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Character Name: Shinji hozuki Nicknames: Shin Age: 16 Birth Date: 01/15 Gender: Male Hair Color: white Eye Color: light brown/ yellow Height: 6'4 Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: shark like teeth Personality: cocky, sarcastic, and insane would be the three words that come to mind when the name shinji hozuki comes to mind.
Background work in progress
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: Species: Description: {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: Organization: Rank: academy student Titles: Insignia Style: buckled Insignia Location: on belt buckle
Chakra Color: light blue Chakra Level: medium Chakra Points: 18 [+3/10:] Chakra Elements: water Extra Chakra Elements: Chakra Control:
Elemental Control : These ninja choose to specialize in a specific element, making that element much more powerful than normal. In addition they are able to draw on nature to fuel their element, making it even more powerful in an environment reflecting that element. However, due to this focus, jutsu not of the chosen element suffer. [+1 Rank to chosen element, +2 Ranks near elemental advantage, -1 Rank to all other techniques]
Chakra Battery: These shinobi have much larger chakra stores than their peers, making them able to use more chakra techniques at a time without running dry. [+1/10 Base Chakra Modifier]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: suiton-water E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
taijutsu/kenjutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
Hozuki Clan Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
Sword (Katana): [1] - [this katana rest upon shins right hip]
Shuriken: [20] - there are 10 in each Shuriken holster
kunai: [2] - there are 1 in each kunai holster
Shuriken holster - this holster is upon shins right hip under his katana
Shuriken holster - this holster is upon shins left hip
kinai holster - this holster is strapped to shins right thy.
kunai holster - this holster is strapped to shins left thy
Item Name: [<# of item>]
My apologies for the wait. Been really busy around here for a while now, and when it hasn't I wasn't in the mood to check stuff.
We're currently asking all new players to start as academy students. There's going to be a lot of them, both new and transfers, and we've been putting a lot of thought into what we want to do for the academy, so I can promise it will be interesting, and profitable too as it's one of the few times you'll be able to learn jutsu completely free.
As a clan/bloodline member your chakra level should be medium, with a +2 modifier. Stacked with your Chakra Battery, that's a +3/10.
Houzuki doesn't have stages. You can cut that slot, or change it to active, or dormant. Probably dormant.
There's a couple typos in your profession section. Not too important, but worth noting.
The Taijutsu section of your main skills is for techniques from the universal (Or Custom) taijutsu and kenjutsu lists. Please return it to normal. Styles have their own section further down in the profile.
You can use your starter cash to buy some starter equipment. As an academy student (Yes, I still want that change.) however you can only buy equipment, no jutsu. It is recommended to buy your starter equipment now, because once you're in game it won't be as readily available, or easy to come by.
edited and thank you
Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2013 1:44 pm
Hinote Tosatsu
ShinjiHozuki
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Character Name: Shinji hozuki Nicknames: Shin Age: 16 Birth Date: 01/15 Gender: Male Hair Color: white Eye Color: light brown/ yellow Height: 6'4 Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: shark like teeth Personality: cocky, sarcastic, and insane would be the three words that come to mind when the name shinji hozuki comes to mind.
Background work in progress
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: Species: Description: {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: Organization: Rank: academy student Titles: Insignia Style: buckled Insignia Location: on belt buckle
Chakra Color: light blue Chakra Level: medium Chakra Points: 18 [+3/10:] Chakra Elements: water Extra Chakra Elements: Chakra Control:
Elemental Control : These ninja choose to specialize in a specific element, making that element much more powerful than normal. In addition they are able to draw on nature to fuel their element, making it even more powerful in an environment reflecting that element. However, due to this focus, jutsu not of the chosen element suffer. [+1 Rank to chosen element, +2 Ranks near elemental advantage, -1 Rank to all other techniques]
Chakra Battery: These shinobi have much larger chakra stores than their peers, making them able to use more chakra techniques at a time without running dry. [+1/10 Base Chakra Modifier]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
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---------------------------------------------------------------- Skill Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: suiton-water E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
taijutsu/kenjutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
Hozuki Clan Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Name: Ayumu Hashimoto [Currently no one knows or remembers this name besides Ayumu himself.] Nicknames: Nazo Age: 18 Birth Date: 06/27 Gender: Male Hair Color: White, though it used to be red Eye Color:Purple Grey Height: 5' 5'' Body Type: Small, Lithe Distinguishing Features: His pupils are slits rather than circles. Personality: Nazo has almost no definable personality. He doesn't seem to care about much, and tends to avoid speaking whenever possible. In truth, he seems more sociopathic than anything else, because of his definite lack of a substantial personality.
Background
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: --- Organization: N/a Rank: Academy Titles: N/a Insignia Style: Good Luck Charm Insignia Location: Left Wrist
Chakra Color:Purple Grey Chakra Level: Low [currently] (-1/10) Chakra Points: 23 Chakra Elements: Fuuton Extra Chakra Elements: N/a Chakra Control: [-1 chakra point cost for Genin techniques, -2 for Chuunin, -3 for Jounin, and -5 for S Rank]
Support: [Jutsu below the user's rank do not require hand seals, Jutsu of equal rank require half the normal seal, Jutsu of higher rank are unaffected]
Chakra Control: [-1 chakra point cost for Genin techniques, -2 for Chuunin, -3 for Jounin, and -5 for S Rank]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Chakra Deficient: [-1/10 base chakra]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Ranmaru [Pending] Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/a
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
Fuuton: E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
(Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.) Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
- [] (To carry large amounts of items, you must have a container.) Item Name: [<# of item>]
Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2013 8:45 am
_Taru_Kimisho_
ShinjiHozuki
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Character Name: Shinji hozuki Nicknames: Shin Age: 16 Birth Date: 01/15 Gender: Male Hair Color: white Eye Color: light brown/ yellow Height: 6'4 Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: shark like teeth Personality: cocky, sarcastic, and insane would be the three words that come to mind when the name shinji hozuki comes to mind.
