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 Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:05 pm
~Xiloscent~ Seaphron GENOmule You need to work on your writing style and grammer quite a bit, but it's an intriguing concept...I'd like to be in it. domokun grammer was my weak point... I really need to get MS word reinstalled... just for reference, what country you in? i'm gonna split the character lists up by division. I am in the USA.
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:06 pm
Seaphron ~Xiloscent~ Seaphron GENOmule You need to work on your writing style and grammer quite a bit, but it's an intriguing concept...I'd like to be in it. domokun grammer was my weak point... I really need to get MS word reinstalled... just for reference, what country you in? i'm gonna split the character lists up by division. I am in the USA. THE USAY?
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Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:08 pm
NAO! YOO AH NUT DOOING IT RYE! scream
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 11:05 am
ok, i'll begin planning of the next few chapters, after may 1st. I have to get this thing called a senior portfolio done for highschool, and I have a lot to do before it's due (Lol, Ryhme). so yeah, I have this forum bookmarked. i'll update it hopefully around May 10th
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 9:40 pm
ok i'm a bit of an insomniac tonight so I whipped up chapter 2, and,
PLZ I NEED MORE PEOPLE TO SIGN UP!
I just want to make a cool war story about all the culties...
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 1:57 am
I thought you had a good idea when you started this story. I would like to be in please. Do I still pm you? *pms anyway*
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 7:20 am
Have you already forgotten about me?
I PMed you.
Wah.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 7:21 am
Lifeless-Fox Seaphron ~Xiloscent~ Seaphron GENOmule You need to work on your writing style and grammer quite a bit, but it's an intriguing concept...I'd like to be in it. domokun grammer was my weak point... I really need to get MS word reinstalled... just for reference, what country you in? i'm gonna split the character lists up by division. I am in the USA. THE USAY? YAH THE USAY!
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 8:26 am
Hero Maul Have you already forgotten about me? I PMed you. Wah. wuh? I bet I know what happened, I deleted all my PM's a couple days ago, gettin rid of all the TWG messages, so what division you in maul?
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 10:17 am
This is decent, but with this concept you could have made this much better. The whole random attack and killing thing just doesn't make sense to me and I suggest you rewrite it with more motive to the characters and more detail overall. I have a ton of ideas for this story if your interested, but It's your work so you decide.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:09 pm
Zen Rider This is decent, but with this concept you could have made this much better. The whole random attack and killing thing just doesn't make sense to me and I suggest you rewrite it with more motive to the characters and more detail overall. I have a ton of ideas for this story if your interested, but It's your work so you decide. its cool, i'll take any advice, I want this story made so that all the new culties can come in and read it. that was my original intention. so lets make the best story based on this concept.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:07 pm
~Xiloscent~ Hero Maul Have you already forgotten about me? I PMed you. Wah. wuh? I bet I know what happened, I deleted all my PM's a couple days ago, gettin rid of all the TWG messages, so what division you in maul? I mean about this story! I gave you character sheet and everything!
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:35 pm
Hero Maul ~Xiloscent~ Hero Maul Have you already forgotten about me? I PMed you. Wah. wuh? I bet I know what happened, I deleted all my PM's a couple days ago, gettin rid of all the TWG messages, so what division you in maul? I mean about this story! I gave you character sheet and everything! i'll add you I just ned to knwo what country your in.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:37 pm
~Xiloscent~ Hero Maul ~Xiloscent~ Hero Maul Have you already forgotten about me? I PMed you. Wah. wuh? I bet I know what happened, I deleted all my PM's a couple days ago, gettin rid of all the TWG messages, so what division you in maul? I mean about this story! I gave you character sheet and everything! i'll add you I just ned to knwo what country your in. USAY. =D BTW: My favorite Nintendo weapon is the Biggeron Sword. IT RULEZS! >=D
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 5:43 pm
I'd love to be in the story, faithful to the good ol' USA.
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