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 Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 6:22 pm
I admit- your latest piece shows a definate jump in quality and improvement.
The colors aren't nearly as "muddy" as the other pieces. They're much cleaner and crisper. Much more refreshing- it shows alot more of what you can do. There's also a bit more creativity.
The only suggestion I have to to vary your values a bit more. You're stuck in the light ranges(as with most watercolorists) and the true drama/glory will come once you push the values...Which is a very very hard thing. I'd also like to see more depth. The wall seems nearly on the same plane. It's the same value and temperature as the figure.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 7:51 pm
I figured that too. I was going to add some depth to the green background so it wouldn't look so plain ><. And yeah, value is a crazy thing with watercolor..but it isn't too hard. I really wanted to focus to be on the character and flowers with this pic, that's why everything else was on the simplistic side. I am, however, going to go back to the picture soon.
Thanks for the comment.
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 9:16 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 11:29 am
i like it its a subtle yet out there, a nice variety of colors i like the change of pace of what im used to seeing in art....
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Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 7:39 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:40 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 9:51 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 10:49 am
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The Committee Staff Gaian
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 8:11 pm
It's definitely something different than what I have seen in anime art. I won't give you a full critique since 1) I don't have the time 2) I agree with Ulterior_Motives on value and depth 3)I only got 4 hours of sleep last night and I'm tired. The talent is there, don't give up!
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 7:38 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 3:50 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 4:15 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 5:41 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:56 am
hi! i know that you said about niceness getting you nowhere, but i just thought i'd tell you just how much i LOVED that pic from the link you labelled "featured" =D it was AWESOME. =] keep it up =D
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 1:53 pm
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