Background work in progress
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: Species: Description: {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Village: Organization: Rank: academy student Titles: Insignia Style: buckled Insignia Location: on belt buckle
Chakra Color: light blue Chakra Level: medium Chakra Points: 18 [+3/10:] Chakra Elements: water Extra Chakra Elements: Chakra Control:
Elemental Control : These ninja choose to specialize in a specific element, making that element much more powerful than normal. In addition they are able to draw on nature to fuel their element, making it even more powerful in an environment reflecting that element. However, due to this focus, jutsu not of the chosen element suffer. [+1 Rank to chosen element, +2 Ranks near elemental advantage, -1 Rank to all other techniques]
Chakra Battery: These shinobi have much larger chakra stores than their peers, making them able to use more chakra techniques at a time without running dry. [+1/10 Base Chakra Modifier]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
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---------------------------------------------------------------- Skill Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: suiton-water E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
taijutsu/kenjutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
Hozuki Clan Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
There's still some formatting, and grammar/punctuation/capitalization and such errors, but overall this looks good now. I'll ask that you try and clean it up a bit more when you have the time, but besides that...
EDIT: I missed it on my first pass, but your Elemental Control type should have the name of the element you're using it with in it. Elemental Control [Suiton], presumably.
Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
Eloquent Lunatic
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Eloquent Lunatic
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Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2013 9:02 am
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz
AyumuHashimoto
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Character Name: Ayumu Hashimoto [Currently no one knows or remembers this name besides Ayumu himself.] Nicknames: Nazo Age: 18 Birth Date: 06/27 Gender: Male Hair Color: White, though it used to be red Eye Color:Purple Grey Height: 5' 5'' Body Type: Small, Lithe Distinguishing Features: His pupils are slits rather than circles. Personality: Nazo has almost no definable personality. He doesn't seem to care about much, and tends to avoid speaking whenever possible. In truth, he seems more sociopathic than anything else, because of his definite lack of a substantial personality.
Background
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: --- Organization: N/a Rank: Academy Titles: N/a Insignia Style: Good Luck Charm Insignia Location: Left Wrist
Chakra Color:Purple Grey Chakra Level: Low [currently] (-1/10) Chakra Points: 23 Chakra Elements: Fuuton Extra Chakra Elements: N/a Chakra Control: [-1 chakra point cost for Genin techniques, -2 for Chuunin, -3 for Jounin, and -5 for S Rank]
Support: [Jutsu below the user's rank do not require hand seals, Jutsu of equal rank require half the normal seal, Jutsu of higher rank are unaffected]
Chakra Control: [-1 chakra point cost for Genin techniques, -2 for Chuunin, -3 for Jounin, and -5 for S Rank]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Chakra Deficient: [-1/10 base chakra]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Ranmaru [Pending] Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/a
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
Fuuton: E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
(Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.) Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
- [] (To carry large amounts of items, you must have a container.) Item Name: [<# of item>]
Please add the spoiler code as placed in the default format. I'm assuming you grabbed the format before it was added, but I'm requiring it now, just because it actually makes things easier to track.
At -1/10 your chakra points should be 14, certainly not 23. 23 at academy is +8/10.
Since you haven't been approved, or even applied, for Ranmaru, please remove the references to it, even as pending. You can add a bloodline later without having to mark it now, so long as it matches your existing profile.
As an academy student, you don't have any rank benefits yet. Please remove the genin benefit.
You can use your starting silver to buy any equipment you want to start with and can afford. This is highly recommended as it may be the only way to get some equipment for quite awhile. As an academy student however, you aren't allowed to buy starter jutsu.
Edit: Minor note I almost forgot to mention. Your changes to color in a couple places broke the size formatting. If you could, please try to fix that. It's a weird bug with the size and color codes conflicting if they aren't placed just right. Best fixed by just adding a new set of size codes or two.
Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2013 10:07 am
Enryu
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Character Name: Enryu Nicknames: N/A Age: 29 Birth Date: 04/19 Gender: Male Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Brown Height: 6'4 Body Type: Clearly athletic Distinguishing Features: Enryu wears a black bandanna over his head that stretches down to cover his right eye. Despite this a deep vertical scar still stretches from his chin into the darkness of the eyepatch. While he isn't blind in that eye it has an increased sensitivity to light and the fabric is able to allow the eye to function somewhat well without rendering him blind. Shapes begin to lose definition 5 meters away from him and are already blurred due to the fabric. Light is tolerable around dusk/evening but his eyesight doesn't improve much.
Should he ever display his bare torso, the typical wounds a mercenary would suffer mar his dusky flesh in pale scars. In particular there is a large bite mark on his left shoulder and a star-shaped scar over his heart. It is clear he has suffered mortal wounds as well as torture, evidenced by whip marks and burnt flesh on his back.
Personality: Enryu is an exceptionally composed and quick-thinking individual with a strong belief in logic and order. While he was always a very loyal and obedient follower, he never took it to the point where his rationale was clouded and has abandoned past contracts should they no longer become profitable or survivable. His methodical and organized method of thinking made him the prime candidate for lieutenant in his mercenary troupe, going on to develop written laws and procedures that significantly enhanced the war bands efficiency.
