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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:38 pm
O.o you're printing it?
*winces*
promise you won't like, sell it on ebay? or...do anything w/ it w/out my permission?
There's already enough copyright issues with just the name of it.
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 1:18 pm
I would NEVEREVEREVEREVER even THINK about it! gonk
I wouldn't be able to sleep at night.
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 1:06 pm
I got chimes for Christmas! surprised But they were metal, and hung from and a wooden star birdhouse.
And they were given to me by my twin. xd
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 4:27 pm
Um...heheh....bad news.
*spoilers*
She never actually gives them to him. It's a little sad.
But he gives her HER present. And she finds something else to give him that is...er...NOT....wait. TOO many spoilers.
PS, isn't it cute how ADD KAmile is? xp
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 5:20 pm
I started cackleing during homeroom when I read, "I saw something shiny, I gotta see what it is!" xd
Everyone looked at me, and I was like, "What?" emo xp
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 9:28 pm
teh spoilers are safe, mwahahaha!
And I am not yet caugfht for being online sweatdrop
XD!!!
Kamile makes me laugh.
If only for a little while.
Her ADHD changes to just ADD. *shrug*
Later.
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:08 pm
Oh, I saw the spoilers. They make me sad. sad
But that's okay! 4laugh 'Cause that means I can lord it over Everan that I have windchimes and he doesn't.
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 5:02 pm
well, that part isn't really sad.
Because sadness is relative.
And there are other things....
No more spoilers. Wait...I promise, two more chapters.
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:49 pm
Chapter Five
“How terrible…this is simply awful….” “Yes, Your Majesty.” “Only a few survivors…humans, mostly children…”
“That’s what it says, Your Majesty.”
“This is no good, is it…?”
“I agree, Your Majesty.”
“Raena, are you patronizing me?”
The tall young woman started, turning an innocent gaze in the elven queen’s direction. “Of course not, Your Majesty.”
“Well, what do you think?” the queen’s voice inquired mildly from beneath a plain hooded cloak, woven with intricate symbols in black and white. The hood shadowed her eyes, and the cloak covered everything except one graceful hand, which grasped the cord-bound grip of a long, gnarled staff.
“It’s bad, Your Majesty,” the elf called Raena said politely, tossing a shock of pale hair from her eyes. “All those people murdered, it’s terrible.”
“Oh, they’re only, humans.” The reply came swiftly, the queen’s voice casual. “They’ll grow back. What I am worried about is the amount of human warriors in that town. They were all killed, weren’t they? Over fivescore, and not a single one left.”
Raena raised her eyebrows, sounding very much like she was trying to keep her voice steady as she answered. “With all due respect, Your Majesty, I must argue the…um…sanctity of the individual…”
“Meaning?” the queen said smoothly.
“Meaning…um…oh, forget it,” Raena snapped, folding her arms, her entire posture relaxing. “Irinari, you know I can’t keep talking like this….”
“But you were doing so nicely before,” Queen Irinari replied, her voice carrying a hint of mild surprise. “What happened?”
“If you make me say ‘Your Majesty’ one more time, I swear I’m finished with this,” Raena threatened, rolling her eyes. “This is serious, I’m not wasting my time with all this...;” her look was scathing; “respectfulness.”
“Very well,” Irinari replied with a laugh. “You have permission to speak freely.”
“Thank the gods!”
Irinari laughed again, pushing back her hood to reveal her finely carved features, ageless, tempered with wisdom, her eyes overflowing with knowledge between strands of dark hair, threaded with gray. “So, go on, Raena,” she urged. “What do you think?”
“Me?” Raena placed a hand delicately across her chest in surprise. “The Elven Queen would like to hear my opinion? What an honor…” She stopped as Irinari arched a thin eyebrow. “Okay, well, frankly, Irinari…you’re a heartless, racist tyrant.”
They stared at each other for a moment, Raena standing her ground as Irinari cast a scrutinizing glance over her.
“Well, at least you’re honest,” she muttered at last. “Care to explain?”
“I’d love to. First of all, look, I know we’ve only got…what, five hundred? And the, ah… queen—” she placed as much disgust in the title as possible—“has about half the country. How many is that?”
“Half a score…in thousands. And growing.”
“Right, ten thousand, which is about twenty times more. This is where we all start hating numbers, isn’t it? But Irinari, people aren’t numbers. I know we just lost a hundred, but really, it’s the entire town we should be worrying about. Isn’t this entire war for protecting everyone—even humans—in the country? And fighting back against those who hurt our people, like the soldiers that raided that town in the first place.”
Irinari nodded. “Yes, very good. I agree. Continue.”
“Well, I went through an ashy hell to get that here, so I don’t want to travel thirty leagues and then hear ‘they’re only humans, they’ll grow back.’ You know I hate that, and anyway, humans, um…spawn slower than we do. Not a lot, but still. And Irinari, we can’t be like that if we’re going to end this, the only way is to work together and—”
“You’re not going to start with all that ‘peace and unity’ nonsense, are you?” Irinari rolled her eyes.
“No. But they’re together. You won’t find a race that doesn’t have at least a handful in the army. So we have to be together too…Irinari, I’m telling you, we can’t win this without help from someone other than the elves and whatever humans will come!”
“So what do you suggest?”
Raena sighed, running a hand through her hair. “I already told you. We should send out an envoy to the other races, or at least some of them, and concentrate on protecting our own while we amass an army big enough to at least challenge the queen. Remember what happened last time?”
“Which time?” Irinari replied carefully.
“The massacre ten years ago. The First Uprising. Slaughtered. We all lost hope from the beginning, but if we could just—”
“The other races will want nothing to do with us.”
“We’ve got to convince them. It’s only a matter of time before the queen finds them all, and for all we know she probably has…”
“Doubtful.”
“Well, anyway, we need the other races, unless we want to recruit our kids too…if they can even hold a sword, that’s another three hundred right in the forest—”
“Enough.” The elven queen held up a hand, and Raena cut off at once. “You’re being absurd now. Our children should not even be in this country…it’s far too dangerous here. Look at what happened just a few days ago, to the human children…”
“I agree completely.”
“You know, Raena…Oh, I’m sorry,” she added hastily. “Were you finished?”
Raena sighed in exasperation, but nodded stiffly. “Quite.”
“Thank you. As I was saying, do you know what we need right now?”
“I can guess,” Raena offered. Irinari smiled.
“I’m sure you can. What this country really needs is a chosen.”
“Well, it’s highly possible,” Raena countered at once matter-of-factly. “Let’s see, the last chosen was…how old? Fifteen, and she…well, nevermind what happened then, but I’m sure she made it back, and that was sixteen years ago, or so my mom said, anyway, and I believe her. So, if the chosen wasn’t married then, then she must have, soon, I’m guessing…two years? So if the chosen came today, he or she would be around fourteen.”
“Hmm,“ the queen droned. “If you say so. But what if she was never married? Or she did not have a child? Or what if she or the child died?”
“Then the chosen line would switch from her family to another descendant of Haenir, and a child would be born either way. But if that child came today, they couldn’t be older than six…”
“We’re doomed.”
“Well, don’t sound so cheerful, Irinari. Have faith in your people, will you?”
“I try, Raena, but so many of them are turning out to be no more than impudent little messengers…rather like you, as it happens.”
“Very funny,” Raena shot back with a smile. “So, you got something for me? Because I’m bored stiff here, I want to go somewhere.”
“Actually, I need to send a message to Nara—”
“Yes!” Raena whispered to herself, performing a small, triumphant gesture.
“But it isn’t important, I’ll have a lesser messenger bring it…”
“Oh, come on!” Raena kicked a knot in the wood floor angrily. “I haven’t been to Varan in ages…”
“I was only joking,” the queen placated. “It’s your responsibility. But first I need to write it…”
“That’d help,” Raena quipped, following the queen as she descended the stairs lightly and sat at a heavy wooden desk. She leaned against the wall as Irinari began to write. After a minute, she grew bored and started to talk aloud.
“‘To: my good friend Nara,” she dictated. “We haven’t spoken in awhile, huh? I’ve been so busy, you know, with this war and stuff…and speaking of, did you hear—’”
“Don’t you have something productive to do?” Irinari cut across her without looking up.
“Mm, now that you mention it…nope.”
“Hm, that’s a problem. And stop reading it,” she added sternly. “You can let Nara read it to you when you deliver it. In Varan. No peeking.”
“Don’t see the point,” Raena muttered. “You know she’ll let me read it no matter what it says, especially if I ask really nice…”
“Act your age, Raena,” the elfin queen scolded lightly, “Not the length of your sword, please.”
“Wow,” she sighed in reply, her eyes glazing over. “A sword that’s eighteen feet long…amazing…”
Irinari scoffed quietly. Raena rolled her eyes.
“No, really, Irinari, just imagine it…that could take out a score of soldiers in one fell swoop—”
“And I’m sure you could lift it, never mind use it. Grow up, Raena.”
“There it is again, the old immaturity trick.” She waved a careless hand. “Well, it won’t work, Irinari, I know I’m immature.”
“What an amazing discovery for you.”
“Yeah…and anyway, if you ask me, people acting so very mature started this war in the first place. I’ve seen smarter two-year-olds.”
