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Sorry kept reading things wrongly in my mind ( > w < ) I personally see nothing wrong. I approve
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 2:03 am
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Full Name: Kuchiki Iroha
Nickname: Iri-chan
True Age: 444
Age Appeared: 27
Birthdate: Aug 4
Gender: F
Ethnicity: Japanese
Blood Type: A+
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 60kg
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Blonde
Life View: "Personal is not the same as important"
Personality: Iroha is a strange mix of extrovert and introvert, depending on what her mood is. In this way she is the perfect mirror of he cats she absolutely adores above all else.
When in her more introspective moods, she is aloof, and snobbish, keeping her distance from any and everyone.
When in her 'fangirl' mood, however, she is completely capable of acting the 'Senbonzakura' and not only making a complete dunce of herself, but also have an inane amount of fun in doing so.
Despite her apparent disinterest in anyone and everyone other than herself, she is strongly aware of 'rights', and dislikes anyone taking advantage of their power or position.
Likes:
× cats
× bows
× frills
× kawaii things
Dislikes
× squirrels
× mud
× rain
× rain and mud
× boring people
Division: 06
Rank: Captain
Side: Simply just doesn't care...This isn't the point, in her opinion...
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Iroha was taken in to the Kuchiki family at a young age, when her predecessor, took her in. She was accepted into the family at such a young age, she doesn't even remember when this happened. She was adopted as the child of the head of the family and is the current heir to this Noble House.
All this in mind, Iroha is, naturally, snobbish, aristocratic, and not above putting herself above everyone else.
Iroha was, however, known even as a child to be dangerous when bored. She often played rather nasty tricks on the family servants (even if her mother made her appologise afterwards...), and even on her own parents, just to get more attention than she already did.
It would be nice to say that Iroha eventually grew up and out of these childish pranks, but we'd be leaving reality, and at a tangent. Iroha still adores playing pranks, even, or especially, on her fellow captains, and is fully capable of spending days on end to plot and plan one of these extravangant jokes.
As horribly childish as she is sometimes, Iroha has also become quite the stateswoman, and is proficient in acting the high aristocrate when the mood takes her. Her veneer is generally that of a cool, clam, and composed captain of the thirteen squad guards....the inner workings of her brain, however, are something else entirely....
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Reiatsu Color: Gold
Reiryoku Level: Great
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Advanced
• Air Dash: Expert
• Shunpo: Master
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Hakuda
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Master
• Kendo: Expert
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Expert
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Advanced
• Jumping: Advanced
Strengths:
• Quick-thinking
• Creativity
Weaknesses:
• Stubborness
• Hot temper
Fears:
• Squirrels
• Mud
• Rain
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Neko no Tsume
Zanpakuto Location: At the belt on my hips
Zanpakuto Appearance: Cat's Claw
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.:
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana
Zanpakuto Element: Fire
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: Unari
Shikai Incantation: Unari Tsume! (Growl claw!)
Shikai Description:
In shikai, Iroha's Neko no Tsume vanishes into thin air, or appears to do so. It can be seen, if one looks closely (not too closely...) as an golden outline in the air, only just visible if one sees it from a certain angle in a certain light.
Iroha generally seems to be holding the grip of a non-existant katana at this stage.
The blade, in reality, becomes nothing more than Iroha's own will to kill. The more she becomes intent on killing her opponent, the better outlined the katana blade is. The blade never appears fully, but the outline becomes clearer. As it does, the force of the blade becomes stronger.
Shikai Ability:
1. Unari hi:
Here the blade of Iroha's katana becomes a red-hot cutting edge that will set fire to anything it touches.
2. Hikida
In this technique, Iroha can lengthen the outline of her zanpaktou, lengthening its span. The cost is that it looses from its width, so she can only do this to a range of 4 metres.
3. Youshiki
Here Iroha is able to manipulate the form of the outlined katana to practically any shape she so wishes. This could be that of a tentacled serpent, or a net, or lance. These may be stationary forms, or they may move.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name: Sabaku
Bankai Incantation: Sabure no Sabaku! (Sands of the Desert!)
Bankai Description:
In this release, Iroha's zanpaktou blade 'sheds' its 'invisibility' and becomes visible again. The 'shed invisibility' however drops from the blade like a golden sheath to the ground where it disintegrates into a heap of sand.
