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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 11:43 am
ooooooooooh thanks! And I feel so proud of myself by clicking that link and checking out the bug for refrence. <333 maybe Harold will help me get over my bug fear XD.
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 11:44 am
Then IODM could be advertised for curing people's animal phobias! XD
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 2:24 pm
Okay sooooo~
We both know I never liked Harold razz But after reading all that, I kind of do. I like that his life is very boring and he's become not only a creature of habit, but a broken one with no connections whatsoever to the outside world. It's like he has a bubble labelled Harold. He is absolutely PERFECT for simplicity's sake.
Guh I feel weird writing a critique for you. xD
The animal choice for the combo isn't necessarily something I would choose, but a violent and/or aggressive anything is definitely a good choice because it has good contrast with him. I wonder if whatever he turns into will spice up his life as well as his personality? O: It'll be interesting to see him at work.
However, it does read off somewhat like Forrest Gump... small town, childhood crush, he was somewhat picked on and fell under the social radar. I didn't watch the whole movie, but the part I did watch is really reflected in the whole love sequence. Granted that's a pretty usual occurance, but perhaps some of the circumstances could be changed... somehow, to make it blend in less with the rest and in turn come out less like the move. (But yes, I know Harold isn't mentally handicapped)
Uh... that's it? 8D
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Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 2:41 pm
I only chose the animal because chupacabras are ******** cool. : ] but yeah that's why I'm open to having some of the other choices listed. I think as long as that duality's there, with a boring character that transforms into an aggressive character then I'll accomplish what I wanted to do originally.
I can see the Forest Gump connetion, kinda. FG was a huge character study, ever character I do is a character study. Plus there's the minor similarities, but I didn't think of the movie till you pointed it out to me. I actually thought of him based off of Sy from One Hour Photo, but with a much much younger person in mind for my character. I'm not sure about the love sequence, In FG Jenny (I'm so changing that name for Harold's crush now that it's point out to me) actually DID love Forest back but because he was mentally retarded she didn't act on that. But in this the crush just plane does doesn't like him back. I really need him to be boring (and I want the crush angle so I can work with it later) so I'll think about what Ican change around. I'm open to suggestions.
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 5:40 am
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 3:27 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 5:32 am
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 5:34 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 7:29 pm
Haha, wow, that's such a neat idea! -was surprised no one attgempted it thus far- Chupacabres are loove~
Haha, I find it funny they mention chupacarba sightings in Maine. i live here, and I've never heard of it...though I suppose up near Millinoket and Aroostook it's not too hard to believe XD i'm a city boy myself.
But I digress. This looks really interesting! I wish i could give better critiques xP
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 9:44 am
cool looking Chupacabra Raurhund
Thanks Kokonotsu. I didn't know there was 'cabra sights as far as Maine, that's humorous. I've been down in Mexico before where one of my very distant relatives owns a small ranch. He claims he's seen one, but he's also slighty crazy so I doubt he's being truthful. XD
Okay official crit recieved. I kinda knew that's what I needed to change. :3 *too lazy to have done it before* So I should change and fix what needs to be done.....later. nyeeeeeh tired.
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