“Mm…well, maybe I can find a two-year-old to deliver this, and you can send another letter to the blacksmith…”
“Errands?” Raena winced. “Ouch…that definitely qualifies as abusing power over your messenger, Irinari…”
“It’s my forest,” Irinari replied, amused. “And my power to abuse, insolent little girl. I’d have you stoned, but I like you too much.”
“Honored.” Raena let the threat pass by without acknowledgement. “You done yet, O Eternal Protector of Us All?”
“Just about. And…done.” She folded the letter neatly and sealed it, handing it to Raena. “And please do a better job of carrying it, last time it was so smudged I could hardly read it…”
“Hey, that human could barely read, it wasn’t my fault.”
“Sure, sure…do you remember where Varan is?”
“Do I?” she scoffed in reply, as if the mere thought was offensive. “Of course! I’ll be back in a flash…erm, that is…um…hmm. Give me five days.”
“Not a problem.”
“I’ll send word if I can’t come myself, all right?”
“Certainly. Oh, and Raena…”
Raena paused, one foot out the door. “Yes?”
“If you see any chosen out there…” Her eyes were suddenly very serious. “By all means, let me know.”
Raena nodded in reply, bowing with every ounce of respect she could muster. “Will do, Your Majesty.”
The sun was shining over the mist, transforming the seaward horizon into a thread of shimmering glass, the very earth warm and pleased and at one with the world. Birds sang, fish leapt high, and the trees danced an odd, wavy dance as the monotone of the waterfall kept time. Spread before them, an endless teeming mass of faces and colors and shapes, the elves of Kocha sat in neat lines on the long grass, enraptured, a smile on every face as they watched. A young couple, as happy as any of them, stood hand in hand in the shade of the great tree, humbly accepting the blessings of the head Elder, Srai.
The couple was smiling, and everyone else was smiling. Everyone, save two.
They were five, almost six, their faces and arms still pink from where the dirt had been scrubbed off of them. They were dressed in clean, new clothes: a black tunic for Everan and, much to her displeasure, a white dress for Kamilé. They sat on top of one of the tree’s roots, a good distance away from everything, alone and sad, and Kamilé was crying.
Everan frowned as she sniffed hard and scrubbed her eyes with the back of her hand. Don’t cry, he pleaded, grasping her hand reassuringly, please don’t cry…
Don’t you see? she snapped, snatching her hand away. She pronounced every word with a violent swing of her legs, her heels peeling away slivers of bark with every blow. Pilori’s getting married, she found someone new to live with and not us and now she’s gonna leave forever!
Everan saw more tears gather in her eyes and impulsively hugged her tightly. Please don’t cry…
She hugged him back, leaving little wet spots on his sleeve as both of them watched their pretend mother get married from high above.
The bride and groom were the picture of perfection; Kamilé and Everan hardly recognized Pilori in her white dress and black sash, beaming with pure joy…she had never looked happier. Resplendent in her wedding gown, flowers braided in her hair, she stood close to her fiancée and met his eyes with an adoring gaze. Her husband-to-be was a tall, fair elf, older than her and seeming to them very strong and proud, exposing muscular arms beneath a white jerkin over black pants. As far as they knew, he was a very kind person, just the sort of man they had heard Pilori fantasize about many times…but all the same, they hated him. He was going to take her away from them, and leave them abandoned forever.
They were too far away to hear what the two were saying to each other, but it looked awfully romantic to them…and then, they each slid a ring onto the other’s finger, and the deed was done. The elves jumped to their feet, whistling, cheering, and throwing flowers everywhere as Pilori’s new husband held her close and kissed her.
All except two, who wrinkled their noses in disgust, their eyes filled with sadness. As the music started, and the newlyweds began to dance with all the rest, alight with happiness, they leapt down from the root and ran off into the woods.
Hours later, they picked the lock of their house and snuck inside, throwing off their formerly unscathed clothes and exchanging them for the oldest, most worn-out clothing they could find. Kamilé kicked the little dress with her boot before sitting beside Everan on the hearth of the unlit grate, the only light in the room that of the moon’s, streaming through the window. They curled up on the hearthrug after hours of waiting, sleep dulling the hollow, empty feeling of loss inside them both.
It was nearly midnight when they heard light footsteps tapping the cobblestone street, and a key scraped in the lock.
“That’s funny,” Pilori’s voice said outside, “it’s unlocked…it must be Kamilé and Everan, I don’t know why they can’t just use the key…”
Her husband’s deep voice sounded out, a distant rumble to their ears, the words not quite making it through their clouded heads. The door opened, and the two came inside.
“Yes, they’re a little…wild, you might say…I’ve told you about them, haven’t I? I guess it’s just because they’re kids…They’re good, though, and I love them to death even though they aren’t mine…Hmm?”
A lamp flickered to life, and through half-closed eyes they saw her surprised expression as she came over and shook them gently on the shoulders.
“Kamilé, Everan! How long have you been waiting here? I never knew you left!”
Kamilé sat up, rubbing sleep from her eyes, and Everan ignored Pilori completely.
“If you were tired, you should have told me, I would have tucked you in…Come on, I’ll put you to bed, it’s late…”
“What’s he doing here?” Kamilé demanded, pointing at the man she hardly knew, standing at ease by the window. They had never even bothered to learn his name.
Pilori frowned at her harsh tone. “Kamilé, we’re married, love, he lives here until…”
She stopped.
“’Til what?” Kamilé challenged, glaring at them both.
Pilori looked worried as she sat next to them, tucking her skirt neatly under her legs. Everan rolled over, presenting his back to her, and Kamilé folded her arms. “Kamilé, Everan…is something wrong?”
“You don’t like us anymore,” Kamilé accused. “You like him better.”
Everan nodded in agreement. Pilori stared at them incredulously, as if unsure whether to laugh or just agree. After a moment, she turned to her husband.
“Can you excuse us for a moment?”
He seemed confused, but nodded and stepped outside without a word. As soon as the door closed, Pilori turned to them and frowned.
“What makes you think I don’t love you anymore?” she asked quietly.
Kamilé was obstinate. “’Cause of him. We didn’t work, so you got someone else.”
“How could you think that?” Pilori reached out to hug Kamilé comfortingly, but she pulled away. “How could I not love you? You’re my—”
“No we aren’t!” Kamilé exploded. “We aren’t your anything, you said so yourself—to him!” She pointed at the door, the anger in her voice hiding the hurt.
There was a silence, and then Pilori turned to Everan, her hand resting on his shoulder.
“Do you think that too, Everan?”
In reply, he shoved her hand off of him and nodded, curling into a tighter ball. Pilori sighed.
“Kamilé, listen to me,” she said softly. “I love him, but that isn’t why I married him. I was thinking of you, both of you…you’re getting so big, and I don’t want you to grow up without a fa—”
“He’s not our father!” Kamilé shouted. “We don’t have one and we won’t ever, or a mother ‘cause you don’t want us anymore now you got him! We were here first, Pilori, that isn’t fair!”
“Kamilé!” Pilori was taken aback. “I would never want to replace either of you!”
“You did, you did, and now you got a family and we don’t!”
Pilori shook her head, sounding close to tears. “No, don’t you see? Now we are a family, now—”
“No!” Kamilé jumped to her feet, as did Everan. “We were a family before he got here, now it’s just you and him, so are you happy now?”
Without waiting for an answer, she took off, Everan following close behind.
“Kamilé! Everan!”
They ignored her shouts, continuing to run until—
“Going somewhere?”
Large, hefty hands stopped Everan in his tracks, gripping him firmly by the shoulders. The man’s voice was friendly and cheerful, but he had picked the wrong two to delay.
“Let go of him!”
“Ow!” he gasped as Kamilé pummeled him in the stomach, grabbing Everan’s hand and running off into the night.
Pilori skidded out of the house, calling after them desperately, knowing she would never catch them. “Kamilé! Everan!”
Her husband placed an arm around her shoulders, his other holding his stomach ruefully. “What was that all about?” he gasped.
She felt tears come to her eyes and did not reply, save to hug him tightly and cry into his shoulder as she watched the two of them disappear in the darkness.
A mile away, Kamilé and Everan curled up in a hollow log, huddling close together in an effort to keep warm, lost, alone, and afraid. An owl hooted, and Kamilé jumped.
What’s gonna happen to us, Everan? She hugged him tightly, trying hard to keep from bursting into tears. Where’re we gonna live now?
We’ll be fine, he insisted. We’ll make our own house. Grown-ups do it all the time, can’t be that hard…
But we’re not even six! Kamilé wailed. How’re we gonna do that?
We don’t need help, he said firmly. We’re fine on our own. We’ll be okay, just you and me, we’ll be all right…
She closed her eyes and tried to sleep, but was too cold, too sore, too frightened.
I wanna go home, she said quietly.
No one wants us there, Everan snapped, revealing the truth with a bitter voice. Pilori found someone else to love—
Don’t say that word, she cut across him. I hate it.
He nodded, closing his eyes too and feigning sleep.
I’m scared, she admitted after a minute, edging closer.
So’m I, he agreed softly.
And hungry…
Yeah…
And cold…
Mm…
And I want Pilori to like us…
Me, too…
But…she doesn’t.
No.
Why? she wailed. What’d we do?
Everan did not answer, and slowly, eventually, they fell asleep.
Late that night, Pilori sat at the scrubbed wooden table and carefully composed the short letter on a spare bit of parchment. She knew what to say, but it was how to say it that was the problem…how to explain herself in a way that a five-year-old would comprehend and accept. Her husband’s voice echoed in her ears, though he had long since gone to sleep in the bed that all three of them had once shared.
