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 Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:13 pm
iShay-chan Deil Grist iShay-chan Bijuu's Name: Six Tails (Rokubi), Raijuu the Weasel
General Abilities: Specializing in Raiton, which are known as the fastest elemental ninjutsu around, the Rokubi is known for being the fastest Bijuu out of the nine. The Bijuu focuses on using its agility for quick hand-to-hand combat and performing a rapid series of attacks. The Rokubi Jinchuuriki gains benefits such as:
-The ability to learn more than the maximum amount of Raiton jutsu
-Increased Speed
-Up to +30 chakra points at Sannin/Kage level
-Increased number of jutsu used per post (depending on stage)
-Raiton immunity
-Increased strength of Raiton jutsu depending on the weather
-Growth of fur that can cause minor electric shocks
I put that one line in bold because, while it's true you get 30 chakra when that stage is active, all bijuu bonuses stack except for the kyuubi's chakra/stamina bonuses. So you actually get 150 total bonus chakra points if you go through all the stages of release. Now, since you have that number, you'll be approved if you can tell me how many total bonus stamina points you get. Btw, I love the RP samples. They're very descriptive, and I don't feel bad giving this to someone who will take the time to be detailed. I don't think I'll have to worry about one-liner "I nuke your face" posts from you. ^v^ Okay so 150 chakra points bonus, with an additional 3 stamina for every ten chakra, would be 45, right? 150 / 10 = 15 15 x 3 = 45  I have bad news, good news, and great news: The bad news is that Cobra took out the substitution jutsu altogether. It's no longer possible to use the technique. The good news is he didn't tell us that publicly (I talked to him about it and we forgot to mention it to everyone), and that technique has nothing to do with the bijuu system. So that error is excluded. The great news is you got application right in one shot! You get the special dance video!  Approved!
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 2:17 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 10:15 pm
Bijuu's Name: Houkou Or Gobi
General Abilities: Control Over All Five Elements
No Elemental Weakness
Increased Sense Of Smell Equivalent To That Of A Inuzuka Clan Member
Ability To Sense Others Chakra
A Mild Speed Increase
Did you have this bijuu in VR?
No
Briefly explain how unlocking tails works and what the risks are for using more tails than your character can handle:
Upon reaching the required rank for a tail, five techniques must be learned. From the sixth technique onward, a 100-sided dice will be rolled after each technique. If the dice lands on a 20 or lower, then the host is taken into his mind and forced to fight with a future version of themselves that has the next stage activated (ex: host knows up to stage 5, then future version is in stage 6.) If the host manages to survive for at least 6 posts, they are certified for the next stage. If they cannot, then they black-out and the demon controls the host's body for however many posts that the host had yet to go through. In the chance that the host has learned every technique available to them at the time, then they must fight their other self once every day until the next stage is unlocked.
In the case that a forced activation of a tail is used--in other words, if the host uses more tails than they can handle--they have a high chance of losing complete control of themselves. In the case that they lost control and cannot be subdued, the bijuu will continue going through each stage until the final stage is reached. Once the last stage is reached, the seal holding the demon is undone and the bijuu is released.
Why do you want to have a bijuu?
I Never Feel Comfortable In a Naruto Guild With Applying For A Bijuu To Understand The Severity Of The Literacy Needed For A Bijuu And I Find It To Be Very Useful To Have A Bijuu With Your Rpc And Would Use It To Benefit My Own Rp Experience.
Why do you want THIS bijuu?
I've Rped Multiple Times With The Gobi And It's One Bijuu I'm Certain I Have A Good Understanding Of No Matter How Complicated The System Around It Is. (Just Pointing Out How Complicated Your System Is)
Give me an RP sample of your character fighting in stage one and another RP sample of you fighting in any stage other than the first or last one.
Genin, Ninjutsu Class, Raiton
Soul kicked a rock through the forest being another Genin in Konoha he felt as if he wasn't different possibly the only thing unique about him was his raiton chakra. Which was very rare in Konoha. But it boggled him that every time he took a look at an adult they would look at him as if he was something to be left for dead and never to be seen again. He continued walking as he heard a rustling behind him. He stopped.
He listened again but the rustling had stopped, he continued onward but on guard as he held his kunai close and that's when it happened he was tackled to the floor with a kunai placed to his throat. He panicked and thrust his own kunai into the arm of his attacker. He ran and ran through the forest unsure of what to do, but he never realized that someone else had been following him along with the attacker it was his long time crush Kyoha Arbelaez, but the attacker took notice and decided to use her as bate he stopped infront of Soul with Kyoha in hand.
