So I've personally looked over the finalized versions of both of your spells and abilities. Great Tree Arc, and Scribble Magic.
Problems remaining with profiles. Specifically magic.
Sonnet- Your magic doesn't have any starting magic. And from what I see the strive cost it equals 500 exactly. I'm assuming you spent to get your spells. If this is correct, it will need to be recorded in the spell checkout, and then updated on your characters update page. (This means I must accept Sonnet without any magic abilities period. Then your problem will be moved to the update area. I swear its only two more posts and then your done. Terribly sorry for the remaining work.)
Valora- Great Tree Arc does come with a starting spell. Tree Manipulation. This means your character gets to be approved with the magic in hand. And I can only accept it if she only has that magic. Every mage starts with 500 strive which is needed to purchase the future spells. You will have to spend it in the spell checkout of the Book Of Spells area. Then you will have to record the gained magics in the update section of your character.
So to sum it up for you two. I can accept both of your profiles, but they will be lacking a lot of the spells that you see now. You can spend your strive immiedently upon creation at the book of spells, spell check out. And then at the update section. Spell Checkout->Update Forum->Done. You can rp as soon as the character is accepted..so....now.
Lord0fAngels
LightAngelOfVCS
Posted: Mon Dec 23, 2013 8:48 pm
xXRedemption_VengeanceXx
Awesome. I KNEW that was how I was supposed to do it, but I wasn't sure. I did indeed plan on having Scribble Magic have all 500 points spent so that the magic can have legitimacy behind its potency. At any rate, thanks for clearing that out. I wasn't planning on rushing RP, so... 'tis all fine. I'll take out two spells as soon as this post is out, so you can approve it. I'll go through procedure after that. Thank you!
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Vaan_hatake • Name :: Mantama Shousen • Age :: 29 • Height :: 6' 3" • Weight :: 190 lbs • Hair Color :: Dark Green • Eye Color :: Blue • Skin Color :: A healthy tan, though one would guess that it is of Italian or Southern European descent. • Tattoo / Markings :: None • Race :: Human • Personality:: • Personal Weakness :: • Personal Strengths :: • Biography ::
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Posted: Wed Dec 25, 2013 12:15 am
Under Construction Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Chaostempist • Name :: Walker Peace • Age :: 20 • Height :: 5'10" • Weight :: 175 lbs • Hair Color :: White • Eye Color :: Teal • Skin Color :: Cacasin • Tattoo / Markings :: Scar over left eye • Race :: Human • Personality:: Distant, slow to trust, Cold to outsiders, Warm to friends, Protective • Personal Weakness :: • Personal Strengths :: • Biography ::
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name :: Lamia Scale •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: Right Sholder •Color of Mark :: Blue
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: Edo Tensei Jesus • Name :: Aleister Crowley • Age :: 21 • Height :: 6'1" • Weight :: 210lb • Hair Color :: Pastel Blue • Eye Color :: Pastel Blue • Skin Color :: Lightly Tanned/ Definitely of a Italian /Spaniard descent • Tattoo / Markings :: Crowly's arms are completely covered with tribal tattoos. He also has two teal colored tattoos under his eyes, and a jaw of a wolf plastered onto his face? • Race :: Human/ Merman • Personality:: Crowley is extremely arrogant, and even more so Ignorant a problem he can't solve with wits is usually met with violence. Crowley is a bona fide hustler. He is a man of simple pursuits Money, Power and then Women • Personal Weakness :: Mysterious Hooded Figues, Girls with long hair in white dresses, Ghost Stories, and 3 legged Cats • Personal Strengths :: Being able to beat almost anyone in a street fight, The Remarkable ability to swear profoundly • Biography :: Born in a swampy 3rd world area known as The Black Marsh, to all those who live outside the marsh it is known as a no mans' land which the worst of the worst criminal emerge. At a young age Crowley learned is he wanted something he simply took it, this caused a lot of turmoil and violence as he and his friends became more like a gang taking on anyone whom dared step on their area of the swamp. Crowley took on a rival gang leader in a fist fight and lost, this lost purely meant nothing but the fight left Crowley's jaw permanently dislocated which is when they forced it back and stitched a wolf jaw to his own it keep in place. From that day forward in the marsh he was known as General GrimmJaw.
Soon after he left the Marsh to pressure a life of more riches. He fell in with another gang from Hargeon Town where they'd hijack ships and steal cargo and sell it for a higher price, Members of the gang intermediate Water wizard whom taught Crowley a thing or two in magic so they could use the water a an escape route. not long after they were discovered and defeated by members of the Sabertooth Guild he opted to join them in hopes of getting more powerful. Sabertooth being one of the most powerful guilds in Fiore could definitly get him to where he wanted to be.