Enryu can be very assertive and direct, naturally suppressing more timid personalities with his more authoritative one though rarely is this intentional. His upbringing made him apathetic in terms of empathizing with others but as he grew older he became more respectful and chose to remain silent rather than comfort others due to his inability to so. He still remains very blunt however, speaking freely on sensitive topics seemingly without any care for the sentiments of others.
In battle, Enryu is very composed despite being exceptionally fearsome and brutal towards his enemies. As a result of his analytical, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents. Uninterested in 'playing games' in combat, he shows little hesitation when it comes to using lethal force and has been noted to be a dangerous sparring partner. Despite his increasingly growing reputation and prowess as a ninja, Enryu has shown no signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities,
Due to the numerous tragedies that surrounded his developmental stages, Enryu grew to disdain the fragility of human life and how it affected those still living as well as develop a morbid fascination with the phenomenon. This has manifested in a manic desire to kill deep within Enryu that urges him to take a life almost monthly. This desire visually manifests itself to Enryu and constantly urges him to take the lives of those around him. It takes a great deal of mental fortitude to restrain this desire but without allowing himself to kill, Enryu suffers from a sort of withdrawal that steadily destabilizes various aspects of his life. This can be seen in the shattering of his stoic attitude and a general difficulty focusing on anything for too long. It is because of this sinister passenger that Enryu kills discretely on a monthly basis, to retain his sanity as well as his status as a normal member of society. Despite his distinct lack of morals, Enryu seems to be well-versed in human psychology and displays insightful wisdom at times.
Enryu has always been very quick-witted despite rarely vocalizing his retorts. From a young age he was displayed great maturity, intelligence, and intuitiveness rarely being caught off guard or deceived. His tenure as Lieutenant in the Grim Company was marked with great foresight and authority but his greatest failing was his difficulty trusting in the strength of others. Enryu had a tendency to always compensate for failure and would often over complicate simple decisions by over thinking the repercussions. Despite his rather stoic, manipulative and yet polite personality with a dark sense of humor, Enryu is inwardly conflicted with major insecurities about himself and his mental afflictions due to both his primal desire to murder and his lack of early social development.
Background WIP
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: ______ Organization: N/A Rank: Academy Student Titles: Insignia Style: Brooch Insignia Location: Base of the neck
Chakra Color: Royal Purple Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Medical & Suiton Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control:
:The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends. [Unlimited personal custom jutsu. (Must pick a single field, Nin, Gen, Tai, Fuuin, etc.)]
: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline: [Will be added later] Bloodline Stage: [Will be added later]
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage:
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Shinobi Profession: Profession Base Benefits :(Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.) >
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
Suiton: Water Release E Rank
D Rank
Fuinjutsu: Sealing E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline Jutsu
Bloodline Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
Short Sword: [<1>] - [] Small Scroll: [<1>] - [< Right pocket>]
- [Tiny Scroll: [<1>] Brush: [<1>] Small Ink Vial: [<1>]
- [] Shuriken: [<5>]
Martin Spiralwave Crew
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A faint smile
Dedicated Friend
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2013 11:38 am
MeiSenkai
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Character Name: Mei Senkai Nicknames: Little Red Age: 14 Birth Date: 02/12 Gender: Female Hair Color: Red Eye Color: Green Height: 5'2 Body Type: 4'11 Distinguishing Features: Mei has a number of tattoos upon her body. Personality: On a normal day Mei is a hot tamale. She is very energetic and always seems to try and occupy herself with something. Mei is very quick with a joke and sarcasm comes as naturally as breathing to her. She enjoys making friends and taking challenges. In a battle Mei always keeps her goal in mind and tries her best to not goof around, but sometimes she forgets that. When her pride is wounded Mei will try to prove herself and will not relent until she has done so.
Background WIP
Family Information Name: Kodoku Senkai Gender: Male Relation: Brother Description: Kodoku is almost the opposite of Mei. He is a very level headed guy with a calm disposition. He looks very similar to her as well. His hair is red and he wears it long, and his eyes are the same shade of green. Kodoku is much taller than his younger sibling, standing at 6'1.
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Village: Organization: Rank: Academy Student Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Tattoo Insignia Location: Left Shoulder
Chakra Color: Scarlet Chakra Level: Medium +2/10 Chakra Points: 17 Chakra Elements: Water Extra Chakra Elements: - Chakra Control: -
Jutsu Crafter [Sealing]: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends.
Combo User: The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Heavy Tread: This shinobi's stealth abilities leave something to be desired. Stepping on twigs just comes naturally to them. [-1½ rank stealth]
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Shinobi Profession: Sealing Specialist Profession Base Benefits Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own. (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)
Rank Benefits
Genin :
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: Water E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Ink Artistry
Ink Artistry Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
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Pack [Fabric 2 cubic feet] - Back Tiny Scroll: 4 Small Scroll: 2 Medium Vial: 1 Brush: 1
Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2013 10:11 am
Martin Spiralwave
Enryu
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Name: Enryu Nicknames: N/A Age: 29 Birth Date: 04/19 Gender: Male Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Brown Height: 6'4 Body Type: Clearly athletic Distinguishing Features: Enryu wears a black bandanna over his head that stretches down to cover his right eye. Despite this a deep vertical scar still stretches from his chin into the darkness of the eyepatch. While he isn't blind in that eye it has an increased sensitivity to light and the fabric is able to allow the eye to function without Enryu being blinded by the light.
Should he ever display his bare torso, the typical wounds a mercenary would suffer mar his dusky flesh in pale scars. In particular there is a large bite mark on his left shoulder and a star-shaped scar over his heart. It is clear he has suffered mortal wounds as well as torture, evidenced by whip marks and burnt flesh on his back.