“Pilori, darling…it’s your wedding day. Don’t worry, they’ll be back as soon as they get hungry enough…Is there anything I can do to help?”
There was nothing, nothing at all. Kamilé and Everan had never liked him anyway. She had long since discovered that it was difficult for them to like anyone, though she couldn’t say why.
She tapped her quill against the ink bottle, trying hard not to let tears fall on the letter. They could barely read as it was…
My darling children…
Lies, every word. They were certainly not darling after everything that had happened tonight, they hated being called children, and they were not hers. They knew she wasn’t their real mother, and if they hadn’t, they would have found out. Tall, fair, and light-haired, with pale blue eyes, she looked absolutely not a thing like them. Thinking about it made her wonder what their real mother would do now. She had never met a nicer woman, even in the few hours they had known each other…but Pilori knew that if she were here now, none of this would be happening.
She had been scared to tell them about her, about their mother…scared to even let them know about her…she wanted to tell them, wanted to let them know that they looked just like her, and how wonderful she had been…but she was too scared. For all they knew, they didn’t have a real mother…for all they knew, thanks to her, they might as well have been the children of the sky itself.
She hoped that her husband was right, and that they would be back before the day broke, in whatever condition…and she hoped that this letter would not be needed. She knew, though, that it would be if they came back after dawn…she couldn’t stay here. It was impossible. She was married now, and tradition was essential in marriage, in the ceremony itself and the time afterward. Tradition decreed that after tonight, since she had no family here, she was obligated—nearly required—to go with her husband and visit his own. It wouldn’t be for long, but it was long enough to be considered abandonment by her two children…My two ADOPTED children, she reminded herself sadly.
That was what tradition stated. And in Ametris, tradition was law. But tradition did not state anything about the disagreeable orphaned five-year-olds of the bride who wanted nothing to do with her husband or anyone else.
Whatever happened, they must read this letter…If they do what I tell them to…if they’ll still listen…then they’ll be okay…everything will be fine until I come back.
She wrote a sentence on the parchment, in large, neat handwriting.
If I don’t hear from Kocha, I’ll know you’re all right…Just wait for me, and I’ll come back and get you soon.
She started to cry again, just thinking about how horribly wrong this had become…they were supposed to come too, all of them, together…a family…she thought they would like that…
Why had they gotten so mad at her…?
Maybe it had something to do with family…their other family…the one that didn’t exist anymore. Maybe they reacted this way because they knew they were orphans, and weren’t sure if they could be anything else.
She finished the letter at last.
Love from, Pilori.
That was the only thing she could say with total conviction. She meant it, she did love them. As far as she was concerned, they were and would always be her children. She never once considered having a child of her own, not with them around. Her husband had brought up the subject once before, but she had shot it down at once. Who cared if he wanted a child of his own, anyway? It wasn’t his decision. It’s not like he would—or could—do anything about it.
She folded the letter neatly and set it on the table, writing their names on it and leaving it in plain sight on the table. She knew that somehow, some way, they would be fine…she could feel it….she just hoped they knew how much she already missed them.
The next day, Pilori and her husband were gone. A week later, Kamilé and Everan turned six, and a month after that, they had built a little house in the branches of a sprawling oak, deep in the woods. When they were eight, they heard about a new schoolteacher and decided to go and see. Nothing changed after that. And for five years, neither of them even once considered going back to Pilori’s house, even near enough to see through the windows. If they had, perhaps they would have seen it…the letter with their names on it, sitting forlornly on the wooden table.
And after those five years…?
Only time could tell.
She wasn’t really our mother. We knew that since forever, but I asked her and she told us no, she wasn’t, so we were sure. She never told us who our mother was, or if we had one at all…she’d always just change the subject or just say, “She’s dead.” Everan told me what a father was, and I wanted to ask her if we had one of those, but he told me not to say anything about families anymore. To Pilori or to him or to anyone. So I didn’t.
I didn’t get it…she wasn’t our mom, but she acted sorta like it…I think so, anyway. She read to us, she taught Everan letters and stuff real fast, and tried to teach me, and she cooked for us all the time and let us help and kissed us goodnight. She was always burning stuff, but it was okay, and most of the time the part that wasn’t burned tasted good. And she always told us that she loved us, even when we were bad. She always did, but we never said it back.
We liked her, though. She w's my bestest friend, 'cept Everan. She was nice, and funny, and she was always talking about boys and which ones were nice and which ones weren’t and what kind of boy she’d want to marry someday. Everan and me didn’t mind, but we never thought she’d actually do it.
I didn’t understand that part, and neither did Everan. She said marrying people means that they live in your house and they love you and you live together forever. The way she told it, me and Everan coulda been married to her, ‘cept she was always talking about boys, so I guess I didn’t count. Still, I didn’t see why we weren’t good enough, or why she wanted someone else. It was already kinda crowded. All of us shared a bed, and she SAID she didn’t mind, she said we kept her warm. But I guess she did mind.
She never said that when she got married she wouldn’t want us around. But when HE came along, she got all distant and told us to go play or to do thisandthat for her or why don’t you go chase the other kids around? She knew we wouldn’t. She knew they didn’t like us, but he made her forget. So when they got married and he was gonna live in our house forever, we knew she wouldn’t need us around anymore. So we left. And we didn’t come back, either. We didn’t know she went away ‘til she told us. And she never told us much else.
I mighta said she was a better mom than we coulda ever had before, but I didn’t. And I won’t, neither of us will. ‘Cause we never knew our mom, and we never will. Everan forgot that we ever had one, I think. But I didn’t. I still want to know who she was.
We only saw Pilori again once. She came outta nowhere on midsummer, and saw us, and she was crying and she was really glad to see us, I think. She left her husband at home, in some place in the forest I never heard about before. We decided not to be mad at her, ‘cause she said she was really sorry and she didn’t want us to be mad at her and I knew she wasn’t lying so we weren’t mad. We weren’t before, anyway.
The weird thing was when I asked her why she didn’t come back. She said she did. She said she did come back around our birthday but she couldn’t find us, and she said something about a note, but when I said what note she just said nevermind and hugged us again. And then she left. And she hasn’t been back since.
I don’t understand it. I wish I could ask Everan about it, but he’s so touchy about family and Pilori and, well…really, just people. He didn’t want to forgive Pilori, he didn’t want to even touch her, but I made him be nice, and I wouldn’t tell Pilori anything he wanted me to. He never talks by himself, so he was kinda mad at me, but I didn’t care.
I wonder why he gets so mad at me. I never get mad at him, not ever. But I don’t mind. I don’t like him to be mad, but he always always always gets over it after a while. And he doesn’t get mad so much anymore, I think it’s ‘cause he’s a better loser now or maybe it’s ‘cause I stopped making him mad.
‘Cause we can’t be mad at each other. We’re all we got left, ‘specially since all of that happened. And we gotta stick together, don’t we?
Everan was reading again.
Kamilé had done everything in her imagination that there was to do; climbed a few trees, swam, dried off again, attempted to make something out of leaves, acorns, and twigs, capsized it, and even fought off imaginary enemies so her friend could read in peace. And still, she was bored. Any fantasy she could conjure habitually involved two people, mostly two very small, telepathic people. And one of them wasn’t cooperating at the moment, so she was left alone.
In the end, with nothing left in her arsenal, she collapsed onto the ground and sighed, laying back and staring at the misty sky. When that failed to entertain her, she flicked an acorn at him, and another and another, two of them striking the book’s cover but one nicking the tip of his pointy ear. He lowered the book and raised his eyebrows at her, and she stopped, watching him expectantly. He completely ignored her waiting gaze and returned to his book.
Everan! she exploded.
What? he replied absently.
Stop it!
Stop…what? He was wholly absorbed in his book and did not even look up.
Reading! Nuh-uh. Please, Everan? She gave him a piteous look that he ignored. I’m bored! I’m not.
What d’you wanna read for anyway?
Because, he sighed insufferably, it’s interesting. I like it.
No it isn’t!
Kamilé, he said patiently, if you knew how you’d like it too—
She stole the book from him with ease, opening it and peering at the characters on the page. ‘S not that hard, she informed him. Anyone can read, I just don’t want to—
Kamilé, it’s upside-down. He rolled his eyes.
Oh…She hastily flipped it over again. Right.
He took it back, completely disregarding her pleas of boredom and starting to read again. But after a moment, he looked up.
You’re almost eleven years old, Kamilé, he said sternly. You should know how to read by now.
That’s not fair! she objected. It isn’t my fault!
Whose, then? I did try to teach you.
Well, if YOU couldn’t, no one could, Everan, ‘cause you’re a genius and everything—
I’m not a genius, he said modestly. Not if I can’t teach someone to read, especially someone telepathic.
That doesn’t have nothing t’do with it, she muttered in reply.
Anything, he corrected patiently. And yes it does.
And with that, his nose was buried in the book again, try as she might to distract him.
What book is it?
The history.
Why’re you reading that one?
Silence.
Huh?
Silence.
Hey, stop ignoring me!
Silence.
Infuriated, she folded her arms on the ground and rested her chin on them, glaring at the surface of the water, at the tall stems of grass surrounding her, and at Everan’s boots, folded neatly beneath his legs. After a few minutes, however, her anger abated, leaving simply boredom behind. Her mind wandered as the midmorning warmth and monotonous sound of the waterfall lulled her into a half-sleep. But after awhile, she felt compelled to break the silence.
