Healing. If you picked one of them to be your prime attribute that may be better. Like instead of twice, maybe once, and it happens immediatly after Bankai release. And instead of having one kind of attack that sucks up alot of Reiatsu, why not increase his strength or speed, because if you keep that 3rd attack, you wouldn't last long, not even against a 3rd seat. Also, this is small, but your sword should have a maximum temerature, if it keeps getting hotter and hotter, then it would sear through your opponent like a hot knife through melted butter. The thing is really, you do need to have limits on everything, unlimited is almost another word for invinsable. Like my RPC, Minato, can form feather like reiatsu thingies(not sure what I could call them...) from his reiatsu when in Bankai. But they are fused with reiatsu and are used up in certain conditions, and they number of feathers he creates is based on how much reiatsu he puts into his blade to make them. So he would have a limit on how many he could make. Get what I'm saying?

Name: Vladimir Konstantinov (Va-lad-eh-mear Con-stan-teen-ov)

Aliases/ Nicknames: Vladi

Sex: Male

Age of Death: 16

Age: 19

Squad/Seat: Squad 7/ Seat (Pending)

Physical Description: Athletic, runner build, green eyes,lean, slightly muscular, long legs and torso, hawk-like eyes, a square jaw and stoney face. Vladimir towers over most at a respectable 6'4" though when it comes to the pounds he is a light weight weighing only about 140lbs.

Vladimir Konstantinov

Zanpacto: Древний Скальпель (Ancient Scalpel)

The World of the Scalpel: Ancient Scalpels world is a simple tundra-like landscape similar to that of Russia. The ruins of behemoth temples litter the terrain, each stone pillar or building block scripted in Runes of a long forgotten language of a long forgotten culture. An insistant blizzard ravages the world though snow accumulation is little. Massive trees are scattered about making a simple human seem miniscule compared to the massive structures and landscape. An eerie whispering fills the air and ones voice is seemingly lost leaving any who enter this world litterally speechless.

Release Phrase: "Древний Скальпель, позволяет нашей подготовки пациента к операции" Translation: "Ancient Scalpel, lets prep our patient for surgery"

Shikai: (Not achieved) In Shikai Ancient Scalpel increases Vladi’s precision 2 fold. When in Shikai speed and strength are set aside for deadlier, clean, and precise strikes. The Khopesh style becomes more deliberate because; the curved edge is razor sharp for quick, clean cuts, the hook is used for disarming opponents and its light weight creates easy wielding. Slashes and hacks are easily made and deal the most damage. The blade "hums" lightly allowing Vladi to "tune" himself with his weapon making it an extention of his body and less of a tool.

Khopesh Style

Release Phrase: "Демонтаж их древней трепанировать" Translation: "Dismantle them Ancient Trepan"

Bankai: (Not achieved) In Bankai Ancient Scalpel turns into a long lance that can be manipulated like a three sectional staff and is known as Ancient Trepan. This new form causes Vladi use a more dance-like fighting style that accomadates the length of the lance and it's weight distribution. From tip to hilt Ancient Trepan becomes engraved with magic runes. These runes turn the lance into a ghostly weapon making it as light as a feather and as swift as a cheetah. When in combat excessive contact between Ancient Trepan and the opposing weapon allow three different types of runes to be transmitted onto the opposing blade in the form of Vladimir’s Reiatsu. As well, Ancient Trepan "vibrates" when in Bakai and releases an inaudible sound wave that activates the runes depending on the pitch. The three runes are:

Runes of Sorrow:
Bronze symbols that are used to deplete and absorb an opponents spiritual energy. When the Runes of Sorrow are transferred, the enemy’s blade becomes a massive sponge that slowly depletes its wielders energy. The user is gradually weakened the more they attack.

Runes of Anguish:
Silver symbols that are used to weaken and torture an enemy. When the Runes of Anguish have been successfully transmitted the wielder's own Reiatsu against them causing serious pain to their entire body. **Runes of Anguish can only work once enough of the enemy's energy has been taken by the Runes of Sorrow.

Runes of the Crypt:
Golden symbols used to seal the opposing blade’s connection with its handler. The opponent’s weapon becomes non-wieldable and the enemy is left unarmed. **Runes of the Crypt can only be transferred when enough energy has been taken from the opponent by the Runes of Sorrow and the enemy is significantly exerted by the Runes of Anguish.