This sand then begins to moves and swirl around Iroha.
Bankai Ability:
1. Ikoi
With this ability the sands called into existence by Iroha's banaki release 'become alive', froming a 'sand army' of soldiers similar to the clay army. These sand-begotten soldiers number 44, and are armed with lances. These sand-men are immune to electrical, heat, and water attacks. They do, however, disintegrate when shot at with a kido at or above level 20. When this happen, Iroha is unable to revive that soldier, unless she locks her bankai, then releases it again.
2. -NN-
Here Iroha's sands take on the form of a giant dragon, which moves in complete accordance to her will. This creature is capable of shooting fire from it's mouth and taking to the air. It brandishes huge talons on all four of its feet, and a tail as lone as its own body, which is about 10 meters long.
3. Sandstorm
In this attack, Iroha can generate a sandstorm with winds up to a speed of 100 klicks an hour and lasting up to a full hour. Anyone familiar with what a sandstorm can do, knows this is not child's play...
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▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells
▬▬┤|Hado Spells
• { start with none unless told otherwise }
▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells
• { start with none unless told otherwise }
▬▬┤|Other Spells
• { Captains Only, If not a captain please remove. This section is for kido only they can learn which is listed in the, Learning Kido topic. }
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 12:06 am
Sorry about that Your Reiryoku Level = Great
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 8:49 am
Diablo en Musica 92 Sorry about that Your Reiryoku Level = Great Thanks! ^_^ I'll finish it up asap!! smile HUGZ!
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:04 am
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Full Name: Honō Raion
Nickname: Tanki
True Age: Four Hundred Seventy-Three
Age Appeared: Twenty-Six
Birthdate: June Ninth
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Japanese
Blood Type: A+
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Height: 71 in.
Weight: 133 lbs.
Eye Color: Crimson
Hair Color: Crimson
Life View: "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them."
Personality: Honō isn't lazy, nor is he unmotivated, but he lacks the desire to pursue greatness. He is happy just being how he is. Despite the skills he knows he could achieve, he just allows things to fall into place and he goes with the flow. He is honorable and trusting. He would lay down his life for a friend and would never ask for the favor in return.
Normally, Honō is quiet when casual. He may take value in having friends, but he was never one to be very social. He will exchange a few words but he'd rather just go chew a stick of gum while staring at the sky.
Likes:
✖ Serenity
✖ Relaxation
Dislikes
✖ Crowds
✖ Strong Wind
Division: Squad 2 Nibantai 二番隊
Rank: Unseated
Side: Seireitei
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Honō does not remember much from when he was alive. He mostly just remembers starting his life in the Rukongu District. He was different from a lot of the other souls there, though. He had the ability to use spiritual power and that eventually attracted the attention of a soul reaper. He was a member of Squad 2 and was also part of the Stealth Force. He adopted Honō as his own son and then taught him how to control his spiritual powers enough so that he could go to the Soul Reaper Academy to train and eventually become a member of the 13 Court Guard Squads.
After nearly one hundred years in the academy, Honō was allowed to join Squad 2 and would be disappointed to know that his adoptive father was retiring once this happened. His father told him that he would have to carry on his legacy and become a great Soul Reaper. Now, Honō's goal is simply to be like his father and always seek justice in the best way he sees fit.
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Reiatsu Color: Crimson
Reiryoku Level: Weak
Known Foot Techniques:
✖ Air Walk: Practitioner Level
✖ Air Dash: Practitioner Level
✖ Shunpo: No Skills
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
✖ Hakuda: Practitioner Level
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Known Swordsmanship Styles:
✖ Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level
✖ Kendo: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
✖ Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
✖ Dashing: Practitioner Level
✖ Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths:
✖ Agility
✖ High Spiritual Pressure
Weaknesses:
✖ Wind Elemental Zanpakuto
✖ Low Physical Strength
Fears:
✖ Death Without Honor
✖ Being Denied To Join Stealth Force
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Infinitiburēdo [インフィニティブレード; Infinity Blades]
Zanpakuto Location: Sheathed along left hip
Zanpakuto Appearance: Infinitiburēdo
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Infinitiburēdo
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana
Zanpakuto Element: Fire
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: Infinitiburēdo [インフィニティブレード; Infinity Blades]
Shikai Incantation:
Long: "Become the inferno of infinity! Blaze, Infinitiburēdo!"