"Stay still and she doesn't have to die." the perp stated. Soul was distraught he had no idea what to do but in his panicked mine all he could hear was run and as he took a steep backwards an incision was made into Kyoha's collar, as the blood trickled down from her collar bone onto her silky white dress. Soul blacked out his body froze, inside his mind a heap of darkness surrunded him he began to search through ths arkness not knowing where he was, he finally reached a dead end, where he saw a giant cage with two giant blue eyes looking down at him. What's the matter boy haven't seen me in 15 years and all ofa sudden you don't have any respect. Soul flinched and then bowed down. "Sorry, Os.....Bijuu-sama." he greeted the Gobi and then rose. "I guess you've come here for something so powerful you couldn't even begi to comprehend." The Gobi said in a ridling form. "You know I hate it when you speak in riddles." Soul responded. "You haave no right to an opinion yet boy. The Gobi retorted. Soul bowed his head. "Take it and leave. The Gobi said as he roared and a massive amount of chakra flooded through Soul. Soul looked down his head to the ground as his hair covered his eyes he didn't move.
And when he finally looked up any being that looked into his eyes would've been frightened the immense chakra he was giving off blew the leaves and twigs around him and his glare, was so intense it blew back the mahogany brown hair back from Kyoha's face as she cried it angered him even more as his own ash blonde locks began to blow wildly from his chakra.
His mystifying blue eyes glaring at the attacker as if it were trying to pierce his soul, his skin now covered in thin layer of silky whitish brown fur. Soul made a movement, but he was gone. when he finally reappeared the stench of the attacker was foul as if he hadn't bathed in months, he grabbed Kyoha with intense swift movements and placed her in a tree as he landed back onto the ground his nails turned red as he began weaving hand signs and then released a barrage of fireballs.
"Katon: Phoenix flower jutsu!" he shouted as the balls of fire shot towards his attacker causing him to jump and dodge. Soul being a combo master appeared next to him using Air riding skill and then using kaze bakuhatsu technique and smashing an explosion into his attackers face sending him flying. Soul appeared again slashing his hands in a swift movement leaving a gash on his attacker back not using his hands but instead using Kaze no yoroi. He finally drew his father's katana as the winds began to intensify, suddenly they stopped and when the attacker looked behind him Soul was gone.
Suddenly he sunk into the ground and was now only a head sticking out of the dirt as Soul himself reappeared. soul waved in a cutesy manner signifying a form of goodbye as he brought his sword down and just let it tip his head and a flash of winds came following after and sliced right through his head leaving soul with blood splattered on his face.
Rp Sample #2:
Two men ran out of the clearing as destruction followed them out of a thick forest. Out of the forest after them came a small boy, but he was not ordinary he was terrifying covered in a blue chakra with three tails made of the chakra. There Soul stood his eyes menacing his mind flashing in and out of sanity he had lost it he had pushed it way too far and this was the result.
The two men attempted a combo attack of lightning beam jutsu and Chidori but Soul merely caught them both with his tails and send them flying into the abyss below but he knew they weren't dead he couldn't smell the death of them and he could still sense their chakra. He jumped off of the cliff at the end of the clearing and found the two men who were frightened out of their mind in their black cloaks with red clouds.
Soul was seeing red and nothing could stop him now, he slashed at one of them hitting him so hard he went flying into deeper into the abyss at inhumane speeds his screams could be heard as they echoed after him until there was a loud bang cracking and squelches of flesh could be heard echoing up.
Soul laughed in delight not in control of himself at the moment. He flew towards the other one who had also seemed to known fuuton and was slowly flying upwards on his cloak. Soul chuckled as he too began to fly spinning his tails in a rapid movement after weaving a few hand signs he caught up to the man who thought he was safe and uppercut him in the back sending him flying upwards faster.
As Soul reached the clearing he chuckled as he caught the man and gripped him tight as the clouds began to turn dark and thunder and lightning rumbled through the sky a dragon's mouth could be seen forming in the clouds, Soul waved in a cutesy manner at the man, signifying his departure, as a huge dragon made entirely of lightning appeared from the sky and struck them man killing him as Soul continually chuckled, his chuckle getting slower and slower until he finally passed out.