Personality: Enryu is an exceptionally composed and quick-thinking individual with a strong belief in logic and order. While he was always a very loyal and obedient follower, he never took it to the point where his rationale was clouded and has abandoned past contracts should they no longer become profitable or survivable. His methodical and organized method of thinking made him the prime candidate for lieutenant in his mercenary troupe, going on to develop written laws and procedures that significantly enhanced the war bands efficiency.
Enryu can be very assertive and direct, naturally suppressing more timid personalities with his more authoritative one though rarely is this intentional. His upbringing made him apathetic in terms of empathizing with others but as he grew older he became more respectful and chose to remain silent rather than comfort others due to his inability to so. He still remains very blunt however, speaking freely on sensitive topics seemingly without any care for the sentiments of others.
In battle, Enryu is very composed despite being exceptionally fearsome and brutal towards his enemies. As a result of his analytical, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents. Uninterested in 'playing games' in combat, he shows little hesitation when it comes to using lethal force and has been noted to be a dangerous sparring partner. Despite his increasingly growing reputation and prowess as a ninja, Enryu has shown no signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities,
Due to the numerous tragedies that surrounded his developmental stages, Enryu grew to disdain the fragility of human life and how it affected those still living as well as develop a morbid fascination with the phenomenon. This has manifested in a manic desire to kill deep within Enryu that urges him to take a life almost monthly. This desire visually manifests itself to Enryu and constantly urges him to take the lives of those around him. It takes a great deal of mental fortitude to restrain this desire but without allowing himself to kill, Enryu suffers from a sort of withdrawal that steadily destabilizes various aspects of his life. This can be seen in the shattering of his stoic attitude and a general difficulty focusing on anything for too long. It is because of this sinister passenger that Enryu kills discretely on a monthly basis, to retain his sanity as well as his status as a normal member of society. Despite his distinct lack of morals, Enryu seems to be well-versed in human psychology and displays insightful wisdom at times.
Enryu has always been very quick-witted despite rarely vocalizing his retorts. From a young age he was displayed great maturity, intelligence, and intuitiveness rarely being caught off guard or deceived. His tenure as Lieutenant in the Grim Company was marked with great foresight and authority but his greatest failing was his difficulty trusting in the strength of others. Enryu had a tendency to always compensate for failure and would often over complicate simple decisions by over thinking the repercussions. Despite his rather stoic, manipulative and yet polite personality with a dark sense of humor, Enryu is inwardly conflicted with major insecurities about himself and his mental afflictions due to both his primal desire to murder and his lack of early social development.
Background WIP
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: ______ Organization: N/A Rank: Academy Student Titles: Insignia Style: Brooch Insignia Location: Base of the neck
Chakra Color: Royal Purple Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Suiton & Raiton Extra Chakra Elements: Sealing Chakra Control:
:The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends. [Unlimited personal custom jutsu. (Must pick a single field, Nin, Gen, Tai, Fuuin, etc.)]
: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline: [Will be added later] Bloodline Stage: [Will be added later]
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage:
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Shinobi Profession: Profession Base Benefits :(Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.) >
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
Suiton: Water Release E Rank
D Rank
Fuinjutsu: Sealing E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline Jutsu
Bloodline Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
Short Sword: [<1>] - [] Small Scroll: [<1>] - [< Right pocket>]
- [Tiny Scroll: [<1>] Brush: [<1>] Small Ink Vial: [<1>]
- [] Shuriken: [<5>]
Not really a major note, but can I get a tad bit more information as to the eyepatch thing? Is it special fabric or something? Because as it's written there it seems like a claim that his eye is so sensitive he can see through fabric, which would theoretically include blindfolds and such, a problem I'm sure you can understand my worry on.
As an academy student you may have one element. You have three listed.
Sealing however, is not an element.
Medical is currently considered an element, and as you have "Less Elements" and have apparently already chosen your two elements, taking it for Jutsu Crafter is entirely pointless and crippling. If you don't make it your first element in fact, it could be months or even years before you can actually use the type at all since you only get your second element at jounin with your chosen weakness.
I've run the math a couple times, and it's coming out at 11 Silver. Did you forget to list something?
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2013 10:21 am
A faint smile
MeiSenkai
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Character Name: Mei Senkai Nicknames: Little Red Age: 14 Birth Date: 02/12 Gender: Female Hair Color: Red Eye Color: Green Height: 5'2 Body Type: 4'11 Distinguishing Features: Mei has a number of tattoos upon her body. Personality: On a normal day Mei is a hot tamale. She is very energetic and always seems to try and occupy herself with something. Mei is very quick with a joke and sarcasm comes as naturally as breathing to her. She enjoys making friends and taking challenges. In a battle Mei always keeps her goal in mind and tries her best to not goof around, but sometimes she forgets that. When her pride is wounded Mei will try to prove herself and will not relent until she has done so.
Background WIP
Family Information Name: Kodoku Senkai Gender: Male Relation: Brother Description: Kodoku is almost the opposite of Mei. He is a very level headed guy with a calm disposition. He looks very similar to her as well. His hair is red and he wears it long, and his eyes are the same shade of green. Kodoku is much taller than his younger sibling, standing at 6'1.