Short: "Blaze, Infinitiburēdo!"
Shikai Description: [x] :: The released form of Infinitiburēdo does not change in size at all and the shape of the hilt and handle remain far from drastically changed. The blade remains the length of four feet in length and is the average katana width. However, it changes the cosmetic appearance of the blade to become black along the blunt edge and crimson along the sharpened blade.
Of course, the appearance o the blade is not the only difference. The main ability of this Shikai is that of illusion. The blade emits a powerful heat that swirls and covers the whole blade. When the blade moves, five apparitions of the weapon follow it. However, each one of these apparitions have a physical manifestation. Upon receiving a cut, the apparitions will follow the blade and fold back onto it. As they follow through that cut, they deliver another cut for each blade, totaling in an additional five cuts.
Shikai Ability:
Gen'ei no Suteppu [幻影のステップ; Apparition Step] :: When an attack is coming and Honō can see it, he can push himself to the side with extreme speed and use the heat from his weapon to form an apparition of himself. The apparition will disappear after taking the hit or after three seconds. The max distance that Honō can move from that spot is twenty meters. [ 1 post cooldown ]
Neppa [熱波; Heat Wave] :: If Honō thrusts his blade rather than slashing with it, he can send out a blast of superheated air. The blast, however, does not just create a hot environment for the target. After it hits directly, the five apparitions of the weapon will thrust into the target, all aimed just around the sternum. [ 2 post cooldown ]
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name:
Bankai Incantation:
Bankai Description:
Bankai Ability:
[ Has not yet obtained Bankai ]
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▬▬┤|Hado Spells
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 11:30 am
Are you sure that you don't want an auto-rank?
- Need Cool down for both Shikai abilities
Approved unless you want an auto-rank
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 1:37 pm
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Full Name: Mathew Underwound
Nickname: stalker, wolf
True Age: 19
Age Appeared: 17
Birthdate: 13 October
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: German
Blood Type:B-
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 174cm
Weight: 63 KG
Eye Color: turquois
Hair Color: blond
Life View: “we are nothing but pieces in this game of life, we all want to be kings but will never be more than a pawn”
Personality: Mathew is a quiet, calm, collected young fellow and overall quite friendly if you gain his trust what is not an easy task. Although he easily distrusts anyone that doesn’t mean he is violent towards others, he just don’t care about them. he likes to stalk his target to gain good information about it before he engages . you can often find him at night staring at the moon. Even if he’s on the neutral side he tends to lean with his actions towards the seretei due to what he likes to call “sharing a common goal”
Likes:
Chess
Forrest
The moon
Dogs
Silence
The wind
His mother
Dislikes
noisy people
eating fish
big crowds
being the centre of attention
lazy people
ignorance
big boobs
Side: Neutral
Rank:
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Mathew grew up in a small village near a giant forest. He lived there with his parents and younger sister. Most of his childhood he spend in the forest climbing in the trees and observing the wild life that lived there. His favourite animal in the forest was a young lone wolf who sometimes came to the village to steal some food. Mathew often sneaked out of the house to see this wolf and gave it the name ‘Mondlicht’ after the moon that shines every time he met it.
He discovered his quincy powers one night when he had sneaked out of bed to go see the wolf again. As he walked through the quiet town towards where he always met the wolf he heard a strange howl. Before he knew a hollow had appeared not far from him. Mathew got startled and fell on his but where he stayed, frozen in fear, as the hollow came closer to him. Then suddenly the hollow dissolved into ash and Mathew heard a familiar voice. Mathew then saw his mother at the end of the road holding a light blue bow that vanished as she ran towards Mathew asking if he was ok. As he asked his mother what that thing was and about that blue bow his mother smiled and just said that she’s going to explain it when they get home. When they got home Mathew’s mother explained everything about the hollows, quincies and that he also was a quincy. The next day Mathew asked his mother if she would teach him how to use his quincy powers to which she agreed, but he had to promise to not tell anyone, not even his father or his sister. For the next year Mathew trained hard with his mother in the forest in secrecy until he got adept to his quincy powers. As a sign of him completing the training his mother gave Mathew his own quincy cross, a ring that is in the family for generations now.