[Well there it is]
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 10:10 am
Bijuu's Name: Houkou [Five Tails (Gobi)] General Abilities:-control of all five elements (only one per post, however) -heightened sense of smell (equal to that of someone from the Inuzuka clan) -no elemental weaknesses -ability to sense others’ elemental affinities -small speed increase Did you have this bijuu in VR? I did not as I was not in VR. Briefly explain how unlocking tails works and what the risks are for using more tails than your character can handle: The tails you have the ability to unlock change depending on your rank. Once the required rank is achieved, you must learn five techniques. On the sixth technique learned, a 100-sided die is rolled and if you roll below a 20, then you have to fight the next stage (a "future" you), to unlock it. If you are alive at the end of six posts battling against the future you, then you succeed in unlocking that stage. If you lose, then the bijuu takes over your body and you go on a rampage destroying everything in sight. If you try using a tail you have yet to unlock, there is an extremely high chance you will lose control. If you lose control and are not stopped, you will keep moving through the stages until your seal breaks and the bijuu is set free. Why do you want to have a bijuu? Truthfully, I was going to leave others to take the bijuus and create a different shinobi and a unique kekkei genkai. However, upon consideration I realized I was only going to get one chance to have a bijuu host RPC as the spots will fill up quickly as the guild grows. I personally consider myself a good role-player and I would enjoy the challenge of having a character who is a bijuu. Why do you want THIS bijuu? In the manga—and anime for that matter—I personally found the kyuubi and other tailed beasts to be quite stupid due to the fact that they are practically indestructible (except for some of the oddly wimpy ones). However, although the Five Tails doesn’t have huge face-time in the manga nor anime, I think the concept of wielding all 5 elements is extremely awesome and this is the only bijuu which I think looks even relatively cool. Give me an RP sample of your character fighting in stage one and another RP sample of you fighting in any stage other than the first or last one. *Note these posts need to be quite lengthy. A high quality RP sample is imperative. **Post your character's rank, class, and elements it will have in each sample at the top of each sample. {{All info listed below is (hopefully) subject to change.}} Example One Character: Makura Resantu Rank: Genin Class: Ninjutsu Elements: All five, however only one per post? Makura tensed, furious at the cruel and insensitive actions of the rogue ninja standing only meters in front of her, unable to look away from the poor family lying on the ground next to him.
“How could you kill innocent people?” she barked at him, already tensing for battle. In her anger, the fur on her back bristled and she clenched her jaw with enough force to make it sore. Makura could already feel bits of the primal instinct to kill leak through the barrier in her mind that she normally kept sealed so tightly.
“All for money,” she growled, staring daggers into the murderer, “As if they didn’t need money too? They just weren’t sick enough like you to drop to these means.”
As the last of the words flowed out of her mouth, Makura tightened her fists in fury and planted them firmly on both sides of her. Drawing on the element of fire, she completed a few basic hand seals and activated Katon: Honoo Te. Instantly, flames swelled around her hands. Lifting her arms and pointing her hands at the killer in front of her she snapped her wrists up and sent a beam of fire flying right at the man.
Suddenly jerked from his shock, the rogue lurched to the left dodging Makura’s attack, but rolling into the corner of the room. Even through her fury, Makura was planning how to win. She hadn’t intended to hit the rogue, but to force him into the corner where he was trapped. With the fire faded from her hands, she charged towards the criminal.
A mere seven steps away, she raised her right fist and aimed it for his head while her other hand waited below to block. As expected, the rogue’s right arm raised to deflect her punch and she staggered, but brought her left hand up and grabbed his throat, but while she was again activating Katon: Honoo Te no Jutsu, a heavy blow to the stomach sent her flying backwards onto, falling onto her back and skidding half way across the large room.
“What are you?” the rogue shouted, his voice tainted by repulsion and fear.
Makura started to stand, not willing to give up any information. Upon reaching her full height, she formed the hand seals for Katon: Hibashiri and a circle of flames rose up around the murderer.
“Please,” he shouted over the crackling of the fire, “Spare me! I will return the money! I won’t take it! Just let me go!”
“Return the money? To whom? How about you return their lives, you b*****d,” she screamed, the flames around the rogue rising with her peaked fury until they engulfed him in a sudden burst.
As the flames subsided, nothing was left of the murderer and Makura fell to the ground in an exhausted heap. Even without using a terrible amount of jutsu, her day had been long and the experience with her transformation mentally taxing. As she started to calm back down her hair flattened back to normal, Makura felt a presence tugging at the edge of her conscious.
You are no better than him, a gravelly voice chuckled, a murderer.
He is right, Makura sobbed after coming to her senses, in the end I killed him. Even if he killed before me, that didn’t make it right. He has a family that he can never return to and will wonder what happened to him.
Be proud, the harsh voice in her conscious said, not many can kill as easily as you did.
“Shut up Gobi,” Makura yelled both inside her head and out loud, wanting to be alone with her thoughts.
Whatever you want kiddo, the bijuu chuckled, his presence fading back into her mind.Example Two Character: Hitsusha Yashinta Rank: Special Jounin Class: Ninjutsu Element: All five, however only one per post?
“This fight has gone on long enough,” she growled, clenching her fists.
Chakra swelled around Hitsusha as her third tail formed out of chakra.. As she enforced the mental barrier that protected her conscious from being taken over by the bijuu, the assailant started to flee, but was in the range of her Hitsusha's tails. Her tail shot forward, wrapping itself around his torso and dragged him back. As the tail tensed in the intent to crush the foe, however, the body turned to water and splashed to the ground.