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name :: Sabertooth •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location ::Neck •Color of Mark :: Gold
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 6:10 pm
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username ::Missy Eden • Name ::Eden Bell • Age ::15 • Height ::5 feet, 7 inches • Weight ::125 lbs • Hair Color ::Short and black • Eye Color ::Sapphire blue • Skin Color ::Tan • Tattoo / Markings ::None • Race ::Bakeneko • Personality::She's very optimistic, energetic, naive, and a bit self-centered. She's very friendly towards others (as long as they aren't wrong-doers). She tends to be a bit nosy, and pays no mind to personal space. So to put it simply, she's an extrovert airhead who loves doing fun things with friends. • Personal Weakness ::She tends to take action without thinking of consequences first, which doesn't always end well for her. She also hates to be alone. • Personal Strengths ::Because of her outgoing nature, she isn't afraid to take on challenges, even if they're dangerous. And if she's with friends, she's unstoppable. • Biography ::Eden had a very lonely childhood. Her parents (who were also bakeneko) were majorly over-protective and never let her go out and do things like a normal child would (e.g., playing with other children, making and having friends, traveling the world outside of her home, etc.). Instead, they kept her inside the house at all times, leaving her with only books to read and atrsy things to use. Over time she had read all of the books in her room enough to know them word for word. There were never any new ones brought to her. Her art supplies on the other hand were replenished every now and then, but in between the times when she ran out and when she got new stuff, she spent her days gazing out her bedroom widnow, watching the children outside. She would observe as they laughed, played games, and went on mini adventures. Eden often daydreamed about having tons of friends and going on grand adventures all over the world. But she knew that that would never happen. At least until she was old enough to make her own decisions. During the course of a few years, the young girl found out she had magical powers. With a simple art tool (e.g., pencil, paintbrush, etc.), she could create objects in midair. And by her will, they would come to life. These animated objects soon became her only friends over the next few years. By the time she turned fiften years of age, Eden ran away from home, a backpack on hand. It was filled with personal nick-nacks, art supplies, and a small amount of food. She had no clue of where she was headed or what would happen to her, but she couldn't just rot away in her prison cell of a house anymore. During her few weeks of travelling, she befriended many people with her naturally sweet and upbeat personality. She also dazzled them with her magical art ability. Once they new she was a wizard, they told her of special guilds for people just like her. These 'guilds' where wizards could looks for jobs and (what stuck out most for Edenwink friends. Now completely sure of what she wanted to do, she began searching for a guild that would suit her most. (( I'm gonna stop there because she/I haven't chose a guild yet lol))
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name ::N/A •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location ::Left shoulder •Color of Mark ::Violet
Ⅵ.XXX▐░ Extra Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Extra ::Eden has an extreme fear of being left alone for too long. It brings back the bad memories of her lonely childhood.
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Posted: Fri Jan 03, 2014 7:17 pm
I feel like I should've added her art tools to her items. Am I right or do I create/purchase those items since they have to do with spells
Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 2:02 pm
Missy Eden
Edo Tensei Jesus
Aleister Crowley- This character is approved. HOWEVER, your character's magic is not. The magic is too broad as it refers to Water Magic which is a TYPE of magical element, not an actual Magic. I apologize that this might seem a little tedious but, trust me, this will close a lot of future problems before they happen. If you could work on a new custom magic or find a magic that follows within water magic, I know it will save you a lot of trouble.
Eden Bell- This character is approved. HOWEVER, I can say that it would better for you if you placed a single magical item representing the Art Magic in your inventory.
Aleister Crowley- This character is approved. HOWEVER, your character's magic is not. The magic is too broad as it refers to Water Magic which is a TYPE of magical element, not an actual Magic. I apologize that this might seem a little tedious but, trust me, this will close a lot of future problems before they happen. If you could work on a new custom magic or find a magic that follows within water magic, I know it will save you a lot of trouble.
Eden Bell- This character is approved. HOWEVER, I can say that it would better for you if you placed a single magical item representing the Art Magic in your inventory.
Alright!! I edited the item list and mana amount (from the mana pool). I just realized the magic is called Pict Magic. Reedus Jonah used it in the anime.