He came to japan with his family about a year ago after his father got a new job, his father works for a big pharmaceutical company and has been appointed as the new manager of the companies regional office in Karakura town. He still often trains his quinsy art as well hunt for the hollows that invade karakura town.
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Reiatsu Color: lime green
Reiryoku Level: Weak
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level
• Hirenkyaku: No Skills
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Grappling: Practitioner Level
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Known Weapon Styles:
• Quincy Archery: Practitioner Level
• Quincy Marksmanship: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reishi Absorption: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level
• Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths:
• strategic thinker
• Dexterous
Weaknesses:
• trusting others
• close range fighting
Fears:
• small spaces
• forest fires
•his mother angry
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▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: The Bow
Cross Name: schwarzarbeiten
Cross Location: left ring finger
Cross Appearance: the ring
Weapon Type: Bow
Cross Type: ring
▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: True Weapon
True Weapon Name: Stechen Schawrbeiten
True Weapon Type: sub machine gun
True Weapon Description: a twin pair of flexible SMG’s. who Mathew dual wield with both hands. as Mathew gathers reishi the ammo compartments on the sides of the guns start to get a greenish glow that becomes brighter the more reishi he gathers. At low level the guns can only fire single shots but as Mathew gets more advanced with them he will be able to fire in small bursts (of up to 10 bullets per burst). its bullets are small lime green spherical bullets that are faster than his arrow but causes less damage at impact which it covers by a higher rate of fire than a bow.
True Weapon Ability:
1 razz anzerbrechend
shoots a projectile(s) covered with a layer of reishi that forms a hollow tip on the projectile. At impact the hollow point cover takes the hit of the impact letting the initial projectile in/through the defence at its full power. Strength and chance of bursting through defence depends on users/ targets strength
2:abprallen
The user shoots a projectile designed to bounce off up to 5 times off of any environment or until it hits target. The projectile loses a little bit of power each time it ricochet off of something.
3:Cluster-kugel
Mathew shoots a bullet that will scatter after approximately 3 meter into several smaller bullets (around 15 bullets) that will advance towards the target as normal.
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▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: Quincy: Vollständig ( Quincy:Complete )
Vollständig Name: not yet discovered
Vollständig Enchantments:
Vollständig Description:
Vollständig Ability:
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▬▬┤|Your Technique List
▬▬┤|Quincy Techniques
• Basic Blut
• Blut Vene
• Blut Arterie
• Ransōtengai
• Keen Eyes
• Lock On
▬▬┤|Ginto Techniques
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 3:50 pm
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Full Name: Viola Sinnett Wraith
Nickname: Vi.
True Age: Two Hundered & Sixteen
Age Appeared: Early 20s, late teens
Birthdate: November Nineteenth [19/11]
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: English
Blood Type: AB
Sexuality: Heterosexual.
Height: Five Foot - Six [5"6]
Weight: One Hundered - Twenty One [121bs]
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Blond
Life View: "Don't waste time waiting for things to happen, because they never will unless you make them happen. Never give yourself a reason to regret, because then it just makes it harder to live with yourself."
Personality:
Viola, initially, is a girl with a weak and battered heart. Despite her dark past, Viola remains with a broken heart rather than a broken psyche, in which the latter should be the case in her situation. But under her sweet smile is a depressed, broken little girl. She has pushed past her brooding past and blossomed as a different person with many facets, she'll keep you guessing with her whimsical ways. Viola is fairly quiet, but she emits a strong, confident vibe. She isn't shy, however, just not so keen on invoking conversation. However if approached she is actually quite charming and witty, a good conversationalist, but she isn't fake about it. She's genuine most of the time, a naturally charismatic girl. She can be flirtatious, but she naturally exerts these qualities without the excessive flirting, her beauty and manner of speaking is usually enough to trap the attention of any man should she wish to do so. She has a relatively long fuse, not quick to anger, but she's quite impatient. She hates waiting around for people to make decisions, and is often eager and motivated when presented with a new challenge. She's usually very hard on herself, pushing herself to her limits and beyond, extremely tenacious. Much more raw emotion comes through her when faced with a personal challenge, but she tried to comport herself as much as possible. She puts her whole heart into everything, determined not to waste a single moment or have to live with regret. She's also quite passionate, whether it be in something she's reading, an assignment, or a person.