A water clone, Hitsusha thought, instantly looking around for the real one, but deciding it would be better to sniff him out. Taking in a big breath through her nose, Hitsusha attempted to locate her opponent. As the wind shifted directions, the smell of sweat blew across Hitsusha’s nose, alerting her of the enemy’s location. Spinning to her left, she completed the hand seals appropriate for her jutsu. Tiger, Hare, Boar, Dog.
“Doton: Doryuheki,” she growled, one of her tails slamming into the ground as a wall formed behind and to the sides of the location where she had just detected the other ninja. A large, twenty-foot wall shot out of the ground and as the tail still in contact with the earth was drug backwards, the wall came skidding towards Hitsusha, dragging everything in the enclosure with it.
As it approached, almost like a broom, the heavier objects shifted to the bottom of the pile being swept towards Hitsusha, making layers. Rocks on the bottom, trees on top of that, and the ninja who couldn’t weigh more than 150 pounds even if they were soaked to the bone on the very top, struggling not to get pinned under the shifting dirt.
“Ha! You’re mine,” Hitsusha barked joyfully, charging forward to meet her approaching wall half-way. Raising her right fist, she concentrated the chakra surrounding her body in a thin coat around her hand and leapt forward, flying towards her opponent. She could feel the wind in her coat and almost felt like sticking her tongue out, but decided not to give into her dog-like habits.
When she was one foot from the ninja, she swung her arm forward, connecting right with the ninja’s stomach. The punch sent the ninja flying backward and he broke through the wall. Continuing in the same direction, Hitsusha ended up also tumbling through the hole her enemy had now just created. Unlike him, however, who skidded to a stop against the ground on his back, she was able to catch her footing and slid to a halt merely a few feet away from him.
The fight had gone on a long time, but it was finally over, leaving one knocked out and the other exhausted and drained of chakra and energy.
“Success,” Hitsusha panted, bending over to try to catch her breath as the last of the of her adrenaline faded away.
Plopping down on the ground where she stood to take a short rest, Hitsusha noticed this was the first fight she had completed without the Gobi’s advice.
Maybe I am becoming stronger than him, she thought as she pondered his silence. Her small internal victory against the bijuu was ruined, though, when she heard that familiar gravely chuckle enter her conscious and then fade away again.
“Thanks for your vote of confidence, Gobi,” Hitsusha whined, a little annoyed at his laughter.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:22 am
X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X 1. Experience in other guilds with bijuu isn't a selling point, especially considering what else I'm about to say. If you understood the "severity of the literacy" (which doesn't even make sense) needed to be a host, then your application wouldn't be like it is. 2. It's obvious that someone typed some or all of your request for you. Why? Because you have obvious shifts in writing style. When you get down to "why do you want a bijuu," you capitalize the letter of every word in that section and the one after it, but then revert to the proper form of capitalizing words for the remainder of the application. 3. The complication of the system has no relevance as to why you would want that particular bijuu. Again, I don't care if you've had it in any other guild besides VR. 4. The grammar and content of your RP samples are ATROCIOUS. You're constantly jumping from one detail to another without linking them together, and you skip random moments in the fight. A prime example is: X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X He panicked and thrust his own kunai into the arm of his attacker. He ran and ran through the forest unsure of what to do, but he never realized that someone else had been following him along with the attacker it was his long time crush Kyoha Arbelaez, but the attacker took notice and decided to use her as bate he stopped infront of Soul with Kyoha in hand. How did you go from stabbing your opponent to running through the forest? You completely skipped how you managed to get away from the target. This particular quote also contains a huge run-on sentence that makes your ideas get all jumbled together. I just can't even begin to piece together some of the ideas in your RP samples because of all the stuff that's wrong with it. This is absolutely unacceptable RP material for anyone, much less a host. It's very obvious that you didn't care about the quality or material of this application, and I will not consider giving you a bijuu even if you were to edit your application or send a new one. DENIED P.S. X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X *Note these posts need to be quite lengthy. A high quality RP sample is imperative. **Post your character's rank, class, and elements it will have in each sample at the top of each sample. [Well there it is]What, do you think I'm BLIND and don't know what your RP sample SHOULD be like? I mean you got the lengthy part right at least, but who could miss such a long piece of crap? If you happened to be a new roleplayer, I wouldn't have been nearly this harsh to you. The fact that you've been in multiple guilds as the Gobi host and threw this kind of application at me is insulting. If you were lying, that's even MORE insulting.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:31 am
