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 Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 12:49 pm
stupidity_in_action Okay, I'm not sure it matters, but I write songs (which is a kind of poetry). But I kinda am...blunt in them. Here's a sample. If you don't like it, don't read it.
**Sk8board STARE louge**
Nausiated, violated, my life's s**t.
Somebody said I'd better quit.
Sick of running staight; getting nowhere.
Maybe running into walls'll get me there.
Agrivated, dialated, I can't think.
My nose is bleeding; my breath stinks.
Reeking of hatred and losing speed,
a shot to the head is what I need.
Chorus A)
I skinned my knees falling down,
the stairs just laughed as I hit the ground.
I cracked my head at least four times,
and me ******** with life is a crime.
Immotivated, frustrated, I can't see.
My skin is dry; my cuts all bleed.
Busting my a** and killing my pride.
My mind won't stay dead even after it dies.
Chorus B)
I skinned my knees falling down,
the skateboard laughed as I hit the ground.
I smashed my brain at least four times
and me ******** up don't seem a crime.
Agrivated, violated, my life's s**t.
Life gave up on me; it just quit.
Sick of running strait; getting nowhere.
Maybe running into walls'll get me there.
(Chorus A x3)
This is based on this accident I had two years ago when I fell down a flight of cement stairs on a skateboard. I'm really lucky, I should've died. But I like to use my fave. bands to brainstorm with like No Doubt, Green Day, and My Chemical Romance! Nice poem...or song! smile Stowaway Frustration It can lead to a life of pain I have found my exit From something called novacaine There's no escape There's no where to hide Lives are troubled When all of your worries collide My stomach is nausous My bones are weak Guidence is what I seek The world is optomistict From everyone's point of view My life is too vapid And you wouldn't want to be in my shoes...
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 2:06 pm
SpUnKtAsTiC Nice poem...or song! smile Stowaway Frustration It can lead to a life of pain I have found my exit From something called novacaine There's no escape There's no where to hide Lives are troubled When all of your worries collide My stomach is nausous My bones are weak Guidence is what I seek The world is optomistict From everyone's point of view My life is too vapid And you wouldn't want to be in my shoes... Thanks, I like yours. Illuminated in the light losing all my hope. Cannot seek the night I'm condemned. Sanity left me dead I'm not here now. Cannot run ahead you can't defend. I'm lost now it's all I can bear. What cost now is it to have you here? I just made this. I don't have a name. Any ideas?
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 6:23 pm
Okay. I'm going to make an improv-poem about Frankie.
Frankie,
you are so cool.
Frankie,
you make me drool.
Frankie,
you're the coolest thing since sliced bread.
Frankie,
To hell with any other guy,
I want you instead.
Frankie,
I love you.
surprised smile sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 6:29 pm
Wow, that's really good eek !! I wish I could write like that. I write lyrics, mostly stupid loveick pop ballady stuff but I have written some emo and punk stuff. Not like I write tunes, but it's the kind of thing you'd find being sung in those genres, you know?
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 7:25 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Wed May 18, 2005 8:12 pm
You look so cute together,
may I cut in?
You've been this way forever,
where do I begin?
Can I call you mine,
or maybe she'd object.
If not, that's just fine.
you're not my subject.
You look so sweet together,
may I see them?
The more innocent, the better.
That's how it is with children.
Can I be adopted?
I wouldn't take up space.
Or can't you see my face?
Can I be a sister,
or maybe a cousin too?
Can I be a part of everything you do?
Please, I don't like it here.
Please, it holds all my fears.
Please, I'll do everything.
Please, you're my everything.
Can you guys guess who that's for? You've heard of them. wink
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 10:42 pm
I've got more in my journal... cool
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 8:08 pm
I....
Attacked a mailman....
I....
Could not stand....
I....
Stabbed a Mexican up his a**....
I....
Wonder where he's at....
I....
Got charged with rape....
He....
Will never be the same....
Where....
Is that Mexican now anyways.....
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Posted: Tue May 24, 2005 8:14 pm
Karu_Chan I.... Attacked a mailman.... I.... Could not stand.... I.... Stabbed a Mexican up his a**.... I.... Wonder where he's at.... I.... Got charged with rape.... He.... Will never be the same.... Where.... Is that Mexican now anyways..... lol...omg....that's sad!! yet funny.... ninja
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 10:32 am
Karu_Chan I.... Attacked a mailman.... I.... Could not stand.... I.... Stabbed a Mexican up his a**.... I.... Wonder where he's at.... I.... Got charged with rape.... He.... Will never be the same.... Where.... Is that Mexican now anyways..... Very humourous in a danerously illegal way. Fully annoyed is a Understatment and I Can't get way. I want to Kick your a**. You know I'm Over your Undermining attitude.
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Posted: Wed May 25, 2005 2:40 pm
There is a toe on my foot.
Get it off.
Get it off.
There is a s**t in your a**.
Get it out.
Get it out.
There is a Fungus bothering me.
Go away.
Go away.
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Posted: Fri May 27, 2005 9:21 am
Karu_Chan There is a toe on my foot. Get it off. Get it off. There is a s**t in your a**. Get it out. Get it out. There is a Fungus bothering me. Go away. Go away.
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:13 pm
The encrypted haven of our youth,
The soot we never appreciate
I can't hear the calling of the wind
Our heart has holes to carry our blood
To the lungs we never breathed in
To the hand we never used.
Black and white is our souls
Hidden within the shadow of color
The glimpse of dawning among the new
And the dusk of the old.
The secrets that were told within black and white
Like the corpse of the amber wood
That lay on the ground afraid of the war
That we may fight.
The hollow truth that slips our minds
Our veins may unwind from our bones
Rune written through the cascading stones
No one can see what lies beneath
There are many questions that we will never speak.
In black and white it's time to scream
If we don't the moonlight will cease to gleam,
Ending our forsaken dream.
I don't have talent.
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:26 pm
Roses Die So Easily,
Just Like Love Died in you and me,
We Loved each other with all our hearts,
Then all of a sudden we fell apart,
you found a new love,
while I'm left alone.
waiting for a loved one,
to call my own .
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:27 pm
Sad and Depressed,
all alone in my room,
Music Blasting from the stereo
As i lay in bed
I can't stop the thoughts,
They come Rushing thru,
But i smile and think of you,
How things used to be,
and How much you meant to me,
But it changed after you joined the team.
wasn't cool enough for you,
my heart breaks,
from it all,
and the tears come,
like a water fall,
but I love you still
thru it all
even thou you make me fall
I Will always be there for you
my love is true
so if you ever lonely,
like i am now,
Don't haste,
please do call.....
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