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PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 12:04 pm


Kirai - Okay, I am going to try and not be mean about this(which is harder for me then you think.) But when I see this profile in terms of power, I am looking at something closer to a third seat. You have WIND, you can play so much with that. As your profile stands, it just doesn't make the fit for a captain position. It is like watching a son try and put on his dad's shoes then clip clop around the house clumsily. If you need help, ask any of our GM's here, maybe endorph in particular. I know he is pretty crazy when it comes to wind types. He can probably give you some pointers towards how to better trick out your character. I am going to set you as pending for now.

Genesis - Is it really needed to have Haseo as a bankai appearance? I know we don't have anything against having cross over pic's, but it's something of a peeve of mine. One stipulation, the vibration shattering ability. Keep that first kenpachi and ichigo fight in mind, you will not be able to shatter every one's weapon if the yare of the same or greater in terms of level.
Other then that, approved.

Alex - You do realize anyone with Yarn or Catnip instantly wins right, or has a water bottle, or a dog, Approved though.

Shazzles - Sotaicho or not, while having an age to support it and even stating that she rarely uses them, I can't let you through with simply 1-99 of the kidou arts.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 12:26 pm


@Tanimeso- As far as the pic goes it just fits real well that's all. I've looked for a replacement but....*shrug*. I know there are limits with the ability but it works in the same capacity as Wakisabe and the mass increase. Reiatsu is still the control factor. The shattering occurs more as a result of an off guard attack or prolonged fight. Also should I post my other profile for approval since this one and my other are known as approved by Endorph. I cool with it either way.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 7:58 pm


@Tanimeso - the wind power isn't meant to be his focal point the blade he was given is supposed to help him use kidou in a combat situation effective by making him less worried about using the full incantations on his kidou. He is very very skilled at combining and using kidou. Also their are alot more attacks with wind he can do while not trying to. I know wind is the most flexible element. It's my favorite in the whole world. He uses his wind defensively. There is at least one thing i know i can add to his bankai that i didn't want to but i guess i will.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:16 am


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@Tanimeso- As far as the pic goes it just fits real well that's all. I've looked for a replacement but....*shrug*. I know there are limits with the ability but it works in the same capacity as Wakisabe and the mass increase. Reiatsu is still the control factor. The shattering occurs more as a result of an off guard attack or prolonged fight. Also should I post my other profile for approval since this one and my other are known as approved by Endorph. I cool with it either way.


It's best to send it through here anyway since i have not gotten the chance to see it.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:10 pm


Alright, I'll edit it when I can.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:52 am


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@Tanimeso- As far as the pic goes it just fits real well that's all. I've looked for a replacement but....*shrug*. I know there are limits with the ability but it works in the same capacity as Wakisabe and the mass increase. Reiatsu is still the control factor. The shattering occurs more as a result of an off guard attack or prolonged fight. Also should I post my other profile for approval since this one and my other are known as approved by Endorph. I cool with it either way.


It's best to send it through here anyway since i have not gotten the chance to see it.



No sweat.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 8:25 am


Thaide - Ashton - Okay, this goes for the both of you. I need descriptions and dimensions of what your shikai release is. Really honestly. Thaide, you mention yours in passing, but a Machete LIKE appearance isn't going to really cut it. Ashton, I am sorry, but i can't make heads or tails of your description. Once those are done well, we will see about letting them through for you at least Thaide.

Ashton - Okay, I am sorry, but I cannot see this profile filling in the shoes for a Captain, MAYBE a vice but more likely a lower seat. It's just too 'light' It seems as though you hurried through this just to grab at a captain position before anyone else did. I ask that you go back and try to expand on what you have, or maybe consider aiming for a lower position.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:26 am


Can you tell me what it is about the shikai that confuses you? Also what makes my character unfit for the captain's position and what is light about the profile? I wanted to get a clearer understanding of what I need to change before I do further harm to my profile.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:47 am


The way you describe the appearance of your Shikai release and further more into the appearance of your bankai release form. I mean sorry, but the way you describe it just doesn't give a clear enough mental picture. As to what I meant by it being to light. Well, profiles are like RP samples to me, from there I judge on how well they would work in that position they are apply for. Based on what I seen, I cannot see it as fitting into the Captains position in it's current state.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:54 am


I see, I'll get to work on it and let you know when I have completed it.Thank you for the correction.

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Thaide - Proceed.

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