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Village: Organization: Rank: Academy Student Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Tattoo Insignia Location: Left Shoulder
Chakra Color: Scarlet Chakra Level: High [+4/10] Chakra Points: 19 Chakra Elements: Water, Earth [Jounin] Extra Chakra Elements: Sealing Chakra Control: -
Jutsu Crafter: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends. [Unlimited personal custom jutsu for Sealing]
Combo User: The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Heavy Tread: This shinobi's stealth abilities leave something to be desired. Stepping on twigs just comes naturally to them. [-1½ rank stealth]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon:Ink Artistry [Approval] Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: -
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: - Transplant Stage: -
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Shinobi Profession: Sealing Specialist Profession Base Benefits Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own. (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)
Rank Benefits
Genin :
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: Water E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Ink Artistry
Ink Artistry Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
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- [] (To carry large amounts of items, you must have a container.) Item Name: [<# of item>]
High +4/10 is only currently available in a few ways. Clan heads get it as a base modifier, some demon hosts have it, clan members with ninjutsu spec can get it, and a +3/10 with chakra battery can get it. None of these apply to your character. Your modifier should be Medium +2/10.
As an academy student you can only have one element. Please remove the extra.
Sealing is not an element.
It is recommended to spend your starter silver on some equipment now, as some items won't be easily attained in game for some time. As an academy student however you can't buy starter jutsu.
Posted: Tue Nov 19, 2013 4:43 pm
Martin Spiralwave
Enryu
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Character Name: Enryu Nicknames: N/A Age: 29 Birth Date: 04/19 Gender: Male Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Brown Height: 6'4 Body Type: Clearly athletic Distinguishing Features: Enryu wears a black bandanna over his head that stretches down to cover his right eye. Despite this a deep vertical scar still stretches from his chin into the darkness of the eyepatch. While he isn't blind in that eye it has an increased sensitivity to light and the fabric is able to allow the eye to function somewhat well without rendering him blind. Shapes begin to lose definition 5 meters away from him and are already blurred due to the fabric. Light is tolerable around dusk/evening but his eyesight doesn't improve much.
Should he ever display his bare torso, the typical wounds a mercenary would suffer mar his dusky flesh in pale scars. In particular there is a large bite mark on his left shoulder and a star-shaped scar over his heart. It is clear he has suffered mortal wounds as well as torture, evidenced by whip marks and burnt flesh on his back.
Personality: Enryu is an exceptionally composed and quick-thinking individual with a strong belief in logic and order. While he was always a very loyal and obedient follower, he never took it to the point where his rationale was clouded and has abandoned past contracts should they no longer become profitable or survivable. His methodical and organized method of thinking made him the prime candidate for lieutenant in his mercenary troupe, going on to develop written laws and procedures that significantly enhanced the war bands efficiency.
Enryu can be very assertive and direct, naturally suppressing more timid personalities with his more authoritative one though rarely is this intentional. His upbringing made him apathetic in terms of empathizing with others but as he grew older he became more respectful and chose to remain silent rather than comfort others due to his inability to so. He still remains very blunt however, speaking freely on sensitive topics seemingly without any care for the sentiments of others.
In battle, Enryu is very composed despite being exceptionally fearsome and brutal towards his enemies. As a result of his analytical, he can quickly adjust to any situation to make keen and thought-out decisions, allowing him to stay steps ahead of his opponents. Uninterested in 'playing games' in combat, he shows little hesitation when it comes to using lethal force and has been noted to be a dangerous sparring partner. Despite his increasingly growing reputation and prowess as a ninja, Enryu has shown no signs of arrogance, and is rather modest about his abilities,
Due to the numerous tragedies that surrounded his developmental stages, Enryu grew to disdain the fragility of human life and how it affected those still living as well as develop a morbid fascination with the phenomenon. This has manifested in a manic desire to kill deep within Enryu that urges him to take a life almost monthly. This desire visually manifests itself to Enryu and constantly urges him to take the lives of those around him. It takes a great deal of mental fortitude to restrain this desire but without allowing himself to kill, Enryu suffers from a sort of withdrawal that steadily destabilizes various aspects of his life. This can be seen in the shattering of his stoic attitude and a general difficulty focusing on anything for too long. It is because of this sinister passenger that Enryu kills discretely on a monthly basis, to retain his sanity as well as his status as a normal member of society. Despite his distinct lack of morals, Enryu seems to be well-versed in human psychology and displays insightful wisdom at times.
Enryu has always been very quick-witted despite rarely vocalizing his retorts. From a young age he was displayed great maturity, intelligence, and intuitiveness rarely being caught off guard or deceived. His tenure as Lieutenant in the Grim Company was marked with great foresight and authority but his greatest failing was his difficulty trusting in the strength of others. Enryu had a tendency to always compensate for failure and would often over complicate simple decisions by over thinking the repercussions. Despite his rather stoic, manipulative and yet polite personality with a dark sense of humor, Enryu is inwardly conflicted with major insecurities about himself and his mental afflictions due to both his primal desire to murder and his lack of early social development.
Background WIP
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: ______ Organization: N/A Rank: Academy Student Titles: Insignia Style: Brooch Insignia Location: Base of the neck
Chakra Color: Royal Purple Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Medical & Suiton Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control:
:The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends. [Unlimited personal custom jutsu. (Must pick a single field, Nin, Gen, Tai, Fuuin, etc.)]
: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline: [Will be added later] Bloodline Stage: [Will be added later]
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage:
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Shinobi Profession: Profession Base Benefits :(Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.) >
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---------------------------------------------------------------- Skill Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
Suiton: Water Release E Rank
D Rank
Fuinjutsu: Sealing E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline Jutsu
Bloodline Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
Short Sword: [<1>] - [] Small Scroll: [<1>] - [< Right pocket>]
- [Tiny Scroll: [<1>] Brush: [<1>] Small Ink Vial: [<1>]
- [] Shuriken: [<5>]
Please only list elements you can currently use. You should only currently have one.