Hey, Everan. She stared up at him, peering around the edge of the book.
What?
You remember stuff, right?
Mm-hmm.
Well, can’t you remember our mom?
He froze, and set the book down carefully, frowning at her with an expression she could not name in his eyes. I told you, he snapped, suddenly terse and sharp, we don’t have one.
But we gotta have one…everyone does…
Not us.
She sighed, turning her eyes to the clouds floating lazily by. Guess that’s why no one likes us…and why we look so different… gotta have parents to be normal…
Everan did not respond, turning back to his book.
And if you don’t you can’t play games, or talk to anyone, or have money…
Mm-hmm.
Or a house…or food…
Kamilé, shut up! Everan exploded, glaring at her. She stared innocently up at him, injured.
What’d I do?
Just…stop talking abut families, we don’t have one and we never will.
Yeah we do! she said defensively, hurt. She sat up, snatching the book from him so he would listen. Don’t I count, Everan? I’m your sister and you’re my brother… She hugged him tightly, refusing to let him go no matter how hard he struggled. I think YOU count as family…
He stopped resisting, sighing. Well, yeah…you count…
So why’re you saying we don’t have a family? We’re twins, we GOTTA be family…
I guess so.
She smiled, resting her chin on his shoulder. So we got a family, so stop complaining.
We HAVE a family.
That’s what I said, we got a family. Are you happy now?
Will you get off me already? He scowled, attempting to push her arms off. She giggled, only hanging on tighter.
No, you gotta stop reading so much, Everan…
I like it!
Well, it’s not fair, what’m I supposed to do? I can’t read!
Whose fault is that?
Not mine! C’mon, Everan…
I’ll read it to you if you’ll just get off!
She agreed cheerfully, sitting cross-legged on the ground as he picked up the book once again.
What story?
One that's not boring.
That’s specific, he muttered. She didn’t bother asking him what that meant. ‘Kay, how ‘bout the one where the merpeople fought that big squid before the war?
Ooh! Yeah!
Okay…lemme find the page…here it is. “In the very golden age of mermish prosperity, still there were marring setbacks; continual disappearances and destruction by an unknown being of enormous size. The merpeople’s leader was forced to retaliate when a score of his people were taken by the monster, and those that watched said it resembled a giant squid; undaunted, the warriors in the city gathered to arms and shouted their fierce battle cry as they set out to attack the creature…”
Kamilé listened, entranced, hardly understanding half of it but loving the way the words sounded, like “prosperity” and “undaunted”…spellbound, she sat quietly as Everan told the story, the entire woods seeming to hold its breath as the morning slowly faded away.
Scritchscritchscritchscritchscritch.
Go away.
Scritchscritchscritch.
I said, go away.
Scriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitch—
Shut up, Kamilé muttered, curling up beneath the blankets in a vain effort to mute the continuous noise. She had been listening to it for what seemed like hours, since the moon had begun to rise over the mist, and had about lost patience with it.
Something tugged at the blanket over her head, sharply but not strongly enough to remove it. She moaned tiredly, burrowing deeper into the warm darkness.
Leave me ‘lone, Everan, she murmured. ‘S too dark…
Huh? he replied, half-asleep. Wha’s goin’ on…?
He was still right beside her…but if he was there, then who—or what—was tugging at her side of the blanket?
She lifted a corner cautiously and at once saw the problem, in the form of a bushy red tail blocking her vision. She rolled her eyes.
Squirrel, Everan…She elbowed him in the back.
So?
So you’re a boy, go get it. It’s being mean.
What d’you want me to do about it?
Scritchscritchscritchscritchscritch…
Aw, no. She swore quietly, watching the red squirrel claw its way up to their ceiling and scratch at the interwoven branches. “Hey,” she said aloud, and at once, its ears perked, and it stared at her. “Go back to bed, stupid.”
It made a quiet squirrel sound, something soft and deep within its throat.
“You heard me. This isn’t your nest, it’s mine. Go home.”
It cocked its head to one side, confused. Sighing, she sat up, very slowly so as not to scare it, and gave it a stern look.
“I don’t have any acorns, so go away. Before I get mad.”
In response, the squirrel ran along the wall to the bookshelf, alighting among her collection and stealing a polished stone from the mess of feathers, rocks, and shells.
“Hey!” she said loudly. “You put that down right now!”
It froze.
“I said put it down, Everan gave that to me!”
It fixed her with an innocent squirrel look, seeming hurt by her offended tone.
“Look,” she relented after a pause, crawling over to a good three feet away. “You can’t have that. You can have this one, though,” she added kindly, offering another one that had dropped to the floor and rolled her way. The squirrel looked from it to her to it, and then finally dropped the stone in his paws, snatching the one she was offering, and leaping out of the treehouse and scurrying away. Kamilé shivered and muttered a curse under her breath as she slid back underneath the blankets, pressing close to Everan for warmth.
Stupid squirrel, she muttered mutinously. Taking my stuff like that…
Go back to sleep, Everan replied vaguely, wrapping the blanket tighter around himself. She yawned and obeyed, throwing the blanket over her head and drifting off.
Neither of them could have admitted to having nightmares in years, but for some reason, she was cursed with one tonight. It crept into her mind like frigid water, freezing and paralyzing her on contact, tightening its grip on her.
It was dark, dark everywhere she turned, and she was alone…shivering, hating the darkness and the silence…there were trees all around her, surrounding her with their tearing branches; not nice trees at all, but the kind of trees that were all spiky bark and thorns and pointed leaves that reached out to ensnare anyone that passed, with or without reason, restraint, or mercy. They towered over her on all sides…she looked up, hoping to see bright blue sky, but what she saw instead was black storm clouds massed overhead, waiting expectantly to unleash their torrent of rain.
With a deafening thunderclap that made her jump, a flash of lightning lit up the scene for a beat, and the rain started to fall, sharp and thick and fast. She tried in vain to shield herself from the downpour, calling out, her voice lost in the mêlée.
Someone started screaming, then another and another, until the air was filled with the sounds…screaming and yelling something unintelligible…she caught only a single word in their shouts: “chosen.” It scared her far more than any storm…what could be so awful that every elf in the woods was calling so frantically for their hero?
But even so…she was calling for someone else.
“Everan!”
Something rustled in the bushed behind her…she swiveled around, startled, as the rough branches parted and Everan shoved his way into the clearing.
“Kamilé, come on!” he shouted, reaching out to take her hand. “Hurry!”
But then a bright light flashed, and Everan was gone.
She stared and stared at the gap in the bushes, where he had been moments before, waiting for him to come back. But he did not.
“EVERAN!”
Kamilé…
“Come back, come back…”
Kamilé, wake up!
Huh?
Everan was crouched above her, shaking her hard and silently calling her from her nightmare. She blinked.
Everan, you’re here now? she asked sleepily.
I’ve been here, he replied, confused. It was just a bad dream…
No such thing as bad dreams, she said absently, impulsively reaching up to hug him. He scowled and attempted to shove her off. Get off, Kamilé…what’s the matter?
She did not reply, just hugged him tighter and kissed him on the cheek. He pulled away, scrubbing at the spot with his sleeve.
Ew! What was that for?
You were gone, Everan, she said innocently, staring at him with big eyes. You weren’t there anymore…
Yeah I was, he muttered. It was just a dream, didn’t have to kiss me—
But…but it was so real, Everan…
‘Course it was, he said moodily. No one was flying or anything…
And…and…everyone was screaming…
No they weren’t, it was a dream.
And it was raining, and dark…
No it wasn’t.
And…the chosen wasn’t there, but everyone was calling for him…
He raised his eyebrows. Since when is the chosen around to help us?
He is too! she objected. Or I think it’s a he…but I hear people talking about it all the time, Everan, he lives here!
Doubt it, he shot back. Can we go back to sleep now?
She stared at him. I don’t wanna, Everan…what if it comes back?
He sighed. We’ve got school tomorrow, don’t you want to go? And our birthday is in three days, so just forget about it, okay?
But…didn’t you see it too? she asked him, shifting closer to him. He wrinkled his nose at her.
‘Course I did…always did…why’d this be different?
I know, I know…but I don’t like nightmares, Everan, she murmured, leaning against him. He sighed impatiently and pushed her off again.
Just go back to sleep, he told her firmly, burrowing underneath the blankets.
But—
I promise I’m not goin’ anywhere, ‘kay?
She bit her lip, looking around the shadowy treehouse. Finally, she relented, burying herself under the covers again, unconsciously grabbing Everan’s hand.
What? he asked.
Nothing, she replied, letting go. But the minute she guessed he was asleep again, she grabbed it again, and didn’t let go until the forest was bathed in yellow light as the world started to awaken.
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:51 pm
Chapter Six
“There are a lot of differences between the four races, but most of them are completely obvious.” Marli turned around, addressing her lecture to the class, waving the charcoal stick in her hand expressively. “Like, merpeople can breathe underwater, and dwarves look like rocks. Humans are very complex-minded, inventive, and very fast thinkers; and elves, of course, are completely devoted to the earth.
