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 Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2015 9:23 pm
Uhh, I guess I'll do Trent's? Hit a weird snide.
Trent: You're five times the writer that I am, and your ideas that I've heard from you in matches are fantastic. The characters you've used are all different, and your style of promos used for them are bar none.
Only critique is probably the one thing that everyone has told you, and that is activity. Too many times we've laid a great match out, and it's gone to the third page on day one that the match is posted. Unfortunately we don't end up finishing the match and everything has gone to waste. This has really cost you opportunities. If you got a consistent amount of activity rolling it would put you to the next level, because you DO deserve to headline for an E-Fed or two.
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:17 pm
I guess I'll do 2 then both King and badboy here:
King - I'm not sure if alot of people are aware of this but I have a list. A list of people that over the years I've been adding to thinking "I wanna do something with this person" you were one of the first on this list.
If this was a few years ago my con would be your activity ((still remember autowinning with a cloverleaf only to find out that was your finisher)) but since that seems to no longer be a problem, I'll just say keep it up.
Badboy - like my last post in this thread I don't know much about you but lets face it there's something good seeing as your the current champion in FG I personally can't wait to see how this evolves your character.
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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2015 11:50 pm
Lauri is the wings beneath my wind. Would buy a cake.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2015 6:00 am
The chocolate lush that is you, Freak, is seriously missing from our community.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2015 11:49 am
Well, since I got nothing better to do right now with my time, I might as well just adhere to this whole Skill Assessment thing you's got going here.
As for my comments on Dion:
Hell, I'm not going to give you a whole politic speech because everyone knows that you're one of the biggest pillars in G-fedding for quite some time. Your writing is something that stands out from the crowd, you can beat anyone to the clock and make 'em run for their money. This meaning, you're one amazing 'monster' in this place called Gaia Online. I have this light admiration for you because you got the capacity to tell a story, detail it, think it. Even better described, you walk the walk and you talk the talk. I'm very happy to have had the chance to see you shine even though we were never matched up one on one, I think you could give me the thrill to become better. Thank you for bein' an Icon around here, Dion.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2015 2:32 pm
Had an awesome match with Andy in BBW, lots of give and take with descriptive writing from him! I'd just like to point one thing out though, he had an ending in mind, a long-term goal and he seemed pretty keen to stick with it right to the end! Don't worry about winning all the time and being totally rigid, just go with the flow! You never know what might happen when you're writing with someone and stories often need to change along the way! A bit of planning can help but it isn't the end of the world if things change or it don't work out! There's always new ways to take a character whatever happens, win or loss!
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2015 2:38 pm
what can NOT be said about cartwright? He was essentially a legend when I first started in these guilds and a delight to see upon my return. You never can expect what to see next when it comes to cartwright.
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2015 4:12 pm
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?! YOU WERE GONE TOO SOON
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2015 4:50 pm
MidnightBlue9999 WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?! YOU WERE GONE TOO SOON Real life man. I swamped myself with too many guilds, too many characters.. had to get my life more in Order firat but im back To sum it up: three moves and 2 car accidents
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Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2015 8:49 pm
TIMMEH!
Glad you're back, man! Sucks to hear about the car accidents, though...been there, done that!
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 12:17 am
VELDRIN!
We only had one match together, kind of fell apart in the end with activity ((No one's fault, bad timing.)) however your work in RP'ing wrestling wise is great. You've got a great character with a unique gimmick that I don't think anyone else could pull off. Hoping to get into more matches with you and we could put on a fantastic match.
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 10:22 am
Well, once again, I think I have the right to post one more, this time about this guy, eh? Beggars can't be choosers.
So, my statement on this guy that goes by the name of Bad Boy:
Well, what can I say to sum up my opinion, I'm not going so lengthy to speak about you, seriously. You've doen your feats and accomplishments, one of which I really can clap to, being World Champion in the two best Guilds of nowadays, you deserve an applause, not many have ever managed to do that feat. So, that proves that you're a working guy for what you want and that your character is nothing to mess with. Personally, that last line made me shrug but eh, not being sarcastic wit'cha. You deserve the kudos where they are due.
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 12:52 pm
You're one of the best rookies I've seen in recent years, Styles. You put a lot of effort in your matches and each post shows clear thought. You've got a lot coming your way, that's for sure. I think the two biggest things you need to work on are consistency with your character's alignments and sentence structure. I've often read posts of yours where an entire paragraph's worth of information was made into one sentence, just with an abundance of commas.
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 3:53 pm
You're the consummate pro's pro, you're a legend, you've done it all, and you're still going strong.
I envy you, you're the best ever, and I thank you for all you have done for me. Never change.
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2015 5:22 pm
Hiro the Hero! You're always coming up with crazy ideas, which is great because it keeps things fresh! We've worked with and against each other in the past and it's always been fun! I wanna see where you go with your new tag team characters, you know, the ones with the crazy lines for a name! blaugh If you can keep the activity up as you have been since like the new year that'd be sweet!
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