Other than that, it looks alright, so once you've fixed that detail you're good to go.
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Posted: Tue Nov 19, 2013 5:20 pm
A faint smile
MeiSenkai
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Character Name: Mei Senkai Nicknames: Little Red Age: 14 Birth Date: 02/12 Gender: Female Hair Color: Red Eye Color: Green Height: 5'2 Body Type: 4'11 Distinguishing Features: Mei has a number of tattoos upon her body. Personality: On a normal day Mei is a hot tamale. She is very energetic and always seems to try and occupy herself with something. Mei is very quick with a joke and sarcasm comes as naturally as breathing to her. She enjoys making friends and taking challenges. In a battle Mei always keeps her goal in mind and tries her best to not goof around, but sometimes she forgets that. When her pride is wounded Mei will try to prove herself and will not relent until she has done so.
Background WIP
Family Information Name: Kodoku Senkai Gender: Male Relation: Brother Description: Kodoku is almost the opposite of Mei. He is a very level headed guy with a calm disposition. He looks very similar to her as well. His hair is red and he wears it long, and his eyes are the same shade of green. Kodoku is much taller than his younger sibling, standing at 6'1.
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Village: Organization: Rank: Academy Student Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Tattoo Insignia Location: Left Shoulder
Chakra Color: Scarlet Chakra Level: Medium +2/10 Chakra Points: 17 Chakra Elements: Water Extra Chakra Elements: - Chakra Control: -
Jutsu Crafter: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends. [Unlimited personal custom jutsu for Sealing]
Combo User: The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Heavy Tread: This shinobi's stealth abilities leave something to be desired. Stepping on twigs just comes naturally to them. [-1½ rank stealth]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon:Ink Artistry [Approval] Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: -
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: - Transplant Stage: -
---------------------------------------------------------------- Profession Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession: Sealing Specialist Profession Base Benefits Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own. (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)
Rank Benefits
Genin :
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: Water E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Ink Artistry
Ink Artistry Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
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Pack [Fabric 2 cubic feet] - Back Tiny Scroll: 4 Small Scroll: 2 Medium Vial: 1 Brush: 1
Please edit your jutsu crafter type to "Jutsu Crafter [Fuuinjutsu]" or "Jutsu Crafter [Sealing]", and restore the description to default. Makes it easier to see at a glance, and also is how it was intended to be done. (Someday I'm gonna add code boxes to those threads... Someday...)
The bloodline jutsu section is supposed to just have the extra bits removed, similar to the bloodline section in info. Not a major detail, but worth noting.
Your money has come out wrong. You should have 20 Silver, 5 Copper.
Total - 39 Silver, 95 Copper [3,995] Starting Total - 60 Silver [6,000] Remainder - 20 Silver, 5 Copper [2,005]
I need to memorize the price list... Make this part so much faster.
Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2013 4:03 pm
CryshalFuero [Transfer]
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Character Name: Cryshal Fuero Nicknames: Crystal Age: 17 Birth Date: [5/17] Gender: Female Hair Color: Dark Blonde Eye Color: Purple Height: 5'7" Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Scars on both of her arms, from claws of some type. Personality: Stubborn but focused
Background Born and left in the woods when she was only 6 years old. Since then she has always dreamed to be a great ninja and to find her parents wherever they are. She has had to fight countless wolves, bears, and many other beasts to stay alive. 11 years later she is outfitted with equipment that she has found at various sites around the forest that people have left. Even though she has trained with a sword before she does not know how to fully use it. Now she is on a quest to find a village that will take her in. Outfitted with a raging will, she vows to one day be reunited with her family.
Family Information Unknown Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: -------- Organization: ------ Rank: Genin Titles: (What titles has your character been given? These include positions such as kage, and names, such as “Copycat Kakashi”. Titles are gained through RP. Only autoranks start with any.) Insignia Style: (This is the symbol that identifies you as a member of a ninja group.) Insignia Location: (Where do you wear your insignia?)
Chakra Color: Green Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 25 Chakra Elements: Wind Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. [+1 Reaction Speed]
Speed: Speed type ninja train themselves to move faster in every way, easily outpacing their peers. [+1 Rank Speed]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Weaker Ninjutsu: This shinobi has spent significantly less time than average on their ninjutsu skills, and as a result has become much weaker in their usage than the average shinobi. [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: (Name of your Bloodline, Clan, or Demon; erase what you don't have; provide a link to your bloodline, clan, or Demon, as well as your approval for it.) Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: (Current stage of your bloodline clan or demon; some start as dormant, will say in the bloodline/clan description; provide link to achievement of current stage if applicable. Demons start as Sleeping or Untamed, and follow the Perfect Host system for stages.)
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: (Name of the bloodline/clan transplanted; provide link to transplanting post.) Transplant Stage: (Current stage of transplant; provide link to achievement of current stage.)
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Shinobi Profession: Espionage Profession Base Benefits Master of Shadows: Espionage specialists are trained extensively in matters of stealth, and become able to easily blend into any cover, as well as being able to more easily spot others who are hiding. (+1 Stealth, +1 Perception)
Espionage Training: Espionage specialists are trained in many techniques and jutsu to enhance their abilities, and focus on their use more so than any other shinobi profession. (Able to learn all Espionage Jutsu)
Rank Benefits
Genin Perfect Shadow: A true master of espionage is able to go unhindered into enemy territory unnoticed. The can learn to go unnoticed when notice is unavoidable. This ability allows them to walk even through restricted areas without alerting anyone so long as they do not draw too much attention to themselves. (Reduces enemy perception of user by 1 rank. Must attempt to remain discreet/avoid attention. Can last up to 3 posts with a 1 post cooldown.)