Deil Grist X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X 1. Experience in other guilds with bijuu isn't a selling point, especially considering what else I'm about to say. If you understood the "severity of the literacy" (which doesn't even make sense) needed to be a host, then your application wouldn't be like it is. 2. It's obvious that someone typed some or all of your request for you. Why? Because you have obvious shifts in writing style. When you get down to "why do you want a bijuu," you capitalize the letter of every word in that section and the one after it, but then revert to the proper form of capitalizing words for the remainder of the application. 3. The complication of the system has no relevance as to why you would want that particular bijuu. Again, I don't care if you've had it in any other guild besides VR. 4. The grammar and content of your RP samples are ATROCIOUS. You're constantly jumping from one detail to another without linking them together, and you skip random moments in the fight. A prime example is: X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X He panicked and thrust his own kunai into the arm of his attacker. He ran and ran through the forest unsure of what to do, but he never realized that someone else had been following him along with the attacker it was his long time crush Kyoha Arbelaez, but the attacker took notice and decided to use her as bate he stopped infront of Soul with Kyoha in hand. How did you go from stabbing your opponent to running through the forest? You completely skipped how you managed to get away from the target. This particular quote also contains a huge run-on sentence that makes your ideas get all jumbled together. I just can't even begin to piece together some of the ideas in your RP samples because of all the stuff that's wrong with it. This is absolutely unacceptable RP material for anyone, much less a host. It's very obvious that you didn't care about the quality or material of this application, and I will not consider giving you a bijuu even if you were to edit your application or send a new one. DENIED P.S. X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X *Note these posts need to be quite lengthy. A high quality RP sample is imperative. **Post your character's rank, class, and elements it will have in each sample at the top of each sample. [Well there it is]What, do you think I'm BLIND and don't know what your RP sample SHOULD be like? I mean you got the lengthy part right at least, but who could miss such a long piece of crap? If you happened to be a new roleplayer, I wouldn't have been nearly this harsh to you. The fact that you've been in multiple guilds as the Gobi host and threw this kind of application at me is insulting. If you were lying, that's even MORE insulting. Ok Wait First Of ll I Actually Put Alot Of Thogut Into This And No OneElse Typed This From Me I Change Grammatical Styles Due To The Fact That In Ooc I Typ All The First Letters In Capital While In Rp I Do It Regular....I think You're Being a Bit To Harsh And Could Instead Of Insulting Me Try To Instead Aid Me By Telling Me What I Did Wrong And Giving Me One Mor Chanc This Was In No Way Or Form An Attempt To Insult You, The Part About Me Just Throwing Ideas Together Isn't True I Probably Missed Some Minor Details That Could've Been Important And The Grammatical Errors Are Not On My Part My Keyboard Is Acting Strange So If You Could Please Reconsider And Allow Me A Second Cance As Well As Just Give Me A Few Pointers On Wat I Could DOo To Better My Rp Sample I'd Gladly Do This All Over Again
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:51 am
X_SMEXII_kOOkie_mOnster_X Ok Wait First Of ll I Actually Put Alot Of Thogut Into This And No OneElse Typed This From Me I Change Grammatical Styles Due To The Fact That In Ooc I Typ All The First Letters In Capital While In Rp I Do It Regular....I think You're Being a Bit To Harsh And Could Instead Of Insulting Me Try To Instead Aid Me By Telling Me What I Did Wrong And Giving Me One Mor Chanc This Was In No Way Or Form An Attempt To Insult You, The Part About Me Just Throwing Ideas Together Isn't True I Probably Missed Some Minor Details That Could've Been Important And The Grammatical Errors Are Not On My Part ]color=red]My Keyboard Is Acting Strange So If You Could Please Reconsider And Allow Me A Second Cance As Well As Just Give Me A Few Pointers On Wat I Could DOo To Better My Rp Sample I'd Gladly Do This All Over Again1. Then it was all thought an no effort. 2. If that's true, then why didn't you type that way for the bijuu abilities section and tails system section? Technically this is all OOC, and such a writing style just looks so sloppy. If you're writing OOC outside of an appropriate thread, then just {OOC: }. whatever you want to say. This whole section is nothing but OOC anyway, so there's no need to distinguish your non-rp sample material from your rp sample material other than by following the application format. 3. There is SO MUCH wrong with this application that, if I were to tell you all the stuff that needed to be fixed, I might as well write the application myself. That's unacceptable as a veteran roleplayer. 4. If I ask for a high quality sample, you shouldn't have been anywhere near as sloppy as you were. Quantity is not quality. 5. That has to be the absolute worst excuse I have ever heard. The only sort of keyboard problems that exist are keys that won't respond or get stuck, and your application doesn't suffer from any problems that stem from keyboard issues. This is a YOU issue. 6. I don't WANT another application from you here. Don't post in this topic again. Do you understand me? DO NOT POST IN THE BIJUU REQUEST SECTION AGAIN!