***The Runes gradually deplete Vladi’s spiritual energy leaving him drained and exhausted by the end of the battle. This is because the Runes are visual representations of Vladimir's Reiatsu that counteract the enemies spiritual energy.

Special Accessories: Arm wraps that cover tattoos of ancient Russian symbols. Dark brown and/or black gloves and the occaisonal scarf.

Skills: Muay Tai Master of the Eight Limbs and a general understanding of pressure point manipulation. Vladi LOVES using every INCH of his body in an attack and throwing a nice elbow strike to the crown of an unsuspecting victims skull gives him a sick pleasure. High powerful and precise kicks make up a large portion of his attacks though lower strikes and sweeps are somethings he includes frequently. As well Vladimir never ever forgets about the bodies natural "weaknesses" such as the back of the knee and inner thigh. When ever possible Vladi will take advantage of an opening, such as an over stretched stance and too high of arms. The arm pit is one of his favorite "soft" spots that he manipulates to cripple a foe but such spots can be a tad sweaty and hard to get to. In the end, Vladimir is a man of precision that enjoys throwing his body into each strike using Muay Tai and sometimes even the pradictable Vladimir can switch things up!

Abilities: Master of Precision and Accuracy, phenominal long distance runner (holds mile and 2 mile record at his high school), great endurance, exceptional night vision.

Personality: Outgoing, fights for what he thinks is right, uses brains over brawn, calculative, straight forward and honest, independent. At times he can be cold, not wanting to create emotional bonds with anyone, afraid that they might be taken from him or leave him. Vladimir is very quiet and only speaks in a whisper or aloud when stating his thoughts.

Biography/History: Vladimir was born in a small village in Russia. After his parents were gruesomely murdered by Russian police, Vladi was adopted by a Japanese family. He grew up the queer of his society, he was Russian and all his other school mates harassed him because he didn’t belong. Vladi however embraced being different which gave him the self confidence he needed to overlook the harassment he daily received.

In school Vladimir was a straight A student who really never applied himself to his studies. Instead of working hard in school and study at home Vladi became immersed by the martial art style of Muay Tai. By 16 Vladi had graduated as an apprentice and advanced to a master. His mastery though soon became a secret and no one ever really knew the extent of his skills.

As well as being a Muay Tai Master Vladimir also excelled at long distance running. At 15 years old and a brand new freshman Vladimir broke both the one mile and two mile times and actually ended up holding the title of the national record holder for both races. Vladimir was very, VERY into running and found himself tearing his maniscus in his left knee multiple times, cracking his shin in half, and tearing his ACL frequently. No matter his injury Vladimir ignored the pain and powered through, running with his injuries days after he was told not to put a single ounce of weight on them. However, even though he held these outstanding records he was still picked upon and being a record holder only made him more of an outcast.

When Vladi was 16 a group of boys (at least 7) cornered him out by the back of his school, each one held a weapon whether it be a chain or a steel pipe. All at once the group of boys jumped him and beat him to death. A day later his body was discovered by his history teacher, his skull had been literally bashed in and his limbs had been broken and contorted.

Whilst he awoke in a secluded part of the Soul Society and this time things were different. Vladi made many friends most of whom were Shinigami and they encourage him to join them in the Academy. After training extensively and becoming intune with his spiritual self Vladi found he had a sizeable amount of spirit energy. Since his training and extensive learning, Vladimir has turned his attitude and life completely around becoming a whole new person.

Likes:
- Fruit
- Maturity
- Honesty
- Self Confidence
- Martial Arts
- Hardcore Music
- Hard Alcohol

Dislikes:
- Red Meat
- Immaturity
- Rudeness
- Soda
- Dependency
- Authority

Theme Song: Soul Eater - Lights Out

Powers:

Bakudou:

#1. Restrain - The first, and weakest, of the binding spells. No incantation is needed other than its name, and it is activated with a cross-slash of the Shinigami's pointer and middle fingers. From the torso up is the area that is paralysed, but if used on those with high-spiritual power, it is near worthless.