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) [Transfer]
D Rank
First Element: Wind E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank Bunshin no Jutsu [Transfer] Kurayami no Jutsu (Darkness Technique) [Transferable?] Rank: Variable (equal to Assassin's rank up to A) Cost: Variable (costs chakra equal to its rank up to B) Description: This genjutsu can be triggered any time the target's vision is hindered (through the use of a smoke or flash bomb for example). The Genjutsu causes the target to feel as if they have been stricken blind, the other senses are not affected. This effect lasts up to 3 posts or until the target breaks free.
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
(Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.) Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
- [] (To carry large amounts of items, you must have a container.) Item Name: [<# of item>]
---------------------------------------------------------------- Stats: [Transfer?] Strength: D Attack Speed: C Reflex Speed: C Nin/Genjutsu power: D Weapon Proficiency: D Stealth: C Elements: Wind
Old Profile (transferring from)
Cryshal Fuero
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Character Name: Cryshal Fuero Nicknames: Crystal Age: 16 Gender: Female Hair Color: Dark blondish Eye Color: Purple Height: 5’6” Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Scars on arms from claws
Background Born and left in the woods when she was only 3 years old. Since then she has always dreamed to be a great ninja and to find her parents wherever they are. She has had to fight countless wolves, bears, and many other beasts to stay alive. 12 years later she is outfitted with equipment that she has found at various sites around the forest that people have left. Even though she has trained with a sword before she does not know how to fully use it, she has also looted several kunais/shurikens. Now she is on a quest to find a village that will take her in.
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Village: Konohagakure Organization: (Any non-village group your character may be a part of. You will not start as a member of one.) Rank: E – Academy Student Titles: N/A Headband Style/Color: Color: Silver Headband Location: Hands/Gloves
Chakra Color: Green Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 25 Chakra Elements: Wind Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A Learning Information: -1 post when learning Ninjutsu/Taijutsu, +2 posts when learning genjutsu.
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/A Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/A
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Shinobi Profession: Assassin Profession Base Benefit: Speed Shinobi: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja) Weakness: Fewer Wepon/Taijutsu Styles:[description here] (The Assassin can learn only 2 taijutsu/weapon styles, and can only learn up to 1 rank below their current rank for their secondary style, the primary style can be mastered up to their rank)
Rank Benefits
Genin Shadow's Sight: Assassin's spend so much time in the shadow's that many of them gain the ability to see clearly no matter how dark it is. In addition these Assassin's come to realize just how much the average shinobi relies on sight, and more importantly they realize the advantage of taking away that sense. (can see clearly no matter how dark it is, can still be affected by supernatural darkness; gain the Kurayami no Jutsu) Chuunin Hide in Plain Sight: [need a good description] (The Assassin can hide even in areas that would normally afford no cover [such as a desert or well lit hallway]. In addition, once per battle, an Assassin can vanish from sight, even if they are being observed [some kekkai genkai cannot be fooled by this])
Jounin Perfect Shadow: The Assassin has truly become one with the shadows, they can no longer be detected by even the most powerful extrasensory abilities unless they wish it or until they strike. (cannot be detected even by kekkai genkai, higher ranking shinobi are still aware of the Assassin's presence, but they cannot pinpoint their location even if they have a kekkai genkai)
Shinobi Type(s)
Stealth Ninja:Although like the Assassin Type the Stealth ninja is a master of hiding and catching there opponent off guard. These ninja are very hard to notice unless they give an obvious clue (such as puddle on a clear day on the ground). Attacks made by these ninja are done without saying the jutsu's name and the ninja can hide their presence as well. (Ninja of Jounnin and lower won't notice these ninja until they attack, jutsu doesn't have to be recited, just described)
Tactical Ninja: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation. (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
D Rank
First Element: Wind E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank Bunshin no Jutsu Kurayami no Jutsu
D Rank
First Element: Wind E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Name: Cryshal Fuero Nicknames: Crystal Age: 17 Birth Date: [5/17] Gender: Female Hair Color: Dark Blonde Eye Color: Purple Height: 5'7" Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Scars on both of her arms, from claws of some type. Personality: Stubborn but focused
Background Born and left in the woods when she was only 6 years old. Since then she has always dreamed to be a great ninja and to find her parents wherever they are. She has had to fight countless wolves, bears, and many other beasts to stay alive. 11 years later she is outfitted with equipment that she has found at various sites around the forest that people have left. Even though she has trained with a sword before she does not know how to fully use it. Now she is on a quest to find a village that will take her in. Outfitted with a raging will, she vows to one day be reunited with her family.
Family Information Unknown Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: -------- Organization: ------ Rank: Genin Titles: (What titles has your character been given? These include positions such as kage, and names, such as “Copycat Kakashi”. Titles are gained through RP. Only autoranks start with any.) Insignia Style: (This is the symbol that identifies you as a member of a ninja group.) Insignia Location: (Where do you wear your insignia?)
Chakra Color: Green Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 25 Chakra Elements: Wind Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. [+1 Reaction Speed]
Speed: Speed type ninja train themselves to move faster in every way, easily outpacing their peers. [+1 Rank Speed]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Weaker Ninjutsu: This shinobi has spent significantly less time than average on their ninjutsu skills, and as a result has become much weaker in their usage than the average shinobi. [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: (Name of your Bloodline, Clan, or Demon; erase what you don't have; provide a link to your bloodline, clan, or Demon, as well as your approval for it.) Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: (Current stage of your bloodline clan or demon; some start as dormant, will say in the bloodline/clan description; provide link to achievement of current stage if applicable. Demons start as Sleeping or Untamed, and follow the Perfect Host system for stages.)