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Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:05 pm
I think you need to reread the bijuu system. You got the tail unlocking wrong, the little fact about stage one wrong (as evidence in your RP sample for stage one, which you actually used stage 2 in), and the fact that you can use one element at a time (meaning per post). Your chakra tail must stay the same once released, but the element you can use for techniques can change from post to post. So once you think you know what's wrong, your application needs to be changed accordingly and I'll see if you learned.
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Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:33 pm
Deil Grist I think you need to reread the bijuu system. You got the tail unlocking wrong, the little fact about stage one wrong (as evidence in your RP sample for stage one, which you actually used stage 2 in), and the fact that you can use one element at a time (meaning per post). Your chakra tail must stay the same once released, but the element you can use for techniques can change from post to post. So once you think you know what's wrong, your application needs to be changed accordingly and I'll see if you learned. I edited my application, but I am not sure it is completely right yet, since I am a little confused. In stage one, the bijuu host is covered in hair and their eyes change. They can use one element a post, right? Or can they use no elements at all yet? In stages in which multiple tails are formed, each one has it's own element, but only one can be used in a post? "Your chakra tail must stay the same once released, but the element you can use for techniques can change from post to post." Meaning, the chakra tail cannot grow in length or it cannot change elemental affinities? I am so sorry I am asking so many questions. Maybe this is the problem with posting/staying up until 2:30 in the morning...
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Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 12:43 am
Akemi Sekine Deil Grist I think you need to reread the bijuu system. You got the tail unlocking wrong, the little fact about stage one wrong (as evidence in your RP sample for stage one, which you actually used stage 2 in), and the fact that you can use one element at a time (meaning per post). Your chakra tail must stay the same once released, but the element you can use for techniques can change from post to post. So once you think you know what's wrong, your application needs to be changed accordingly and I'll see if you learned. I edited my application, but I am not sure it is completely right yet, since I am a little confused. In stage one, the bijuu host is covered in hair and their eyes change. They can use one element a post, right? Or can they use no elements at all yet? In stages in which multiple tails are formed, each one has it's own element, but only one can be used in a post? "Your chakra tail must stay the same once released, but the element you can use for techniques can change from post to post." Meaning, the chakra tail cannot grow in length or it cannot change elemental affinities? I am so sorry I am asking so many questions. Maybe this is the problem with posting/staying up until 2:30 in the morning... 1. stage 1 is passive, meaning your body always has those characteristics and abilities. If you don't like the fur, then your character's going to be shaving quite often >.< but that's the tradeoff for having usage of all the elements. So yes, you can use any one of the elements per post no matter the stage since it is a stage one ability. 2. You can use as many of your chakra tails in a post as you have released, but their chakra element and length is fixed once released.
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Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 6:51 am
Deil Grist Akemi Sekine I edited my application, but I am not sure it is completely right yet, since I am a little confused. In stage one, the bijuu host is covered in hair and their eyes change. They can use one element a post, right? Or can they use no elements at all yet? In stages in which multiple tails are formed, each one has it's own element, but only one can be used in a post? "Your chakra tail must stay the same once released, but the element you can use for techniques can change from post to post." Meaning, the chakra tail cannot grow in length or it cannot change elemental affinities? I am so sorry I am asking so many questions. Maybe this is the problem with posting/staying up until 2:30 in the morning... 1. stage 1 is passive, meaning your body always has those characteristics and abilities. If you don't like the fur, then your character's going to be shaving quite often >.< but that's the tradeoff for having usage of all the elements. So yes, you can use any one of the elements per post no matter the stage since it is a stage one ability. 2. You can use as many of your chakra tails in a post as you have released, but their chakra element and length is fixed once released. Oh! I get it! (I hope. sweatdrop ) With that in mind, I am next to positive I have edited my role-plays appropriately, although not much has changed.
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Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 11:41 am
Bijuu's Name: Hokou
General Abilities: Has control over all five elements, however only one element can be used per post. Because of the ability to have all elements, the Hokou gives no elemental weakness. A slight speed boost is given to those who hold this demon, and several stages give extra ranks in speed. Its sense of smell rivals that of the Inuzukas due to the dog like nature of the Hokou. Also the Hokou gives several boosts in chakra points with each stage as well as a boost in stamina for having a demon (3+ for every 10 points)
Did you have this bijuu in VR? No
Briefly explain how unlocking tails works and what the risks are for using more tails than your character can handle: Each tailed is only achievable by attaining the proper rank. Once you have the appropriate rank to activate a stage, you must learn 5 techniques, wether they're taijutsu or kenjutsu or ninjutsu or genjutsu. On the six technique learned a 100 sided die is rolled and if you roll below a 20 then a fight in your mind ensues. A crew member will roleplay as a future you, one that has already achieved the stage in which you are trying to attain, while you in turn have not reached that stage. Fighting your future self is a tough battle, since it is fighting a vastly stronger version of yourself. If you can survive for 6 posts, then you have attained the stage. If you fail, the demon will use your body to reap as much destruction as it possibly can for the posts that you failed to survive with 3 being the minimum. Once you return to your normal self, you must redo the process all over again until you can't learn any more techniques. When this occurs, every day you get a chance to fight your future self and attempt to survive in order to attain the next stage.
