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 Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:58 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 12:56 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 1:34 pm
Finished reading chapter 3 - and it looks as if the novel has some real purpose now. One criticism is that there could be a little more desription, but it depends how long you are intending the novel to be. Other than that, I am quite impressed! biggrin
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 2:13 pm
Description i can add, i just didn't because once i start i can't stop usually... confused
And that ain't a good thing!
Description of what? *Gives more chance of being able to keep it relatively short and not make the chapter really long and drawn out.*
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 2:24 pm
Ara Azdaja Description i can add, i just didn't because once i start i can't stop usually... confused
And that ain't a good thing!
Description of what? *Gives more chance of being able to keep it relatively short and not make the chapter really long and drawn out.*
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 2:51 pm
I'll see if i can get onto that smile
Depends how much work my teachers decide to give me this week! XP
Chapter four is also above bud! ^_^
Going to bed, g'nite! After i posted chapter 5 because i been working on the changes for that... confused
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 3:06 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 3:11 am
Ara Azdaja i posted chapter 5 because i been working on the changes for that... confused
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:20 am
I agree. it's as close to perfect as anything can get
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 8:39 am
When I ever DO get a chance to finish reading it I shall give a judgement...
I believe that going by the rest of the chapters not much really needs doing to it. wink
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 8:41 am
and_solo_said Ara Azdaja i posted chapter 5 because i been working on the changes for that... confused
I was changing the things that me and Eeowynn spotted... Changing some words for better ones and sorting punctuation and such like out. No story changes language wise or anything... smile
Thanks Wiggster! ^_^
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 8:54 am
That's quite alright, and call me Wiggy.
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 12:36 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 1:40 pm
*Will add next chapter when it has been proof read and changes added that Eeowynn and myself picked up and when people have had chance to read the five already in place smile *
Lemme know when guys! If you want any more that is... confused
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 1:45 pm
Ara Azdaja *Will add next chapter when it has been proof read and changes added that Eeowynn and myself picked up and when people have had chance to read the five already in place smile *
Lemme know when guys! If you want any more that is... confused
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