Posted: Wed Jan 08, 2014 2:21 pm
Ⅰ.XXX▐░ Personal Data ██ █████████████████████████ • Username :: XV_Xarso_XV • Name :: Ryan Dyoll • Age :: ??? • Height :: 5'7'' • Weight :: 140 • Hair Color :: Brown • Eye Color :: Orange • Skin Color :: Lightly Tanned • Tattoo / Markings :: Scars across the torso. • Race :: Human • Personality:: Ryan tries his best to be liked by everyone. And when diplomacy flies out the window, a swift punch come through the door. You can find him in various moods as time passes. Though usually hoping to stay in a good mood. Of course like any man, women appeal to him just as much as the next guy. Deep down Ryan has a wild sense of battle as he was raised in the wilderness. He tries to leave this part of himself behind yet it appears when his emotions run high. • Personal Weakness :: Being treated like a child, the opposite sex (age won't really change things), being taunted with food. • Personal Strengths :: Very neat hand-writing (even when writing fast. Very keen eyesight. Adept reflexes. • Biography :: Ryan was born an orphan in a rundown town. The area was filled gangs and criminals ran rampant. Within that nasty town Ryan grew up secluded from everyone. His time was spent in the forest playing and hunting. Whenever he went to the town it was to get the one thing he couldn't find in the forest, books. The people always gave him an unwelcome stare when he passed through, they'd say things like 'demon' or 'monster'. The only person he would acknowledge was the owner of the bookstore. Ryan would sometimes stay and read until he fell asleep. Some years later he'd run into some trouble with the gangsters in the town. They'd ask lost of annoying questions like where he comes from or why he reads books all the time.
Ryan had never payed much attention to people around him cause they just got in the way. But whenever something tried to hurt him he'd instinctively strike back with more force. Before leaving they said they'd be back. While staying in the book store late after midnight he woke up to the smell of smoke and blood. When he rushed around the store he found the owner's dead body along with the all the books burned. Before Ryan could make sense of it all he was attacked from all sides. When he looked up, he saw the gang members from the street. They never gave him a reason for burning the place. Ryan didn't want to know either. For the first time in his life he felt anger for another living being, and that ticked him off. They found one more book in the shop. Ryan lunged for it and did his best to protect it. As he blood spilled onto the pages his own soul raged on. Suddenly, the flames in the store were consumed by stronger and brighter flames. Before Ryan stood a figure clad in flames. Right when he was going to speak, the creature grabbed him by throat. It looked deep into his eyes before it spoke. Your blood reeks of anger. I like that. For that, I'll return the favor.
Ryan discovered that the creature that came from the book was actually a demon. Though it didn't have long, it "cursed" Ryan with demon-slaying magic in the form of magic particles infecting his body before it left. Ryan left days later with the intention of starting a new life.
Ⅱ. XXX▐░Guild Data ██ █████████████████████████ •Guild Name :: Sabertooth •Rank Level :: D-Class •Guild Mark Body Location :: Behind Right Shoulder •Color of Mark :: Red
Ryan Dyoll- I can't accept this profile. You see, our fire dragon slayer has already been taken. And while your magic is specifically 'demon,' I can't accept any slayer magics, that haven't been earned. So I'm sorry. One day we'll release the God Slayers for people to jump for, but for now you'll have to find another magic.
Posted: Thu Jan 09, 2014 12:39 pm
xXRedemption_VengeanceXx
XV_Xarso_XV
Ryan Dyoll- I can't accept this profile. You see, our fire dragon slayer has already been taken. And while your magic is specifically 'demon,' I can't accept any slayer magics, that haven't been earned. So I'm sorry. One day we'll release the God Slayers for people to jump for, but for now you'll have to find another magic.
Ok, I have one question. Will the magic ever be available in the future?
Ryan Dyoll- I can't accept this profile. You see, our fire dragon slayer has already been taken. And while your magic is specifically 'demon,' I can't accept any slayer magics, that haven't been earned. So I'm sorry. One day we'll release the God Slayers for people to jump for, but for now you'll have to find another magic.
Ok, I have one question. Will the magic ever be available in the future?
Ryan Dyoll- I can't accept this profile. You see, our fire dragon slayer has already been taken. And while your magic is specifically 'demon,' I can't accept any slayer magics, that haven't been earned. So I'm sorry. One day we'll release the God Slayers for people to jump for, but for now you'll have to find another magic.
Ok, I have one question. Will the magic ever be available in the future?
Ryan Dyoll- I can't accept this profile. You see, our fire dragon slayer has already been taken. And while your magic is specifically 'demon,' I can't accept any slayer magics, that haven't been earned. So I'm sorry. One day we'll release the God Slayers for people to jump for, but for now you'll have to find another magic.
Ok, I have one question. Will the magic ever be available in the future?
Yet its listed on the Lost Magic topic. I'm not trying to split hairs, just tying to make sense of all this.
Its there so us mods can continue making spells for it, and develop it til we decide its ready for the public to go after. I don't know when Ometison wants to release it so I can't say it'll be anytime soon.