“Adaptations,” she recited slowly, writing the word on the slateboard, “and perceptions. I hope at least a few of you know those words. Adaptations are things developed over time, by necessity; the best example I can think of is the merpeople’s tails. Who knows? Once they may have been like us, or like something completely different. But they changed, because they needed to. Adaptations are a gift to complement another gift. In this case, the ability to breathe underwater was complemented by their tails, to better move underwater. So, merpeople have adapted.”
She wrote the word “tails” under the word “adaptation.” Beneath it, she wrote a few other words, such as “gills”, “sensory adaptation,” and “immunity.”
“Gills, as you know, are small slits on a fish that filter the oxygen out of water. Merpeople adapted them in the beginning for the same effect; you can see them on their necks, if you’re looking. Immunity refers to disease…dwarves, long since, developed an immunity to human diseases that spread when they first came in contact with each other. The humans’ diseases can be deadly to other races; not to us, thank the gods. Merpeople aren’t around any of the other races enough to really catch anything, though they have diseases of their own.
“Sensory adaptation refers to the senses. For example, elves have far sharper hearing, sight, and sense of smell than humans—about three times theirs—yet other races exceed our own. Why? Because they needed to. Depending on where you live and what you do, the senses you need most will heighten and the ones you don’t will not. For example, a blind person will have far better hearing than a normal person, because they need it. The senses compensate for each other.”
“Now, perceptions…that’s the way we think about things, like the world, the deities, our life. It’s also the way we see and feel. If adaptations make the races different, perceptions make us notice the differences, and feel envy, contempt, or distaste at those adaptations. For instance, humans don’t see the world like we do. We see it as branches of a Great Root, a blend of color and sound and smell and beauty given to us to protect and preserve. Humans, on the other hand, see the world as opportunity.” Again, she wrote the word on the board, this time under “perceptions”. “They see things not as they are, but what they can be. They look at problems and see not the problem itself, but the solution, and never once do they ever think there isn’t one. For this reason they find it hard to properly cherish our trees and animals, because they see trees as strong building material and animals as an ever-replenishing food source.”
Several people gasped, and they all stared. The very idea was ludicrous.
“I can see why you’re surprised,” Marli said with a small smile. “I don’t agree, but you see, that’s my perception. The humans aren’t wrong for seeing things this way. They’re just being themselves, the way they’ve been from the beginning. They’re very practical, and extremely intelligent, though if you ask me, or any elf, perhaps, their intellect sometimes precedes their morals. As in, perhaps someone will invent a cure for a disease, but before they think about it, they will give it to the world. The cure might have lasting repercussions, and could even start a new epidemic years later. It’s happened before; ever heard of the Meristan syndrome? No? That’s because it was replaced by the red plague.”
Several people winced in response to the name. Marli arched an eyebrow.
“Now you see my point.
“But perceptions are the key to living in harmony with the races. We disagree with the humans because of perception. We disagree with their view of opportunity, and they disagree with our view of protection.” She wrote “protection” beside “opportunity, and inscribed “versus” in between. “Neither of us think we’re wrong, or the other is right. That’s our perception. But every one of us, every single soul in Ametris perceives the idea of equality.” She circled the words beneath “perceptions” and wrote “equality” above them. “The idea that everything and everyone is equal. It’s our heritage. So, if you find yourself stuck the day after tomorrow, if you’re lucky enough to have a conversation with a member of another race, bring it up. Anyone over the age of reason will know what you mean.”
“What’s that?” a tiny girl up front piped, her hand shooting into the air.
“The age of reason?” Marli raised her eyebrows, sitting on an empty desk beside her. “How old are you now?”
She held up six fingers.
“Oh. Well, I suppose you’ll know what the age of reason is…when you reach it.”
“How many do you have to be?” the girl inquired.
Marli smiled. “Seven. You don’t have long to wait.”
She continued her lecture from the desk. “That’s another thing we all differ in,” she said as an afterthought. “The age of reason. Merpeople think it’s much younger; humans think it’s much older. I can’t say anything about dwarves…it’s different for each one, I think. Think of our seven versus the human’s seventeen or so versus the merpeople’s three or four. See how things change?
“Now, I should probably warn you before you talk to any of the humans, merpeople, or dwarves…they’re going to say weird things. It’s natural to them. Like… back to senses. Just one of many things…every race has different perceptions of the senses. Merpeople, obviously, nixed the sense of smell…but they have a different one, something like sonar…sound waves. Dwarves have a more acute sense of touch and hearing than we do, so they can sense the vibrations in rocks and stone and hear down tunnels. Both of those are adaptations. And humans…for some reason I still haven’t figured out, they only believe there are five senses.”
An older boy snorted. “Which one did they leave out?” he asked incredulously. “Sight?”
“No,” Marli replied lightly. “Emotion.”
Several people rolled their eyes.
“That’s perception, right there. They don’t trust anything that goes on in their head until they can see it or feel it or hear it…By what I know of them, they aren’t very trusting of really anything. We believe emotion qualifies as a sense because it’s something that responds to outside stimuli and changes your reality. If you thought it was warm but then you saw or felt snow, it would change your reality, wouldn’t it? Merpeople side with us on this, though dwarves are a lot more like humans…in fact those two races get along with each other fairly well. You’ll probably see that at the festival.
“Actually, the main thing to remember with humans is probably…”
Kamilé yawned.
This is boring…
No it isn’t, Everan replied calmly.
Yeah it is…She leaned on her elbow, watching Marli absently, and then reached over and stole Everan’s homework.
Hey! he objected. Don’t mess with that, I just finished—
Are these numbers? Kamilé interrupted, looking at it from every angle. Weird…
They’re not numbers, they’re variables…
Huh?
It’s a different level from you, you wouldn’t know.
Oh.
Give it back, he muttered, sliding it towards himself. She sighed.
Okay…I just wanted to draw…
He fished a crumpled sheet of parchment out of his bag, along with a charcoal stick, and handed it to her. Neat, she said cheerfully, thanks.
Next time, use your own homework.
Homework? she repeated blankly.
He shook his head. Never mind.
Shrugging, she picked up the charcoal stick and started to draw, taking painstaking care and hiding it with her arm, just in case Everan was looking. He wasn’t. When she was done, she slid it in front of him.
[stick figure—elf with “sword”. Shoot for smudgy and crappy with a frowny face. Her drawing ability: 2/10]
He stared at it. Wanna fight me? he asked her, a smile alighting on his face.
You’re on, she challenged, and without further delay he started to draw. She peered at it curiously; seeing this, he covered his work with his arm and shoulder, taking his time, until at last he straightened and gave it back. She frowned.
[towering stocky dwarf with an axe over one shoulder, finely detailed and very neat. His drawing ability: 8/10]
She made a few alterations and then passed it back.
[wide eyes on the stick figure, in motion of waving sword]
He grinned. Still on?
My person can beat your person, she retorted stubbornly. See? She drew a seven-pointed star on the figure’s chest. Hah, Everan. She stuck her tongue out at him. Bet your person isn’t a chosen.
He scoffed. Why would a chosen be fighting someone so big anyway? Without armor and stuff?
Because chosen are big and brave and they save people, stupid, she shot back. They don’t need armor, it’s built right in, your person can’t hurt my person…
Oh yeah?
Yeah!
I’ll show you, then!
He snatched the paper and charcoal stick and began to draw.
[axe splitting chest in half, right on star, whoosh mark, x’s over eyes. Not a lot of blood.]
Kamilé stared. Oh, that’s mean, Everan…
You lose. He smirked.
Nuh-uh, she objected, he isn’t dead yet, see…
[hand with puff of something smoky, question mark by dwarf’s head, blood everywhere.]
Everan stared. What’s that?
I dunno, but hah, you’re dead now. She grinned. I win.
But your person got another chance, he complained. Why can’t mine?
She sighed impatiently. Because, she explained, as if it were obvious, you already got my person, but he got yours before he— “Thank you,” a voice interrupted, and the parchment slid out from under Everan’s nose. They looked up to see Marli twirling her charcoal stick as she inspected what they had drawn, an amused smile playing on her lips. Kamilé frowned.
“Gimme that,” she demanded, reaching up to snatch it. Marli held it out of her grasp.
“You draw it in here, it’s mine,” she replied calmly. “The point of school is that a teacher has the right to know how much talent—or lack thereof,” she added, raising her eyebrows— “my students have.”
Kamilé scowled, folding her arms and burying her nose in them, mortally offended. That’s not very nice…
Everan might have said something, but Marli interrupted again.
“Where’s your homework, Kamilé?” She added Everan’s to the stack in her hands, watching Kamilé expectantly.
“Um…homework?”
“Yes, homework. Did you do it?”
“What was it?” she asked carefully.
“It was different from everyone else’s, wasn’t it? I think it was subtraction. Did you do it, yes or no?”
She shook her head, avoiding her teacher’s eyes. Marli nodded, as if expecting nothing else, and addressed the class.
“I’ll say it again; if you don’t want to do the work, you don’t belong here. You want to be here, do the work. You don’t, then don’t come. You’re a lot more use helping your parents at home. No one makes you come here, so don’t waste my time.”
With that said, the class fell into an eerie silence, subdued by the stern lecture. Marli crouched down until she was eye level with Kamilé, her voice low.
“I’d like to see you after class, Kamilé, please.”
Kamilé ignored her, and she stood again and walked back to her desk. Kamilé sighed and buried her face in her arms.
I hate her…why’s she always picking on me, Everan?
He said nothing, staring straight ahead.
Hey, Everan…she persisted. You’re not mad at me, are you?
