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 Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 12:23 am
Aeoess squinty1989 umm.. no offence.. it's meaning is good but i didn't like it! sweatdrop That's alright, I usually write in two different styles, but everything I write is meant to be a song. Don't worry, you have the right to have an opinion, whether or not it's one that I'll like. (However I don't think everyone agrees with me there rofl (Proof of that is on that "HINDER" post...)) Here's another one:
HomecomingI may not be easy to understand I am foreign to this land Whose home was originally with the "big man" I know it's hard to understand I once had a great family All of them loved me I love and miss them too This is a hard life to go through People assume I am merely a fool I love everybody in my life I cross my heart And hope we'll die So you can all be apart Of my eternal family My biggest dream is to see Everybody in my life Living at my home As my eternal family now THIS is AMAZING! xd i just love it! xd
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 8:19 pm
Thank you kindly, good sir! xd
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 12:30 am
your welcome! cool
but it seems that no one else has anything..
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:08 pm
squinty1989 your welcome! cool but it seems that no one else has anything.. I'm writing a story, but it isnt finished and it isnt really going anywhere lol XD I'm no good at writing, but i can put great details in it XD I'm just a simple artist, but maybe sometime ill type it up and everyone can give me some tips XD
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 3:45 am
Silverliss squinty1989 your welcome! cool but it seems that no one else has anything.. I'm writing a story, but it isnt finished and it isnt really going anywhere lol XD I'm no good at writing, but i can put great details in it XD I'm just a simple artist, but maybe sometime ill type it up and everyone can give me some tips XD will be waiting! xd
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 12:06 pm
here is a poem i wrote i was wondering is you guy would tell me what you think so umm here
Why did you lie?
I tried so many times to make us work
But we wont
We cant go back now
Nothing can be restored
Because from the beginning of the end I was so scared
Scared to lose you
Scared to lose us
But now in the end
I have nothing left to fear
You pierced my heart time and time again
You are no longer there for me
You are not my friend
At times I wish I never met you back then
I was there when you needed me
Every time
Every heartbreak
Every let down
I was there for everything
But when I needed you the most
Where were you
You played your games with my head
You gave me false hope
You kept me clutching a false love
I no longer believe you ever cared for me
You told me you loved me
You told me that you needed me
And I believed you
I was wrong
You said the same to many others
Even my own brother
How could I fall into your lie?
How could I let this get so far?
But now that its all over my mind and my heart have never been this pure
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 12:55 pm
Shadow we Call Night
A night so dark so pure without them
A sky so open and lost
Fearing that noone finds us that noone cares
Hearing a shadows words and fires laugh
It surrounds us
Never knowing love until it's too late,
Never knowing pain until now,
this night without her is my suffering...
So I forever stay with this Shadow we call night
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 12:54 pm
squinty1989 Silverliss squinty1989 your welcome! cool but it seems that no one else has anything.. I'm writing a story, but it isnt finished and it isnt really going anywhere lol XD I'm no good at writing, but i can put great details in it XD I'm just a simple artist, but maybe sometime ill type it up and everyone can give me some tips XD will be waiting! xd You shall wait a long time XD It isn't that good so I have to fix it up and stuff yet lol, it isnt going anywhere, that is for sure XD
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 10:46 pm
thanks everyone for sharing these poems and writings..
i thought no one will write anything! sweatdrop
i like all of them!
well.. MOST of them! xp
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:43 am
the dead trees loiter,
as the new trees cast shadows,
on the child's soft skin...
that is one of my favorite haikus that i have written, what do u think?
the avatar below is Zelda! im trying to get enough gold! domokun
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 5:51 am
i think i like writing better because it tells the whole story, so if you can't realate to it the story still gives me a chance to feel.
if you can realate to poetry, it is pretty amazing
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:36 am
my heart
i have spoken to many
claimed that its true
my heart speaked of many
i now know the truth
for i have been lost in dark
deceived by my heart
I broke out of feelings
lost in the dark
i never felt before
pain from my chest
beholds the greatest thing
but as long as i am true
my heart will never lie
for it may deceive
i will never die
for it leads the way
in a neverending abyss
it will always bring me pain
but everlasting happyness
fit for a king
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 10:24 am
Sorry for the LATE reply but the poem is just.... GREAT! xd
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 10:29 am
squinty1989 Topic: Can't Live Without You By: Squinty Everytime i look at you, i get this weird feeling inside me. When i want to express it i get scared !! I'm afraid what i'll say may ruin our friendship or DESTROY it!! =S I love everything about you and i will always continue loving you until i die. I tell you everything because your one of my best friends and i trust you with my life!! =) I know i might've hurt you or annoyed you. But plz forgive me, in the end, we're all humans. And humans make mistakes. I wish if i knew what i rly want. Sometimes i want you as my BEST FRIEND and sometimes i want MORE!! Hope we stay best friends till we die. . . I never met a person like you !! =D I just CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU!! P.S: my writings are.. short.. sweatdrop that was so pretty! mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 10:31 am
tudkulos my heart i have spoken to many claimed that its true my heart speaked of many i now know the truth for i have been lost in dark deceived by my heart I broke out of feelings lost in the dark i never felt before pain from my chest beholds the greatest thing but as long as i am true my heart will never lie for it may deceive i will never die for it leads the way in a neverending abyss it will always bring me pain but everlasting happyness fit for a king awwwww.... that was beautiful! smile
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