#4. Crawling Rope - An energy rope entangles a target's arms.

#9. Hit - The user draws with his or her hand a red light ideogram in the air that vanishes as the cast begins. The bakudou binds the enemy with a red pressure, causing pain and muscle contraction. The torture of the pain is frequently used for making the oponnent give up the battle without any more blood being spilt. The spell can be broken easily if the target has higher spiritual pressure than the caster.


Hadou:

#1. Sudden Impact - Releases a blast of air from the hands of the user.

#4. White Lightning - Focusing a concentrated amount of spiritual power at the index and middle fingers, the spell releases this energy is a then coherent beam that easily strikes through most targets.

Name: Furia Akechi(Furia Aakeechee)

nickname(s): Zanzo

Age: 14

Weight: 100 lbs

Height: 5.2

Hair Color: red

Skin color: pale

Appearance:


Zanpakutou: Utsuro, Tansen (hollowed edge)

Appearance:

::Shikai: sad not yet acheived)

Release Command: "Don't hold back Utsuro"

Appearance:

Description: When Utsuro anters it shikai stage the blade starts to glow and change into "the sword of the gods". this sword has amazing powers: it can make you fly, it can heal you wounds, it can also turn into a sheild to defend

::Bankai:: (not yet acheived)

Description: When Utsuro enters it's bankai stage the blade suddenly become shrouded in darkness transforming it into the "sword of the devil"

Release Command: "Utsuro, Tansen of the Gods"

Primary Attack: Chikara Kamigami (sword of the gods)
When this attack is used Utsuro bursts into an invisible white flame lowering the users defense and raises it's attack strength dramaticaly.

Appearance:


Secondary Attack: Chisoku Kamigami (fists of the gods)
When this attack is used Utsuro becomes a pair of strange gauntlets that raise his speed but low his attack stregnth to a really low level.

Appearence:

Final Attack: Shin-no-ippou
This attack uses hypnosis to make an enemy's fear so strong that he or she is unable to move but it can be easily over come if the opponent has stronger spiritual pressure. It can also be used to bring out someone's full potentail, or used to nullify someone's pain

Appearence: has none

Special Accessories: My characters armor neutralizes most electrical current. He also carries numerous "extra" weapons on him
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Skills: My character is a master assasin, great strategist, and insane martial artist

Personality: My character is serious, depressed, and he is a leader.

Biography/History: My character is originaly from greece but moved to japan at the age of ten. His family is unknown. He is an orphan to the noble Akechi family. My character had know freinds for he rarely left his house or his training dojo for he never went to a public school. He was part of an International team known as "Sugoi Shibou" or "Great Desire" because they had barely enough people to be in the I.M.A.C or international martial arts championship. My character died right after he won the championship match. The champion decided to kill him for beating him.

Powers: kido's 1-10

Name: Leander Livingstrom

Aliases/ Nicknames: Leo, Priest or Wandering Priest as a title

Physical Description: Leo is tall and muscular, somewhere in between lean and bulky. He has unkempt blond hair and, when they're visible, blue eyes flecked with gold. A small blond goatee rests beneath his often grinning mouth. He is almost always seen wearing black shades that are simply a straight bar of shaded sunglass lens material with notches in it for his ears and nose. He wears his black gi open from the waist up without and undershirt, exposing his muscled torso, while the arms are long enough to completely cover and obscure his hands. Around his waist is a wide red sash, and he wears a belt crossing his chest from his right shoulder to his left hip holding his zanpakuto. However, unlike mostpeople with this style of belt, his hilt protrudes by his left hip, a special catch holding his sword in its sheath.

Zanpacto: Sonshi (Holy Master)
Unreleased: Sonshi looks like a normal katana, though slightly longer. His guard has a cross design raised in it. However, Sonshi is much heavier than the average Zanpakuto, easily weighing as much as three to four times as much.

Shikai: Not Yet Accomplished Released with the incantation: Akuwokorasu, Sonshi (Punish the wicked, Sonshi). Leo tosses Sonshi straight upwards in the air as the blade starts to glow golden. The glow expands into a cross nearly as tall as Leo himself. The glow dissipates, revealing a sword with a point at the top end, and square-ended blades for the cross arms. The end bulges with a hollow inside, where Leo inserts his arm to grab the handle inside. The blade is gold with a white edge, and glows slightly. In this form, Leo can perform the Cross Bolt, which is much like Ichigo's Getsuga Tenshou, in that the sword fires the users reiatsu, but the Cross Bolt fires a straight arrow instead of an arcing wave.