No, he replied vaguely, but she didn’t believe him.
I didn’t mean to…Honestly…I didn’t wanna get us in trouble…
She barely caught the movement, but it was there; he clenched both of his fists under the table, and she realized he was absolutely furious. She edged away.
Why should I care? he demanded angrily, practically shouting. What’s she going to do, tell our PARENTS?
Kamilé covered her ears with her hands, attempting to curl in a ball and hide under the desk. I’m sorry, I’m sorry, she wailed, don’t yell…please, it hurts…
I’m not mad at you, he said shortly.
Oh…she cast a wary glance at him. You’re not?
No. He said nothing more, but it was enough to cheer her up, even if he was still fuming.
Marli got up again and started to pass out sheets of thin parchment, explaining as she went. “We’re practicing arithmetic today. The homework was based on your own skill; this is divided by age. If you need any help, feel free to ask.”
She came to the row in the far back where they were sitting; both ignored her. she passed a sheet to Kamilé and handed another to Everan. “I thought we’d try something a little harder, Everan…just for fun. You’ve been finishing everything else very quickly, and you obviously know it, so I thought you needed a challenge. This is actually far out of a ten-year-old’s league—it’s called geometry—but I think you might be able to handle it. If you can’t, don’t worry about it…just do your best, okay?”
Everan nodded, still angry but refusing to show it.
“Well, geometry’s basically the study of—“
“He knows,” Kamilé interrupted vaguely, tracing a pattern on the desktop with her finger. Their teacher blinked.
“Oh…okay. Well, um…call me if you need help…”
She turned and went back to her desk, more than a little confused. When she had gone, Everan scoffed.
Not that hard…
And with that, he went to work, breaking his charcoal stick in half and giving a piece to Kamilé. She stared at her paper in confusion. To her, it looked like scribbles, and Everan’s like very complicated scribbles, with boring little pictures. She tried to pick out numbers in the maelstrom of smudges. It didn’t work.
Hey, Everan. She poked him, pointing to a problem on hers. What’s that?
He looked up. That? It’s a six.
And that?
A twelve.
And that?
He sighed. It says thirty-one minus six minus twelve. Can’t you tell?
No. Hey, Everan?
What?
What’s thirty-one minus sixty minus t-…tw-…?
He rolled his eyes. It’s thirteen.
How d’you write that?
Kamilé…
But I don’t know how to do it, Everan! she pleaded. Can’t you help? He relented. Fine. Let me finish first.
He turned back to his own work, with the shapes and the interesting name she couldn’t pronounce. She watched, intrigued, as he solved each problem effortlessly, the math taking only the time to write it down. He seemed to completely ignore the fact that Marli had said it was too hard for him, covering the page with his neat handwriting. She found it amazing.
[problem]
How d’you do that? she wondered. He shrugged as he drew a circle around the answer.
She waited patiently for him to finish, watching the trees outside the window with her nose pressed against the glass and daydreaming absently, trying hard to ignore his voice as he said the steps to each problem aloud in his head. He spoke remarkably quickly, too, and after about ten minutes, he pushed the parchment aside.
What d’you need help on?
Everything, she sighed. He nodded.
We did that one already…here, he added, writing the answer down for her. This one over here’s easiest, wanna try it?
I guess so, she replied warily.
Okay. That’s a seven and that’s a twenty-four, and you’ve got to add them together. You know numbers, right?
Sure I do! She brightened at once; that was easy.
Let me hear it, then, he urged her patiently.
‘Kay, um…1-2-3-4…5…6-7…11…um, 12-13…what’s next?
14.
Oh, right. 14-15…16-17-21 and all the rest. She grinned, proud of herself. Right?
Not bad. He smiled, the highest compliment he could give. So if you have seven and twenty-four you have to count to twenty-four—‘cause it’s the biggest—and then count seven more numbers.
What is it?
I’m not gonna TELL you, you have to figure it out yourself.
Oh. She frowned. Why?
‘Cause she gave it to you. Here…
He drew twenty-four—she supposed—neat little dots along the side of the paper, in small, even rows. That’s twenty-four. So if I drew seven more—he did so—how many are there now?
She thought about it, counting under her breath. Thirty…thirty-two? No, thirty-one…
That’s right! Everan beamed. See, it isn’t so hard.
Mm, she droned, staring at the parchment. How d’you write a thirty-one?
Like this, he sighed, showing her.
Oh-h…but how do you do this one? That’s a different numbery thing, over there…
That’s a minus sign. It’s subtraction. See, you just draw the number on the top and you cross out how many you don’t need, right?
Oh…I think I get it…
Here, do this one, I’ll help…
Within minutes, the work was done. Satisfied, they played games under the desk for the rest of the class. Marli came by once, passing out two new sets of problems for them both, but Everan ignored his and so did she. Finally, their teacher said quietly, “If you’re finished, you can place your work up here and go.” Almost everyone turned their work in at light speed and ran outside, laughing and running towards the city square. Kamilé and Everan tried to sneak out quietly, but…
“Kamilé,” Marli called without looking up, “come here, please.”
She froze, glancing from Everan to the door to the window looking out on the forest to Marli. Finally, sighing, she headed for the teacher’s desk, with the willingness of one trudging up to the gallows. Everan followed.
“Sit,” Marli commanded vaguely, in the middle of checking homework. Kamilé climbed up onto the desk and swung her legs over the side, trying her hardest to keep still. Everan disappeared. There was a moment of silence, unbroken save by the occasional scratch of Marli’s quill. Finally, she spoke up.
“Sorry if I embarrassed you earlier,” she said calmly. “I give that speech to everyone who forgets homework, not just you. It was only fair.”
“’Kay,” Kamilé replied distractedly, watching a bird outside the window. Marli ruffled through the stack of parchment, extracting one from the rest.
“Well, you showed remarkable improvement in…twenty minutes,” the professor commented. “Miraculous, even. This is perfect, even though it isn’t in your handwriting…Then again, I’ve never seen your handwriting…”
Kamilé glared at the wall, offended. “I did it.”
“Not Everan?”
“No.”
“If you could do this, then why didn’t you do your homework?”
“Where’d Everan go?” Kamilé looked around, searching; Marli slapped a hand to her forehead in exasperation.
Right here, he informed her from behind the desk, where he was sitting to wait, reading some book.
“Kamilé.”
“What?”
Marli fixed her with an icy glare. “Is that any way to speak to a teacher?”
“Um…is there another way?”
Marli took it as impudent sarcasm; Kamilé was just confused. “Never mind. Look, Everan’s extraordinarily bright and everything, and it’s great of him to help you, but you have to do your own work, okay? It’s not about getting it right, it’s about learning how and—”
“He didn’t do it for me,” she objected. “He just wrote all the letters and stuff.”
“Letters?”
“Um…I think so.”
“Those are numbers,” Marli offered, sighing. “Everan,” she added in a louder voice, “did you do it for her?”
“No he didn’t!” Kamilé affirmed hotly.
“I asked him, not you.”
“That’s what he said!”
Marli arched an eyebrow, giving her a look. “Then why doesn’t he speak for himself?”
Kamilé mimicked her look. “Why should he?”
Teacher and student turned away from each other, rolling their eyes so that the other wouldn’t see.
“Anyway,” the professor continued, her voice forcibly more mature, “this is fantastic, great improvement…but why couldn’t you do your homework? I’m sure you had plenty of help if you needed it…”
“’Cause.”
“Because why?”
“’Cause I didn’t want to.”
“Why not?”
“’Cause.”
“Kamilé…”
“What?” she said innocently. Marli looked about to totally lose patience with her.
“Spill. Why didn’t you do it? You’re not in trouble, just tell me.”
Cornered, Kamilé had not other option but to tell her. “’Cause…’cause…it’s too hard…”
“Too hard?” Marli frowned. “Kamilé, you’re aware that this sort of thing is…at a seven-year-old’s level…aren’t you?”
“Um…” She twisted a strand of curly hair. “Might be kinda bad to ask now, but…what’s ‘aware’ mean?”
“Ai,” Marli muttered, shaking her head. “I don’t understand this, Kamilé.”
“What?”
“Well, this is your second year of school, isn’t it? And you two are twins…You haven’t progressed at all, and Everan’s far beyond my oldest students…I’m not exactly sure how that can happen, can you explain it to me?”
“He’s smart.”
“Yes, I’m aware of that. Why aren’t you? Wee you taught differently?”
“Huh?”
“I mean, did your parents teach him all of this and not you? Or—hey, wait a minute—!”
For Kamilé had jumped off the desk and was preparing to run away. Marli caught her arm before she got the chance.
“I’m sorry,” she apologized. “It’s none of my business. I just want to know why you’re not using your own talent, Kamilé.”
Her voice was warm, but Kamilé saw the lie.
“I don’t have any. It’s his.”
Marli opened her mouth to say something, but decided against it. After a moment, she nodded. “I see. Well…Everan, I have to say, you did a lot better than I thought you would…perfect score, actually. Was it difficult?”
“No,” Kamilé offered. Marli glanced at her, confused.
“No what?”
“He said no, it wasn’t dicci…diffil…hard.”
“All…right…” Marli cleared her throat. “Anyway, Everan, I’m not sure what to do now…I suppose I’ll have to find a book with harder problems for you after the festival, I don’t know a lot about anything harder than that…I’m sure Kayle has a…”
She broke off, her eyes scanning the desktop, and without warning she started rummaging through drawers, lifting stacks of parchment aside and ferreting around with increasing panic. She swore under her breath.
