Character Name: Edward Schnitt
Character Class: Hueco-Hybrid Bount
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Ability: Hueco-Hybrid Mutation (Lv. 50)
Name: Shadow Thread
Description: Edward can pull a black energy thread from the hole in his chest that when attached to another living being will allow Edward and whoever he is attached to to share their pools of spirit energy.
Cost: 2 SE per thread to maintain
Effect: After attaching a thread to a willing target, Edward and the target can both spend up to 10 points of the other's SE pool per post. By default Edward can only have one thread out at a time (the max number must be increased by a separate custom to have multiple)
Duration: Until Edward dismisses them or they are forcefully cut by someone
Cool-down:After a thread is cut there is a 5 post cool-down before that thread is repaired and can be used again (this cool-down is separate per thread and only one thread can be repaired at a time so if multiple threads are cut they form a Que of separate cool-downs that happen in sequence rather than being simultaneous)
Range: To attach to a willing target: Touch
Max length of thread(s): Edward's SP meters
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1. Approved- Jake
Comments: This ability is way too busy. It needs to be narrowed down. It seems like multiple customs all in one.
2. Approved - Chaos
Comments:[/i] Need a cost of some sort. Ex: If you're transfering SE, costs the same amount in HP Ability: Bount Spirit Release Lv. 1
Name: Leaking Dark Power
Description: the blackness of Edwards eyes grows darker and shadows start leaking from his eyes like tears
Effect: Edward gains a +5 boost to Spirit Power and Speed for every 100 reiatsu he has (minimum +5) with a maximum boost of +200. Activating this form requires 5 SE and an additional 3 SE for every post it is maintained past the first.
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1. Approved - Jake
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2. Approved - Cass
Comments: Ability: Bount Spirit Release Lv. 2
Name: "Witness my Dark Power in it's True Glory"
Description: Edward's entire body is cloaked in shadows of dark energy and begins cracking with bolts of red electricity.
Effect: Edward gains a +10 boost to Spirit Power and Speed for every 100 reiatsu the user has (minimum +20) with a maximum boost of +300. Activating this form requires 8 SE and an additional 3 SE for every post it is maintained past the first.
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1. Approved - Jake
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2. Approved - Cass
Comments: Ability: Bount Doll Spirit Release Lv. 1
Name: Heavily Armored Wolf
Description: Fenrir's first level Spirit Release hardens his armored outer shell.
Effect: Fenrir gains a +5 boost to his Defense and Stamina for every 100 reiatsu the user has (minimum +5) with a maximum boost of +200. Activating this form requires 5 SE and an additional 3 SE for every post it is maintained past the first.
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1. Approved - Jake
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2. Approved - Cass
Comments: Ability: Bount Doll Spirit Release Lv. 2
Name: Red Lightning Wolf
Description: Fenrir's Second level of spirit release completely removes his armored outer shell revealing his true form as a beast formed out of pure electricity.
Effect: Fenrir gains a +10 boost to his Strength and Speed for every 100 reiatsu the user has (minimum +20) with a maximum boost of +300. Activating this form requires 8 SE and an additional 3 SE for every post it is maintained past the first.
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1. Approved - Jake
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2. Approved - Cass
Comments: Ability: Bount Doll Lv. 25
Name: Armored Snout to Tail
Description: Fenrir fights in a manner that keeps his more heavily armored areas as the only open places to attack him and what few less armored areas he has out of harms way.
Effect: Defensive Style: a +5 power boost to defensive actions per 100 Rei (Cap of +50).
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1. Approved - Jake
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2. Approved - Cass
Comments: Ability: Bount Doll Lv. 50
Name: Electrified Acidic Touch
Description: After spending a long time in hueco mundo with his master Fenrir is just as physically corrupted as his master and his mutation is the Acidic Touch that is standard to most hollow's hands has been both been increased in potency and applied to the entirety of his pure electric form and solid outer shell.
Effect: Increases the attack power boost from "Acidic Touch" by an additional +10 (making it +15) and makes it apply to all of Fenrir's physical attacks where any part of his body comes into contact (not just his hands or fists)
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1. Approved - Jake
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2. Approved - Cass
Comments: Ability: Bount Doll Lv. 100
Name: Pinning Claw Strike
Description: Fenrir forces his claws through the target(s)' foot or leg and into the ground and puts his whole weight into keeping them pinned.
Cost: 3 SE for the initial attack and 1 SE per post to maintain the pin
Effect: Fenrir makes a basic claw attack at a target in range (or two claw attacks at two targets in range) with 0 Power, and Speed equal to Fenrir's movement speed. If the target(s) is(/are) hit they are put into a pin that prevents them from dodging and can only be broken if they have Strength greater than Fenrir's Strength + 20. Fenrir can not use his claws to make attacks or dodge while he is maintaining the pin.
Duration: Until the target(s) break free or Fenrir releases the pin
Cool-down: 2 Posts after the pin ends
Range: Melee
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1. Approved- Jake
Comments: Too busy, and the comparison makes no sense. If you're physically restraining a person, it would be Strength vs Strength. Also it's pretty overpowered when it calculates Attack Speed and Attack Power off the Attack Speed stat. Then it does damage, and inflicts a pinning maneuver.
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Comments: Approved - Chaos
(Moving this to
Fenrir's Personal Style)