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 Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:27 pm
I try my best to criticize as lightly as possible... So, here's some criticism I consider helpful.. Only highlight and read it if you agree that you won't get your feelings hurt, otherwise, just ignore.
I'm sorry, but I just don't find these funny. Seriously, either I've lost my sense of humour, or these really can't compare to the comedy level of something else.Find someone who knows about Sonic, and has been reading some of the fancomics that are funny and run your jokes by them before you do some hard work on them, because I know they do take some time. Maybe type out the script, and run that by someone too. After all, Word wouldn't pick up that you called a female a nephew. I've read through this thread, so I know you have (a) semi-strict parent(s),but you can find some nice fonts if you can download them. They'd make the title look better. Which, speaking of, is sort of bland. Try something unique. Just make sure you spell it right, and run it through a grammar check. It's really painful for some people to read sentences that have no capitalization whatsoever.
Although, you use "*BOOM*", if you want to just make your comic look better, you shouldn't put it in a text bubble. It's just a standard comic feature. You also don't have to draw your own backgrounds for each strip. Oh, and characters never blink in comic strips. Never. Let's see... Oh, for in the future when/ if you have more time, when you recolor a sprite sheet, use a different shade for each of the different shades on the original. If you want them to always glow and not have any shading, you'll probably need to sprite an aura around a character. I'll keep checking on your comics, and each tiem I see an improvement I'll comment to try to help you become a better sprite comic artist. Well, I think that's it for now.
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Posted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:12 pm
well here is my new basic design for bane the hedgehog 
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 1:37 am
You know what I really like your comics I say they are really good nox the first one sweatdrop keep chuggin pal
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 2:28 am
just another quick point:
when you are having things like "*blink*" or "*boom*" please try not to have them in boxes, it is kind of confusing sweatdrop also, you seem to have bane and ethan's speech in the same colour. you should use different colours for diferent characters. i got so much critisism for putting everything in black on my first comic... rolleyes
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 2:30 am
just another quick point:
when you are having things like "*blink*" or "*boom*" please try not to have them in boxes, it is kind of confusing sweatdrop also, you seem to have bane and ethan's speech in the same colour. you should use different colours for diferent characters. i got so much critisism for putting everything in black on my first comic... rolleyes
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2005 10:57 am
The comics are good ( In my opinion. ) Keep it up!
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 9:05 pm
i know...i have added a comic in a while.and i have a good explination.im WAY TO LAZY!yes.to lazy to just make a comic on my computer that I use straight after school. xp
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 9:34 pm
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 9:59 pm
um maybe im just stupid buy that dont make much sense any more i really liked the chili dog one jsut because it was plain and simple but keep up the good work.
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Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 8:02 am
okay...
well in this comic im trying to express the opinion of bill gates wanting to rule the world.
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Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2005 8:08 am
plus...the boredom made me make this..the next one will be better
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 9:24 am
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