“Where is it…? Um…you two…it’s a little green book, did you…?”
She paused as the book in question waved in front of her nose, Everan holding it up over the desk’s edge. She sighed in relief, laughing nervously as she took it from him.
“Oh, there it is…thanks…”
“He was reading it.”
“Of course…right…that’s…wait.” She froze. “Can you…read that?” she asked carefully. Kamilé found the question ludicrous.
“Can he read it, of course he ca—huh?” She peered over the edge of the desk at him, meeting his eyes incredulously. “You can’t? Gimme.”
She snatched the book from Marli and flipped it open, turning the book this way and that as she stared at it.
“Weird…weirdweirdweird…can’t read this at all…”
Everan snorted, but so softly that she could ignore it with ease.
“I know,” Marli shot back, her voice carefully guarded, and she took it back and shut it safely in a drawer. “I think only I can read it here…”
“Why?”
“Because it’s not in your language.”
“Why?”
Marli frowned. “Because it wasn’t written here.”
“W—?”
DON’T—say—“why”—again, Kamilé, Everan interrupted. She closed her mouth.
“Um…it’s pretty,” she offered, pointing at the drawer where the book was hidden. “The front was pretty…and the letters.”
Everan rolled his eyes. Marli beamed.
“Thank you…my mother wrote it, and gave it to me before…” She cut off, clearing her throat. “Well, anyway, it’s my favorite book…and the only one I can read, I never learned to read your language…”
“Uh-huh,” Kamilé agreed seriously. Marli took no notice.
“Well I guess…that’s all,” she said slowly. “Except you forgot to wear your uniforms again…” She waved an airy hand. “Oh well, who cares? I’ll see you two at the festival.”
Kamilé nodded and slipped off the desk. Marli folded something neatly and handed it to her.
“There’s your drawing back. The tall one’s quite good.”
She snatched it, scowling at the perceived slur on her artistic talent. Mean. As she passed Everan she grabbed his hand and led him to the door.
“Oh, and by the way…” Marli hailed them, calling them back. “Those scars look nasty, where did they come from?”
“Huh?” Kamilé turned, bewildered. “What scars?”
“On your foreheads.”
“Oh…” Kamilé touched the crescent-moon shaped mark absently. Everan lowered his head, hiding his, which faced the opposite direction as hers. “I dunno, always had ‘em I guess…”
“I see.” She nodded. “Well, ‘bye.”
Kamilé mumbled a reply, and they, turned and ran out of the door, closing it behind them. Marli started singing to herself as they left, and her voice followed them into the forest.
“Together we’ll stand, forever more, On the sands of the distant faraway shore…”
She saw our scars.
They aren’t scars, Everan corrected her vaguely, his mind elsewhere. Scars go away. They’re marks.
Oh. I forgot we had ‘em.
Mm.
Did you?
Not really.
Does yours ever hurt?
No.
Mine doesn’t neither.
He didn’t bother correcting her.
Hey, can you remember where they came from?
No.
I thought you remembered everything.
Not everything.
Really?
Really.
Oh. Hey, Everan?
Huh?
When’s the last time you talked?
He paused, giving her a half-amused, half-skeptical look. Um…two seconds ago?
No, I mean…out loud…
Oh. He kept walking; she followed. I don’t know. It was ages ago…
Like, when?
I think it was when we were three…I got so annoyed that Pilori thought YOU were the smart one, I just had to say something…
Mean.
Sorry.
But c’mon…haven’t you said something since then?
Maybe, I dunno. Nothing important anyway.
It had to be important…you NEVER talk…
Mm.
Hey, Everan?
What?
What’s “mute” mean?
It means you can’t talk.
Is that what you have?
It’s not a disease, stupid.
CAN you talk?
Yeah. Sure.
Prove it.
No.
Everan…c’mon…
I don’t like talking.
Why not?
Because.
That’s not a very good reason.
I just don’t like it. People that talk never have anything interesting to say. The only important things I ever found were in books…
But…but I talk, she said, frowning. And I can’t write…am I boring, Everan?
No, you’re never boring.
But you said—
NORMAL people, Kamilé. Sorry.
I’m not normal?
Not really.
Are you?
No.
Oh, well that’s okay, then.
They fell silent, Everan’s eyes trained on the rough trail below his feet, Kamilé’s darting from side to side, seeing everything there was to see, save what she should have been paying attention to—that was, the ground. She tripped on a tree root, half-crying out with surprise as the ground rushed up to meet her. Everan grabbed her arm and pulled her back up without even looking at her. She swore, hopping on one foot until the pain receded.
Owowowowow…thanks, she added to him.
Anytime.
Hey, Everan.
Hmm?
Isn’t it pretty today?
He raised his eyebrows. I guess…
‘Cause I think so, and…hey, she interrupted herself vaguely, looking around in confusion. There’s only pine trees over here…
He smiled—well, almost. Random.
What is?
You.
Oh…what’s that mean?
He shook his head. Never mind…
Hmm…do I gotta do my homework now?
Why would you?
‘Cause Marli said so, or something like that…
If you don’t want to, then don’t.
Am I gonna get in trouble?
Do you care?
Well…no…will YOU get in trouble?
It’s your homework.
Oh, okay. She watched a few birds scratch through the undergrowth in search of worms to eat. Hmm…hey, isn’t she kinda short?
Who?
Marli, is she short or what?
He blinked, staring at her. What?
Doesn’t she look short? I mean, for a grown-up? ‘Cause she looks short to me—
She’s not a grown-up.
She…huh?
She’s not a grown-up, she’s fifteen.
Kamilé froze in her tracks. Fifteen?
Yeah. He kept walking.
Since when? she demanded, dashing after him.
Since her birthday, he replied, amused.
But…but…She found it impossible to accept. But she’s our…
Our teacher.
Yeah, so she’s GOTTA be a grown-up…
Fifteen is grown-up, Everan replied, obviously, taking no interest in the conversation. He led the way further into the woods. Around here, anyway.
But she can’t be lots older than us then! That’s…that’s…
Four years, he offered. Maybe five.
That’s…that’s not…Kamilé struggled to understand. There are people in our class older than her!
She’s a genius, Everan explained calmly. Or, she’s smarter than everyone else. And I guess she’s a good teacher.
Smarter than you?
He smirked, with a rare hint of vanity. Not quite.
They had arrived at a familiar spot, where a little pool of still water sat among the trees. Everan sat between the roots of an oak at the edge of the pool and started to read. Kamilé paced around in agitation, still hopelessly confused.
How come I didn’t know that? she fretted, kicking a pinecone.
‘Cause it’s not that big of a deal anyway.
But that’s not…that’s too weird… She stopped. Can you teach someone older than you?
‘Course you can. And anyway, he added, there’s no one in our class that’s older than her. The oldest ones are only thirteen.
How d’you know that? she demanded. He paused, thinking about it.
I don’t know. He shrugged and began reading again. Kamilé resumed her pacing.
That’s not fair…no one else is short like us…?
How DID I know that? he mused, ignoring her.
‘Cause I thought it other people were short it’d be okay if we were but she doesn’t count ‘cause she’s not grown up all the way…
Everan said nothing.
Not fair…why d’you think they get so tall? Do they eat soemthin’ different?
She waited for a response. There wasn’t one.
Guess they just eat a lot…y’know? Or maybe it’s ‘cause they got parents. Yeah, that’s it…gotta be…’cause everyone normal has ‘em…She thought about it for a moment. D’you think our parents are short?
Shut up, he warned her testily. She blinked.
But…well…She hesitated for a second. If they are…they’ll be easy to find…
SHUT UP! He shouted, so loudly it hurt. She froze a few feet away from him.
Huh?
Will you shut up already? He glared angrily at her, his book forgotten. I told you, we don’t have parents and we never will! Forget about them, and about finding them, they aren’t there!
She collapsed on the ground, falling back on her heels. But…but Pilori said we had a mom…
She said she was our mom, too, he snapped, but she was wrong, I don’t believe ANYTHING she told us and neither should you!
Their eyes locked; his narrowed and glaring, hers wide and hurt.
But I thought everyone had a mom…she said quietly. Why don’t we?
We ran out of luck, he replied shortly, turning back to his book. She would have started crying, but he was definitely not in the mood to comfort her today.
But…but that’s not fair!
Life isn’t fair. He didn’t look up. It sucks, get used to it.
She stared at him for a long time, struggling to make sense of it. It was too difficult; she could not. After a while, she slid over until she was right beside him and rested her head on his shoulder.
What’re you reading?
He ignored her, save to try and shrug her off.
Are you mad at me?
Silence.
Please don’t be mad, Everan…I’m sorry…I won’t do it again…please?
In a sudden outburst of very un-Everan-like affection, he closed the book, reached over, and hugged her. The gesture was so uncharacteristic that it caught her off guard, though he let go as soon as he could. I’m not mad, he said simply, seeming unsure what to do with himself after that. She blinked, then giggled.
Hee hee hee, you’re such a girl, Everan…
I am not!
Are too!
Am not!
Are to-o!
He sighed and gave up, rolling his eyes. You’re a girl, though.
She took a moment to decide whether he was insulting her or just telling the truth. Uh…I guess so.
So why’s it an insult?