She's rather good at showcasing just the right amount of emotion, not too much that would appear her over zealous and annoying, but not monotonous and boring either. She's a perfectionist, coming from a minor case of OCD. She's easily made smile and giggle, but infact she dreads rejection. She shields herself so her emotions shouldn't have to be penetrated, she already suffers from a broken heart and is afraid of getting hurt again or rejected. She speaks with a light english accent without the use of any colloquialisms or slang, at least not very often. She's very graceful, likeable. She can often be found reading, and it's usually something to do with history, poetry or perhaps the study of another language. She often looks like she is in a daze, she usually gets into her head and blocks out everything going on around her, but she's still aware of her surroundings. However, she's developed her skills to pay attention to a much greater level than from what they were when she was little. She's very intelligent, an expert at reading body language or even predicting what someone may be thinking, but she herself is hard to predict. In battle, she becomes alot more focused, determined and analytical. She focuses on her enemy's movement, and is constantly devising strategies. She doesn't respond to threats of snarky comments, she just shrugs it off. She becomes alot more austere and is capable of demonstrating leadership qualities. Overall she's trustworthy, reliable and loyal, once she gives you her word she's capable of following through nicely and effectively.
Likes:
- Soft Breezes
- Poetry
- Reading
- Literature
- Flowers
- Water
- Moonlight
Dislikes
- Daytime
- Hot weather
- Arrogance
- Indecisiveness
- Memories
Division: Six
Rank: Unseated
Side: Seireitei
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Viola's life alive was not one you'd call pleasant. Unfortunately for her, she remembers every aspect of being alive as if it happened only a few days ago. She grew up in a wealthy family from England, and for life as a young girl it was perfect. She had loving parents who doted on her greatly, they loved her with all their hearts. Of course, this irritated her older sister Vivian four years her senior. Of course, the younger child gets all the attention. She was ignorant of the real world, and spent most of her time inside her mind where wild imaginations roamed wild in a most vivacious wonderland, dazing out, never paying attention. But that was because her mind was in a different place entirely. Unbeknownst to her doting parents, Viola was granted with the ability to see spirits. She would often befriend these spirits that wandered around her Victorian castle and become close friends with them, finding them much more interesting than the living. But as she got older she only got more detached from those who walk the earth alive, and delved deeper and deeper into the world of the dead. Alot of them lived in their home, it seemed. The house had been in their family for centuries and were unreluctant to leave such a magnificent home. So they befriended the bright, clairvoyant, beautiful little Viola.
Her parents began to worry. What had become of their little girl? Dressed so exquisitely in her pearly white petticoats, lacey black stockings and her shining dolly black shoes. She had such beautiful golden curls and glimmering blue eyes, porcelain skin and a glowing smile with only one, perfect dimple. Yes, she was a beauty alright, but her lack of interest with people deeply concerned her parents. She was always happy, however, humming a mild tune as she skipped down the macabre hallways to find her ghostly friends who adored her. She would have tea parties with them, along with some of her favorite toys and her cat, and spare seats for her spirit friends. She would pour them their tea and chirp away happily, while they just smiled at her. Her parents would watch her as she did so. Little Viola, nine years old, they had feared she had gone insane! Surely she knew no one was there? They suspected she was speaking to her stuffed rabbit Camilla, or her black and white cat with the heterochromic eyes named Ichabod. It was normal, of course. For a young girl. But she never directed her conversation at them, it was at the empty seats. She only addressed her other guests to ask them if they would care for more sugar, which of course they always graciously accepted.