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: (Name of the bloodline/clan transplanted; provide link to transplanting post.) Transplant Stage: (Current stage of transplant; provide link to achievement of current stage.)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Profession Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession: Espionage Profession Base Benefits Master of Shadows: Espionage specialists are trained extensively in matters of stealth, and become able to easily blend into any cover, as well as being able to more easily spot others who are hiding. (+1 Stealth, +1 Perception)
Espionage Training: Espionage specialists are trained in many techniques and jutsu to enhance their abilities, and focus on their use more so than any other shinobi profession. (Able to learn all Espionage Jutsu)
Rank Benefits
Genin Perfect Shadow: A true master of espionage is able to go unhindered into enemy territory unnoticed. The can learn to go unnoticed when notice is unavoidable. This ability allows them to walk even through restricted areas without alerting anyone so long as they do not draw too much attention to themselves. (Reduces enemy perception of user by 1 rank. Must attempt to remain discreet/avoid attention. Can last up to 3 posts with a 1 post cooldown.)
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) [Transfer]
D Rank
First Element: Wind E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank Bunshin no Jutsu [Transfer] Kurayami no Jutsu (Darkness Technique) [Transferable?] Rank: Variable (equal to Assassin's rank up to A) Cost: Variable (costs chakra equal to its rank up to B) Description: This genjutsu can be triggered any time the target's vision is hindered (through the use of a smoke or flash bomb for example). The Genjutsu causes the target to feel as if they have been stricken blind, the other senses are not affected. This effect lasts up to 3 posts or until the target breaks free.
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
(Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.) Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
- [] (To carry large amounts of items, you must have a container.) Item Name: [<# of item>]
---------------------------------------------------------------- Stats: [Transfer?] Strength: D Attack Speed: C Reflex Speed: C Nin/Genjutsu power: D Weapon Proficiency: D Stealth: C Elements: Wind
We're currently having any genin transfers start in the academy instead. It allows us a lot of potential for early character development and simple stories while people adjust to the new world. So, please adjust the profile to Academy level.
The insignia style and location are where you wear your village identifier/symbol. Similar to the headbands from before, but we've ditched the headband being the basic, for stealth reasons. You don't technically have one yet as a student, but it's required.
If you don't plan on applying for a bloodline later, just remove those segments from the profile. This is also a good place to note, you should remove all the bracketed instructions even in places you don't fill out.
For reference while editing, students don't get any rank benefits yet.
As an academy student you also don't start with any jutsu. To compensate, you'll probably learn way more in the academy anyways, for free.
And no, you wouldn't have been allowed to keep "Kurayami" anyways, because that jutsu doesn't exist.
Now, while you don't get to transfer your jutsu or MP, you do get to transfer some starter cash according to how much MP you'd have from the missions you've done. For you, that's, I believe, one D rank, and one C rank, which allows you, if you wish, to start with an extra 90 silver, for a total of 1G 50S.
It is highly recommended that you use your starting cash now to buy some starter equipment, since many things will be unavailable for awhile until they are "Unlocked" in the RP.
(Your "Stats" are determined from your profile. They don't transfer, because they don't, technically, exist.)
Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2013 11:57 am
CryshalFuero
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Character Name: Cryshal Fuero Nicknames: Crystal Age: 17 Birth Date: [5/17] Gender: Female Hair Color: Dark Blonde Eye Color: Purple Height: 5'7" Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Scars on both of her arms, from claws of some type. Personality: Stubborn but focused
Background Born and left in the woods when she was only 6 years old. Since then she has always dreamed to be a great ninja and to find her parents wherever they are. She has had to fight countless wolves, bears, and many other beasts to stay alive. 11 years later she is outfitted with equipment that she has found at various sites around the forest that people have left. Even though she has trained with a sword before she does not know how to fully use it. Now she is on a quest to find a village that will take her in. Outfitted with a raging will, she vows to one day be reunited with her family.
Family Information Unknown Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: -------- Organization: ------ Rank: Academy Student Titles: (What titles has your character been given? These include positions such as kage, and names, such as “Copycat Kakashi”. Titles are gained through RP. Only autoranks start with any.) Insignia Style: Fitted Arm Band Insignia Location: Right Arm
Chakra Color: Green Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Wind Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. [+1 Reaction Speed]
Speed: Speed type ninja train themselves to move faster in every way, easily outpacing their peers. [+1 Rank Speed]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Weaker Ninjutsu: This shinobi has spent significantly less time than average on their ninjutsu skills, and as a result has become much weaker in their usage than the average shinobi. [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]
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Shinobi Profession: Espionage Profession Base Benefits Master of Shadows: Espionage specialists are trained extensively in matters of stealth, and become able to easily blend into any cover, as well as being able to more easily spot others who are hiding. (+1 Stealth, +1 Perception)
Espionage Training: Espionage specialists are trained in many techniques and jutsu to enhance their abilities, and focus on their use more so than any other shinobi profession. (Able to learn all Espionage Jutsu)
Rank Benefits
Genin Perfect Shadow: A true master of espionage is able to go unhindered into enemy territory unnoticed. The can learn to go unnoticed when notice is unavoidable. This ability allows them to walk even through restricted areas without alerting anyone so long as they do not draw too much attention to themselves. (Reduces enemy perception of user by 1 rank. Must attempt to remain discreet/avoid attention. Can last up to 3 posts with a 1 post cooldown.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: Wind E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
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