She grinned. Doncha remember? Leaping to her feet, she twirled around absently, and when she told the story she made it sound like some sort of fireside tale. It was a long, long time ago, when we lived in a big warm house in the middle of the city, and it was all wet and muddy and you’n me were playin’ outside, and then Pilori came out and got us and chased us around and she got mad at me…
She imitated Pilori, pointing her finger sternly at a large bug on the ground. “Kamilé, Kamilé, Kamilé, you silly girl, you’re not s’posed to get all wet an’ dirty ‘cause girls gotta keep clean alla time…
Everan almost smiled, and, encouraged, Kamilé continued.
“Lookit Everan—” She pulled someone invisible into the scene and patted the air at head height fondly. “See, he’s all clean, and he’s a boy too, he can get all dirty if he wants to but he doesn’t, why can’t you be clean like him?” And I said, “If he acts like a girl should then what’s that make him?” Ooh, she got mad at that…“Don’t pick on your brother, that’s not nice and girls are always nice, so if you’re a girl act like one!” And I said, “Why? What’s the difference?” And she said, “Boys get in fights and get dirty and talk dirty and chase girls around. Girls run away and make friends and stay clean and wear dresses and look pretty and play nice, of course!” So then I said, “Ick, that’s not fun at all, I’m gonna be a boy!” And then she got mad all over again and made me take a bath, but being a boy still sounds like a lot more fun!
Everan broke into a fit of silent giggles, and, satisfied that her work was done, she sat beside him again. She couldn’t help but laugh with him; it was so rare that she’d made it her sole aim in life long ago.
That’s not how it went, he grinned.
Close enough. She stuck her tongue out at him.
I like that story, it’s good.
Yeah, I know, she replied at once. But I got better.
I know. Hey, Kamilé?
Yeah?
How’d you find this? He held up the book.
What’s that?
The book about the chosen.
Oh. Aren’t you done with that? she scolded. He sighed.
Yeah, read it twice. But how’d you find it?
It says “chosen” on the front, doesn’t it? And that’s what you were looking for…
Well, yeah…but you can’t read…
That word I can, she said proudly.
Really? That’s good. He flipped the book open and pointed to a word inside. What’s this one, then?
That one? She looked at it, cocking her head to one side. I dunno…Fish?
He rolled his eyes. It’s the same word, Kamilé. And they look NOTHING alike…
Oh…Hey! She shoved him hard, offended. You tricked me!
So?
Mean!
Am not!
Are too, she muttered, distracted by the open book. What’s it about, Everan?
Chosen.
Duh. Is it infresting?
Very. He half-smiled, not bothering to correct her. They’ve got a lot of history about the chosen and everything, and a timeline and stories and all sorts of stuff…
Who’s the chosen now, Everan? she demanded, poking him. C’mon, tell me…
It doesn’t say, he told her, showing her an extensive family tree on the first few pages, pointing to where it ended. See, it stops here, I think right before Kilio and Tara, maybe they have their own book…
Well, that isn’t fair, she commented, turning pages at random. Can you read it to me, Everan?
No, he said at once, his voice guarded. I can’t.
Why not?
Because I don’t want to get you in trouble. He closed the book, placing it carefully into his bag.
Why?
Well, I don’t know…WHY…he rested his head in his hands, staring at the little pool. But I do know that…finding out about the chosen…and talking about them…it’s illegal, Kamilé.
Illegal?
Yes, he said somberly. We can’t talk about it, ‘kay?
Like, out loud, or tele…t-tele…
Probably both.
Oh…okay….Everan, are you in trouble?
Well, if you tell anyone, he said slowly, then I’m in a LOT of trouble.
She stared at him. He smiled reassuringly, though there was no heart in it.
Don’t worry, he told her. I don’t think they even know we exist.
It was her absolute favorite book, and tearing her away from it was not a very good idea. Thus, the soldier decided to break the queen away from the tome very gently, while on his guard the entire time; the news wasn’t very good, anyway.
“M-…my lady?”
“Mm.”
She didn’t even seem to notice, so absorbed in the lines and swirls of the calligraphy. She turned a page; there were pictures, too, highly detailed and realistic, of people, of sorts—they looked like mermaids. The soldier hesitated, confused as to the course of action…none of them had ever been trained for something as delicate as this.
“Er…what book is that, Milady?”
She ignored him for a few seconds, only answering after she had turned the page, spouting something in another language. He supposed that was the title. Deciding he was not quite ready to break the news, he tried again.
“What’s it about?”
“Magic,” she replied vaguely, again taking her time in answering. “And a bridge, and the perfect world it leads to.”
“Oh…sounds very interesting.”
“Mm. Did you need something?”
He swallowed; there was no getting around it. “Y-y-yes…there’s someone to see you, Milady…”
“Okay,” she said carelessly. “Who, the one I was looking for?”
“Yes…of course…”
“You don’t sound very happy about it…”
He swallowed again, hard. “Well…that is…he put up quite a fight…”
“And?”
“And like you said, he’s a very powerful magi…”
She raised her eyebrows, still reading. “And…?”
“There were several casualties…eight, in fact. And two deaths.”
“Ah.”
There was silence, broken only by the crackling of a page as she turned it.
“Okay,” she said distantly after a while. “Bring him in.”
The soldier performed a hasty bow and slipped out of the room, relief coursing through his veins. He had expected much worse…
The queen kept her eyes on her book as twoscore or so of soldiers marched in, bearing in their midst a tall, aging man, who stood proudly despite his bound hands and bleeding mouth. The captain of the patrol saluted.
“Human t’see you, Milady.”
She did not reply, keeping her attention focused on the book.
“There’s…” The captain had decided to reiterate. “There’s a human to see you, Milady…that magi…”
“I heard,” she told him. “And why are you still here?”
The captain paused. “Milady, perhaps I should leave a dozen of mine in here…for your own safety, of course.”
“Yeah…don’t,” she ordered. He nodded and barked an order to his men, who followed him out of the double doors, leaving her alone with the man. He seemed out of breath, and his eyes revealed more fear than he showed.
The silence held for a long time, in which the queen read her book with semi-innocent amusement, and in which the man did a multitude of things; watched her, tried to pull his hands from the ropes binding them, and even tried edging towards the door, though when she saw this she drew the line.
“You don’t seem very hurt,” she commented, glancing up at him. He froze. “I mean,” she continued, “I would’ve thought it would take more to bring you here, since two of my soldiers ended up dead.”
He said nothing, attempting a defiant glare, though it didn’t work against her.
“There was no need,” she said calmly. “It’s not like I would have caused you any harm…still…” She heaved a dramatic sigh. “Attacking anyone with my insignia on them is treason, and the punishment for treason is death…”
She felt the man starting to shake, try as he might to suppress it. It was almost funny, the way he pretended like he was in control…
“Oh well.” She shrugged, closing the book at last and rising to her feet. “What a shame.”
The shaking increased, so violently that she could hear his teeth rattling. For the first time, she turned to look at him. The remnants of the haughty glare melted under her cool, reddish-brown gaze.
“However,” she said slowly, so he wouldn’t miss a word. “I’d be willing to make an exception.”
The man drew back slightly, looking as if he did not know what to make of it.
“I have no reason to trick you.” It's just for fun, she thought, suppressing a smirk. “You have my word; I’ll release you in a heartbeat, if you like.” She gave him a moment of hope before he grew suspicious. “But in return,” she added, confirming his fears. “You have to do something for me.”
Their eyes met, and she stared him down with ease. He turned his eyes to the ground, avoiding her gaze. At last, he spoke.
“Name it, Milady.”
She allowed herself a satisfied smile, leaning against the wall and folding her arms as she looked him over.
“I would like…information. No lies, no fabrications, no fireside tales. Just everything you know to be true. And as a magi, I suspect you know something…don’t lie and say you’ve never heard of it. Try something like that and I’ll really push at that treason charge. But if you tell me something worthwhile, I’ll let you go, even give you a safe passage home.”
The man closed his eyes, breathing hard, struggling to retain his composure. She waited patiently, knowing he was cornered and had no choice. Men like him could fake nobility with ease, but even they valued their lives…A lot more than it’s worth, she told herself scornfully. Drop the heroism, you’re not doing anyone any favors.
It took him quite a while, but at last, he looked up, nodding solemnly. She smiled in approval.
“Are we agreed?”
He sighed almost inaudibly, his entire posture exhibiting total submission. “Aye, My Lady…agreed.”
“Good.” She smiled triumphantly, taking a seat in her comfortable armchair and crossing her legs, resting her hands on the armrests. “Now, if you please…”
She leaned forward, locking his gaze with hers, eyes brightening with a red flame that paralyzed him to the core. “Tell me everything you know about Ametris.”
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 5:49 pm
Kirby, I must know the minute this book goes into the stores. gonk
So that I can read it again and again and again.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 9:00 am
Ohh, that's so nice. >.<
I finished it.
Well, like the chapter.
And I decided to combine chapters 1 and 2, because chapter six turned out to be thirty-two pages long. O.o So part one of chapter six is now chapter five.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:08 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:11 pm
it's not much longer than it was before. *huff*
tell me whatcha think.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 3:08 pm
I like how you have the side story with the queen going on in the background; hinting, but revealing nothing, not detracting from Kamile and Everan, yet staying in the mind.
I also like how Everan has a bit of a temper.
... and is a "girl." xd
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