Forced activation is possible but you have to roll a 100 sided die. If you roll a 50 or below, you loose control and your bijuu enters rage mode. If you activate 2 stages higher than what you can handle and roll below 87 then your demon takes control. If you are not roleplaying your demon accordingly, then a crew member will take over for you. Rage mode will activate the next stage every 3 posts until you reach the final stage of the bijuu. When this happens, the seal becomes undone.
Why do you want to have a bijuu? I definitley like the system that TUP has designed for demons, and I like the fact that while I can't have a bloodline/clan/cursemark, a demon still proves to be a formidable opponent. Also, I wouldn't mind raging upon my village should I loose control.
Why do you want THIS bijuu? Because it is a demon I have never roleplayed with. I've roleplayed with the Kyuubi and the Sanbi, but I have never roleplayed with the Hokou and I believe that I would not only be great at it, but also bring forth character development for those who roleplay around me as well as pose as a worthy opponent to my enemies.
Give me an RP sample of your character fighting in stage one and another RP sample of you fighting in any stage other than the first or last one.
Rpc Name: Aqua
Rank: Genin
Attributes: Speed, Agility
Class: Weapon Master
Elements: All...but in the sample only Fire and Wind
Stage 1:
"Aqua...are you ready for your examination?" asked Aqua's sensei...Eraqus. Aqua unsheathed her sword, nodding her head in order to show that she was in fact ready. The blade glinted in the sunlight of Training Field 7, a rather large plain field surrounded by a dense forest. This examination was a test in order to see if Aqua had what it took to be a chuunin, a full fledged shinobi of the village and a true weapon master. However, there was something else about Aqua that made her special. She was in fact the host of the Five Tailed demon Houkou. "Sensei Eraqus, I won't hold back on you...so here I come! she exclaimed as she bent her knees slightly. Using her leg muscle, she dashed forward towards Eraqus. The closer she got, Eraqus noticed her star like blue eyes, belying an ocean of potential and power. She was in fact already in her first stage of power, a natural and passive stage in which Aqua could control all of the elements and had no elemental weakness. Although her body was in fact covered in a fur of brown and white, she bore it proudly and never hiding who she was. She was proud that the Hokage had sealed the demon inside of her, seeing the demon as a ways to conquer the darkness within not only her heart but in the hearts of others.
Aqua stopped short several feet away from Sensei Eraqus, her chakra channeling through her blade as her sword suddenly burst into flames. With her right foot stopping her onward assualt, Aqua brought her blade above her and slashed downwards, unleashing a channeled Energy Slice. Aqua knew that Sensei Eraqus was of the Wind Elemental Affinity, so he wouldn't be able to stop her flame strike so easily. Aqua watched carefully at her sensei's stance, waiting for her own to hit. Suddenly her eyes widened as her sensei pulled out a single tag, the kanji of Water written upon it. Slapping it unto his own sword, her sensei brought her sword downwards as the fire attack was now upon him. Cutting through it, a cone shaped blue wave of energy was now heading straight towards her. Aqua couldn't do anything about it, and although she had the element of Earth, she had just used her fire element...she could not yet change the element in which she was using.
Simple and Clean Music
Aqua was already faster and more agile than the average shinobi, and as the cone shaped wave of energy headed straight towards her, Aqua dissapeared completely. Using the "Burst" skill Sensei Eraqus had taught her, she managed to move just before the strike could hit. Moving to the right and coming around, she assaulted her sensei from the side, her blade coming behind her as she performed a horizontal attack. Eraqus barely managed to bring his blade in order to block her attack, suprised at her sudden jump in speed. It was only because he himself had trained Aqua that he was able to predict the girl's movements. Aqua brought her blade back and now performing a vertical slash, in which Eraqus blocked once more. A flurry of steel now flashed between the two as Aqua and Eraqus wouldn't let up. Their clashing resonated through the area, the sound of steel hitting steel echoed through the field as thunder boomed above them and lightning danced upon the sky.
Aqua was pushed back as her sensei twirled his sword skillfully and motioning her to attack. Aqua landed gracefully upon her feet, a smile etched across her face as she just realized that her time was up, she could now acess another of her elements, and she knew exactly which one she could acess. Her right hand held tightly to her sword, holding it in front of her as she brought her left hand across her chest. "Okuridashi Kaze," she stated as she brought her hand back, her chakra channeling through her hand as a blast of air proppeled her forward almost instantly and heading towards Master Eraqus. Eraqus however was already one step ahead of her, recognizing her seals as he performed the same seals in turn. The two were now heading straight towards each other, their swords held high into the air as both of them brought them downwards to strike the other down. This was a true test of strength and character...to see if Aqua could harness her power within and overcome her sensei.