Vivian was positively thrilled. Her little sister, insane! Speaking to empty chairs! It was the perfect opportunity for her to finally get all the attention she deserved and craved. However due to Viola's "sickness" her parents showed even greater concern than before for their precious daughter. Vivian was becoming sick with anger and frustration. That little brat! Who does she think she is? Vivian was the perfect manipulator, she knew how to get what she wanted when she wanted it, and now she wanted her little sister banished from her sight, off to suffer some terrible fate like she deserved. So one night, her parents sat the young girl down as so naively suggested by Vivian, perhaps they could figure out what's wrong? Whatever the child will say will definitely scare her mother and father even more. With a smile on her face, Viola explained she had made some new ghost friends, who told her all these stories of the realm of the dead which fascinated her. Her mother stroked her hair, and told her there was no such things as ghosts. Viola was determined to prove her case. She said they were real, they are nice to her and speak with her, and they have tea parties with her. Her mother and father frowned while Vivian just smirked. My, this was too good to be true!
Her parents, Aloisius and Cordelia didn't know what to do with her. They loved their precious daughter to much to send her away, but they feared she was mentally corrupted in ways that could not be fixed. So Vivian sweetly suggested that it was for her own good, and she needed help. She wouldn't let them down like Viola would. After much consideration they decided to send her away. Vivian watched from the top story window with a smile as little nine year old Viola with the beautiful golden curls and the blue eyes that glittered with tears as she screamed and screamed. She was being dragged away, screaming for her mother and father as they stared at the ground outside their home. The man who dragged her away, placed her in the back of a carriage and told her parents she would be carted her off to one of the most innovative, morally experimental, ingeniously directed, insane asylum for the mentally ill little girl. She would be healed in no time, or so they all believed. Her mother was ravaged with regret. They hated that their youngest, their sweet, innocent little Viola was plagued with insanity... What did they do to deserve such horror! Little did they know that their darling daughter could not be cured.
Viola spent ten years in the asylum. They didn't deal with many cases who claimed to see spirits and ghosts, but to them it was totally insane. This little girl has been claimed by madness and uncertainty. Despite her crys and pleads, they still performed horrible procedures on her to decide whether the case was a mental or a physical deficit, if her brain was missing an important part or perhaps damaged some how. They performed psychotherapy, horrible physical procedures both for her body and mind. By the time the girl was fourteen she had changed drastically. She had become cold and dark. Her spirit friends had deserted her, unwilling to leave the refuge of grand home. They'd wait for another special girl to come along, they no longer cared for her and she was soon forgotten. However, one did follow. However, she did not interact with her nor did she even make her presence aware to Viola. Viola was becoming more aggressive and unstable. She would attack therapists, throw things, and even attempted to kill her personal doctor more than once with a filthy syringe. The spirit felt bad for her, this was not the way such a special girl should live her life. She knew that Viola had a heart of gold, but her supposed corruption only caused her to become corrupt in the end. Viola hated it. She missed her parents, desperately. Despite what they did to her, she still loved them. Four more years passed, after more intense therapy to deal with her aggressive and depression. She wasn't scheduled for release anytime soon, she only got worse and worse. By the time she hit nineteen she managed to calm down a bit, overcome by total depression. She didn't speak, didn't use violence, and did nothing but sit and stare endlessly. So, in the end they decided she was never going to get better so they thought it best to end her life. They informed her mother and father who were horrified, her claims of insanity proven true by her bellicose behavior. So, she was sentenced to death by lethal injection in 1796. She couldn't have been happier in her whole, miserable life.
Once the procedure was over, she woke up. But no, she wasn't in her body... She was trapped, on the plain of existence. She was angry and frustrated at her fate. Why is she still here? She should not be! As she pondered the use of her insignificant moribund life she was approached by the spirit, who gently took her hand and told her of what was to happen. Immediately the spirit brought warmth into the young girls eyes. She was going to a better place. She was then approached by a Shinigami, one of whom had been friends with the spirit and asked the Shinigami to give her a better life, to take her to the Soul Society. She was then taken there, leaving the state of the living forever. Her dream, it was. Ever since she was a little girl. Once she got there, she pushed her human life to the back of her mind, locked away forever to never be spoken. She forged her own new character, and trained to become a Shinigami, the way fate intended.
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Reiatsu Color: Light Blue
Reiryoku Level: Weak
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level
• Shunpo: No Skills
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Practitioner Level
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Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level
• Kendo: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level
• Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths:
• Intelliect- Viola is significantly more intelligent than most, given her quick ability to think and strategize effectively.
• Twinkle Toes- Viola is fairly light on her feet, she moves with languid grace almost inaudibly. She's quite quick on her feet also.