Bankai: Not Yet Accomplished Sanrantaru Jokasochi Sonshi (Radiant Purifier Holy Master). A cross forms behind Leo, splitting to become winglike. "Feathers" of energy sprout under the cross to flesh out the wing while a "halo" appears between the two cross pieces, forming a floating arc. In this form, Leo fights with two of his shikai Crossblades, but they're shorter, about four feet long including the arm piece each, connected by a chain that floats around Leo's back that can extend at will. One of his strongest techniques in this form is the Double Cross Bolt, which is just that. Also, in this form, his wounds heal rapidly at the cost of little energy.

Special Accessories: Leo's glasses enhance his ability to detect reiatsu, allowing him to read its flow and easily discern weak points in his opponent's spiritual pressure, allowing him to focus his attacks on their weakest point. He also wears a beaded necklace-band wrapped several times around each hand that are very heavy to constantly train him to handle Sonshi's weight.

Skills: Leo is a powerful swordsman and hand-to-hand fighter, and is a fair marksman. He is very good at discerning a foe's weakness thanks to his glasses. He has a massive amount of raw reiatsu at his disposal, but his fine control over it is lacking, making him unable to perform most kido.

Abilities: Leo is able to force his reiatsu into his hands and feets to add a raw jolt of reiatsu to his hand-to-hand combat when its needed. He's surprisingly fast and agile despite wielding such a hefty weapon, and is very strong through his training.

Kidos Obtained: Leo, despite being able to manipulate reiatsu to his hands and feet, is unable to master any Kido save one:
4. White Lightning

Personality: Leo is a roguish womanizer with a surprisingly sensitive side if a girl decides to put up with him. He is a thrill-seeker and enjoys fighting. He loves to joke around with people and makes puns on his own unlikely holy-based Zanpakuto, stating on occasion, "Who would imagine a guy like me being a holy man?" As such, he jokingly calls himself "the Priest" when introducing himself to the foes. He's not afraid of going all out, and is considered reckless when fighting, charging head first into a fray, even though he usually has already examined the enemy for weak points. One of his favorite lines is, when asked about the weight of his Zanpakuto, he replies, "It's because it's so full of mercy." (Blatant Wolfwood ripoff, dont kill me if you're a Trigun fan too.)

Biography/History: Leo grew up in the Rocky Mountains, backpacking, hunting, and strength training in the pine forests of eastern Yellowstone. He had dreams of being an engineer, which his mother and father supported. His family was a loving one, despite his parents' divorce. His father moved in next door to them, and life was relatively unchanged. When he was twenty-two, Leo returned home for a vacation from school. He went into the woods each day to train as he once had. One day, he overestimated how much time he had left to return. Caught as night fell, he was about to make camp when he ran across a full-grown male grizzly and startled it. Despite performing the recommended procedures to avoid serious injury, the bear kept attacking him. In a last ditch effort, he rolled away from the bear, drawing his two hunting knives and attacking it. He was found dead of his wounds with his back to a tree. The bear lay dead at his feet, the two eight inch knives driven into its throat.

Powers:
Reiatsu Strikes: forcing reiatsu into his hands and feet to jolt his opponents with each hand-to-hand strike.

Some people try to

Well... I check them whenever I have the time to... and I usually look them over just enough to see if their Strengths have opposite weakness'. Just to make sure their character isn't overpowered and balanced to match their RPC's specialty... I've seen alot of profiles that contain alot of overpowering with the idea of "I wanna be like Ichigo". And I just do my best to help them out so they don't have Hidden God Mods (so I call them =/) Or basicly being overpowered... but that's really all I check for... and all I really have to check for... maybe that and their Kidou, Achievments, to make sure they don't start out with Bankai or Captain Rankings and such...

You don't have to wait... If you've been accepted into the Guild, go join a squad or something, then if someone finds something they think is unorthodox, they will tell you.