Stage 2
A flash of lightning blinded the field as the two were now standing on opposite ends, their backs turned towards each other. Eraqus now stood up straight, his blade dripping with blood as Aqua fell to her knees. She could not defeat her sensei, not like this. Blood now ran down her arm, dripping unto the ground as Aqua clutched unto her shoulder. Her sensei merely knicked her shoulder, his skill was so great that he managed to not only stop her, but do so with causing minimal damage. Standing upright to face her master, chakra now became visible. Her chakra was of an orange tinge, like a flickering flame in the darkness. "Sensei Eraqus, I vow to you, I will never let the darkness consume me, my heart will pull me through. Of this I promise you...now, give me strength Hokou," she stated, her last comment more to an invisible force within her. Suddenly, her chakra erupted upwards, manifesting itself into a coat of flame as a tail now sprouted from her back side, extending itself two meters. This was the demon's power in which she had already learned to harness. However that was an ordeal within itself. After she had learned five different elemental jutsu, upon learning he sixth one her master asked her to attempt to harness the power of her demon. Upon doing so, she had lost control of it, her body going berserk as her mind was trapped within the confines of her heart, surrounded by darkness. It was within this darkness that she came face to face with a manifestation of herself, controlled by the Hokou. It was then that she had to attempt to defeat herself, the darkness within her in order to control the Hokou and prove to it that she was not going to allow it to control her. After surviving this ordeal, Aqua regained control of her body, as well as the ability to tap into a stage of the demon's power.
She had chosen to draw out a tail of the Fire Element, her sensei's weakness. As she now stared out at her sensei, she could feel his elemental affinity, one she already knew off due to her training with him. Her chakra reserves now increased slightly, and after entering her second stage, she could feel her muscles stronger, her body lighter, her speed increased. She now might be able to match her sensei in terms of speed, or at least come close to it.
"Aqua, you have indeed come far...you show strength of heart, courage, and the ability to supress the darkness inside of you. I am proud of you my child...now come at me, and show me once more why I chose you as my protege," her sensei told her as he now clutched onto his blade. His chakra was now coating his sword, a chakra edge that could penetrate through a demon's coat. Though Aqua contained an elemental coat rather than a non elemental coat, Eraqus did not have another water seal with him in order to use upon his blade. Aqua now had access once more to another element again after the short time had passed, her sword now channeling her fire chakra once more to her blade. Aqua breathed in, taking it all in as she knew that this final strike would be the deciding factor. However, there was a scent in the air, one she had recognized and had been around in for such a long time. The Hokage was watching this fight...watching probably to ensure that Aqua could maintain control of the demon within. She could smell her, her nose being almost as effective as those of the Inuzuka clan who used their canines to battle alongside them. She was thankful that the Hokage had also taken an interest in her, watching over her, and protecting them. The Hokage was not fearful of her, but encouraged her every step of the way. It was these people, the Hokage, Sensei Eraqus, her squad mates, they were what kept her demon at bay, that gave her the strength of heart to press on.
Aqua now dashed forward, her flaming tail trailing behind her as she now sped towards her sensei at even faster speeds. It was unbelievable how much faster Aqua was at this stage, how nimble she had become. Her eyes were focused on her sensei, who had dashed forward towards her as well. The two were now moving towards each other, unmovable locomotions that could go only one way...forward. Her sensei was only slightly faster than her now, it was now who had the stronger heart that would prevail. Bringing her sword back, Aqua yelled out loud, not in fury but in confidence that she would pass her sensei's test.
*Note these posts need to be quite lengthy. A high quality RP sample is imperative.
**Post your character's rank, class, and elements it will have in each sample at the top of each sample.
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Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:07 pm
You both have good applications, but you both either are missing or have something wrong with what happens when you fail the fight in your mind. I'm struggling to figure out who should get this bijuu because you both have great applications, but this is something you have to get right in order for me to consider you having a perfect application. I'm not necessarily saying the first person to get this correct will automatically get the bijuu, but I can't accept your application unless your understanding of the tails system is perfect.
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Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:31 pm
I HAVE A SOLUTION! Let them make the RPC's profiles as they would if the were given the Bijuu, then make them fight them selfs using only he Demon stages. The one who uses the Demon the best (Dosn't mean they have to win, just be more epic.) then that Rper will get the Bijuu.
They will be judged by Deil (Of course), me (Since I thought up the solution.), and one other judge that will be able to break a tie if there happens to be one.
So what o you think Deil? This seem like a good way to settle a tie?
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