Weaknesses:
• Perfectionist- She has a tendancy to over think every situation and corrects things to her own personal standards. She is meticulous in that regard, perpetually finiky.
• Fire based Zanpakuto.
Fears:
• Bright, smouldering fires.
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Todoroku no Tenshi
Zanpakuto Location: Fitted sheath along her back.
Zanpakuto Appearance: Todoroku no Tenshi
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: Todoroku no Tenshi
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana.
Zanpakuto Element: Wind (Storm)
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: Todoroku no Tenshi
Shikai Incantation:
LV- The winds howl and call your name, the skies crack in envy and despair. Bless upon them the wrath of your true indignant nature, of the angels and the skies above in your blissful rage. Release the Wrath of Heaven, Tenshi!
SV- Release the Wrath of Heaven, Tenshi!
Shikai Description: This is how it changes. Even though the overall shape and height has changed, the blade immediately draws and conducts lightning from the air and the wind which swirls around the blade in a miniature tornado. The air pressure shifts due to the need to draw lightning from the air.
Shikai Ability:
Shield of the Underworld- Using the swirling tornado around the blade, Tenshi can protect Viola by extending the range of fierce wind power around her in a shield (shaped like wings), and should anyone touch this shield they would be sliced by the raw power of the wind. (Lasts one post, two post cooldown) Conversely, should anyone try to touch Tenshi in Shikai state, the roaring wind swirling around the blade would immediately slice the hand of those whom tried touch her automatically. Capable of delivering medium to critical slices.
Ravenous Whirlwind - Should Viola swirl Tenshi around in the air, the sky would crack open and Tenshi would draw more lightning and wind from the sky which then begins to form storm clouds around her, which would be dispersed throughout the area ranging from about five to seven meters. Should one be caught inside the clouds, they won't be able to see anything at all. Then, she is able to cast sprays of lightning throughout the cloud rapidly, electrocuting those inside unless they escape. (Three post cooldown) Capable of knocking out an opponent if taken the full brunt of the attack toward those weaker, but becomes less effective the stronger the opponent, almost totally useless against captains at her current level.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name: N/A
Bankai Incantation: N/A
Bankai Description: N/A
Bankai Ability: N/A
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▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells
▬▬┤|Hado Spells
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▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 7:04 pm
Okay,
- Please fix the image your of cross on the first part of your Weapon Data
- There seems to be a mess up in the layout, if that I my doing I can fix it.
- You need to remove all the things in the bracket.
- If your profile is not finished please use the Member Workstation before you post up here.
Okay,
- Your first Shikai ability needs to be changed, it is terms way to much. However I like the idea, but the bit is a bit much.
- Your second attack needs to add in the fact of people's Reiryoku level compared to yours. Individuals of say Captain level would not be as affected or barely affected by your weapon at your current level.
Other than that you have a wonderful profile, fix these issues and I will look it over gain.
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 10:59 pm
Diablo en Musica 92 - There seems to be a mess up in the layout, if that I my doing I can fix it. what seems to be the mess up then?? as i only fill in the profile provided at the "character creation" section. i'm not sure if its my mistake or the mess up was already in the profile
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 11:04 pm
at the bottom at the Technique area the size bb code seem to be messed up 9 O 3 O )
I will check it is me for now I say if you can fix it that would be nice that way you don't have to redo to much. If not I can fix it for you.
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 11:06 pm
Diablo en Musica 92
at the bottom at the Technique area the size bb code seem to be messed up 9 O 3 O )
I will check it is me for now I say if you can fix it that would be nice that way you don't have to redo to much. If not I can fix it for you.i will fix it when i also fix the other sloppiness's i made in the profile (those brackets and the url for the ring) edit: done with the fixing,
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 11:16 pm
Approved, also if you come up with more attacks late for your True Weapon, there is a creation & Approval area for that.
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 11:23 pm
Diablo en Musica 92
Approved, also if you come up with more attacks late for your True Weapon, there is a creation & Approval area for that. thanks. an i will keep in mind. so where do i post my character now? (in which forum?)
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2012 11:29 pm
All approved character get posted in the Character Storage Sub-Form. Simply make a new topic to your liking and re-post your profile.
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